Gretlahk, the Kingdom of Water
The northernmost kingdom in the Goldragon Empire. So-called for its myriad lakes and rivers, humid and rainy climate, and underground springs, it has encouraged and fostered a lifestyle connected in every way to water. Its rivers are its highways, flooded with ships bearing men and cargo. Its great cities have managed to harness this power of water in their technology, often powering great machines and clockwork engines with the flow of rapid rivers and waterfalls. It is not all peaceful, however--pirates make the waters their home as well, wreaking havoc as they scourge the countryside.
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Writing Weapons (1): Swords
The Thrusting Sword
Type of fight scene: entertaining, duels, non-lethal fights, non-gory deaths, swashbuckling adventure
Mostly used in: Europe, including Renaissance and Regency periods
Typical User: silm, male or female, good aerobic fitness
Main action: thrust, pierce, stab
Main motion: horizontal with the tip forward
Shape: straight, often thin, may be lightweight
Typical Injury: seeping blood, blood stains spreading
Strategy: target gaps in the armous, pierce a vital organ
Disadvantage: cannot slice through bone or armour
Examples: foil, epee, rapier, gladius
The Cleaving Sword
Type of fight scene: gritty, brutal, battles, cutting through armour
Typical user: tall brawny male with broad shulders and bulging biceps
Mostly used in: Medieval Europe
Main action: cleave, hack, chop, cut, split
Main motion: downwards
Shape: broad, straight, heavy, solid, sometime huge, sometimes need to be held in both hands, both sides sharpened
Typical Injury: severed large limbs
Strategy: hack off a leg, them decapitate; or split the skull
Disadvantage: too big to carry concealed, too heavy to carry in daily lifem too slow to draw for spontaneous action
Examples: Medieval greatsword, Scottish claymore, machete, falchion
The Slashing Sword
Type of fight scene: gritty or entertaining, executions, cavalry charge, on board a ship
Mostly used in: Asia, Middle East
Typical user: male (female is plausible), any body shape, Arab, Asian, mounted warrior, cavalryman, sailor, pirate
Main action: slash, cut, slice
Main motion: fluid, continuous, curving, eg.figure-eight
Shape: curved, often slender, extremely sharp on the outer edge
Typical Injury: severed limbs, lots of spurting blood
Strategy: first disable opponent's sword hand (cut it off or slice into tendons inside the elbow)
Disadvantage: unable to cut thorugh hard objects (e.g. metal armor)
Examples: scimitar, sabre, saif, shamshir, cutlass, katana
Blunders to Avoid:
Weapons performing what they shouldn't be able to do (e.g. a foil slashing metal armour)
Protagonists fighting with weapons for which they don't have the strength or build to handle
The hero carrying a huge sword all the time as if it's a wallet
Drawing a big sword form a sheath on the back (a physical impossiblity, unless your hero is a giant...)
Generic sword which can slash, stab, cleave, slash, block, pierce, thrust, whirl through the air, cut a few limbs, etc...as if that's plausible
adapted from <Writer's Craft> by Rayne Hall
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Xia Profile: Koh Xinyi
Age: 22
Sex: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 185 lbs
Ethnicity: Trueborn Imperial
Country: Magne-La
Sect: Leng's School/Icebreaker Sect
Style: Art of the Avalanche
Weapon: none
Bio: A friendly, personable xia who holds a grudge against a certain organization. Though he's very competative, at the end of the day he's a rather stand-up lad who takes his losses (and victories) in stride. He fights very aggressively, creating armor out of ice for both defense and offense. Equally likely to pelt you with razor-sharp icicles or to drop kick you in the face. May not look like it, but a surprisingly tactical fighter.
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