#whump lines

[whump-mania]

More Whumper Lines

In honor of my first Whumper lines post getting over 1,000 notes, here’s some more! And in some fun categories!

Tag me if you end up using any!

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Playful/Cheery/Lighthearted

1. “Aw, that was cute. I almost felt that excuse for a punch. Why don’t you try again?”

2. “My favorite part is right before you lose consciousness.”

3. “Caretaker, you know how to do stitches, right? No? Oh well.”

4. “Hm. Your blood’s darker than the last one’s was.”

5. “Sounds like Whumpee’s having fun in there…would you like to go join them?”

Dark/Violent/Rough

1. “Get the fuck over here or I’m dragging you.”

2. “Look at me. Look at me while I hurt you.”

3. “Nothing you say is going to stop me. I have a job to do, and I don’t give a shit how it happens.”

4. “Don’t you get it? I’m not being careful. I want this to hurt you.”

5. “Stay still, you motherf—Stay STILL!”

Creepy/Intimate

1. “Come on, scream like you mean it…there we go. Much better.”

2. “It’s so cute when you fumble with your keys everyday when you come home.”

3. “Your pretty little screams are only for me to hear, understand?”

4. “It’s a shock to me that you’ve never considered modeling. I mean…red just looks so good on you.”

5. “Ah, you remember this scar, don’t you? The day we met…god, what I’d give to break you like that again.”

Reluctant/Hesitant

1. “Look, I’m—I’m sorry, I just need to get this over-with. Bite on this.”

2. “They’ll check for bruises. I have to.”

3. “I’m sorry, boss, I’ve…I’ve never done this before. I-I’m trying.”

4. “Don’t look at me like that when the others are here. Please. They’ll know I’m faking it.”

5. “I’m sorry, I had to say it—you know that’s not how I actually think of you, right?”

#whump #whump blog #whump community #whump writing #whump scenario #Whumper #creepy whumper #intimate whumper #sadistic whumper #reluctant whumper #whump lines #dialogue lines #tw stalking

[whumpacabra]

Writing Accessibility PSA

Please avoid using long strings of characters as line breaks in your writing - these are not screen reader/TTS friendly!

Every ‘°’ will be read as ‘degree’ - can you imagine how long it takes to read out a string of 25? Let alone more complicated combinations of characters (eg. imagine listening to TTS read out ~*~ |°| ~*~ multiple times per line break)?

A good rule of thumb is to stick with short, 2-3 character line breaks (eg. I don’t find — or *** too egregious to listen to). Your readers can tell there’s been a scene change whether you use two or twenty em-dashes, but if you use twenty, some of us might have to listen for 30 seconds to read the next scene. If you’re more concerned about aesthetics, you can insert an image of your aesthetically pleasing line break with alt text simply reading ‘line break’ for accessibility.

Don’t feel bad if this is something you’ve never thought about before - now you know better and can make your writing more accessible moving forward!

I would like to invite any other screenreader users to add their own thoughts or preferences to this post. We’re not a monolith and there’s a variety to how different softwares interact with repeating character strings and images with alt text, so there’s bound to be some conflicting opinions on what I’ve suggested above. Let’s try to make the stories we share accessible for everyone :]

#writing #accessibility #line breaks #linebreaks #screen readers #tts #text to speech #whump community #<- applicable to any digital writing but tagging for my own reference. as this is my whump blog. #maybe I’m old but back in my day there was a little kerfuffle about how many people kept using complicated character string linebreaks #on ao3 which has a native line break you can insert via html #I don’t know if you can still do that on tumblr desktop with all the changes recently so I’ve been sticking to my trusty — #this is all in good faith no harm no foul and I’m not a cop so do what you want with your linebreaks. #I’m just putting this out there because it wasn’t something I really thought about before using a screenreader myself

[gvaine]

WHAT DOESN'T KILL ME MAKES ME WANT YOU MORE @merthurweek2023 day six —Cruel Summer

#this is technically a line from a song but i'll use it as a quote #with bonus merlin whump <3 #merthurweek2023 #merlin #merlinedit #merthuredit #bbc merlin #tvedit #* #w #le morte d'arthur makes me insane actually. the repressed goodbye; the devotion #the way merlin looks back after telling arthur not to be a prat and leaving his rooms #thinking that it would be the last time he saw him #and arthur never ever knew. i'm unwell. i'm unwell #merthur #*fav

[letitbehurt]

“You wouldn’t do that,” blurted Whumpee.

Whumper angled their head at the challenge, the corner of their mouth twitching into a smile. “You have no idea what I’d do,” they said. “But you’ll learn.”

#another line from a WIP #defiant Whumpees gonna defy #whump

[anguishmacgyver]

#sg1 2x13 #stargate #stargate sg1 #stargate sg1 2x13 #daniel jackson #whump #flinching #othergifs #flashing lights #listen one thing about me is that #I DO consider flinching a peak form of whump #i know the lines are blurred but it just does it for me like #why!! are!! you!! like this!! #WHO will look at the footage and be like oh man #I will personally protect you 5ever #whumpedit

[whump-queen]

give me a whumpee who accidentally takes double the meds and drugs themselves stupid.

#it’s me i’m bitches #I feel like a fffuckin zzzzombieeeee #this legit is a prompt tho #drug whump #whump prompt #im experiencing this currently and- #fuck like my limbs are so heavy it’s hard to like #even stay sitting #I be ffuckeed up rn #anyway whump prompt i’m yeeting it at u #beaming my thoughts live from the rings of saturn #drugging #tw drugging #drugged whumpee #drug mention #uhh yeah #peace #shitpost #I love a one line post with a paragraph of tags #my ideal ratio

[befuddled-calico-whump]

reunion

(based on the au described in the second half of this ask)

@kira-the-whump-enthusiast , @whumpsday , @regrets-realization-acceptance , @kixngiggles , @randomlifeunit , @darkthingshappen

#mannnnn this au idea is so whumpy tbh thank u mill #whump art #whump comic #lab whump #torture #beaten #Jin's honestly just happy to see her alive tbh #angst #sibling whump #whumpy art #rk rotorworx au #lady whump #nabi had it coming #eventually it happens to everyone lol #Melchior was already being used as a test subject when Nabi showed up but then he acquired a dual purpose of helping her stay in line :) #since she makes it pretty obvious that she cares about his well-being #so of course RW is hoping her brother's safety on the line will push her powers even further #partial nudity #jin is so whumpable though

[wisteria-whump]

i kinda love when a character just cannot catch a break. like theyve had an absolutely insane amount of bad things happen to them to the point where it's statistically a miracle* that all of these things happened to one person.

*bad choice of word but i couldn't think of anything else lol

#i do think theres an undefined boundary where this phenomenon turns from good to bad #like i do think theres some moment where it's like ok this is just excessive #but when a story manages to not toe that line its great #whump #whump prompt #whump prompts #whump writing #whump idea #whump blog #whump scenario #tw whump #whump tw #writing prompts

[year-of-whump-tropes]

So...I've decided to attempt hosting a whump event, but I want to get some feedback from potential participants before I nail down the specifics.

My current idea is to have a trope-focused event with a different general theme for each month, a more specific theme for each week, and a particular trope for each day. (To give an example: a monthly theme could be "nonhuman whump," a weekly theme could be "vampire whump," and a daily prompt could be "burned with silver.") Interested people would have a chance to suggest and vote on the themes before the event started. This event will have an emphasis on flexibility, so you could do an entry for each day, one for each week, one for each month, or you could alternate between these at will.

Please reblog for sample size (and to spread the word to those who might be interested!)

Also if you vote that I should adjust or rework the format, please send in suggestions for how I should change it. Otherwise I'd just be making shots in the dark.

#whump event #whump poll #whump community #whumpblr #whump #whump prompts #whump tropes #whump challenge #This would probably start at the beginning of next year #because A. I like things lining up nicely and B. it would give lots of time for setup and feedback and suggestions from people etc.

[whumpasaurus101]

“You understand I’m doing this for your own good, darling… don’t you?”

#whump #whump drabble #whumpee #whumper #whumper line #whump dialogue #whumpblr #whump community #whump writing #intimate whumper #yandere whumper #creepy whumper #manipulation #manipulative whumper #lee wrote something :o

[whump-mania]

Dialogue Lines: Whumpee/Whumper/Caretaker Variations

(TWs: torture, cursing, collars, implied murder, drugging, nightmares)

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Whumpee

Classic Whumpee Lines

1. “Touch me and it’s fucking over for you.”

2. “Please, please, I-I didn’t mean to—I didn’t mean to mess up, please don’t hurt me!”

3. “What’s the point of trying? I’m never getting out of here.”

4. “I-It hurts…it h-hurts so bad…why won’t it g-go away…?”

5. “Keep me chained up here all you want. You’re never gonna hear shit from me, buddy.”

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Whumpee turned Caretaker

1. “Hey, I know, I know how much it hurts. Just breathe. Think of something else. That’s what helped me.”

2. “They got you too? That bastard. I’m so sorry.”

3. “Yes, I do! I do fucking understand, because I lived it! Now let me help you!”

4. “I didn’t get someone to help me through this when I was there. I want to be that person for you.”

5. “You remind me of myself…back then. Before they broke me.”

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Whumpee turned Whumper

1. “Payback, bitch.”

2. “No. You don’t get to complain. Don’t you remember the rules against speaking out?”

3. “This collar…oh yeah, you remember it, huh? You always liked it on the tightest setting, didn’t you? Let’s start with that.”

4. “Back then, before you, I always thought every person deserved mercy. But no. You’re not even a person.”

5. “Wait, you’re crying? Come on, Whumper, are you kidding?! It took you weeks to make me cry for the first time, and you’re giving up on the first day?”

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Caretaker

Classic Caretaker Lines

1. “This is gonna hurt. It’ll be over soon.”

2. “You think a little nightmare’s gonna hurt you? Nah. I’m here now. I’ll fight it off.”

3. “Just let them down for a second—Let me at least give them some water, it’s been almost two days!”

4. “I don’t know how you were even able to go through something like that…you’re stronger than I’ll ever be.”

5. “Come on, get up. Fresh bandage time—no, I don’t have to clean them today. That’s tomorrow.”

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Caretaker turned Whumpee

1. “How…h-how did Whumpee do this?”

2. “Anything. I’ll be anything you fucking want me to be—just let them go.”

3. “Sorry, friend, I’m not gonna break as easily as they did. Bummer.”

4. “Wait, y-you didn’t…you didn’t tell me you did this to them…no, k-keep that away from me!”

5. “Whumpee, when they hurt me, just look away. Please.”

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Caretaker turned Whumper

1. “Who else could have slipped those drugs into your food? Come on now, think a little quicker than that, Whumpee.”

2. “It feels kinda wrong, but…when you’d have nightmares, I…I kinda liked to listen.”

3. “I’m sick of taking care of everyone all the damn time. Well, guess what? Now you have no one.”

4. “Yeah, I’ve got them where you want them. They think they’re safe, but they won’t know what hit them.”

5. “Crazy how I used to patch these scars up…now, I get to make more.”

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Whumper

Classic Whumper Lines

1. “Good morning. Come on, get up. I have so much planned for you today.”

2. “You’re so cute when you try to fight back. It’s like you’re not even trying.”

3. “Aw, you had a nightmare? Was it about me? I hope it was about me.”

4. “Don’t try and be a fucking actor. You and I both know you’re terrified.”

5. “Found you.”

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Whumper turned Whumpee

1. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry for what I did, just…p-please, have mercy…”

2. “That all you’ve got? I used to hit you three times as hard.”

3. “No. I’m not apologizing. No matter how much you torture me. I regret nothing.”

4. “H-Hey, come on, we can be friends, right? You know I didn’t really mean all those things…h-hey, wait, get away from me!”

5. “No…maybe I deserve this. Maybe this is what I’m getting in return for all the things I did to you.”

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Whumper turned Caretaker

1. “Hey, it’s okay, it’s just me! …Oh.”

2. “The nightmare…it was about me, wasn’t it?”

3. “I know you can’t ever forgive me…but let me at least do this one thing for you.”

4. “Okay, okay, yes, I did make that scar, but I’m the only one who knows how to make it better, so would you stop moving?!”

5. “Fuck, I’m sorry…I’m so sorry…”

#whump #whump blog #whump community #whump writing #whump scenario #dialogue lines #whump lines #whump dialogue #Whumper lines #caretaker lines #Whumpee lines #Whumper to caretaker #Whumper to Whumpee #caretaker to Whumper #caretaker to whumpee #Whumpee to Whumper #Whumpee to caretaker #tw torture #tw cursing #tw drugging #tw collar #tw implied murder #tw nightmares

[whump-in-the-closet]

An immortal whumpee used for college classes, cut open with organs labeled and on display.

#that’s it that’s the prompt #i’m actually writing a short story based on this idea #except it’s not an immortal creature #but like an unalive half dead lich #something along those lines #whump prompt #whumpblr #whump community #whump ideas #immortal whumpee #cw gore

[homeforclones]

The true context of the “I’m not THEM” quote from the Season 3 trailer

Omega, Crosshair, and Tech have all escaped and they’re at the store waiting for Hunter and the rest to pick them up. Tech is off trying to find some new glasses.

Omega: Can we get this Mantell Mix? Please?

Crosshair: No.

Omega: The others would have gotten me Mantell Mix

Crosshair: WELL I’M NOT THEM

And then Hunter and the gang come and get them and they’re a family again and we don’t have to see them get hurt anymore.

#tbb #tbb season 3 #season 3 predictions #tbb crosshair #tbb omega #tbb tech #tech #crosshair #omega #tech lives #context is everything guys #the 'we're a family aren't we' line is responded to by wrecker in the season 2 trailer #they're clearly misleading us #mantell mix #listen as much as I love angst and whump #the bad batch need a break #especially crosshair #the bad batch #star wars the bad batch #let them be happy

[letitbehurt]

Whumper manages to get a hold of Whumpee’s phone number. Whumpee instantly recognizes the voice.

#there is so much potential for this trope #Whumpee realizing they aren’t safe anymore #Whumper smiling on the other end of the line #this trope is just good shit #whump

[redd956]

Whump Prompt List: NMA Edition

Based off of my NMA worldbuilding line

AKA Whump that @demondamage would like. AKA: nonhuman whumpees, experiment whump, medical whump, lab whump

CW: Violence, Hospital Whump, Experiment Whump, Nonhuman whumpees, Death Mention, Needles

Draining whumpee's blood in order to centrifuge a special resource from it

Hooking whumpee up to an IV that contains some form of sedative, paralytic, or similar formula inside of it

A physically powerful whumpee needing to be held down by a group, as a sedative is forcefully entered into their system

Whumpee watching their blood exit their veins through a tube, knowing theirs nothing they can do, slowly realizing that they're taking too much

Whumpee getting their blood drained, not knowing if their captors are going to stop before it's too late, or if they plan to get rid of whumpee this way after all

Filing down whumpee's sharp teeth, their pointed claws, sawing off their horns, tying down their tail. Whatever needs to be done to keep the nonhuman whumpee from having an advantage.

Whumpee being kept sedated or out of it, until they are needed for their magic

Muzzled and/or restrained whumpee lashing out at the doctors analyzing

Whumpee's every nonhuman aspect being analyzed, their privacy completely invaded, as doctors poke and prod, crooning over their find

A group of whumpees are captures, and they all fear the worse. However after one is found to be more rare than the others, they quickly discover that for one of them, it's going to be much much worse.

Multiple whumpees getting separated based off of the research that needs to be conducted on them

A limp whumpee, kept down for research, needing to be moved or treated as a comatose patient since the doctors dealing with them are too scared of their abilities

Testing to see what whumpee reacts painfully too, how they heal from the different things tested on them, watching them slowly grow terrified of the scientist opening their door

Taking a marker to whumpee's skin and going to town, preparing for the next set of plans

Forcing whumpee to use their magic or nonhuman abilities far past their limit

Whumpee growing more and more tired as they loose their magic/blood, watching the world darken and the noise of life muffle

Doctors taunting and teasing a heavily restrained whumpee. Whumpee, who is normally such a dangerous creature, can do nothing as they pull on their tail or forcibly spread out their wings

Hands latching onto whumpee's face, moving their head into the position they need to

Whumpee waking to the feeling of fingers prodding for the perfect injection spot

Strapping whumpee down to a table, the doctor admiring their work, thinking they'd never see a nonhuman of this type to work on

Whumpee being returned to a cell full of other nonhuman whumpees after a finish experiment, being plopped down unceremoniously in front of the others, before the doctor looks up to pick the next one

Tattooing whumpee to know what experiment group they belong to

Holding an oxygen mask to whumpee's face, watching as the mist of a sedative kicks in

#nma worldbuilding line #whump #lab whump #cw violence #whump prompt list #experiment whump #scientist whumper #doctor whumper #medical whump #hospital whump #nonhuman whumpee #nonhuman whumpees #cw whump #cw death mention #death mention #whump prompts #whump prompt #magic whumpee #needle whump #whump sedation #sedation whump #whump ideas

[befuddled-calico-whump]

fanart of @demondamage 's Ko (post-fall edition)

couldn't resist using this line, it's just too perfect

#others ocs #Necrotrophic Soul #demondamage #ko #whump art #demon whump #whumper turned whumpee #playing around with different coloring and lining styles #whumpy art #partial nudity