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maplesyrupsainz · 19 days

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˖⁺｡˚⋆˙make you mine | CL16 LN4 ˖⁺｡˚⋆˙

pairing: charles leclerc x singer!reader y/n (she/her) x lando norris

genre: social media au, polyamorous relationship

warnings: just polyamory & fluff

summary: in which you never censor yourself online but your boys wouldn't change you for the world

a/n: i luv the polyamory reqs lollll

request!!!: I've been obsessed with Charlando recently so I was wondering if you could maybe write a smau for them with singer!reader, I don't have a plot other than the fact that they are dating someone like Renée Rap with zero PR training, can you imagine the chaos

my masterlist

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charles_leclerc posted a story

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landonorris you're telling me

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user1 omg aw

user2 awww our precious girl

user3 still not used to u dating her

landonorris posted a story

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user4 charlando looking after y/n <3

charles_leclerc only if we feed her 🤔

landonorris well..... true

user5 yummm pancakes

francisca.cgomes i miss her

landonorris i told her and she literally squealed at the mention of your name..

francisca.cgomes heheheee that's my girl

landonorris and here we were, thinking she was ours

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yourusername posted a story

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user6 omg

user7 i am no better than a man

user8 what have they done this time

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landonorris baby please we said sorry it was an accident

charles_leclerc ma belle please we're begging

francisca.cgomes posted a story

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charles_leclerc she's with YOU?

landonorris return her to us this instant

francisca.cgomes idk what you're talking about 🤷‍♀️

user9 make em squirm

user10 😍

yourusername 📍 paris

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yourusername the boys forgot about me but she never would

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francisca.cgomes i wouldnt dream of it sweetheart 😍

yourusername stop im blushing....

landonorris stop flirting where we can see it charles is distraught

yourusername so was i when i realised you'd both forgotten to include me in your travel plans

user11 LOL is she being serious😭

user12 the most beautiful wags by far

pierregasly go away back to monaco and free my girlfriend

yourusername YOUR girlfriend? huhhh i know you aint talking about my girl kika

pierregasly @.landonorris @.charles_leclerc please make her forgive you so i can live in peace

charles_leclerc you don't think we're trying 😢

francisca.cgomes try harder 😋 (or dont) (i love having her around)

user13 LOL y/n always brings the chaos to social media 😭

user14 i just know lando & charles' PR team are tired

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yourusername posted a story

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lilyzneimer deserved

yourusername right?!

user15 hahaha what a fun spectacle to watch unfold via instagram

carlossainz55 you guys are crazy

yourusername 😘 perhaps true

carlossainz55 no, definitely true

user16 i know this was charles' idea

charles_leclerc 📍 monaco

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charles_leclerc time to get serious for the home race

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pierregasly thank god

charles_leclerc 🤨

user17 OMG THEY R SOOO CUTEEE TOGETHER

user18 im so jealous of them

yourusername get my boys on the podium!!!! 🥇

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user19 she gets it

landonorris us going back to being rivals on the track: 😢

charles_leclerc my heart isnt in it, dont worry

user20 omg why is the cutest thing ever

yourusername posted a story

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lilymhe bored much?

yourusername they are too busy and serious to entertain me. send help

lilymhe im coming to collect you immediately

francisca.cgomes they bored you into becoming an impromptu artiste?

yourusername pretty much 😂 lily said the same thing

francisca.cgomes ok good cause me too. On my way!

user21 trust y/n to supply us with the charlando content 😻

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yourusername 📍 monaco

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yourusername congratulations to my boys on p1 and p2 🩷✨🎀🥰🌸💘🌷🩰 never been so proud in my life!!! by the way i just dropped a new song called make you mine .. this one's for my boys:))) ily all

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user26 NO WARNING?????

user27 what the fuck

lilymhe i screamed tbh

alex_albon can confirm

yourusername oh stop it you guys 🤭

francisca.cgomes IIIII WANNA FEel the RUSHH

yourusername real 👀

user28 SCREAMMMMMM

user29 our chaotic queen 👸

landonorris oh my god baby

charles_leclerc no way

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landonorris posted a story

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user30 oh god i love these three

oscarpiastri cute

lilyzneimer love her <33

user31 sickly sweet😭

charles_leclerc posted a story

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user32 the hand drawn hearts is too cute

user33 y/n is the luckiest girl in the world

user34 giggling and kicking my feet over them

pierregasly you guys are crazy

charles_leclerc crazy in loveee 😎😎😎

yourusername posted a story

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user35 the red and orange hearts😭😭😭

user36 them all posting each other celebrating i could die rn

user37 idk who i wanna be more

francisca.cgomes my fav throuple

yourusername how many others do you know

francisca.cgomes not the point!

landonorris

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landonorris live inside my mind you can see the shrine got you on my walls ..

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user38 omg🥹🥹🥹🥹

user39 omg they are sosososososo cute together i cant cope

user40 oh to be y/n y/l/n

francisca.cgomes a moment for make you mine song of the year 🙏

landonorris pinned 🧷

yourusername iktr 😎

charles_leclerc my honeys 🍯

yourusername hehe

landonorris i love you

charles_leclerc i love you ❤️

yourusername i love u sweeties

user41 the little nicknames🥹🥹🥹

user42 i'd die for them

landonorris same

THE END ❤️🧡

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takeme-totheworld · 4 months

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You Can't Go Home Again

I'm someone who walked away from my childhood religion almost twenty years ago, and I'm very firmly at a place in my life now where I am very happy to be through with it and have zero lingering desire to go back. I've also been out as some kind of queer person for the same almost-twenty years, and I've been out as trans for almost fifteen of those years.

If you knew absolutely nothing else about me or my life except for those major plot points, and the fact that I'm a Good Omens fan, it would be reasonable to assume that I would identify with Crowley far more than Aziraphale. At least at this point in my life. And in fact, I've seen many fans with backgrounds similar to mine say that they used to be much more like Aziraphale when they were younger, but nowadays they see far more of themself in Crowley. Which makes sense, as a trajectory for people who grew up in controlling religions and then left!

I've been trying to figure out what it is about me that makes me so automatically take Aziraphale's perspective when watching this show, even though the most aggressively Aziraphale time of my life was literal decades ago now. And I think that's probably a very complicated answer, but I realized today that I see an emotional struggle happening in him that I still wrestled with for years and years after leaving the church before I was finally able to completely put it to rest—the struggle to accept that some things can never go back to the way they were.

I seriously suffered so much over this for so long after I left the church. Despite all the damage it had done to me, my entire life had been intertwined with the church and a lot of things that were good—or at least deeply comforting in their familiarity—had also been a part of that. I had plenty of genuinely happy memories all mixed together with the harmful ones (which, in case you were wondering, is confusing as hell). There were fundamental human needs that I had only ever gotten met through the church, and as double-edged as what the church provided was, it was all I knew. Learning to get those needs met in new ways was much healthier, but it wasn't what I had always known growing up and it was a loss.

And I spent a long time refusing to fully accept that going back to any version of Christianity or the church just...wasn't ever going to be in the cards for me.

That is in the cards for some people, I know. Some folks who leave or get kicked out of ultra-dogmatic and controlling churches eventually find new homes in much more progressive and nurturing ones. And that's great! But that was never going to be my path. The process of seeing my childhood religion for what it truly was, losing my beliefs, leaving everything the church was to me further and further behind, and gradually learning who I was without it, changed me too much for me to ever be able to go back again.

I am fine with that now. More than fine. I'm healthier and happier now than I've ever been. Over time I grew into a version of myself that no longer has a church/religion/faith-shaped gaping wound in my life I'm trying to fill. But it was hard and painful and it took a really long time for me to get there. I spent a lot of my twenties and even a bit of my early thirties trying to find something...some new church community that I could be connected to in some way, that would give me back some of what I'd lost when I left my childhood church. But none of them ever did. I was never going to get the same things out of belonging to a church again, because I wasn't the same.

You can't go home again.

I see Aziraphale on that same journey and that's part of what makes my heart automatically go out to him and hurt for him, over and over again. He's still desperately holding onto the idea of a hypothetical version of Heaven and being an angel that can be home again one day. One where all the good things he remembers are still there, and still every bit as good, and all the bad parts have been fixed or gotten rid of, so that being there will be like the old times, only even nicer.

Except that even if he actually succeeded at somehow making Heaven the exact flavor of like-the-old-times-only-even-nicer that he is imagining, it wouldn't matter. Heaven is not his home anymore. He's already changed too much to be able to go back. He just hasn't accepted that yet.

#good omens #good omens meta #good omens 2 spoilers #aziraphale #the final fifteen #religious deconstruction #personal

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thats-ill-eagle · 4 months

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HELLUVA BOSS DEVIATING FROM ITS ORIGINAL PREMISE FUNDAMENTALLY DESTROYED THE SHOW

So, it has already been discussed many times in HB critical community that HB deviated from its premise after S1 and that anyone with an once of media literacy can tell that you can't describe it in any way other than horrible writing.

Now, I'm going to ask you this for a second - imagine that you haven't seen S1, the pilot or read the premise of Helluva Boss anywhere. Imagine that you watch all (available) episodes of S2 and are asked to write a premise about it on some movie review website. How would you briefly describe what happens in S2?

Oh, you can't or are having major trouble doing it? Don't worry, you are not media illiterate, my friend. That is the case because IT'S LITERALLY IMPOSSIBLE TO TELL WHAT HELLUVA BOSS IS SUPPOSED TO BE ABOUT ANYMORE.

There are many flaws that your writing could possess - inconsistent characterization, too fast/slow pacing and so on. However, they do not automatically derail your work. It is very much possible to recognize those faults, learn from them and do better in the future.

But the premise of your work is its literal BONES. You build up the plot and characters based on it. You just can't expect your show to be good, if you tear out its basis. Of course the pacing, character development and how plot points are wrapped up in HB is horrible - how can anything function without the very thing that holds it all together?

And I MEAN that the premise of HB completely disappears, not shifts or changes. Like, seriously, what the hell is HB supposed to be about now?

Stolitz?

Their interactions indicate zero meaningful development and are tediously spaced out to the point that it's hard to care about their relationship. It is made even worse by the fact that Stolas, just like in S1, still keeps pressuring Blitzo, despite him being clearly uncomfortable.

Blitzo making amends with people he hurt?

Even ignoring S1's nonexistent buildup of this plotline (Blitzo looking at photos on his phone doesn't count, since it's literally the ONLY moment that barely suggests it), there's no buildup in S2 either, when it comes to both Barbie and Fizz. It is certainly not helped by the fact that Barbie just vanishes after Unhappy Campers and Blitzo and Fizz's beef is resolved in a single episode.

Any other plotlines of S2, like Fizz's job, Crimson, Striker, or Stolas and Stella's separation are just too small or insignificant to be considered part of the supposed premise, INCLUDING the assassination business, which arguably takes up the least amount of time of aspects of the show listed.

It's no surprise that Helluva Boss is slowly crumbling. At this point, it's just a paralysed zombie who completely forgot what it once was. And it's damn sad to watch, because the show comforted me during some dark times and, despite Viv being an awful person, I truly hoped for HB to be great.

#vivziepop critical #vivziepop criticism #helluva boss critical #helluva critical #helluva boss criticism #anti helluva boss #helluva critique

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rosie-kairi · 6 months

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I don't think I've ever really spoken in depth about how much I love Lauriam as a character, which is honestly a crime because out of all the Union Leaders I'd probably have to crown him as my number one favorite.

I love Lauriam not only as a character (pink, sibling plotline) but also as an example of how much prequels can recontextualize an entire character. While Ventus is also an example of this, I think we all knew that he probably had some sort of messed up past that landed him in the clutches of Old Man Xehanort. Marluxia, on the other hand, had absolute zero background to infer from his screentime. He was the villain, you're not really meant to think too hard about him and how he became who he is because he sucks and you hate him.

I don't think there were many people chomping at the bit wanting to get info about his past. Like, it would've been cool to get, but I don't think a background for Marluxia was necessary for the story at that point in time. His role was to establish the organization as a threat to Sora and the other guardians, and that was pretty much the extent of it.

And then Union X happened, and Lauriam entered stage right into a tragedy where his fate was already sealed. You look at Lauriam with his polite little smiles and cute little chibi animations and immediately think "what is this man up to" because you are already primed to distrust him on principle due to COM. Did not help his case that he was introduced in the cutscene immediately following the death of Strelitzia, painting a huge target on his back. Fandom reaction was hostile towards him before he was even fully on screen. Occam's Razor, the most obvious answer is the correct one. Lauriam is the obvious suspect because of his actions in the future, so he must be the killer. Literally him just existing in a scene caused more ire to build against him.

But then the Shift Pride cutscene happened. Then it was revealed that Lauriam and Strelitzia -the girl who so many thought he killed- were siblings, and that he was quite worried for her wellbeing, actually.

Every cutscene a clearer picture of who Lauriam is a person was painted, and soon you stopped looking at him with distrust, and it's replaced with the question of "What happened to you?". What happened that caused Lauriam, someone who has been shown to care deeply and immensely about the people he loves, someone who is willing to do anything for those people, become Marluxia? It became increasingly obvious that they were incredibly different people, even though Marluxia came from Lauriam.

And this isn't to say that there was no connection between the two. Lauriam seemed to be incredibly self-confident in his abilities, enough to be pretty steadfast in his resolve to square up with goddamn Maleficent of all people (even if he did get his ass kicked). There's also his very intense anger, as seen in the cutscene where Ventus confesses to being the reason why Strelitzia "vanished", as well as a bit in the scene where he's at Ventus's bedside.

This is all to say that Lauriam was not a necessary addition to the khux cast, he very well could've been swapped with a random new character and the plot probably would've worked fine, all things considered. But because it's Lauriam -the somebody of a character that has already been established to be a prick- it gives his whole plotline a hell of a lot more punch. If it was a new character, people probably wouldn't have been as distrusting of him right of the bat, the sibling plotline would be sweet, but because it's Lauriam and we know how he ends up in the future, it becomes a hell of a lot more tragic. How did the change happen? He's tragic because we know that whatever he does will lead to the outcome of him losing his heart and falling to darkness, something that is essentially the exact antithesis of the keyblade wielder mission statement.

Lauriam is someone who was made to struggle against the destiny that was written out for him with a neat pen and ink, and someone who was doomed to fail in every regard. He could not save his sister, he could not defeat Maleficent, he could not help Ventus, he could not keep his memories when thrown into the future. He couldn't do anything about it.

I realize this is all rounding back around to "the inherent tragedy of prequels" but it's true.

...and yeah that's basically it. I have a lot more thoughts about this guy but I feel like if I write anymore I'm just gonna sound completely incomprehensible bc I'm very tired. Thanks for reading, and don't forget to sparkle on

#Rosie rambles #lost the plot a bit but I think it's decently comprehensible #kingdom hearts union x #khux #kh lauriam #lauriam #kh marluxia #marluxia #character analysis #meta #i think

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raymusterio · 22 days

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Just a little rant.. no spoilers

I always think it's really irritating when people try and say Bakugou is irrelevant to the story, like what? Did we read the same thing? Cause Izuku would not have received ofa if it wasn't for Katsuki being the person attacked by slime. Izuku was literally like "oh gee poor guy, I hope a hero with the right quirk shows up, cause All Mights out thanks to me" until he actually looked up and saw that it was his Kacchan being suffocated and it was *no thoughts. head empty.* he fucking sprinted. That wouldn't have happened the way it did if it had been anybody else. It had to be Katsuki or the story would have been completely different because All Might wouldn't have seen Izuku's (seemingly random) act of heroism despite being quirkless and thus never choosing him to be ninth. Katsuki plays such a huge role in the plot of the story and has since the very first page.

It also boggles my mind how quick people are to label Katsuki an irredeemable abuser, and honestly, people who demonize he like that give me the ick. Like, he's just a kid who's so scared of his own emotions and how his friend makes him feel, that he lashes out in the only response he knows how. He's a kid with anger issues, who makes mistakes just like the rest of us. I'm not excusing what he said, cause it was fucked up, but he recognized that it was fucked up and worked hard to apologize to Izuku and make it up to him. Even if Izuku had already forgiven him.

And I really do think Izuku had already forgiven him, because that's who Izuku is. Izuku never victimized himself. He couldn't. Because he wanted to be a hero, just like All Might. And he can't be a hero if he's a victim. That's a double edged mentality to have and it definitely came into play during the vigilante arc. Izuku is the kind of person who breaks himself to help others, he has little to zero self preservation skills mixed with overwhelming kindness and compassion. When Katsuki told him to take a swan dive, his response was essentially "You're an idiot Kacchan, what would you have done if I was the kind of person to take you seriously? Can't be a hero like that, nope!" He really didn't entertain the idea of himself jumping, and instead focused on berating Katsuki's rude and insulting behavior. He didn't like it and doesn't approve of a future pro acting like that, because he still holds no doubt that Katsuki will become a pro hero. Because "Kacchan's amazing".

Izuku and Katsuki's character arcs are so heavily intertwined that you really can't talk about one without mentioning the other. They know each other's habits, behavior, and mannerisms better than anyone else, yet misunderstanding is such a present theme in their relationship. It's so complex that I don't see it as a stereotypical victim×bully ship, it goes so much deeper than that.

In a story about hope, change, and redemption it's disheartening seeing parts of the fandom completely miss the point.

#i have more to say but im tired #bakudeku #bkdk #izuku midoriya #bakugou katsuki #kacchan #deku #katsudeku #greenade #bnha bakudeku

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stickstone · 20 days

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i think wind really demonstrates one of the main issues with the way warrior cats is written, that being the fact that nothing gets planned out in advance and the writer changes every book

because every book has to end with this big Moment, certain plot points get either rushed or delayed. for example, why the hell did they wait til the very end of thunder to make splashtail the leader? just as frostpaw got back?

it would have made way more sense for splashtail to be made leader early on in the book, so we could see from sunbeam’s chapters how splashtail was rebuilding riverclan in the background and gaining loyalty and respect. it could a sense of dramatic irony, with frostpaw and the reader learning the truth about splashtail while those back in the clans trust him more and more, giving him a great deal of power

this way, by the time frostpaw gets back, splashstar is a well established leader. it makes more sense why riverclan would be so opposed to the idea of loosing such a strong, stable leader, and it would be easier for splashstar to use his reputation and the current political climate to make it look like tigerstar has turned poor traumatized frostpaw against him

instead, by having thunder leave off on this big, dramatic ‘reveal’ of splashtail being made leader, the erin’s write themselves into a corner. there is no reason for frostpaw not to share the truth, so she does, but whoops! they can’t just end the arc with splashtail getting overthrown, so, even though it makes absolute zero sense for LITERALLY ALL OF RIVERCLAN to turn on her, they do

so now the erins have to justify why splashtail hasn’t been overthrown yet. if he was written the way he was previously written, it would make no sense for all of riverclan to throw their support behind him, so the erins have to turn him into a tyrant that everyone is too scared to stand up to

this is how splashtail goes from a clever, manipulative, if very impulsive and easy to anger villain, to a Godless Heathen Tyrant who kills his deputy for mildly disagreeing with him

because thunder ended with a Big Plot Twist, wind has to spend the entirety of its runtime justifying why the main conflict doesn’t just end right then and there. that is why the pacing screeches to a halt and that is why an artificial upping of the stakes happens right at the very end

wind is a book that spends its runtime trying to justify its existence. which is not what you want to see in the penultimate book in an arc

#warrior cats #a starless clan #asc spoilers #splashtail #splashstar #frostpaw #riverclan #asc wind

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tipsygnostalgy · 3 months

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"It was never that serious," said Rose Lalonde calmly. — a deranged rant on update rose + philosophy

now that rose has officially hopped onto the "nothing matters" track of things i'm inclined to believe faux-absurdism is a sleeping agent in the strilondian neuroticism paradigm moreso than a real plot point but yeah anyway i have mixed feelings

on one hand i can definitely see why people don't like her / think she's ooc. the classic process of "cause major change in a character" goes inciting incident -> development -> big blowout moment demonstrating the change (appropriated + bastardized from mr freytag himself), and in my personal opinion the comic jumped the gun on this one? we get the inciting incident (candy timeline's irrelevancy) and both irl timeline and character arcwise are plunged straight into the blowout with very little time in between. there's a tiny hint with the light symbol playing a role (more on this later) but for the most part it feels sudden and unjustified if you're insane about rose + understand sufficient epilogues metaphilosophy + and are coded specifically to like this type of shit you Get Exactly What's Going On and fucking dig it. if you don't, you think they've put her through a meat grinder and i can see both

on the OTHER. dear god i'm sucking on the sweet teats of knowledge and absurdism like a baby at the bath. her swapping her constant need of "why" to "why not" and both rose's constant struggle with Light mixing with the irrelevancy of candy and coalescing in one big idgaf war except.

except on the third hand it's worth mentioning that she's also half-assing absurdism so bad that it gets pathetic. her last line "I knew you would forgive me anyway" actually solidifies this arc as one big tantrum that they plan on developing into Not A Thing (hopefully) because she doesn't tell kanaya "I knew it wouldn't matter." the forgiveness is what she focuses on. the forgiveness matters. kanaya still matters to her whether this dumbass light player is consciously aware of this or not and i think ironically KANAYA knows this better than she does which is part of her saying she refuses to mediate this one. on a rosemary level this is jaw-dropping on a character level BOOOO

MAKE HER ABSURDIST! make her sit there and do things not for the sake of kanaya but literally only to do them. make her sit there and genuinely believe the only obligation in reality is to live it. dirk fails at being a true absurdist too he starts injecting meaning into life like there's motherfucking nothing and rose actually acknowledging there's zero meaning whatsoever but living anyway and in that process learning to love life (juxtaposes jake's adventurer) would juxtapose her to him but NOOOOOO she has to sit there and go Well there's no meaning to Life. It was Never that serious. Fuck you. but then refuse to kill herself (thereby proving camus right once again) then now what. now What. Ohhhh "nothing" matters cool then die. dirk's suicide was meaningful because he broke that formula okay he went There's no meaning to life? Ok. then immediately hung himself he DEVOURED that sequence he subverted absurdism back into existentialism which is cool but ROSE COULD PERPENDICULAR THAT!

#homestuck #rose lalonde #homestuck meta #homestuck analysis #dirk strider #hs

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agerasiaa · 3 months

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Hazbin Hotel ep 5 and 6 spoilers!

I’m sorry but WHAT was that? I loved the first 4 episodes even when I could agree they were a little rushed and introduced us to way too many new characters without really letting us see the main cast. But the new eps were next level. Introducing characters, past reveals, lore left and right. All emotional moments have zero weight because they come out of nowhere. No one is having an actual arc— stuff just happens faster than you can chew the stuff that happened 1 minute before.

Alastor suddenly claiming him and Charlie have a father-daughter relationship? Like yeah he was probably just doing that to piss off Lucifer (WHO HE HAS NO REASON TO DISLIKE AS MUCH AS HE JUST DOES? it’s so funny) but we have literally seen Charlie and him interact like what? Once in the first ep and suddenly they have a dynamic that hasn’t developed at all to how they act around each other. And this is just one example of the many problems I have with the new eps…

The hotel is helping Angel. HOW? We have seen no actual redemption stuff that would help someone out of drug addiction or change his attitude. The one that helped was Husk and the only thing he did was have one conversation with Angel and suddenly Angel has gone through sooo much character development—even standing up to Valentino who he has no reason to suddenly not fear. (To be fair, it has been probably a few months since the events of ep four, but for a watcher it doesn’t feel like that. So the development seems a little sudden.)

Other notes:

Heaven having no rules who gets to heaven and who not, and no one just ever questioned it

Why are we even introduced to Heaven yet? Many types of reveals that happen are not season 1 material at all (or it would be if they had more episodes)

Charlie and Lucifer had a distant relationship and Charlie supposedly had ”daddy issues” and then they are just— so happy with each other and everything is resolved SO EASILY / FAST

The whole premise of the Hotel seems to be meaningless. Charlie’s great plan for redemption was… trust falls. Didn’t work. Now they must get to Heaven bc how could that be!? Like girl…

Everyone needs their own episodes! Lucifer and Alastor and Mimzy stuffed together. Vaggie and Angel Dust again and the entirety of heaven all together in a 20 minute episode—

I really wanted to love this show because I’m invested in the characters due to waiting 4 years, but it’s just… it’s so badly written. The actual plot is likeable, but the pacing and the amount of off-screen stuff is just too much. (From episode 1 to 6, 5 months have passed, but it feels more like a couple of weeks at best.)

(I still love the show tho. For the songs and the characters.)

#hazbin hotel #alastor #charlie morningstar #angel dust #my first time ever critizing something on social media #hazbin hotel… I love your concept and characters but… what #the unnecessary beef between Al and Lucifer is so funny tho XD #also Alastor had zero chill I love him #it feels like we have the key moments but are missing the actual show #a deeply flawed show but I still love it :)

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yuurei20 · 5 months

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Hi hi! I have a weird question/thought after seeing the talk about Idia's use of language. There are a lot of things that are just unable to translate from Japanese to English, and some things that get changed as short hand. The whole nerdy implications of Idia using "-Shi" are basically absent from EN, instead he seems to use "Mr." (If I recall correctly) which really doesn't give the same impression? In your personal opinion - is there anyway you'd personally localize it? Stick with the same? Remove it completely? Use "M'lady/M'lord" instead? (haha)

Hello hello!! I love your "M'lady/M'lord" solution more than I can say ♡ It is associated with the past while still being used by some people in present-day just for fun, which is just like how Idia speaks! That would have been so great for the English-language adaptation!

As you say, Idia's honorific for others has (kind of) been translated as "Mr." on EN, but only in a select few places.

For the most part it has just been removed, but the curious continuity makes it seem like he thinks that only Malleus, Azul, Grim and Riddle are (sometimes) worthy of "Mr." (the Riddle screenshots below are even both from the same vignette).

And then there is the Harveston sub-plot between Sebek and Marja, where Sebek refuses to refer to Marja with an honorific until she proves herself worthy of respect (by fixing his plushie).

At that point he awards her with an extremely respectful honorific (equivalent to "-sama," and the same word Silver uses with Lilia).

Marja, however, immediately gives him permission to refer to her in the same way he has been throughout the entire trip.

Idia is a psuedo-narrator for this sub-plot, commenting on Sebek's disrespectful way of speaking in both languages.

But on EN he then proceeds to refer to Marja in the same way as Sebek (and everyone else) does.

This has the unfortunate result of making Idia look odd for mentioning it in the first place, when the odd person is actually Sebek, as everyone else is using a respectful honorific with Marja.

Idia using "M'lady" and everyone else (except Sebek) using "Ms." probably would have been a lot more successful in getting the situation across to people who may not be familiar with such Japanese-language nuances!

As for what I personally would go with...this conundrum reminded me of this amazing joke by @anottercoffee on Twitter:

And I would be very tempted to go for the "fansubber" solution of translating everything literally, but just having the words doesn't mean that the players are going to understand the nuances, and might cause even more confusion.

If "-san" and "-senpai" are just mouth-sounds to someone, they're not going to understand the significance behind Riddle and Azul dropping it from Leona and Riddle's names in important moments, for example.

But maybe that's okay! Because at the moment, the alternative that we have is everything getting removed from everywhere, and no one has the chance to understand anything at all.

The best comparison I have come across is Lord of the Rings and Star Trek, where authors incorporated languages that are completely invented, giving no one any chance of understanding them.

Japanese is a language that already exists, so it seems like it would actually be less of a challenge to introduce world-specific terms like "-sama" and "-chan" for people to either glaze over as a world-building aspect that doesn't interest them, or to gradually adapt to through sheer repetition, so by the end of Book 6 they might have a greater-than-zero understanding of the nuances of a foreign language (much like another magic-school series did with Latin).

The manga is actually approaching the honorifics in a different way than the game and giving “Mr.” to everybody, so Azul’s “Riddle-san," Crowley’s “Trappola-kun” and Deuce’s “Diamond-senpai” are all now Mr. Rosehearts, Mr. Trappola and Mr. Diamond (more here).

So it seems that VIZ Media did not agree with Aniplex USA's localization?

What is going to be the most interesting is the novel! Slated for an August, 2024 official English-language release, the novel is also being overseen by VIZ Media.

This means that we might see "Mr." being used everywhere (to uphold continuity with the manga), but the novel goes much deeper into character relationships than the game, and relationships are what honorifics are all about.

Cater, for example, uses them with everyone:

“Usually, Cater does not ever yobisute anyone. When he calls to Trey, he always adds ‘kun’ to his name...When Cater uses Trey’s name like this, it is only when he is really serious. Only when it is important.” -Twisted Wonderland the first novel

Is Cater going to be calling Trey "Mr. Clover"? And how are they even going to localize these sections describing a feature of a language that is not being spoken? It gives us a lot to look forward to!

In the end, writing out Japanese-specific honorifics into English might actually cause more confusion than it's worth, which is why Twst (and so many other foreign-language-adapting-to-an-English-speaking-audience properties) has gone in the direction that it has.

I like to give them the benefit of the doubt and assume that they know more than we do about what is going on, and that there are important reasons behind the choices they have made.

But I also think that the sheer popularity of the "fansubber" approach to this situation is a good sign that maybe people are sometimes okay with not understanding things, as properties like Lord of the Rings and Star Trek have shown us!

While too late for Twst, it will be interesting to see how this situation continues to evolve in the years to come. Maybe, one day, we will even get an official localization that introduces honorifics directly!

If such an experiment fails it will be most expensive for the localizer, and money is likely a large factor behind why companies might be reluctant to take such a gamble and would rather play it safe and just have everyone say "Mr."

#twstask

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marunalu · 23 days

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The leaks are real but something just feels off about the chapter itself. While we’ve seen in a previous flashback(forgot which one), that Overhaul was very likely to be one of the orphan children prior to joining the Yakuza, it’s just the overall flow of the chapter just makes it seem unsatisfying and resulting in plot holes. Like AFO considered training teenagers to be his double but it seems rather forced to ask Kotaro to have another child and Hana doesn’t seem to reached double digits. Or copying the Overhaul Quirk and making decay out of it would mean that Afo and Garaki could’ve fixed the former’s issues unless Touya destroyed it by accident. And then there’s the situation where technically, only Bakugo won while every other student didn’t achieve their goals(Shoto, Ochaco and Izuku) and that chapter 420 is going to match a certain someone’s birthday.

It actually would make sense though to have the side characters beat AFO but having the other fights not mentioned yet be done off screen is still unsatisfying.

We know that in real life, Hori has health issues due to working with Shonen Jump and having the Dragon Ball creator die last month is very likely to make things more somber. I’m not going to be surprised if he had someone else draw some pages(unless the change in artstyle somehow is a plot point).

Isn’t MHA Izuku’s retelling of the events to someone? Overhaul or Eri are likely to be the Macguffins to give Izuku his arms back given what we’ve seen with Eri earlier so we’re going to have some chapters of celebration of the “win” and a small epilogue.

At least we have fan fiction since it’s very likely that people will ignore the ending.

Yeah this chapter feels soooo off! And dont let me start talking about all the plot holes and how a single chapter managed to destroy over the years built up plotpoints. Like you said WHY would afo and garaki not use the overhaul copy on afo to heal him ESPICIALLY because afo told garaki once "then hurry up and fix me doctor" after garaki mentioned that they havent found a fitting regeneration quirk yet and you are telling me THEY WOULDNT USE THE OVERHAUL COPY TO ARCHIVE THAT??? It was made clear afo wanted to get back to full health but he doesnt use the quirk that could fix him in ONE MINUTE??? Or an other plot hole: afo somehow (dont show just tell) managed to convince the shimuras to have an other child because he considered hana to old to get manipulated DESPITE that he owns orphanages full of children older then or around hanas age even TEENAGE touya and chisaki he considered as fitting vessels if tomura shouldnt work out but HANA was to old??? This is literally retconning what was already confirmed as facts!

And about bakugou: well he is horis golden child so OF COURSE only he is allowed to win since his character is all about winning. And unlike izuku, ochako and shoto he had ZERO emotional connection to afo. No deep. No feelings. Just to give bakugoubitch a win by giving the bad guy the final killing blow, immediately praised for doing so as if afo wasnt already half dead and severly weakend by dotzens of other heroes before who did so much more but BAKUGOU gets the praise (to be fair he did say it was a group effort but he still was the one who was praised first as if he did it all alone)! The ironic thing is bakugou did exactly what he always does: winning by killing. How ironic. Just a few chapters before we got afos backstory which revealed he was a victim of society too but I guess simply killing these kind of people changes everything to the better. Their society will not change. There will just show up an other afo or tomura at one point. Bakugou was allowed to beat and kill the main villain he had no relationship with but izuku, ochako and shoto are not allowed to safe their villain counterparts they actually have a relationship with. I mean its very possible that toga is alive because she is nowhere to be found, but touya even if he survives made clear he will never forgive his family and most likely ending terrible disabled (except if deux ex machine eri will be used here as well) and izuku who FINALLY was able to reach tomura has to watch how he gets destroyed by afo. The leaks say afo completly destroyed tomuras mind so that means he is pretty much dead and only his body remains which is now in afos full control. No final confrontation between afo and yoichi. Nope yoichi is just gone and afo doesnt even look that pissed off about it.

There are fights completly left out. We dont really see any of the other students fight, we just get told they won. We dont see the confrontation between aizawa, mic and kurogiri and just need to accept they eventually reached him and if anything we will only get a small flashback of the events. Its so disappointing and lame. It feels like as if hori just wants to end the manga as fast as possible so he uses his beloved "tell dont show" way of writing.

About horis health issues. I get that. As a huge bleach fan I was so dissapointed how rushed the last arc of bleach was but I was able to understand why. Kubo had health issues too and was forced by shonen jump to end the manga in 10 chapters. No one was more pissed off about that but kubo and if he had been healthy bleach would have lasted at least for an other year. But with hori it feels different. It feels like as if he really just wants to end the whole thing because he lost his interest. The last few arcs have been not really well written. I dont know if akira toriyamas sudden death plays a role in this disaster of a chapter. I get that it was a shock for the manga world. I get that mangakas loved the guy. But maybe instead of rushing the plot and retconning already built plot points hori should just have taken a long break to get himself together if it really affected him that much AND to get rest. Toriyama still lives through his work and will inspire many new mangakas for the comming 50 years or more.

By the way Im not worried about izukus arms at all. Its obvious eri will get used as the deux ex machine to restore them. If its not her then overhaul but Im pretty positiv she will heal izuku. The thing is even if izuku gets finally his confrontation with afo its clear he will win and afo will die.... again. Wow, how creativ. The only thing I hope is that if dfo is canon then izuku will somehow reach afo to get at least a little bit of emotion in that fight and will convince him to let tomura go if there is still a chance to safe him. Im still to 100% sure dfo is canon by the way but I dont think it will have an statisfying outcome and will be rushed as hell.

All in all this was a very dissapointing outcome. I know the manga is not over yet so hori could still surprise us, but I dont have much hope left for a good and well written ending of the story. I really need to stop praising hori when he writes a REALLY good chapter like the one before, because everytime I do that the very next chapter is a pile of shit!

Sorry, if I sound so aggressive and harsh by the way, but this chapter really pissed me off. The ONLY thing I liked about it is the fact that its to 100% confirmed that afo can change his appearance which is a huge win for dfo. Also sorry for the rant and for possible gramatic errors but I wrote this whole thing in a hurry and most likely left a few dotzen things out that pissed me off. 😅

#bnha #bnha spoiler #bnha all for one #bnha dad for one #izuku midoriya #anti bakugou

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riddlerosehearts · 9 months

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idia/vil is such a sweet and interesting ship to me and does not deserve to be a rarepair i'm serious. this might end up a bit incoherent and disorganized because i'm not great with words, but listen. the thing is that while on a surface level idia shroud and vil schoenheit--a nerdy shut-in with anxiety who likes to game all day and a mega famous celebrity who's strict about self-improvement--might seem completely incompatible, their actual interactions show us that that just isn't true!!

like, for example idia's starsending robes vignette is a big one!! the way that vil sees idia trying to hide when he's supposed to be at the ceremony, and idia says he's terrified that people will make fun of him, that he's not like vil and can't just go out and not care what anyone think the way he does. and then vil... tells him he's wrong, that it's the opposite, that he cares so much what other people think but has enough of a grip on himself that he can ignore it and appear confidently in public. the way vil admits to idia that they are so much more alike that he thinks.

also, the way that (in this fan translation at least, as well as in other TLs i've seen--the localization translates it to have the complete opposite meaning, for whatever reason) idia then says "so in other words, you've got to level up your ignore skill", and instead of getting annoyed at him for translating his advice into video game terms vil just says "isn't that obvious?". he's going out of his way to try and give idia genuine advice and is willing to speak his language to get him to understand it. he even does a similar thing later on in book 6, when he tells idia that it's worth taking chances because after all, the star rogue protagonist took his chances and went from zero to a hero.

and on that note, book 6 is so good for them. book 6 has idia get all excited and carried away while infodumping about star rogue, only to abruptly lose his enthusiasm and start talking quietly and stuttering. and who is it that tells him he shouldn't act so embarrassed and that they weren't judging him? it's none other than vil. vil who also shows an interest in gaming, much to the surprise of idia who believed, in his own words, that a "sparkly, gorgeous supermodel" like vil couldn't possibly like any of the same things as him! but no, vil wanted to try out the games they had and vil expressed a desire for idia to talk about his passions without fear of being judged. vil enjoyed playing star rogue and he was glad to discuss the movie adaptation with idia and ortho.

it's also vil who, when idia expresses his disappointment at the star rogue sequel being canceled and his wish for the original team to get back together and create a sequel that would be made with passion behind it, is the only one to genuinely understand where he's coming from (as opposed to jamil who's like "is it really that complicated?" and leona who suggests that he just throw money at the creators). vil is the one who encourages him to take a chance at doing what he can to make that wish a reality, to let the original team know that there's a passionate and loyal fanbase waiting for a sequel, and tells him that he just generally shouldn't give up on changing his future and achieving his dreams before he's even tried. of course ortho heard this advice too and took it very much the wrong way, but vil showed a surprising amount of understanding and support for idia and i feel like it was exactly the kind of thing he needed to hear.

also. remember the scene in disney's hercules where hercules temporarily gives up his godhood and his youth by diving into the underworld to save megara? because vil literally did the same thing to save idia. yeah, he may say he only did it for plot reasons, but like come on, how am i supposed to just not ship them after they parallel one of my favorite disney couples like that? vil is a world famous actor and model who was terrified of aging, and he still took such an insane risk!! i'm sure idia would have a crush on him after that.

i'm trying to wrap this up now because it's already too long but also idia has actually been said to have great fashion sense as his online persona and shown to enjoy cosplay and dressing up on occasion (for example, he went all out on his pumpkin knight costume and this hasn't made it to EN yet but he liked wearing the masquerade outfit). vil had pretty high praise for his design sense when he saw ortho's burst gear. and vil gets along incredibly well with ortho and is in the film club with him post-book 6, which is something i imagine idia would appreciate a lot. the contrast between them and the things they unexpectedly have in common are just so neat to me.

so, in conclusion,

i love them and i think they should be boyfriends

#twisted wonderland #idia shroud #vil schoenheit #vildia #idiavil #vilidia #i am once again forcing everyone to think about my favorite rarepair #okay also i didn't think this was relevant to the main post but like. consider.#height differences make everything better right??#but vildia doesn't have a height difference! they're both 183 cm!#EXCEPT. apparently vil usually appears to be taller because of his 13cm/5in heels #which means they CAN have a super cute height difference. idia can lean on vil's shoulder...#also i think it would be fun if vil finds out idia actually has a bit of interest in fashion and is like SUPER surprised by it #like the reverse of idia finding out vil is interested in gaming #and they should play animal crossing and do couples cosplay together #also i have no idea if the localization for that one vignette is more accurate than the fan TLs i've seen or not??#but the fan TL version just makes more sense to me #okay i'm done now sorry #idia x vil #vil x idia

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bokutosmochi · 1 year

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HEARD YOU GOT A FRIEND (WHAT'S HIS HEAD LIKE?) ♡ GOJO SATORU & GETO SUGURU

gojo satoru and geto suguru x fem!reader

ingredients? after a fight with gojo, you decide to mingle with his best friend at ieiri shoko's annual halloween party.

what's it? smut

allergen warning/s? teasing!reader, brat!reader, sub!reader, mean!satosugu, pussydrunk!geto, slight possessive!gojo, double penetration [vaginal + oral], name calling [slut, whore], hair pulling, gojo calls himself daddy because of course he fucking does, implied dumbification, slight manhandling, masturbation [fem and masc], implied dacryphilia, oral [fem and masc!receiving], deep throating, impact play [clit spanking, spanking], multiple orgasms, overstimulation, voyeurism [gojo watches you and geto], some spitting [like one time], fingering, throat bulging, photo taking

sugar level? 4.8k

regulars? @cosmosnetwork @tokyometronetwork @takipnet

parlor's note? this is literally porn without plot, i am so sorry. enjoy you ho3s <3 happy halloween!!

bon appetit!

watching you talk to his best friend from afar, gojo gritted his teeth.

nevermind how the room was dark and all he could make off of the people were the contours of their features - luckily for you and geto, gojo already had yours ingrained into the back of his brain -, nevermind that the only source of light were flashing colored lights, the lit jack o lanterns, and the moonlight beaming from the windows covered in mesh black fabric and fake spiderwebs. the way people were crowding him didn't matter; his eyes still managed to be zeroed in on you, with the help of the six eyes.

you were doing this on purpose, he was sure of it.

all it took was one big fight about him not being able to take the things you said seriously for your demeanor around geto to change. all of a sudden you're pressing your breasts on the black haired man's chest when someone bumped into you, uttering sorry excuses for an apology, you were twirling a strand of hair on your index finger, and batting your eyelashes in such a manner that would make any sane man drop down on his knees. but the part that really got under gojo's skin? the way you wore the sexy, lacy, black one piece lingerie he bought for you on your birthday with a white collar, sleeve cuffs, leather black thigh high heels, fishnet tights, and a black bunny ears headband and called it a costume.

never did you wear something so risque in public. at ieiri's halloween party, no less.

you took a quick peek at gojo who is seething before turning back to the man in front of you, gifting him with all of your attention as you grabbed his thick bicep and giggled at the story he told you.

geto has had sneaking suspicions from the moment you walked up to him. he knew you and gojo were fighting and currently giving each other the silent treatment; the white haired sorcerer has been complaining about it nonstop. but still, he needed to confirm something. so he leans down to your ear and whispers "you trying to make poor satoru jealous, you little minx?"

your eyes widened, yet you were quick to regain your composure. you smiled up at him and licked your glossy bottom lip. "maybe i am. you gonna help me?"

he chuckled in response, taking your hand in his and twirling you around. "you're nothing but trouble-"

"-goddamn right."

geto was interrupted by a voice that you would recognize anywhere. there was an arm wrapped around your waist, pulling you away from the man dressed as ghostface; only suguru has taken off the mask because it was way too hot in the house.

"'y really gonna resort to tryna fuck my best friend, you little slut?" one of his hands were squishing your cheeks together, making your lips pout, while the other slithered up to your locks, grabbing a handful and pulling on it roughly, shamelessly because two can play it that game.

"was just trying to make friends, 'toru." you batted your eyelashes at him, your voice sickly sweet. "you understand that, don't you?"

from behind you, you could hear the man snicker at your seduction-laced apologies. "besides, don't you want sugu and me to be friends? after all, we are the two closest people you have." you ran your hands all over his white-button down covered chest -- if someone were to ask him who he was dressed as, he would answer with me of course! because he is the gojo satoru, the self-proclaimed honored one, the former jujutsu tech student who put the sorcerer killer to rest permanently, and the absolute strongest sorcerer. yet with your simple ministrations, his resolve and self-control was quick to crumble.

he roughly grabbed your wrist and dragged you upstairs, but not before looking back at geto who wore a devilish smirk on his lips, clearly proud of what he's done. "oh, and don't think you're not coming with us, suguru."

it was a weird sight, people stumbling and losing their footing after bumping into the nothingness that satoru's infinity provided you, yet you didn't have it in you to complain, because in no time, satoru has pushed a random door open - one of ieiri's guest bedrooms - and damn near throws you inside. him and geto were quick to follow.

the door clicks shut when satoru locks it, and when the sound of the party going on outside is muffled by the four walls that surround you, you feel a whole lot more vulnerable, and a whole lot less invincible.

especially when your usually laid back boyfriend is standing straight with perfect posture, big arms crossed over his chest, and jaws as tightly clenched as his fists. geto is right beside him, staring at the man he called his best friend. his eyebrows are raised slightly, waiting patiently for his next step.

wetness pooled on the crotch of your lingerie and you fought the urge to rub your thighs together right then and there while in front of them. instead, you headed over to the bed, making a show out of it while you're at it. you swayed your hips more, making you look more enticing than you already did - and based off of the way both men's slacks were tight before you did this, you already looked pretty damn enticing to them -, you climbed into the bed, one knee after the other, taking your time and bending over the bed longer than you needed to, then you proceeded to sit down on your ankles and throw a look at the men still by the door, before getting on your hands and knees and finally placing yourself by the head of the bed.

you made yourself plenty comfortable, even taking it a step further and spreading your legs wide with your feet firmly on the mattress. you planted your hands behind you and arched your back, in a faux yawn. "sugu, i don't think 'toru has any plans outside of standing there like an idiot. do you wanna come here and keep me company?" your hands wandered and touched all over your thighs until finally coming to rest on your lingerie-clad crotch.

you shivered when you felt your fingers flutter over your clit, and began to rub over it. even you couldn't help but moan at how wet you already were even when you know how aroused you were by the situation that has barely even started.

you felt your hands get pulled away by larger ones -- suguru's. "lemme help you doll, you just sit back and relax there, alright pretty?" he murmured, unfazed by the fact that your boyfriend were mere feet behind the two of you and watching intently. reminiscent of your position just a few minutes ago, you smiled. satoru was cupping his cock over his pants, giving it a squeeze when you threw him a wink before you throw your head back with a pornographic moan when geto licks over your clit with a firm stroke of his tongue. "fuck," he swears breathlessly. "you taste amazing, no wonder satoru talks about your pussy all the time."

surprised, you couldn't help the way your head snaps to your boyfriend who just grins your way, clearly not the least bit phased about being caught. after all, like he always says 't's my fuckin' pussy isn't it, sweetheart? he would often grin at you from his position between your legs, the expression on his face is mockingly sweet, as if he didn't just spank your clit several times for wearing his favorite mini skirt when you dropped his lunch off by the school. and i get to decide what to do with it.

"wouldn't be able to get enough of you either." is the last thing you hear when all of a sudden, the crotch of your lingerie is pulled to the side and geto's lips were on your cunt.

you damn near scream when he loudly slurps at all the juices you gift him, and when he's done with that, he shoves his tongue inside you making the lewdest noises as he tries his best to reach further, deeper, get more of your addicting taste on his tongue because he finds himself absolutely obsessed. he keeps on thrusting the wet muscle in and out of your hole as his fingers find your clit and rub quick, messy circles on the bundle of nerves.

one of your hands take hold of the first thing it reaches beside you - a pillow - while the other grabs a handful of geto's black ink hair making the man in question moan right into your most sensitive parts. the vibrations along with his digits drumming on your clitoris is enough to send you whirling into your first orgasm of the night.

he lets you ride out your high, only even when you're done, he didn't stop. in fact, his pace increases. he takes a hold of your hips in his large hands and presses you down on the bed as he continues to lap at your cum like a cat starved off of milk, and suck at your clit and pussy lips, desperate to taste you.

your hips buck up into his mouth instinctively even though overstimulation is hitting you like a brick and you're pulling him away from you sobbing, "sugu, sugu, too much. wait a sec, please." there are tears in your eyes, but your pleas fall on deaf ears.

what greets you when you open your eyes are satoru's breathtaking cerulean orbs staring down at you with a pleased smirk on his lips. he brushes damp strands of hair your off of your visage and presses a kiss that could be considered tender if the context was different on your forehead. below you, geto has granted you some reprieve, wiping his mouth on the long sleeve of his costume.

gojo leans down so his mouth would be right beside your ear, and his warm breath would tickle you, "this wasn't what you expected, wasn't it, sweetcheeks?" he grins at you mockingly. "you thought you'd be getting the last laugh, yeah?" he trailed the tip of his nose over the edge of your ear, tracing it. "you definitely didn't expect me and suguru cornering you like this, but ya gotta stop underestimating me like that." he shook his head with a pout. "'ve known suguru for such a long time, d'ya really think he'd pick some pussy over me?"

you feel geto's fingers on you again. "your girlfriend does have a priceless pussy though. if she catches me on a bad day, it's hoes before bros." he gives him an apologetic look.

"shut up suguru."

he pretends his best friend didn't say what he did after that, opting to face you again with an oh-so familiar smirk on his lips. it's the one that he graces everyone with, allies he annoys and enemies he pisses off before he executes them alike, yet whenever he flashes you the expression, there's always either an underlying softness to it, or an underlying look of lust to it, and right now, you can definitely say it's the latter.

he rolls his sleeve up and places his glasses on the bedside table. then, he leans over you, both of his hands formed into fists on resting on the bed on either side of your head. truly, it is an intoxicating experience. your head is spinning because suguru's still eating your pussy out and he's such a loud pussy eater. you can hear each squelch whenever he squeezes your lips together for make your arousal leak out, and you can hear the sound of each spit that spills from his lips to your clitoris.

the room - that isn't even yours - smells like sex, though you realize that your boyfriend and his best friend are both still fully clothed, except for geto's ghostface mask he left downstairs. and from above you, gojo's towering over you with the cockiest look that could make you rub your thighs together if geto wasn't there to pry them apart. you can feel his breath on your face and neck, you can smell his expensive perfume, notes of black currant and peppermint around you. it assaults your senses, and if that isn't enough, his eyes on you is unceasing in tenacity. he stares like you're the best thing he's ever seen, like he wants to memorize every feature on your face, every acne scar and mole, and wants to ingrain the way your features contorts when lost in the feeling of pleasure.

"my little bunny," he murmurs, tracing the side of your face before his hands go on to rest on the buckle of his belt, aiming to take it off. yearning for his cock, you try to sit up to help him with stripping himself of the garment, only to be stopped when geto locks his mouth onto you and sucks, coaxing more of your cream into his mouth. truly, he can't get enough. he hopes this won't be the last time gojo shares you with him like this, but if it is, he decides that he'll figure out a way for this to happen again.

as a result of geto's assault on your pussy, you found yourself laying back down again, moaning and gasping breathlessly. the intense feeling had you closing your eyes in pleasure, lost in the sensation of two of his calloused fingers prodding at your tight hole, and effortlessly sliding them in because of your slick. he pumped his digits in and out of you, pulling his mouth from your clit to observe the way you reacted to each and every push and pull of his fingers, desperate to find your g spot; that part inside your cunt that when stimulated, makes you a whining, brainless mess. it takes him little to no effort -- if you were fully conscious, you would be wondering if gojo's blabbermouth has anything to do with it. the moment his fingers graze it, your arching your back and moaning wantonly, as if there weren't god knows how many people still partying the night away just outside the door. it wasn't as if you no longer cared about it, it was just you completely forgot about it. your focus was no longer on real life and their real life consequences, the only thing your endorphin-riddled brain could process was the way you were currently feeling, the stimulations your body was subject to via the two men surrounding you.

what pulls you back into reality was the feeling of smooth skin on your lips. it triggered your eyes to open, and what you saw was gojo's cock right in front of you. the tip was red and flushed, leaking pearlescent dots of pre cum onto the already slick shaft -- whether it was wet from him spitting on his hand and jerking himself off or from his pre cum alone, you did not know.

he was already rid of all his clothing, the only thing covering his lean body was a sheen layer of sweat.

the smirk on his lips is expectant, and he immediately lets you know of the fact; his knees on either side of your head shuffles forward as he brings his dick to your lips. "you didn't think i'd only let you and sugu have all the fun, didn't you?"

accommodating the length and girth of him was harder. he had no intentions of letting you control the pace. instead, with an assisting grip on the headboard, he pushes his hips forward to pry your mouth open, loosen it up so you will be able to take all of him like the good girl he's always trained you to be.

but he didn't give you enough time; the only prep you get from him - if you can call it prep - is the way he stops when his heavy balls are touching your chin and he's buried to the hilt. there's a bulge in your throat from how hard his cock is and gojo's quick to snap a photo of it; another thing that boosts his already well-inflated ego.

the way he coos at you is so pretty though. he tenderly wipes at the tears welling up at the corner of your eyes and along your lash line. "'s okay baby, you're being such a good girl, 'kay? taking my cock so well."

he starts off slow. you feel every ridge and vein that decorates his dick as it slips in and out of your mouth, getting to savor the slightly salty and tangy flavor of his pre cum as the head brushes over your tongue.

you close your eyes in pleasure; you've always loved giving gojo head. he made it so enjoyable, from the way he tasted, to the mere feel of his cock in your mouth, to the way he reacted and the sounds he made. it never failed to make your panties wet and make you ache to put your fingers by the apex between your thighs; luckily for you, today, there's someone to do it for you.

you wonder about geto's stamina, if he is not intimidated by the probably-present-by-tomorrow ache in his jaw because he has not stopped giving your pussy attention. or maybe it was just that he didn't care; the only thing that matters to him is the now.

upon setting his eyes on your blissed out expression, gojo picked up the pace. he started to thrust harder, so hard that he bed repeatedly hits the wall with dull thuds. he runs a hand through his damp hair, trying his best to take it easy on you, but you're not helping. how could he possibly resist fucking his cock into your throat the way he wants to when you look so good with it in your mouth, so pretty and content. he almost starts doing it until you hollow your cheeks around him and suck. because earlier, you did nothing but simply loosen your jaw and let him have his way with you, now there's more sensations other than your warm mouth and tight throat around him, there's also the fact that your warmth was really wrapped around him, and there's the friction as you suck hard.

he has a white-knuckled grip on the head of the bed when his knees buckle and he accidentally shoves more of his length into your mouth. you were so used to it though at this point so you had no problem taking it anymore.

you leaned forward to snuggle your face even closer to him, so much so that you could feel his neat snowy pubes tickling your chin.

without warning, while gojo was still recovering, you swallowed around him, constricting your throat around the sensitive muscle, and he was quick to come with a strangled moan of your name. "b-babe, shit." he heaves.

you were about to flash a shit-eating - as best as you can with inches upon inches of cock in your mouth anyway - when geto captures your clit in mouth and continuously flicks it with his tongue while he shoves his fingers into your drooling hole and curls them just right, hitting the spot that makes your toes curls and immediately lose control

you've been so focused on gojo and his pleasure that you didn't notice the coil in your abdomen that has been tightening and tightening until you came into geto's waiting mouth for the second time that night.

gojo took that time to compose himself and get off of you the moment his legs were no longer shaky, moving towards the center of the bed to strip you off your minimal clothing, only to be stopped by geto with a hand on the shoulder. "just push the crotch to the side, man. kinda wanna fuck her in her lingerie."

gojo was still thinking about it though, not fully sold on the idea. thankfully for geto, he knew his best friend well. "if we fuck her in this, everyone'll smell you on her and know she's yours." he really would have preferred to say ours rather than yours, but he needed to persuade gojo, and this is the best way he could do so, he thinks.

gojo was going to hum out a statement of agreement, only to jump away from the dark-haired man when he turns his head. "is that your cum on your hands, man?"

geto could not help but shrug. "your chick's hot, man. couldn't help it. tastes so fucking sweet." he feeds into gojo's ego more.

your girl's the reason why i jerked off. and while that's true to a fault, totally not because it'd be unfair if i was the only one who didn't get to cum.

so when geto puts it that way, gojo can't help the burn of pride that spreads throughout his chest. "nah, totally get it. i fuck my fist to her all the time too." then his voice lowers to be a timbre that sends shivers up and down your thighs, "bet she buries her fingers into her sweet little cunny to me all the time too." he doesn't break eye contact as he unbuttons his shirt with one hand. "after all, she is a dirty little slut."

geto lets out a low hum from beside your boyfriend as he takes off the fabric draped over him, and along with that, the tight black t-shirt and skinny jeans he was wearing under it. "i bet. looks so desperate to get fucked by her boyfriend and his best friend."

gojo cackles. "she did try to get in your pants earlier, didn't she?" he rolls you on your stomach and wraps an arm around your abdomen to pull you up so you'd be on your hands and knees.

"you're correct, satoru. that she did."

they took their positions, your boyfriend behind you, ready to fuck your pussy, and his best friend in front of you, ready to fuck your mouth.

your mind was still hazy. unable to process the information being tossed in your direction. however, your eyes still widened when face to face with geto's cock. he was hard, it seemed like all the blood in his body rushed to his groin that slightly dipped with the heavy weight. he was a few shades darker than satoru, a few more veins, a little less pretty and more rugged -- still plenty appetizing though. and along with that, noticeably thicker, though unnoticeably shorter.

this might be one of the reasons why satoru has such a big ego, geto thought. your cute fucking reactions.

he gripped the base with his hand, dragging the leaking head of his cock onto your lips and smearing the pre cum - and the leftover semen from when he apparently jacked off to you earlier - all over your mouth. "c'mon, princess. it ain't gonna bite." he teases. "not unless you want it to anyway."

his grin widens when you open up your mouth slowly, finally taking him in until you gag and instinctively pull away. every part of you is going to be absolutely sore tomorrow, you already knew it.

your attempt to take geto in your mouth was put to a stop when you feel the press of gojo's cock into your vagina. you whimper and arch your back the way gojo always tells you to whenever you guys fuck, but now with the addition of geto to the mix, none of the men were having it.

"ah, ah, ah, sweetheart." your boyfriend tuts at you, now keeping himself still halfway inside you. "you gotta be a good girl and take all of geto in your mouth if you want daddy's cock in your greedy little cunny."

your lips pout a little at that, but you do love a challenge. and more than that, you loved making gojo proud of you.

"so obedient." geto lowly murmurs, patting the top of your head as you try again, taking your time. from behind you, you could hear gojo's reply. "'f course she is. she's my girl, after all." you stop when you're about to gag, and resume from where you left off when you regained your composure. soon enough, you had geto's cock all the way down your throat, the way your boyfriend asked you too, and as a treat, gojo massages a handful of your ass and praises you. "always such a good girl for daddy, huh? daddy'll fuck you nice now, baby. dontcha worry." and geto's hand travels down to push the straps of your lingerie down, exposing your breasts and letting them spill out. geto is quick to grab one and toy with the nipple, rolling it between his talented fingers.

gojo may not be known as a man that keeps his promises to some, yet this does not apply to you. as promised, he slowly starts inching in inside you, bullying his cock into your gummy walls with a moan that you share.

it makes geto moan, both the sound, the way it felt on his cock, and the way you and gojo looked. intertwining his fingers into your hair, he begins to fuck himself into your mouth.

the rhythm was perfect. there was not a single moment where you felt empty and not stuffed with cock. whenever gojo would thrust in, geto would thrust out, and whenever geto would thrust in, gojo would thrust out.

"shit, satoru, her mouth feels so nice. would ya mind if i borrow her from time to time?" geto hissed out between a tightened tightened jaw. if you kept this up, he knew he wouldn't last long.

gojo did not hesitate when replying. "abso-fucking-lutely not." he spits out. "if she agrees, this will happen again, but you ain't getting her one on one." he glares.

you can feel the feather-like flutter of his hand on your stomach, to your thighs, then to your clit that he was quick to pinch.

the feeling made you tighten around both men with a yelp, and both men almost came inside you right then and there.

after a couple of seconds, they laughed and got right back into their rhythm, but not before sharing a high five over you.

"can't just do that to a man, sweetheart." geto lightly scolds you. "doesn't your boyfriend teach you any manners?" he shoots gojo a dirty look, one that he white-haired sorcerer shakes his head at. "if she had manners, d'ya think she'd enjoy getting laid by two men at the same time?"

"again, you're right, satoru."

he gathered all your hair up in a makeshift ponytail, now getting to enjoy your face in all its glory. your eyeliner and mascara were running down your cheeks, your eyeshadow and lipstick were smudged, there was a glossiness to your eyes, and a sheen all over your face; a mixture of sweat and tears.

geto reached over to the floor as best as he can without popping out of your mouth to grab his phone. he adjusted the bunny ears on the top of your head slightly, and pointed the camera right at your face, snapping a photo. he snapped another photo, one that's not directly focused on you, but rather the whole situation. this one included a smirking gojo, the both of them fist bumping over you.

"fuck." gojo breathed out as you hear the click! of the camera. "she just tightened around me. my dirty whore's enjoying this and is about to cum. isn't that right, baby?" he spanked your ass, groaning when the fat ripples.

"don't you worry, pretty girl. i'm right there with you." he takes a deep breath. "you with us, suguru?" but the man could no longer speak. instead, he replies with a nod and a groan.

you reach your high when gojo circles your clit with a long index finger, resulting in you squeezing the two men and making them spill their seed deep inside you.

"yeah," you panted, face buried into the pillows once geto was done cumming. "this is definitely happening again."

you lightly jumped when angry thumps resounded from the door making you gulp. "only next time, maybe not at shoko's place, and not during a party."

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