#I have five chapters in mind

[eternally-frozen]

Private Lessons will become a series. Just unsure whether I'll post it or not.

#❄️ winter: chats #I have five chapters in mind #It gives backstory and more insight into the Dottore of this AU #I just have trouble with writing medical horror #Mainly because I stick a 40mm needle into my thigh muscle every 48 hrs to function #Been through an operation this year with a recovery period of 2 months #And currently have an iron bar screwed into my upper jaw #The horrors are no longer horrors when it's normal #But I do like the awake surgery concept #That creeps me the fuck out #Anyways #Coping with Dottore as always #And now I'll disappear for another half year #So long suckers

[frootbyethefoot]

thinking about chapter four this fine afternoon (<- never not thinking about chapter four)

#i actually really like the doodle i did with gonta and ouma #the spotlight is getting to me. i might make it a full piece #anyways thought too hard about ms iruma and it devastated me #chapter four is a tragedy on all sides #especially with chapter five in mind... #i'd give anything to see more of ouma and mius alliance pre chapter four #i have a lot of thoughts on them. frenemies that almost trusted eachother in a very Odd way #drv3 #joeys art #miu iruma #kokichi ouma #gonta gokuhara #image described

[manicpixiefelix]

me, adding weird, obsessive little smut scenes/dynamics to my fic that bump right up against being taboo, despite knowing it may make some of the readers uncomfortable, but committing to them anyways because it feels authentic to the weird, obsessive little characters/dynamics/tone I've established: It's What Emerald Fennell Would Have Wanted

#yes this is about the bathtub scene but also about a potential scene i have kicking about in my mind for about five chapters in the future #felix catton x reader x oliver quick #felix catton x reader #saltburn x reader #saltburn imagine #felix catton imagine #oliver quick x reader #oliver quick imagine #venetia catton imagine #venetia catton x reader #farleigh start imagine #farleigh start x reader #head heart hand fic #manicpixieart

[ywpd-translations]

Ride 755: Departure 2

Pag 1

2: Ding ding

3: The boarding the flight number 621 to Fukuoka, departing at 10:30 will close soon

4: If you're boarding, please speak to the staff member closest to you

Pag 2

2: Ah, that guy is angry

Shh

3: Oi

4: He said “I'm coming”, right?

Yessir!! I called him thirty times but he only picked up once....

He just said “soon”....

5: Then why aren't you here, Manamii!!

Pag 3

1: There's the Inter High soon, the Inter High!! Buah!!

So-sorry, I even sent many messages, but his current location-

It's been more than thirty minutes since you've said that, how's that soon!?

Pag 4

1: “Arriving late is a crime”!!

“Causing troubles is a serious crime”!!

Yessir

We told him that, too!!

3: Alright, I put Manami's ticket there, let's go

Huh!? Next to the window!?

That's a little-

Enough

4: Let's go, Yuuto, Tobirama

This time we'll fight as five people in the Inter High

'lright

Yes

No, but, he's the captain!?

Can't be

5: Ah... this must be my ticket

Pag 5

1: Kyushu

3: Take me there, too!!

4: Waaaa, Manami-saan!!

I'm so glad you came!!

Thank you so much!!

Well...

You really are like an here who arrives in the moment of need!!

Pag 6

1: Oi, don't misunderstand!! We were the ones in a pinch and this guy was the culprit!!

Yessir!

Sorry!

Ah, you exposed me...

2: Don't think you can dodge the matter of your tardiness just with your mood and cute face!!

Ah I thought I could make it

3: So?

Why... why were you late?

4: Ahh, I forgot my passport, then I remembered and turned back to get it

5: Ohhh... that's a problem indeed...

Wait!! You don't need a passport to go to Kyushu, right!?

Pag 7

1: Woah!! That was a clever excuse, Manami-san (It was so cool!)

It wasn't clever, and now let's go!!

Did you doze off?

2: Mh...? Well, on the train... it was only one stop?

So he really slept too much...?!

3: Jou-kun and Yuzukoshi-kun went on ahead?

4: They went there with yesterday's flight

Huh!

5: So, when you said “passport”, earlier- what was it, really?

6: Did you really turned back to go get something?

7: Mhh, how should I put it

8: In order to fulfill the final promise....

Pag 8

1: “The final promise”?

It was

3: a necessary piece

4: You're still wearing that ridiculous hat, Manami?

Ah... it's the one Ashikiba-san wanted last year... (Yuuto)

This is for exclusive use during the Inter High

Ohh... “exclusive use”, cool (Tobirama)

Pag 9

2: Kyoto... Kyoto...

7: Small fries!!

Pag 10

1: Then, should we go?

Are you...

Pag 11

1: finally ready?!

2: Yes....!!

3: Mi!!

6: This year's victory will be ours

Our long-awaited victory

Pag 12

1: It's checkmate!!

2: They're coming!!

3: They're coming!! One by one, to this land of Kyushu!!

4: Won't it favour us!? It's our hometown – us, Kumamoto Daichi!!

#yowamushi pedal #yowamushi pedal translations #yowapeda #yowapeda manga #yowamushi pedal manga #yowamushi pedal spoilers #ride 755 #another short chapter i really hope sensei is okay!! #I dont mind the short chap at all (especially bc lately ive had little time to translate) but im kinda worried :') #This chapter was so asdhsdfksdg Manamiiiii you absolute disaster #who would have thought that the responsible one in this team would end up being doubash huh #now that's the surprising thing lmao #manami really went back to get the best boy cap i cant with him #btw i dont remember; does he know that the one who gave him the cap is onoda's mum?? how does he know #'i went back bc i had forgotten my passport' 'you dont need a passport to go to kyushu!?!?!?' ashdkasdfs well at lest he tried lmao #also 'Yuzukoshi-kun'??? is he the other hakogaku member?? :eyes emoji: #cant wait to see what other weirdo hakogaku will have this year #i think this year's hakogaku is the weirdest one - which is a lot tbh #i feel like its going to be my fave hakogaku team #btw doubashi wanting to leave manami behind and just run as five assdgfkdfgs hes right and tbh he should just do just that whenever manami #doesnt show up - 'well i guess we're a five people team from now on' #btw i love i we saw everyone! only kiji's team is missing #(maybe theyll shop up next chapter who knows wanatabe loves kiji enough that it wouldnt surprise me) #midosuji shows up for exactly one panel and hes already creepy af i love him #cant wait to get to know the new guy!! #and hiroshima!!!! cant wait to see them try so hard and then get defeated in the most pathetic ways like every year #i love them i cant wait to see what kind of weirdo higashimura has become #he was kinda normal last year but we cant have a normal person as the hiroshima captain lrb #and then theres kumadai #acting all important and then we all know theyll do absolutely nothing ajsgfksadf

[stergeon]

25 rejected edeleth fluff ideas

here are some edeleth stories i thought a lot about but did not write. if anybody wants to actually write one of these, be my guest (and also pleeeeease send me a link, i'm desperate for content about Them Girls™)

byleth takes edelgard on a fishing trip and she has an absolutely abysmal time

edelgard makes a valiant attempt to corral byleth's atrocious fashion sense ahead of a formal event

byleth teaches edelgard swear words

edelgard tries some of those weird herbs rhea used to give students to relax; byleth is more than happy to babysit

byleth does edelgard's taxes. she's wearing her goofy professor glasses. it does something weird for edelgard

edelgard takes byleth on a date to the opera and byleth cries the whole time

byleth reads a work of fiction for the first time ever. it's a horror story. she did not like it. edelgard reads her something nicer.

edelgard gets byleth to pose for a portrait and shows it to her

byleth has to give a speech at a big event and is a nervous wreck. edelgard has been waiting all her life for this coaching opportunity

edelgard tries to teach byleth how to draw (she is very bad at it)

byleth cannot for the life of her figure out which fork is used for what purpose at this fancy dinner. edelgard covers for her

edelgard goes all out to celebrate byleth's birthday on the day byleth thought was (read: randomly chose as) her birthday, not her actual birthday; byleth doesn't have the heart to tell her

byleth brings edelgard various souvenirs from her travels around the country. edelgard tries not to be so soft over it, even though they're… not all hits

edelgard attempts to make dinner and botches it beyond salvation. they get takeout.

byleth will not shut up about this cute house she saw when she was out on a mission and how nice it would be for them to "have something like it one day." edelgard arranges to buy the place

edelgard sees byleth in a dress uniform and cannot stop swooning

byleth is being relentlessly pursued by a suitor who won't take a hint and edelgard challenges the idiot to a duel

edelgard decides she will learn to swim. it goes poorly, to say the least, but she manages in the end. as it turns out, getting to see byleth in a swimsuit is a good motivator

byleth gets caught kissing edelgard by hubert. the resulting conversation is unpleasant for everyone. ferdinand, meanwhile, is overjoyed

edelgard is having a terrible, horrible, no-good very bad day. she chews byleth out over nothing and immediately feels awful about it. byleth forces her to take the rest of the day off to chill

byleth is going away for a month-long mission. both girls are inconsolable. they write each other letters literally every day.

edelgard really puts somebody on blast in a council meeting. byleth gets stars in her eyes

byleth concocts a very, very elaborate story about some kind of summit in faerghus; she and edelgard leave enbarr for two weeks to attend. surprise: there's no summit, it's a spa retreat

edelgard arranges a "normal date" where they go out in town in disguise and do very boring things like run errands, look at furniture, buy socks, etc.

doropetra-edeleth double date

#edeleth #edelgard von hresvelg #byleth eisner #byleth x edelgard #fire emblem #fe3h #fire emblem three houses #fe3h fanfic #sterge.rtf #i would Love if anyone would grab one of these and run with it #as much as i would like to write any or all of these i don't have the brain for it at the moment #i actually did write the swears one but it was too silly to post. i simply can't. #i'm considering doing a story where each chapter is a teeny-tiny one-shot along the lines of these prompts #but i have like. three or four wips right now and i Should Not make it five #c'est la piss. i love them girls #also um. it should go without saying but don't buy a house for your partner without having a conversation about it lol #this is fiction and our girl has money to toss around on stuff like that. the likes of we don't have the luxury #i probably Will write that double-date eventually tbh. i keep chewing on it and rotating it in my mind #thanks to arrow for making me so crazy about that one

[lavenoon]

Even post-reveal, there will be anxieties left

@naffeclipse Hi sorry I've neglected the boys in the hurt/comfort, I've come to deliver <3 So normal about all of them being so so touch-starved, and how Sun/Moon may hold back (to their own detriment) in fear of scaring their little hunter once they all know (about Y/N's history, about Sun/Moon's identity)

#post let luce #my art #fnaf sb #fnaf sb au #cryptid sightings #cryptid!sun #cryptid!moon #naffeclipse #only somewhat related to the chapter itself basically but as always my mind ran away with me #as did my hands. this was supposed to be 15 panels but that would have meant not having the first five #and it definitely hits better with them. so. 20 panels. #it has been 13 hours since I started reading the chapter. here we are #and this comic has it all. hurt and comfort. terrified expression (my beloved). hand holding. holding the boys. #Y/N's soul and love in the stitches as red toned patches #heartbeat makes a return #okay yes I think I can shut up now

[zukkaoru]

family line, conan gray || jujutsu kaisen chapter 219 || antigone, tr. anne carson || flu game, fall out boy

my thoughts on the latest chapter [id in alt text]

#megumi fushiguro #jjk #tsumiki fushiguro #<- in spirit #i have no coherent words of my own so take a small collection of words from others #gave myself an actual stomachache this weekend bc i thought abt megumi for more than five minutes so uh. i'm doing fine #anyway this came to me in a vision while driving home friday morning like an hour and a half after reading the chapter so. enjoy or whateve #jjk spoilers #jjk 219 #hello grace here #also flu game is so megumicoded it hurts #i've got all this love i've got to keep to myself. all this effort to make it look effortless.. #i will refrain from writing a full analysis on why it's a megumi song disguised as a fic rn #but know that it is in my mind. slowly marinating.

[kicktwine]

Im about to make a whole osp style video on the importance of pacing and spacing in relation to whump or an authors decision to seriously harm a character

#kipspeak #long story short I wholeheartedly believe if you space it out wrong you will disengage your audience #and as a general rule of thumb you have a maximum of THREE instances across micro and macro story beats individually #Which both rest on a sliding scale of importance from minor to major and the spacing and groupage depends on what it is #three is also a guideline- I’ve seen characters hurt in unsatisfactory or overblown ways with only two; and I’ve seen it done #very well with four pushing five major focus points #setting also matters. Everything matters. But the conclusion is this #You are always on a balance beam with making your blorbo miserable. be aware of your major ‘chapter’ breaks (reset points) #… I have thoughts about things that I think have done it wrong and it is entirely about the pacing/spacing and not about the actual event o #the whump. #ahve I mentioned I hate that word yet. whump. I’m going to use it though because I need to get a point across #AND MIND YOU THIS IS FOR STORYTELLING WITH THE GENERAL PUBLIC AS AN AUDIENCE MOSTLY #of course that falls under genre and medium exceptions… #brb. I’m going to make an osp trope talk video

[kakyogay]

stress time ova reading fics I gotta catch up on

#backwards through the snow chaper 12 <3 #also catching up on the damage of time #and please I'd like to not get a bunch of asks asking if I've read certain fics after posting this #I don't mind them but also ngl I find most of my fics on the five pebbles tag #and usually read ones involving my favorite blorbos more often than general fics #I know it's kinda shitty but it's just what I do #also a lot of the general fics I've been recommended have so many chapters #like I know they are complete and probably really good but ough I already have a hard time staying focused after reading 4 chapters #my ass is not getting through 20+ easily #anyways this'll most likely be the last post of the night so gn <333

[torgawl]

these chapter 89 and 90 coloured pages came to haunt me today

things to point out:

- gojo: the covered eye + the infinity halo (obviously referencing his technique and positioned sideways on his head over the exposed eye)

- kenjaku/geto: the halo within an halo (like kenjaku within geto) + kenjaku's stitches looking like they're being shot from his/geto's hand as if they were made of blood (the angle almost makes it seem like he's pointing at gojo when the pictures are positioned together)

- the opposite colour palettes (black and white with the pop of blue for his eyes and white/yellow-ish halo vs colourful palette with great focus on red, green and blue)

a curiosity about halos in jjk is that they're not used - apart from hana - in the traditional sense associated with the idea of heaven or angels. they are usually stylistic and are linked with the characters and the motifs in their stories. the only two other characters i'm aware of having been drawn with a halo over their heads in the volumes' illustrations have been rika and toji - rika's like a floral crown (possibly tying with yuuta and their promise to marry each other) and toji's a simple halo (probably symbolising his lack of cursed energy).

they're, coincidentally (or not!!!!), all characters that have been considered dead at this point in time. additionally, all of them have managed to live on beyond death somehow. well, except gojo. unless you count his enlightenment and figurative death during hidden inventory as his first but he didn't really die. he did, however, lose his life in the fight against sukuna (or so we think). is this is a hint that he will come back? not sure. but it's a curious detail nonetheless

#the eye theory is rotating in my mind #but to be honest kenjaku/geto's page is intriguing me more than anything #is the blood symbolising geto's blood? is he shooting the stitches or smudging the stitches as if he was gliding his finger through glass? #food for thought i guess #anyone reading this must be like why did you dig for chapters from five years b.c. but i noticed a pattern so i have to talk about it #or i will explode #all of this because i decided to revisit my geto is coming back theory from like 2 years ago ✌️ #all the references to geto's soul still residing within him and being acknowledged by kenny i will never forget you 🤧 #jjk 💭 #jujutsu kaisen #my post

[patolemus]

I’m sorry if this is a stupid question but I cannot find the five stages of grief au on Ao3 for the life of me

Hahahaha don’t worry it’s not stupid! There aren’t stupid questions in this blog

Umm to answer your question I haven’t posted it anywhere yet. I don’t like posting my fics until I’m done or nearly done writing them, and since I started my classes again back in March my time to write has been minimum (this is also why I’ve been absent here ups). I could start posting what I already have but it’s not much and I can’t promise consistent updates

#should I post it? #mind you I have like five chapters #uni is kicking my ass #as usual #five stages of grief au #lucemond #aemond targaryen #lucerys velaryon #hotd #house of the dragon #aemond x lucerys #aemond targaryen x lucerys velaryon #ao3 #fanfiction #writing

[iamthepulta]

I hate chapter 28. I want to stab it with a stick. Viciously poking Westlie WHAT ARE YOU SEEING. WHAT ARE YOU FEELING. GIVE ME YOUR SURROUNDINGS WOMAN. AHSHDJGKKGKG

@justanormalseagull hanahaki!au. No guarantee the original au will finish. Eating cardboard in a bad way

#i dont know if this is idk- my mind trying to get in character and its eating me alive #or chapter 28 sucks that BAD #guys ive written like five snippets that need to be strung togsther for this #this chapter is piecemeal #like four weeks trying to understand the vhapter itself #another 4 weeks trying to understand the characters in it #stringing together this stupid plot #i want to eat it #liztlie au #liztlie au chapter 28 #i hope the au burns #i have taken morgan and westlie apart sith a scalpel. I KNOW them. they do not get to refuse me this chapter. get it the FUCK together u 2

[butwhatifidothis]

Pictured: someone proving someone else completely right

OP: Just because I have my problems regarding Claude’s writing in GW doesn’t mean I dislike him.

Genius: Well, if you REALLY liked Claude, and if you were THAT upset about [extremely poorly set up event], then OBVIOUSLY you should have been equally upset about [event that was set up infinitely better in literally every way]. I am very smart.

#Clyde discourse #Fire Emblem Warriors Three Hopes spoilers #Fire Emblem Warriors: Three Hopes spoilers #you see guys Clyde randomly deciding to sacrifice people to save his own people #after having multiple chapters of him worrying about the death happening on all sides of the battlefield #with the literal only possible explanation for this about face-turn being #''My murderous and racist brother tried to murder me because he's racist which means I'm evil now I guess'' #is LITERALLY JUST LIKE Dimitri's behavior immediately after a five-year-long isolation #with nothing and no one around him to help with his rapidly worsening mental state #and towards a man who'd literally just tried to murder Dimitri and his friends. For clout #the context for these two events are equal in writing quality and logical throughlines don't think about it just don't think about it just d #if you like/don't mind one you are LEGALLY OBLIGATED to like/not mind the other because they are obviously the exact same #Clyde defenders be wildin'

[kyouka-supremacy]

Okay but since when Fitzgerald is back being a villain in Atsushi's head?

#You see this is what happens when the main character is so pushed to the side he doesn't even have beef with the real villains of the arc– #and you have to come back to old villains to find someone he holds actual resentment™ against #Like what happened to the headmaster from Atsushi's mind? Lol #I'm not saying Atsushi likes Fitzgerald but like... #You remember he trusted him enough to reveal the agency's location to him although they were all wanted for terrorist #And Fitzgerald holds great expectations for Atsushi... I wouldn't exactly say they're in BAD terms. #Although maybe I'm just misinterpreting the meaning of this chapter's panels #francis scott key fitzgerald #atsushi nakajima #bsd #bsd ch 105 #mine #Edit: btw I just hateeeeee what they do with Atsushi like I've brought this up already but like. God give this protagonist some agency!!! #He doesn't even make his own decision to exit the door he's got like five people pointing it out for him. #And he doesn't even exit to decide by himself he just goes out with the intention of consulting the president and leave the matter to him? #Wtf man?

[sharkneto]

the last post you reblogged about not being able to predict reader's reactions--how would you say shifting together has faired in terms of how you expected readers would react versus reality

My uncertainty with sharing Shifting Together was I did not know how they'd be received with how OC heavy it is. I was not expecting the Rob Love. Or Sarah love, but especially not the Rob love.

A thing that stopped me from sharing those fics for a long time was-- well, primarily that I needed to get orsumfenix's blessing to do so because they're very blatantly based on their fic. But after that was because they are OC heavy, especially JT. There's something much more vulnerable about sharing OCs rather than fic with just established characters. We already know we like the established characters - it's why we're reading fanfic in the first place, to get more of them and their dynamics and relationships. OC's throw homemade blorbos into the mix and they do have a bit of a stigma; an unfair one, I think, but a stigma nonetheless for being self-inserts and Mary Sues and generally disruptive to the characters and dynamics fic is being read for in the first place.

What I expected from readers was... a tolerance. An understanding of what I was doing with my OC's to use them as an outside POV for a specific lens with which to look at and explore our Hargreeves. I love outside POV for bringing attention to weird shit we've gotten used to, and then their step away from the Main Plot let us have a different angle on characters, what was happening, and the plot in general. I started with HIT specifically to minimize OC presence. We have our Hargreeves and we start in their (Allison's) POV, rather than diving straight in with Walters' POV, like JT does. I was hoping dipping readers toes into Rob and Sarah with HIT would get you guys to like them enough to be willing to read much more of them in JT to see what Number was doing the two and a half years prior to HIT.

What I didn't expect was the pretty immediate love and thirst for Rob and the warming to Sarah that happened in HIT. I will say - I get the Rob love. I adore Rob, he's my special little Just A Guy. And he really gets more of a chance to shine in HIT than Sarah does because of his relationship he develops with Five. JT is Sarah's show. So, in retrospect, I Get It. But it's also just Very Special that you guys embraced Rob and Sarah, and Number to a lesser extent, so much that there are people who want to write fic with them, who have drawn fanart of them, who think about them on their own. Those are my guys! I made them up! And yet! They're off existing in your guys' heads! Wild!

In general, I wasn't expecting Shifting Together to be as big as it feels like it is. I didn't expect there to be a community around it. Hoped, obviously, as I've spent over two years writing it all, but didn't expect it. It felt too a little too niche, being an AU fic of an AU fic, and, with JT, too... unstructured? with it being slice-of-life.

It was strategic that I shared HIT first and JT became a prequel rather than the first in the series as I had originally written it. It was strategic that I shared the first three chapters of HIT within a week. I was desperate to hook you guys. See? Allison and Luther are here! See? Five is here and he has a big fight! I'm teasing that we'll get Other Five later! Just begging and hoping you guys would tolerate my OCs enough to hang around and see this story I'd written and was very proud of.

Over a year later and almost finished with JT, I see now I didn't have to be that nervous and desperate about it.

Thanks for the love, everyone <3

#more generally i didn't expect the /response/ to HIT #i hadn't really written fic before i originally started writing JT and HIT and had only dabbled with sharing multi-chapter fics #i didn't expect you guys to talk to me about it - which i /love/ doing #in the ao3 comments and on tumblr #it's very very special to me and i'm very soft about it all if i think about it too hard #i don't think i can stress enough how nervous i was about sharing rob and sarah #as they'd started from a Just For Me fic project (JT) to fill time in the pandemic #''here's my super smart physics professor who works with five in her lab!'' #''here's my psychiatrist who is blatantly here so i can ramble about five's psyche!'' #idk i felt like they fit too much into the OC cliche and i already loved them and was so worried you guys wouldn't #so thank you for loving them! #hit #jt #i should have a rob tag #sarah #thanks for asking and i hope you don't mind a ramble! #ask response

[b4kuch1n]

you wouldn't believe two separate robots got their shit rocked this chapter

#sk8 the infinity #kyan reki #hasegawa langa #burnished house #hi! hello. its like I just woke up from a coma or something #the last five days have been. man. its been #I'm chippin away at the sketches for the ink comms when I can! do u know its best to water plants early in the morning #cause I do now. I do now #anyways. this fic has been a really fuckign funny tallying of what pop culture thing any given character would know about #for example langa definitely doesnt know abt doraemon. reki does #shadow calls langa jack frost in this chapter once and I NEED you to know he was talking abt smt jack frost. not dreamwork jack frost #itd Haunt me if you came away thinking he was talking about dreamwork jack frost. itd kill me. that comparison would end me on the spot #funnies aside. I think its really fun that canon sk8 has like... a kind of mythology around the founders #this fic is ending up being a lot about spaces and bodies and inhabiting either so the mythologies are about the space as much as the peopl #but that is kind of a cue i took from canon #just. the idea of whole stories being made and then forgotten in the span of two decades. I am Thinking about it. it is On My Mind. yknow #anyways there is actual robot boxing in this chapter. thats all thank u #have a good night! I go watch stuff tomorrow! itll be great and also scary and I will cry #hope u have the chance for something like that too. hope ur doing well and living well. see u