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Out of first three volumes, which one do you reckon is the "weakest"/worst in terms of writing?
Hands down - Volume 1.
And half of the problems come from pacing.
It manages to do a ton of really bad decisions in terms of narrative structure and just overall writing:
Weird Comedy that mostly misses the mark- The show attempts to do "anime style" jokes, but most of those gags barring a few end up feeling extremely out of place (or end up retroactively disgusting and offensive like Mr Sexual Harassment Professor Port.)
The most frantic uneven pacing possible - One moment, characters might, at breakneck pacing, go through tense high-octane situations, and the next? You get the absolute show-stopper awful scenes like Jaune and the Honey. A lot of Jaune's arc in V1 is especially good at wasting time on things that could have taken half as long to do. Honestly? Considering the latter volumes, where they waste time drinking tea or the entire filler dimension volume, this one should have been an omen of things to come.
Narrative misfires - By now, the show is known for those more than for its actual positive aspects of the plot, sure, but this issue began very early on - whether it is the weird moments with no follow-up like Weiss's racism or the disgusting subplot of Jaune being treated as The Good Guy for not understanding that No is a NO - V1 is littered with moments that either completely miss the mark or don't achieve anything at all (or even are retroactively bad like Blake's flashback which by now we know is complete nonsense since she was a literal princess living in a paradise).
Lack of proper set-up - Be it the motivations of the lead characters not given enough time, Ruby's backstory and motivations(and the rest of the cast, really) - the world setting not given enough explanation or coverage. The Volume really needed either longer episodes, more episodes, or just fewer Jaune subplots(as much as I don't REALLY mind them)
There's a good core there and the Volume could be very good with proper pacing and runtime (not to forget that Volume 1 still has the BEST team fight for the lead characters TO THIS DAY and the best use of Ruby's theme song TO THIS DAY and one of the few moments where Ruby feels like she has earned her protagonist status TO THIS DAY), but as it stands it's the most messy out of the early Volumes and the most unfocused one.
A lot of the issues, however, even though they disappear into the background in the next two volumes, rear their ugly heads the moment V4 hit the screens.
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The impact of truth upon rwby
Questions asked by @angstandhappiness
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I would like to get your thoughts on these as well as they do pertain to similar subjects that we have talked about in the past.
What do you think of Ozpin's choice on choosing Pyrrha to be the new Fall Maiden? 
On paper it seems ideal but like any candidate chosen or given a job or task it's the then and there do you see whether or not it was a good choice and selection to make that person the one for the job or in this case Pyrrha as the Fall Maiden.
Truth be told when Oz made this choice there is a very high possibility that he didn’t know Pyrrha as much as he needed to and this is due to Pyrrha herself.
Personally I think Pyrrha more or less was having the same problem as any teen that could have been resolved had she talked and shared her thoughts about it instead of bottling up her emotions and just going with the flow. 
Had that been known chances are Ozpin wouldn’t have chosen her to have been the Fall maiden but in all honesty and truth there weren’t that many options if you had to choose a good natured candidate to be an all powerful elemental avatar so yeah on paper she seemed like an ideal choice but once you read in between the lines it's a 50/50 gamble on whether or not it will pay off.
What is your opinion on Ozpin withholding the truth from his current allies of Salem's true invulnerability and immortality? 
First off she is not invulnerable, maybe fast healing but not invulnerable if V8 is proof of anything.
Second to answer this one I have to invoke the old question that Dr. Oobleck asked team RWBY; Why did they become Huntsmen and Huntressesin the first place?
Before Salem was even a thing to the main characters they seemed pretty ok spending their lives knowing they can never eradicate the Grimm so that does beg the question; What’s the difference between then and now? 
All they know now is that the Grimm have a leader and that just like them they can never truly eradicate the threat of her but beyond that what has really changed?
Does knowing that you can never beat or kill the final boss that is actively trying to kill you, your friends and every defenseless innocent really going to discourage you from doing whatever you can to help hinder said enemy and defend everyone you care or will care for? 
No unless you have resolved to continue on with the fight and endure knowing that you may not succeed, and that those of good may continue to fail for thousands of years after you but they will not stop. All it takes for evil to truly succeed is if good people do nothing. 
Now why do I bring up this highly philosophical theory is because everything that I just said is what is more or less Ozpin’s resolve and why he didn’t share the truth about Salem’s immortality with his allies; They are not Heroes who joined him to counter Salem
Other than Ruby Rose every single one of Ozpin’s allies did not join his fight against salem because they were altruistic or charitable enough to lend a helping hand for the greater good, no just like their choice to be huntsmen and huntresses they are not in this fight because it's the right thing to do, they are in it hoping that it will help serve their own personal needs and goals
In short the overall reason why Ozpin didn’t share the truth is because almost all of his allies are not true or real heroes that are on his side because it’s the right thing to do.
To help further explore this point here’s a list of goals and motives for some of Ozpin’s allies for either being huntsmen or being in this conflict and why they prove that they did not deserve the truth 
These will also lead into the next question.
Team RWBY
Weiss; 
Goal; redeem the Schnee family name & SDC.
Motive; prove that she is nothing like her father. 
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; All her efforts and goals are self serving and tend and will only benefit her so that she may not feel so guilty about being a rich girl with a monopoly on the words most relied and needed resource to survive on 
Sidenote; I’m not familiar with the inner workings of shady corporations or questionable business practices but i'm pretty sure being a monster slayer is not going to expose and remove Jaques from power so can someone tell me why Weiss couldn’t have done a whistleblower operation or corporate espionage instead of becoming a Huntress because honestly besides the fame and notoriety I don’t think there was any legitimate reason for Weiss to be a huntress (Like do Huntsmen double as PI’s or something?)
Blake;
Goal; Faunus equality/ Making things right with her friends 
Side note; not gonna lie I don’t even know what her goals are anymore as her character at this point has been reduced to a love interest for Yang
Motive; Better life for herself/ Redemption for being both an enabler and coward
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; Just like Weiss, her goals and motives are also self serving in the sense that it opens more opportunities in life for blake as well as to put her mind at ease for being an ex terrorist as well as abandoning her friends and family in the past
Yang;
Goal; Find out why Raven abandoned her
Side note; Honestly this could have been resolved had anyone just told her that her mom was a psychopathic murderer who would rather kill than be part of a family
Motive;  Besides knowing the truth for why Raven is awful she is also motivated by thrill seeking adventures and danger
Side note; there might be a bit of revenge and resentment added to her motives post V3 due to being framed losing her arm and being abandoned by almost everyone she had known 
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; Besides being the daughter of a person that uses Ozpin’s teachings and power for evil, Yang is another example of someone who only does things that benefit herself and could care less about what happens(not unlike Raven)
Sidenote; if V5 & V6 are anything they prove that Yang is more or less the first one to walk away, and doesn't give a damn about the Salem conflict and will have left had Ruby not been there to stay.
Team JNPR
Jaune;
Goal; Become a Huntsmen to prove himself to his family and be a hero
Motive; apparently he is the family disappointment 
Sidenote; Revenge for Pyrrah may be a motive post Fall of Beacon
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; besides lying, cheating and forging transcripts to get into beacon Jaune is another example of a self serving huntsmen with the added bonus that he should never have been involved in the first place
Sidenote; I can’t say for certain why Ozpin allowed Jaune to continue as a student in Beacon with forged transcripts but I doubt a reincarnating benign with 1000+ years of experience wouldn’t recognize forgery so for the benefit of the doubt lets assume that Ozpin decided to go with a 50/50 gamble either A.) Jaune becomes a great huntsmen or B.) he dies either way Jaune got what he wanted and Ozpin wins.
Nora;
Goal; Be with Ren/ Find self worth independent from Ren(Later)
Motive; Not to be alone and abandoned again
Sidenote; V8 really gave Nora depth as a character as to be honest she more or less was a flat character
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; Honestly besides Ruby, and Pyrrah Nora more or less had a decent 50/50 chance to have been involved in the Salem conflict however Nora Pre V6 wasn’t exactly the most reliable or secretive individual from Ozpin’s perspective and in all honesty had very little relevance or motive to be involved in the Salem conflict
Ren;
Goal; Become a Huntsmen 
Sidenote; Possibly wanting to prevent others from having to lose what he had lost
Motive; Grief and anger from being orphaned by the Grimm
Sidenote; Basically he’s batman with the whole I am vengeance thing
Why they didn’t deserve to know about Salem's immortality; If later volumes after V4 are anything Ren isn’t exactly one of the most emotionally stable people to trust as his character during the Atlas arc is more or less akin to a whiny emotional b!7(# while trying to be emo and besides that just like Nora he had very little relevance or motive to be part of the Salem conflict
And Yes even though it was a Grimm that orphaned Ren I doubt Salem sent the Knuckleleave just to orphan Ren and in truth the destruction of Kuroyuri is ore or less akin to that of a wild animal attack, just a random act of nature that serves no purpose
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Qrow
Goal; Find friendship and protect the only real family he has left
Motive; Self worth and loneliness
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; Besides the fact that originally he was to use Ozpin’s teachings as a huntsmen to rob and kill innocent people
Ironwood
Goal; Ensure Atlas(the source of his power) is absolute and will endure
Motive; Obtaining power to feed his ego and hero complex
Why they didn’t deserve to know about salem’s immortality; to put it in short Ironwood only ever say the Salem conflict as a opportunity to increase Atlesian influence and superiority as well as a means to increase his own rule and power and being the opposite of everything that Ozpin stood for and tried to achieve 
Sidenote; Ozpin wasn’t about seizing power or creating an unchallenged rule or seeking glory. Ozpin was doing what was best to help guide and nurture the good for the people of remnant, not to rule or control them with little care like Ironwood did.
Sidenote; I’ve done an entire analysis series on Ironwood explaining why 
As you can see a majority of Ozpin’s allies really shouldn’t have been involved in the first place due to just what kind of people they are and probably still are by the time of the show's present. But due to circumstances and the choices of a few people they are involved do to either need or accident regardless of who they are and what they hope to achieve which is enough just cause and reason for why Ozpin didn’t tell them about Salem’s immortality 
Because it was none of their business and by far beyond any of their capabilities combined as in truth the conflict with Salem is truly only Oz’s. Those are my reasons why none of these people were told the truth about Salem’s immortality as well as why they didn’t need or deserve to know as well. With that I’ll be moving on to the next question.
How do you think he should have told them, and when? 
I just gave a whole lot of reasons why they shouldn’t have been told and if you noticed Ruby isn’t apart of that list because out of all Oz’s allies I do see Ruby as being the first if only person that Ozpin would have told the truth about Salem’s immortality because unlike the others her goals and motives aren’t self serving or a means to an end.
Ruby is content with being a huntress and is more or less willing to spend her days as one knowing she will die but still helps people along the way regardless of what the situation is or what the outcome will be.
But if Oz had to tell them it would probably have happened after they secured the relic in Atlas first and probably before Ironwood's descent into warmongering which lead to his eventual insanity in V8.
But that is besides the point, for you see this conflict with Salem is and always has been Oz’s problem and his problem only and everyone else could only really do is lend a helping hand and nothing more. Because of the sad truth and reality, what can they do? It doesn’t matter if they are all powerful, if all the grimm are extinct or if the world is under their control. Salem and Oz are basically timeless beings now and everyone around them will die and everything they have achieved will be undone one way or another.
And even then Defeating and Killing Salem is not the end goal of Oz’s mission. Salem may be the biggest obstacle at the moment but her being out of the picture doesn't mean or guarantee that things will be better for everyone.
Regardless of whether or not the main cast succeed and defeat Salem and she finally dies, Oz will still be there, once all of RWBY & JNR die Oz will still be there, and in in either hundred or a thousand years later after all of this Oz will still be there and will still be there after until he either succeeds in his mission in uniting Remnant in peace or until the Ozma soul has become so stretched and diminished to the point that the soul may no longer be able to reincarnate and eventually fade away into non existence. No afterlife, no heaven or hell, no rest just gone.  
It's a sad but likely outcome for Oz because the story of the show and overall conflict with Salem isn’t a tale about power or dominance or about hope and fellowship.
It is a tale about, Human evil and all that it encompasses which leads to the consequences that is the overall theme between Salem and Oz and those that become involved; A tale of Death and the desire for deathlessness.
For better or worse or for good or evil, all thing must come to an end in order for the tale to progress and move forward otherwise the great old tales will never end and history repeats itself and were back at square one
These are my thoughts to these questions let me know what you think?
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patema-introverted · 3 years
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My sisters didn’t believe I could make this would work.
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anotherrwbyliveblog · 3 years
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Yooo!
One of my friends wanted to start watching RWBY and I asked if we could liveblog it, and she accepted!  So here we are! We’ll be using the same format as @what-the-heck-is-rwby (who inspired this blog),  with me screening and my friend reacting. She has (sadly) seen the first half of volume 1 as well as some spoilers (she mentioned knowing the Ozma thing) so she’s not completely blind, but I believe it will still be fun! We’ll be doing season 1 tonight (she wants to binge so she can watch volume 8 live), hope you’re looking forward to it!
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rwbysquad · 5 years
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Team RWBY V1CH07
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qracked-heart · 4 years
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Some highlights from my live blog of V1/V2
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generalxiaolong · 6 years
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Just some night time doodles.
We all need some not scarred for life RWBY babies once in a while
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sugarxoxopie · 7 years
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NORA IS A FUCKING YANDERE
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sapphicsojung · 7 years
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now the gang is all together bois
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samsloves-main · 7 years
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I kinda went back and redrew these two…. I swear I’m not obsessed with Monochrome! :T
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Ozpin’s age and Beacon
Questions asked by @angstandhappiness
Who do you think was the headmaster/headmistress of Beacon before Ozpin? 
Hard to say as crwby really hasn’t gone into detail about their lore and history so it really is impossible to say who was in charge of beacon before Ozpin, heck they still haven’t even named the King of Vale so I doubt we will ever get a line of succession and names of all of the other headmasters before Oz but if I had to say who as a character and why they were chosen it would probably be someone who was part of the secret group and thus a follower of Ozpin that became headmaster either before or soon after the death of Ozpin’s predecessor as Glynda would post fall of beacon.
What kind of initiation test did they do for newcomers, and how did they use it to sort out the teams? 
Same as the last question but as far as I’m aware it would probably have been the same initiation test that the main characters did in V1 as Glynda implies that this is more or less the standard by that time with the only difference being the choice of relics. Like there is nothing that implies that there was a different or other form of initiation prior to what we see the mains do in V1.
When was Ozpin chosen by the incarnation cycle, and at what age?
Hard to say but given key dialogue from Raven in V5 and the confirmation that Ozpin was Younger than Theodore who was stated to be in his mid to late 40’s (44-49) making him the youngest of the 4 current headmasters before the fall of beacon. And since Yang stated that he was the youngest ever to become a headmaster, implying that the average age is significantly older for someone to become a headmaster but would have to have been older than 21 years of age as he would have needed to graduate first.
But he would still be older than team STRQ as he was their headmaster during their time at Beacon so Older than 17 at the time by at least 4 years. And since it was confirmed that Ozpin spent some time traveling as the fairy tales of remnant book is a collection of stories Ozpin gathered from his journeys which he would later add them to Beacons library and academic curricular so at least a couple of years to travel and explore the known world (assuming he didn’t do much during his time as a student.)
So, with that in mind our possible age range for Ozpin is at least 5-7 years older than STRQ when they went to beacon for the first time (STRQ; 17/Oz; 22-24) and assuming that Raven had Yang at 23 and STRQ were at least 40-41 by the fall of Beacon that makes Ozpin's possible age at death at or around either 45 or 46 and still be younger than Theo who is nearing 50)
With this in mind and since there's no age criteria in the reincarnation cycle it is likely possible that Ozpin was likely chosen during but most likely before his time at beacon. So at or around 17 years of age did he become the man with two souls.
Sorry for the delay but here is the first quarter of your questions let me know what you think
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kaedeichinose · 2 years
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Me: 'i bet the recent fanmade rwbyV1 esque thing isn't even that good tbh'
Me after watching it: 'man... That was radical. We used to have fun here'
is this is reference to the ol team slvr stuff? yeah its pretty good. its got soul. more soul than current rvvby has in its whole fucking body.
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anotherrwbyliveblog · 3 years
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Wait is this episode 1 or a music video
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rwbysquad · 5 years
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Ruby Rose V1CH04
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