When you have the time, I would love one of your oracle card readings, thank you xoxo
-Alex
sure thing Alex! :) @therebepoems
rabbit in reverse: the rabbit tends to come forward when we are at a point of great stress and fear in our lives, or at least, these are the features it points out. you may find yourself explaining or running through situations over and over, tying to make sense of emotions and ultimately burning yourself out. if this fear lives I you now, this card advises you to find a day to create calm, to be quiet and to let the dust settle. allow your thoughts to re-calibrate, for they’re what drive you forward.
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The Inevitability of Truth
Your truth is like a thorny thicket
Your touch is how you tell it
Without care you could bleed
The truth is like a seed
You plant it as you tell it
Planting one, inevitably promotes growth
The truth is the thicket itself
In the time of fall, without being told
It's leaves will drop, and it will be naked and exposed
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The (very) Unofficial Bob Ross’ Happy Trees Poetry Tools Workshop Day 10 - Volta!
Let’s start with this week’s example:
my old home sits
next to unturned soil
string beans
and silver queen corn
long for my father’s hand
-Pris Campbell
Yesterday, we discussed the waka (31 syllables in 5 lines), which is very similar to a tanka (31 syllables in 5 lines). There are two more poem forms that are also very similar: a lune (3 lines, 5-7-5) and a haiku (5-7-5).
What’s the difference between a lune and a haiku? A volta! In fact, there are four poetry forms that require a volta: tanka, sijo, sonnet, haiku
OK, so what exactly is a volta? A volta is a twist, or a turn in the poem. Adding a volta to a poem forces the reader to re-evaluate the early lines. Let’s look at our first example. In a tanka, line 3 is a transition, and the last two lines are a new thought:
my old home sits/next to unturned soil (first idea)
string beans (transition)
and silver queen corn/long for my father’s hand (new idea, volta)
-Pris Campbel
Now, let’s look at a haiku. The first two lines are one idea, and the last line is the volta:
Soft Autumn wind
Mulberry leaves quiver, (first idea)
Silkworms dreaming of
Spring green (new idea, volta)
@huong1952
When is a volta a good tool to use?
-When writing a tanka, haiku, sijo, sonnet.
-When there’s a need for emphasis, or to create a stronger ending.
-When building a poem that involves juxtaposition (which we will be discussing a bit later!)
Since this tool can be a bit confusing, here’s two more examples:
You turned the corner
In the hallway (first idea)
And I never (transitional phrase)
Looked at a stranger
Like that before. (new idea, volta)
@therebepoems
In the greater beyond
I once left behind the keys
Unlocking my heart
As there was no trusting
Myself, any longer (first idea)
This would be the last time I would
Change the locks (transitional phrase)
I sit patiently awaiting to hear
The knocking; if only these walls could talk (new idea, volta)
@thedge-of-forever
Tip! If a poem isn’t working, a volta is often a good tool to fix it. Break the poem down into smaller poems (see day 9!). Then try rewriting one of the smaller poems as a volta.
Have fun writing happy trees!
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