i don't care that i didn't make 50k, but i did writing every. single. day. for 30 days!!!!!!!!
thank you @paraparadigm @vodkafolie @corsairoriginal @gaeadene for being my motivation as i bang away at my own fic
para, i know we don't really talk, but damn your work hits me like lightning every time
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Honestly Ben 10 is probably one of the most based science fiction series out there by sheer virtue of it having the balls to showcase any alien concept it wanted to no matter how ridiculous, and whenever someone is like “there’s no way in Hell that could ever be scientifically feasible”, it dared to look them in the eyes and go “Yeah, well, this is a world where magic and superpowered mutants also exist. What are you gonna do? Cry about it? You grown ass adult who’s expecting scientific feasibility out of a cartoon meant to sell toys to preteen boys that has lore so inconsistent it’s almost impossible to tell what’s canon and what’s non-canon? LMAO loser.”
I mean OS had it all- obviously aliens but not only that, at minimum 10 of them; mutants in daily life across at least America, no doubt in other places too; magic, albeit one without a system beyond ‘there’s a spellbook and some charms’. The shift to purely alien in AF makes the wonderful nonsense sci-fi stuff into frustrating logic trees of ‘how does xenobiology get this powerful’ which I had definitely fallen into. Ben 10 is unabashedly science fantasy, so why not go the full fantasy and bring back mutants and magic, haha!
Admittedly a good implementation of magic in a series tends to follow a magic system, which I’m not especially great at coming up with, especially in comparison to speculative biology which come with pre-established rules. But hey, I don’t exactly expect it to be fleshed out, at least not as well as the alien aspect of Ben 10; even then, there’s only so much fleshed out, it’s to tease us into making lore for it lmao-
To be fair though, Ben 10 itself had to whack itself on the cheek in order to be reminded of its magic and especially mutant parts, which unfortunately in the latter case was central to major retcons so…
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Modern Inheritance Debrief snippet #1 (no edits)
Valaria leaned forward on her podium. “I would make an inquiry.”
Islanzadí didn’t even look up from her papers. “Proceed, Lady Valaria of Kírtan.”
Arya bowed slightly to the elf woman, a dip of her head and smooth hunch of her shoulders before settling back into At Ease.
“As always, I thank you for your service, Arya.” Valaria shuffled her notes, picking one sheet out from the pile. “I do have some questions for you, regarding the vigilance of you and your companions on the night of the ambush.”
The combat liaison bit her tongue, literally this time, before she spoke. That anyone would question her, Glen and Fäolin’s attention to detail and defenses while protecting Saphira’s egg of all things, felt insulting. The ambush was orchestrated by a Shade, a that was working off intel no one but Arya and a handful of others could have known. “Vigilance, ma’am?
“Yes.” The drawl that dragged at the end of the lady’s voice made Arya’s skin crawl, static racing up the nearly exposed muscle that striped up to her shoulder. The elder looked down her nose. “There have been some rumors, you see.”
Arya’s lip twitched, barely a microsecond. “I would appreciate a direct question, ma’am.”
“Very well.” Valaria nodded to two of the lords across from her, as if asking for permission. Arya didn’t look to them. “Are, or were, you engaging in relations with either of your guards?”
A low murmur swept the room. Däthedr raised his hand, and silence fell, though the uneasy rustle of elves shifting foot to foot took another moment to abate.
Arya simply raised her chin. “Permission to speak freely?”
Däthedr regarded her for a long second, considering. “Granted.”
The young elf leveled her deadpan gaze on Valaria. She almost hoped the roiling rage in her chest was visible, if only slightly, to the woman.
“Are you calling me a whore, ma’am?”
A poorly stifled snort of laughter. Whoever it was from got a sharp glare of reprimand from Islanzadí’s second.
The corners of Valaria’s lips tilted up in dry amusement. “Polyamory does not bring shame, ambassador.”
“That is not an answer to my question, ma’am.” Arya’s eyes flashed and narrowed, only for the briefest of moments. It was time to light the fires again, remind these highborn fools who they dealt with. “And my rank is Major. I would appreciate that my accomplishments be properly acknowledged.”
The amusement vanished from Valaria’s face, cool frost replacing it in her voice. “No, Major. I do not seek to imply that you are, as you put it, a whore.”
“Then why this line of inquiry?”
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Sometimes I indulge myself by thinking about how important it is to Iverelle’s story that she finds beauty in life by herself, through connections she makes. At her lowest point, Iverelle is very much a “save yourself first” nihilist, particularly at the end of SHB—but it’s through connection with other people that drags her out of this ultimately defeatist attitude. Like even if her lore revolving her childhood is ultimately rather tame compared to how it could be, it’s still MISERABLE, and the fact that she’s able to wake up each morning and go “the sun rose again and that’s fantastic, and that’s a reason to keep fighting” gets me. There’s no divine intervention, nobody saves her from her trauma and her suffering, ultimately the reason she’s strong is because she gives herself a purpose to keep going, and that is because she sees people around her who mean so much to her and she’s like “oh. I want to live WITH you.” And that’s enough to push her through even her darkest moments. Just “I want to experience everything the world has to offer with you, and if that means I’ll fight and fight until my knuckles are raw and my arms are weak, then I’ll be happy to have done so.”
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Famous Line from Lemon Rolls #2:
"Yeah...that was my mentor, Rolar. He's looked out for me for years."
"And he's been soing a shit job of it, hasn't he!?"
"Well, he-wait, did you just curse!?"
"I haven't known you long but you don't seem the type to curse, wow."
"That's not important right now!"
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