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oasisr · 5 months

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yes i am a prude, and hypersexuality is ruining friendships, relationships and society as a whole.

#hypersexual #hypersexuality #sexualization #brave new world #relationships #fds #female dating strategy #feminism #tradfem #christian #conspiracy #freeblr #bible #conspiracy theory #truther #truth #christian woman

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dearnah · 26 days

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#photography #dearnah #fds #caipirinha #bomdia

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papirouge · 2 months

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#the BrokenHawkeye comment is so real #i used to have this one sided friendship+ with a male friend and i realized I was just a placeholder #female dating strategy #FDS #important #femcel #papi watch

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bwglite · 10 months

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Did a successful belt replacement for my Famicom disk system, now it's working perfectly!!

#smb #mario #famicom disk system #fds #famicom

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michaelmac6072 · 1 year

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Something that crossed my mind when perusing the latest Touhou manga chapters is that I think ZUN often has difficulty making events flow naturally from one to another, and to cover for it, he ends up overwriting a lot of expository stuff that slows things down and takes up precious real-estate in the stories he wants to tell. It's kind of evident in the meme that most Touhou games are 4 stages of beating up randos followed by only 2 stages of people actually related to the incident, but I think a better point of comparison would between the latest chapter of CDS, where Reimu stays at Myouren temple, and the Sanae-san is On the Run doujin by WaHH artist Aya Azuma, where Sanae does the same thing. Both cover the same beats, with a shrine maiden getting an intro to the Buddhists and life at their temple, but Azmaya is able to cover a lot more ground in a lot less space than ZUN did.

More below the cut -- lots of manga pages and spoiler warnings for both comics. As a side note, I wanted to try using colored text to help break up all the black & white and make things easier to follow, but I apologize if it's distracting.

In Detective Satori, our first mention of the Myouren temple is in the end of chapter 23 as the place Reimu and presumably Satori suspect Mizuchi is at next, and so we spend the tail end of that chapter with several pages of establishing panels of the Myouren crew there before Reimu arrives confronting Kyouko, all without dialogue.

Come chapter 24, we begin with... more establishing panels of the Myouren crew doing day-to-day activities, this time accompanied by dialogue and mean-spirited titles, presumably assigned to them by either Reimu or Aya.

We don't even get to see Reimu's request to stay at the temple until page 10 of this chapter, and even then it is only indirectly through Ichirin's mention. By the time we get to Reimu on page 12, she's grouchily preparing a vegetarian meal at the temple before re-affirming to herself her desire to catch Mizuchi here -- which is something we already know from last time, about 18 total pages ago.

After this, that's the last we see of Reimu throughout the chapter - the rest is spent catching up with Aya and Marisa, which also isn't segued smoothly and instead relies on a cut to a couple pages of Kogasa's antics in the graveyard before Aya and Marisa chime in and discuss their own reasons for being there.

I could go on and post more pages from the chapter, but you get the point. The issue here is that there's no transition between these scenes -- rather than link these events together in any logical way, ZUN relies on lots of establishing material as filler to act as a buffer between separate events. You can see how it would be easy to join all this stuff together smoothly without so much establishment, which would give the meat of this thriller story some much-needed real estate. If you don't want to portray the scene where Reimu requests to stay, have ch. 24 begin with Reimu already prepping stuff at the temple, complete with the same grumblings about their lifestyle. From there, the action could driven by her interactions with some of the Buddhist crew -- not necessarily all of them, given the nature of the situation and the tension you want to preserve, but at least one or two of them. Then you can cut either cut to outside and have Aya and Marisa spy on or interrogate Kogasa, or even better, have Aya appear in a window and chat with Reimu, then you can have Marisa spot them from above and swoop in, and then they could all trade notes. Even if we are generous and give the Myouren temple the 5 pages of establishment it has at the end of chapter 23, there's no reason to do so much of it again at the start of chapter 24 and again again with Kogasa during its middle unless you're either deliberately padding things out, struggling for segues, or deliberately padding things out because you're struggling for segues.

Contrast this with Azmaya's comic. Here, the on-the-run Sanae meets Byakuren on the road after Reimu's attempts to exploit the spat between Sanae and her gods backfires. Byak good-naturedly offers her a place to stay after helping her clear up the aftermath of that.

From there, Sanae gets a crash course from Ichirin on the Buddhists' lifestyle, which she also grumbles about for the same reasons as Reimu, but comes to admire in her own way...

...before catching Ichirin and the others cheating on their discipline and storming out of the temple in betrayed frustration!

I would argue that more happens in just these 7 pages with Sanae here than in over 15 pages of CDS with Reimu. Azmaya's able to establish the Myouren temple as the next destination for Sanae in only a page or so, and the ascetic training there is conveyed efficiently in a training montage for Sanae, rather than two separate multi-page exposition scenes of the Myouren crew going through their daily routines. By the time we've reached 12 pages from the start of this chapter here -- where in CDS we were just beginning to see Reimu reacting to temple life -- Sanae's getting squabbled over by Shou as part of an effort to keep Sanae from damaging the temple's reputation.

I know CDS and this doujin have very different aims, and I know scripting a comic and handing it off to another artist leaves some artifacting that doing everything yourself does not. That said, Azmaya's comic had so much less fat on it than ZUN's, and a large part of that comes from how ZUN doesn't link events together well and so constantly re-establishes them, whereas Azmaya's events flow naturally from one another. Sanae at the was out in the village trying to gather embarrassing flyers Reimu made of her, and with Byakuren being a prominent figure there, it's highly plausible the two would meet up coincidentally. This conceit acts as a springboard for everything that happens in this chapter, whose ending in turn acts as a springboard for Shou to chase after her in the next chapter, which itself springboards into further events easily. There's a little re-establishment at the start of the chapter -- it is a serial -- but it's very casual. There's no starting and stopping like there constantly is in CDS: everything builds upon each other with grace and ease in a way that keeps the story going. And because of this constructive structure, Sanae can go through the same beats with Byakuren here that Reimu did in CDS in a much more efficient number of manga panels.

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acedeathcard · 2 months

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↸ Curious.. If he bribed Dalv 50k to film a music video, would he really do it?

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spookyflavors · 1 year

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Sans is Fabio of the internet.

#id draw him with a long and flowing wig on but im tired #dffdsb #fds #im in my 30's and have been simping over a skeleman since 2015...#spooky blogs #im just glad im not the only one

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worldpremieretoons · 4 days

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unfinished drawing of the SMB2J cover art I once did but grew displeased with and scrapped. Coming back to it, I'm not sure why I didn't finish it but here it is anyway lol from 2020

#super mario bros 2 #lost levels #fds #fan art #old #mario

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oasisr · 6 months

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When men neg you by putting down your talents, run. Things will not get better.

Even if you aren't good at something and are just a beginner, he should not be mocking you or bullying you for that.

I'm not a great singer or painter, but I enjoy singing and painting sometimes. My ex would mock me and tell me that he wanted to marry someone who could actually sing.

I gave him another chance after he hurt my feelings. He was good for a couple of weeks, and then went right back to mocking me and putting me down.

Just run. You are beautiful even if you aren't good at everything you try. You don't need someone to put you down and try to harm your self-worth.

You are worthy of someone who will treat you like you are a special and beautiful woman. Because you are.

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uma-garot-suicida · 29 days

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#cort #fds #fdstlgd #depre #amornaopresta

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thecollectorsbase · 30 days

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papirouge · 1 year

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#female dating strategy #FDS

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not-nes · 2 months

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#famicom #gaming #nes #retro gaming #fds

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cordeiroleao · 1 year

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"Você restringirá seu crescimento se não realizar, ao longo da vida, a obra dolorosa, humilhante e libertadora de trazer alegremente seus pecados das trevas do sigilo para a luz do reconhecimento diante de um irmão ou irmã em Cristo. Nas trevas, seus pecados se inflamam e crescem em vigor; na luz, eles definham e morrem. Em outras palavras, andar na luz é ter honestidade para com Deus e os outros."

"Santificação profunda" Dane Ortlund Pág 104, Kindle.

#livrodigital #livroteca #frase de livro #livros #citacoes #citacao #citacões #projetofalandonocéu #abbapai #abba #amor #diadia #shabatshalom #sabado #fds #kindle #amazon

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halofandatingsim · 2 years

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Hello! As it is right now, here at FDS we’ve decided to transform our game into a Halo fan dating simulator. The story takes place during Infinite on one of the largest Halo rings. The player character has crashed onto a scavenged base created by a group of ragtag team of soldiers. (Sound Familiar?) The area is infested with Blind Wolves and Sentinels, danger lurks in the background, but hopefully these new faces are a silver lining.

Our game development plan is to create three original characters that you can pursue in the story and a couple of original background characters you’ll interact with.

We also want to thank our writers and artists working on the game. We hope that you'll continue supporting us as we change direction and we want to thank you all for the support you’ve given us.

#announcement #update #fds #halo #halo infinite #fan dating simulator #halo fan dating simulator #hfds #halo fds

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reimuisgay · 5 months

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the title "subterranean animosity" goes hard as fuck

#I enjoyed the new Cheating Detective Satori #Touhou #FDS

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