[I] mentioned two ways to improve your prose—showing a draft to someone else, and revisiting it after some time has passed—and both can allow you to catch labyrinthine syntax before inflicting it on your readers. There’s a third time-honoured trick: read the sentence aloud… Reading a draft, even in a mumble, also forces you to anticipate what your readers will be doing as they understand your prose.
- Steven Pinker, The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person’s Guide to Writing in the 21st Century
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ALREADY KNOW THIS BOOK WAS WRITTEN SPECIFICALLY FOR ME I GUESS
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Sometimes being an artist is feeling like a baker seeing a chemist making the deadliest liquid in the world and wishing you could make the deadliest liquid as well but you're a baker, not a chemist, and then you feel like your bread is worthless
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and thats why he keeps bobby pins in his desk
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Gideon Nav terrible fashion sense is so important to me babygirl has never been free to dress herself in her LIFE and i firmly believe that if she did have that freedom she would wear just. the most dogshit outfits. socks with slides. neon colors. shirts that say TITS with an arrow pointing down. outfits so bad every woman she meets is begging to take her on a department store makeover episode. outfits so bad you wonder if she got dressed in the dark upside down picking her clothing items by chaos potential. outfits so bad they wrap around to being sick as hell before winding back and punching you straight in the face
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To a literate reader, a crisp sentence, an arresting metaphor, a witty aside, an elegant turn of phrase are among life’s greatest pleasures.
- Steven Pinker, The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person’s Guide to Writing in the 21st Century
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anyway the wedding was sooooo pretty it was like a casual farm kinda theme? really cute. at the little historic park in our hometown. my cousin looked like a gd princess she was so pretty!!!! and I didn't have to hide in the bathroom lol I just sat with mom for most of the night while dad kidnapped various grand-nephews and nieces and brought them over to meet us.
we left early bc mom was getting worn out and also all of us city slickers forgot that in a park under the trees with wind and shit it's way colder than indoors in a well insulated home and didn't bring coats WHOOPS
but yeah, it was fun, everything was great, also my OTHER cousin apparently married his gf in a small private ceremony last weekend and goddamn!! everyone getting married!!! I swore I wouldn't feel like I missed the relationship train but!!!!!! I do!!!!! Pls just manifest my perfect platonic partner who I can marry For Tax Purposes and live on a farm with for the rest of eternity OTL
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i love these creatures........
designs belong to @psiirockin <33333
based off this meme lmao
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