WIP: Fantasmic Fic
Notes: I'm literally only posting this now because of what happened the other night to poor, ol' Murphy...since I have nothing else to pay tribute to my potentially shattered dreams xD
I haven't worked on it since December of last year and it's not even a finished chapter, but I'm trying to play around with different concepts for a story themed after Fantasmic. There's so many little ideas I can't decide between, so this is definitely not going to turn into a full fic anytime soon. I've just been trying to plot one out for a good five years and can't find a concept that satisfies me entirely, so eventually I just started writing in the hopes it would make itself happen.
That said, quite a lot I don't like about the concepts I was working towards when I was working on this, so ya know. It might not go anywhere.
Anyway, read if ya like! Pass it over if you don't. That event was just...so in line with the sort of thing I've been playing with to launch the story (not Mal/Murphy catching fire lol, but some inexplicable, sudden thing causing the show to go VERY wrong), that I felt like I wanted to throw this out there.
Enjoy?
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Welcome to Fantasmic. Tonight your friend and host, Mickey Mouse, uses his vivid imagination to create magical imagery for all to enjoy. In a moment, you can experience a beautiful fantasy or an exciting adventure.
But beware. Nothing is more power than the imagination, for it can also expand your greatest fears into an overwhelming nightmare…
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The narration droned on into its final words as Mickey tugged nervously on the rim of his coat. Around him, the bustle of preparation filled the island like a swarm. A flutter of fabric then the curtsy of a passing princess, the salty scent of a pirate sweeping by, and a flurry of unintelligible frustration from a voice belonging to a certain temperamental feathered friend. Then, out of the corner of his eye, a horned silhouette with a piercing green gaze. He swallowed as Maleficent’s eyes narrowed, then breathed a sigh of relief when she closed them and sent a brisk nod his way. The mouse smiled and nodded back, shaking off the anxiety with a flick of his tail, though it clung to him nonetheless.
A single note, the gentle ring of a bell, struck the air and, at least to Mickey, the world went silent. With every moment that the chime continued to grow, his focus narrowed until nothing but a quiet, dark tunnel and an inexplicable fear remained in his mind’s eye. The question that had begun to haunt him night after night quietly crept in.
What if I’m not enough?
But a gentle hand touched his shoulder, pulling his thoughts from the shadows. She was there for only a moment, but Minnie’s quiet whisper as she swept towards the ‘Twain to await her cue, pixie dust trailing from her dress, was all he needed.
“You are everything you need to be, and more.”
He closed his eyes and grinned softly as the bright chime of her laughter melted into the island’s growing ring. Then, with a deep breath, he gathered the heat of enchantment to his fingertips. The quiet sound expanded into a roar of cymbals and in the moment it reached its peak, Mickey let the magic overtake him entirely.
A flash of sparks burst forth from the stage, enveloping the mouse in pure light as he stepped into view. The crowd erupted. Their hearts flared. Mickey saw, and laughed for pure relief. For to him, the glow of a thousand hearts meant only one thing: they believed.
He reveled in their awe as he bent the light and color to his whim, whisking forth a whitecapped wave and dyeing it a midnight blue. Though his focus shifted from place to place, he kept the crowd constantly in the corner of his vision. With every motion, every flick of his wrist, a stream of magic sprung forth and their wonder grew all the greater.
But it’s all too easy to become lost in approval, and to confuse attention and applause for true belief. And Mickey, for all his best intentions, had become stranded in such thoughts. They clapped. They cheered. So when a dark cloud slipped over the moon, concealing its light, he paid no mind to the flicker of darkness that sprouted along with it. This shadow grew. And silently, subtly, it took form until like a serpent it was slithering through the crowd.
It tasted the air and swiveled sharply, eyes locked on a target buried somewhere within the jumble of shifting bodies, all oblivious to its presence. Shadows are often drawn to light, and this creature was no different. The brightest hearts served as beacons in its eyes, and it was to one such heart -- a child’s, blazing with wonder and hope -- that it raced with unbridled vigor. But its confidence was misplaced. For as it met with the light, fangs bared, it released a stunned hiss and shrunk back from the heat of the flame, yet too great to overcome.
The serpent shook its head then sent out a flickering tongue to taste the air once more. With far greater caution, it now set its sights on other hearts. Those whose light was bright enough to attract, but too cold to weather the chill of a venomous nightmare. And when this creature sank its fangs into the heels of its first victim, the poison sparked a new kind of fire. Fiercer. Hotter. A wild blaze that leapt and flared with every shifting breeze. But this flame gave off no light. Rather, in an inky, molten flow of darkness, it consumed it.
The venom spread rapidly, tainting the light with shadow as it jumped from heart to heart.
Under its grip, doubt and disbelief took root in the crowd and the same glowing hearts which had fueled Mickey’s hope -- his magic -- were now fodder for a darkened wildfire beginning to ignite.
Mickey, having conjured a twinkling likeness of himself in the mist just moments prior, had turned his back to the audience for only a moment in order to ascend the wooden staircase toward the higher level of stage. He was altogether oblivious, and skipped up the steps with a playful confidence, tail trailing behind him in rhythmic time.
Maybe Minnie was right, he thought with renewed relief. Maybe I am enough.
He cast a wistful glance at his silhouette as he passed in front of the mill, and shuddered. The shape of his sorcerer’s attire rested upon the shadow’s head, a looming reminder of all he had yet to achieve.
“I hafta be,” he whispered under his breath, then whirled around to face the crowd. In that same moment, as he lifted his hands to release a flare of magic from his fingertips, his breath hitched in his throat and a chill ran down his spine. The hearts of the audience, which only moments ago had been glittering and bright, were now faint and ever-fading. Mickey had no way of knowing, nor any reason to believe, there were other forces at play, and was altogether overcome by a crushing sense of doubt.
The famous flare of magic, which so many waited eagerly to see, never came.
The island went silent and the audience, impervious to their own fading light, did the same. Mickey cast a panicked look at his hands, then stumbled backwards. Try as he might, the magic would not come. It refused. And with every second he stood in silence, the glow across the water grew ever darker.
In the uncertain flicker of Mickey’s own heart, a shadowy pair of eyes found their next target.
A cold rush of wind swept over the audience and with it a bitter murmur that rippled across the water and filled Mickey’s ears.
“We don’t believe.”
Whether the words were spoken, or simply conjured from the invading magic, was unclear. But Mickey heard them nonetheless, and it gave the dark creature exactly the foothold it needed.
He did not see the snake, nor feel its bite, but the venom pierced his heart like the sharpest thorn, and the fear within grew tenfold. A smoky haze of emotion clouded his mind and he lurched forward with a gasp as bitterness surrounded him like a deep fog. Then, through the mist, a quiet, haunting voice whispered in his ear.
‘You could make them believe…’
Mickey was not one who much liked the idea of making anyone do anything. So when, for a brief moment, he actually humored this idea, it surprised him. But why should it? A small piece of his heart fought fiercely against the thought, but a growing part of him wanted to dive deeper. To explore the possibilities he’d once thought forbidden.
It was the ring of a familiar voice that tipped the scales, and gave the light in his heart the edge it desperately needed.
“Mickey!”
When he blinked, Minnie was there in front of him. In the shine of her voice, the fog receded.
“Mickey, are you all right?” she breathed in a way that made it clear she knew he wasn’t.
He couldn’t respond at first. Glancing past her, he tried to steal a look at the crowd -- to see if there was even a glimmer of light left in their hearts. He saw the people. What he could not see, no matter how hard he tried or how long he stared, was a hint of either light…or shadow. His eyes were blind to their hearts.
He felt empty.
“I can’t…I can’t see them.” He looked at Minnie who, with unspoken understanding, found his hands and squeezed them tight. “I can’t feel them,” he whispered in a voice that was almost a whimper.
“Oh, Mickey…”
A booming voice surprised them both.
“Your attention, please. Due to unforeseen circumstances, this performance of Fantasmic has been canceled.”
An enormous ‘boo’ erupted from the crowd across the water, and Mickey ripped himself away from Minnie’s grasp.
“No, no!” He motioned frantically to the tech booth stationed in the midst of the crowd. “Don’t stop it! I can fix this! I can-”
“You will,” Minnie urged him abruptly, and grabbed his hand as she began to usher him off the stage. “But not now.”
“But…” Mickey cast another glance across the water, swallowing the shame that rose inside him. He could no longer see their hearts, but he didn’t need to to see their frustration and disappointment. Beside him, Minnie shuddered just slightly. One look at her face, which had only minutes ago been glowing with a light fueled by faith and trust, and he knew that whatever this was, she could feel it too. Her eyes were now dull and tired, and the light surrounding her was nearly gone.
Meekly, Mickey surrendered and followed her away.
Behind the curtain that shielded the island from prying eyes, utter madness was breaking loose. The princesses were gathered together, speaking in hushed, panicked whispers. Cinderella’s dress had dissolved into rags. Rapunzel’s locks were once again losing their golden sheen. Ariel could not find her voice at all. Virtually everyone else was crowded around the few stage managers that happened to be there, talking over each other to try to get any answers whatsoever.
It was Donald who spotted Mickey first and, with little regard for subtlety, loudly squawked out his name. “MICKEY!”
All eyes turned, and Mickey wished he could sink into the ground to escape their stare as his friend came darting over. If there was one thing Donald was known for, it wasn’t his impeccable articulation. Years of friendship had made him at least comprehensible, but the frenzy with which he launched his words at Mickey left the mouse as lost as ever.
“Donald! Wouldja slow down? I can’t understan-”
“Gawrsh, Mick…what happened?” Goofy interrupted, sauntering over with only a hint of concern…which was still significantly more than usual. “One minute everythin’s fine ‘n dandy, and the next, all the magic’s kaput!”
Donald huffed and glared at Goofy. “That’s what I was saying.”
Mickey opened his mouth to reply, then closed it again. Everyone -- princesses, pirates, and virtually every other member of the cast -- all stared silently, waiting with bated breath for his explanation. But he had none. He could not begin to explain what had happened, or what he had lost.
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at some point i will figure out how to write the post-canon, post-empire edelgard autonomy fic of my dreams. it just feels like a very big task and maybe like with playing the dane, i’m simply not old and traumatized enough to manage it yet.
but my vision is thus: it’s set years (realistically, decades) after the end of crimson flower, when everything has gone as right as it can possibly go. fódlan is thriving. the social reforms have taken effect. the nobility system is nearly eliminated, if not entirely so, with titles made merely symbolic. social mobility, welfare, and prosperity are high. there’s an explosion in arts and culture and technology. brigid and duscur have gained independence; relations with sreng and almyra are much improved; heck, maybe they've even figured it out with dagda. in my most idealistic version, leicester and faerghus would eventually be ceded back to become autonomous regions, essentially disbanding the adrestian empire. rule is no longer hereditary, but merit-based. there's a roadmap for the future, and everything is on track—and more than that, people at all points on the power spectrum have already seen it bear fruit. with or without edelgard, it will be pursued. there's buy-in. they believe.
of course, it's not perfect—nothing can be—but edelgard's vision has been fulfilled. the people are empowered. humanity is free. fódlan has healed.
and somehow, she's had enough time to resolve her goals outside of politics, too. those who slither in the dark have been eradicated. edelgard and lysithea's second crests have been successfully removed, allowing them to live if not full lives, then substantially longer ones than they would have with their twin crests intact. who knows—maybe she finally gets around to having that wedding.
point for point, every item listed in edelgard's manifesto has been checked off. the ghosts of her past have been laid to rest. she can finally take off her crown. she can finally pursue the quiet, humble life she's wanted for so long. she can finally breathe.
... but can she?
edelgard is nothing if not driven. her intelligence, vision, and sheer willpower allowed her to plan and execute a revolution against two countries and the most powerful institution on the continent, all while she was still a teenager. as royalty, her life was never truly hers even before she became heir to the adrestian throne, with all the additional baggage of survivor's guilt and the desire for vengeance and her need to ensure nothing that happened to her can ever happen to anyone else, ever again.
so what happens when that drive has no outlet? what happens when someone who has been constantly in motion, constantly working and planning and preparing every spare second of every day since she was fourteen years old, suddenly has to stand still? what happens when someone whose hands have been bound for so long—first literally in the dungeons of enbarr, then by the weight and responsibilities of her crown—is set free?
being edelgard, she would step away from the throne, no matter how hard it was for her to give up control. she's always been focused on the endgame, and she knows that if she doesn't let go, she'll be setting the wrong tone for fódlan's future. she's too devoted to that endgame to cling to power much longer than she needs to, though i could see her making some excuses and trying to iron out just a few more things to buy herself some more time to mentally prepare before she's done for good.
but who would she be then? who is the woman without the crown? what becomes of a machine once it is no longer needed, when it has made itself obsolete? what about when that machine is a person with legs and arms and an innate unwillingness to gather dust on a shelf?
what happens when you get everything you want? what happens when all your wanting has been for others to thrive, and now you have to want only for yourself? how do you discover who you are when you've spent decades being everything for everyone else? how do you find meaning again? how do you find purpose?
after a lifetime of devotion and passion and movement, how do you learn to sit with yourself, and be quiet, and be still?
gosh, i would love to meet her. i would love to pick her brain. but boy, i do not envy the work that girl has to do.
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