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The Use of Anadiplosis in the Sonic Movie
“Anadiplosis” is just a fancy term for when the word used at the end of a sentence or clause is used again at the beginning of the next sentence or clause.  
“Glad You Came” by The Wanted has a good example of this technique just before the chorus.  
There’s another example in the Sonic movie that makes me weirdly happy.  It’s when Sonic is in Tom’s garage, telling himself to use a ring to go to the Mushroom Planet.  
“You’re going to a safe world.  
A nice safe world full of mushrooms.  
Mushrooms that’ll be your only friends...”  
I like this quote.  It’s got a good rhythm.  The repetition shows us how much effort it’s taking for Sonic to convince himself to do this.  And the way it tails off emphasises Sonic’s greatest fear - that is, being friendless forever.  
It’s small, but it’s good.  I hope we get more anadiplosis in the sequel.  
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lazulifate · 3 years
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How is it that just adding this "~" to the end of a sentence changes it entirely?!?!
"You've got mail" a simple notification that you have infact received mail!
"You've got mail~" a poor attempt at flirting by your local mail courrier?
What is this?!?!
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grasshoppericulum · 3 years
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Using Repetition:
(This is useful both for writing and essays for school I suppose, although forgive if this seems obvious)
So, what repetition does, essentially, is make things bigger. More kapow! More pizzazz! More shwoom! It increases everything! Emotion, feeling, the effect of the senses, immersion, how realistic a character is, repetition helps with all of that!
Take pain for an example:
Sentence 1: She stubbed her toe against the edge of the table and hissed, "Ow!"
Sentence 2: She stubbed her toe against the edge of the table and hissed, "Ow ow ow ow ow ow ow!"
Sentence 2 seems far more realistic in terms of an emotional reaction to stubbing your toe, like a reaffirmation of 'I've stubbed my toe! This hurts! Ouch!", it also has more emotion, full stop. However, what it additionally does is make the toe stub in sentence 2 sound more painful. If you stub your toe, hiss through your teeth and say 'ow' once before moving on, you reaction to a more painful incident would probably be to say 'ow' multiple times. Or to mutter a bunch of expletives. Depends.
How about another example?
Sentence 1: He fell to the ground crying, until his eyes ran dry. He was left utterly drained.
Sentence 2: He fell to the ground, crying and crying and crying, until his eyes ran dry. He was left utterly drained.
Which conveys more anguish? Sentence 2! He seems far more desperately sad in sentence 2 than in sentence 1.
Repetition enhances the emotions or feelings you want to convey! In dialogue, it adds a realistic indication of nerves or anger, or even happiness if whole phrases are repeated excitedly; it is truly a very useful tool to spice up some writing in a moment of high emotion!
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capricorn-0mnikorn · 4 years
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Literary critique pet peeve (that I think has mostly spilled over from fandom culture):
Calling a piece of carefully constructed foreshadowing “Spoiling” the story.
It was brought to the forefront of my attention by the title of this video: “How the Music Spoils Sweeney Todd (And why that’s a good thing).”
If it’s a good thing, it not spoiling. To spoil something means to ruin it. If giving your audience hints as to what’s coming up in the future -- especially if the audience can tell what’s coming, but the characters within the story can’t -- and it makes your story stronger and more exciting, then that, my sweet little periwinkles, is what we call “Foreshadowing” (in other words, forces building up to the future climax cast a shadow over what’s happening in the story’s present action).
And I blame this confusion between “Spoiling” and “Foreshadowing” for media franchises pulling the rug out from under their audiences simply for the sake of a “Twist” ending -- as what happened to Daenerys in Game of Thrones and Rey in Star Wars: the Rise of Skywalker.
BTW, I really like the YouTube channel that video’s from (unfortunate title notwithstanding). They critique movies and video games through the musical scores. I have very low musical intelligence, but I like learning about it, and learning to pay attention to it.
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suddenchange-s · 5 years
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I AM A LIVING, BREATHING OXYMORON
illogically logical
optimistic pessimist
consistently inconsistent
and I love it.
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emptyjunior · 6 years
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help! I’m going honest to god insane, can anyone remember the literary technique to rephrase an idiom? Like to change “paint the town red” to “paint the town beige”. I am going insane. oh i already wrote that. somebody help my brain feels like eating a pot of chili with peeps in it
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cryboycowboy · 6 years
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i am like my heartbeat
chaotic and unpredictable
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worstjourney · 6 years
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Nearsighted Wright discovered Scott's tent how crazy is that? The story of Terra Nova is like a good script but this particular part is something that critics would've nitpicked if it were actually a script.
As someone who has spent a lot of time learning about screenwriting, and reading the expedition’s primary documents, all I have to say in response is: Do you have any idea how much of this sort of thing there is?!  It’s positively uncanny, and has inspired two writing ideas, as yet unpursued:
1. An essay delineating the ways in which Scott’s Last Expedition aligns with the ideal tragic structure as detailed in Aristotle’s Poetics
2. A science fiction short story in which a more narratively satisfying alternate-history version of a forgettable historical expedition escapes from an author’s mind and becomes Actual HistoryTM
… because clearly what I need to be doing is more writing that isn’t the writing I NEED to be doing.
Don’t even get me started on the amount of hamfisted, obvious, rookie-writer foreshadowing there is, too … 
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psychoeducator · 2 years
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15 Types of Wordplay in Poetry - HubPages
Wordplay never gets old...
Wordplay is also known as verbal play or play-on-words is a literary technique used in both prose and poetry.
Playing with words is a technique of using words in a way that is light-hearted or funny.
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feelinkeeli · 2 years
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Y'all do realize the reason Obi-wan didn't put together Dooku=Tyranus during AOTC because he overheard Nute Gunray asking after Padme's assassination.
That it was part of the deal for Nute Gunray and the Trade Federation to join in with the Seperatists to create a droid army to go to war with the Republic.
And Dooku says during the meeting that they'll basically blitz krieg the Republic into submission because the Republic doesn't have an army.
Jango Fett is a bounty hunter which by Star Wars terms means Fett was a mecenary/bodyguard/hitman/independent contractor. One that had a good reputation (regardless of legality) for his work.
It's pretty damn reasonable for Obi-wan and others to assume the assassination contract and clone contract were two completely unrelated jobs Jango took. Reasonable to assume Jango was playing both sides and ran to Geonosis for protection because that's where the person who hired him for the assassination contract was (Nute Gunray).
There's no obvious connection between Jango and Dooku for Obi-wan to see at this point.
The connection seems obvious to us because we, as the audience, know more than the characters do. We see the trap being sprung and the inevitable tragedy approaching.
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Anime Closing Themes
I know anime gets some flak about how their opening themes are super energetic and then the ending theme is super chill. There’s a reason for that.
Chill Ending Themes are the Blank Spaces of anime.
When the story is told effectively, a serene ending theme is the perfect way to absorb and reflect on what you just experienced emotionally. Then, as in binge-watching, the beginning theme helps you get back in the mood for what’s to come.
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12 excellent habits from the great Russian writer, Leo Tolstoy. As with all the best advice, Tolstoy’s habits apply to modern life, particularly in the age of constant Internet distraction. All writers can benefit from this list, with added commentary from Diana Wink. 
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ladykyrin · 2 years
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I watched the Killing Eve finale and if I wasn’t thoroughly invested in my OFMD fic I would absolutely be writing a fic that starts at the end of season 3 and just has Eve and Villanelle do an epic road trip across the world to pick off the Twelve one by one.
And I’d give the Twelve an actual motivation because, you know, that’s how villains are supposed to work, though Laura Neal apparently never got the memo ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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zurich-snows · 2 years
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Hypnotic Poetry: A Study of Trance-inducing Technique in Certain Poems and Its Literary Significance. Edward Douglas Snyder. Octagon Books, 1971, University of California
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galadhremmin · 2 years
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well i’m certainly experiencing emotions about this paper
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proteuus · 2 years
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I am literally the nicest person ever when it comes to reading other peoples' writing it's usually so easy for me to pick out things I like but oh my god?? I just read the worst two short stories I've read in my life for my fiction workshop class???
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