#it's just a dialogue heavy scene

[stusbunker]

Oh boy, how am I supposed to write a first date? Who asks questions anymore? How does any of this work?! It’s ABO can’t they just fast forward to smelling each other’s necks already?! lol

#stu overshares #writing is hard #destiel omegaverse big bang #I'm really only kidding #it's just a dialogue heavy scene

[doalkaynaksuyu]

CRYPTID HUNTER DAZAI/JUST SOME GUY FYODOR AU

#digital art #digital drawing #my art #art #fanart #digital doodle #bsd #bungo stray dogs #dazai osamu #fyozai #fyodor dostoyevsky bsd #fyodor bsd #fyodor #dazai #i started drawing as a a #joke but #i think i flew too close to the sun and it just became a dialogue heavy #scene that i will never have enough energy to draw #anyways #i love my ocs dazai osamu bsd and fyodor dostoyevsky bsd #sorry for the godawful handwriting its 2am im about to pass out

[buggachat]

Absolutely no pressure to answer this, but I’ve been getting curious what with what’s currently going down in the Bakery Enemies AU! Do you intend to end it shortly after the reveal, or do you have plans to continue the plot re getting the kwamis back and finding/taking down the real peacock holder?

Basically, the "end" of the comic that I have in mind still has some loose ends. I was kind of planning on doing some epilogue comics to tie them up, or even like little short snippet comics of little jokes or cute moments or what have you.

I can't completely guarantee that I'll do them, because when the comic is done I will probably need to go back to doing the other things I've been busy with, but it was sort of the plan.

#the alternative if i don't have time to make the comics is to write a few epilogue fics of what i imagined would happen.... but.... #i feel like switching media types might not be the best idea? but writing them as fic would be a lot quicker than drawing them out #i dont know. i have a lot of scenes and stuff in my head and some of them are just dialogue heavy and dialogue-heavy scenes are a lot #easier to write than draw out so #depends on how busy i'll be ig #bakery enemies au

[shelienead]

Castle - 8x13 "And Justice For All" (requested)

#castle #8x13 #caskett #castleedit #kate beckett #richard castle #my gif #my stuff #the scene is so long and I didn't want a text heavy gifset #so there are just bits of dialogue cause it looked weird with no text

[prettyboysdontlookatexplosions]

wrote over 2300 words today :)

#it's like. entirely dialogue from a set of dialogue heavy scenes i have had in my brain #forrrrever #so a lot of just transcribing people talking and tbh. simply not worrying about the rest too hard! #(the joys of Fanfiction and particularly this series where that has always been the driving ethos) #anyway... we're down to uhhhh #five and a half scenes? #the half is less than half and the next scene is p. short #it's happening... i swear on my fucking life it's happening.... #writing tag

[abirdie]

Elia Suleiman and Gael García Bernal as themselves in It Must Be Heaven (2019, dir. Elia Suleiman)

(for the avoidance of doubt, this whole conversation apart from "Hello, my name is Hernando Cortes and I wanna conquer you" is in Spanish)

Transcript (English) below the jump.

Hey, what's up? No, I'm here. Waiting for a meeting with an American producer… well, she's not American. I don't know where she's from.

It's for a project on the conquest of Mexico, for the 500th anniversary of the conquest. About Cortes, Moctezuma and all that stuff. But they want to do it in English.

Yes, in English, can you imagine? They want the Spanish to speak English. And the indigenous to speak in Nahuatl or any other language. They don't care. So they'd sound like: "Hello, my name is Hernando Cortes and I wanna conquer you." or something like that.

It's going to be terrible, really. Terrible. No, I don't want to do it. I'll tell her no.

Anyway, I'm here with my friend Elia. Elia Suleiman. He's Palestinian. No, no, not Palestinian from Israel. He's Palestinian from Palestine. Yes, Palestinian from Palestine. From Palestine.

Listen, we'll talk later, OK? Sorry, I'll call you later. Ciao!

#gael garcía bernal #elia suleiman #it must be heaven #gael garcia bernal #this isn't part of my filmography gifs series #it's just a good film and gael happens to be in this one scene #there isn't much dialogue in this film but what there is is beautifully crafted #that 'anyway' (or 'bueno y' in the original) is doing a lot of heavy lifting #colonialism #language #palestine

[dollsome-does-tumblr]

#gilmore girls #luke x lorelai #luke danes #lorelai gilmore #this is one of my faaaavorite scenes between them but i don't think i've ever seen it on tumblr #which makes sense because it's a dialogue-heavy beast! #but i had to do it in tribute to my most beloved bbs on their anniversary ❤ #steely dan flash mob = ultimate romantic gesture #also i love how they are both just so snarky and so Fond in this scene #the perfect last onscreen conversation between them :') #mine #mine: gilmore girls

[diseaseriddencube]

I wanna write a Rosie Alastor fic but I have zero ideas 😭

#like I feel like they'd have something very dialogue heavy #which is kinda my absolute weak point with writing #I just never have ideas for it. I prefer to write out scenes and actions #I do admire those writers that have the wittiest in character dialogue #but ugh I just wanna write them having a little tea party or something #which just isn't enough for me to work with #rave ramblees #perhaps I should think up some ideas #and go back to writing for cutthroat #or REALLY go back to my roots and continue that fucking danvid fic I abandoned #though I think I'd need to rewrite the whole thing before I even continued it #and then I'd get tired and abandon the rewrite too :/ #I wanna write smut but it's like I'm incapable of not cringing while writing it now #and I used to write the most vile horrors with no shame #but now if I say penis I wanna kill myself #smut used to be my bread and butter what has become of me 😩

[pureanonofficial]

The mood of reading up on Chess the musical's history is that sometimes you will encounter a choice so strange and so very much a Choice, that you will want to go lie down to process it.

#Chess #Chess the musical #This is specifically about the 2002 Stockholm production's choice to cut One Night in Bangkok #and to then play it as club music in a scene??? #But it has applied to a lot of Choices tbh #Like most of the Broadway ones #Why on Earth did anyone ever think that in a show where the score is the most beautiful and wondrous and unique thing about it #that they should make it a book musical. #It is a rock opera heavy on the opera. #Lots of dialogue would just drag it down!! #I am developing very specific opinions on Chess I fear. XD

[langernameohnebedeutung]

Honestly, I'm beginning to think film adaptions of books should include a "watch after reading" or "watch before reading" label

#Im finally watching Gone Girl just after I've finished reading it #and it feels a bit hard to watch because a lot of lines are just characters saying narration as dialogue #or a really heavy-handed effort to bring in small elements from the novel without the context #and a lot the movie scenes feel like three lines of dialogue acted out for us #it's me being nitpicky but it actually makes it hard to watch for me bc I'm so strongly aware of why that line is being said #to the poinf where it feels forced for the character to say it

[aitogi]

[戦国無双] ~四国遠征の章~ [Sengoku Musou] ~Shikoku Ensei no Shou~

#samurai warriors #sengoku musou #chosokabe motochika #akechi mitsuhide #gif set #butai #stageplay #translations by me #this is one of my favorite scenes from the stageplay the heaviness the slow pacing of the dialogue the expressions the TEARS #motochika is as strong as steel like the love of your life just asked you to just let them die and he just said o k #the instant understanding between the two of them at that moment is also so well done #and then chika had to WATCH mitsu die my god the moment he loses his composure and yells his name and throws himself to the ground AHHHfkgm #and then just to destroy him further mitsu says the sea line I SCREAMED #all the raging grief and hopelessness chika feels for the rest of the play is so well justified #a thousand praises for chika's actor i mean wow

[raksh-writes]

Im currently reinstalling BG3 to get all the new patches and whatnot so of course instead of focusing on my previous save where I already reached Act 3 Im thinking of starting a new run instead like... it wont even be that different when Im probably just gonna switch from ranger to druid but I wanna.

Plus, I thought of getting some new hair styles and clothes with mods since I saw so many lovely ones all over yt and tumblr, but Im not sure if it won’t disable my achievements? And I kinda like seeing them so rip new lovely hair styles I guess ;C

#Raksh posts #baldur's gate 3 #baldurs gate 3 #bg3 #Raksh's gaming adventures #also the party limit bygone mod is so tempting #just bcs I have a hard time not takimg Shadowheart and Astarion with me #and when I play my Ranger I Need a frontline heavy hitter so it leaves me with either Karlach or Lae'zel #which is lovely on its own and I really like the party comp #but itd be nice to get some different set ups #and I need Astarion with me at all times lmao #Ive also thought of starting a Durge playthrough but I dunno #kinda wanna play a normal druid tav first and see what differences there are with the patches #bur then again a Durge Druid run might be fun for the contrast #bcs Im incapable of an evil playthrough so itd be a Durge desperately wanting to be good hah #plus all the unique dialogue and cut scenes are super tempting #hmmm #I still have a few hours before the game finished downloading and installing so Im gonna sit on this for a bit #the hair styles mods tho ahhhhh

[guideaus]

i want to rewatch bits of s2 of vinland saga to see how much is different, but idk if i have the strength rn

#personal #strength to think hard #i think the 2nd does and doesnt have a lot of changes at the same time. s1 added scenes that felt in character while s2 had the same #scenes happen but w diff dialogue so the themes slightly off? and from what ive seen v hand holdy #just in ep1 einar literally tells himself he has to live which isnt wild but i think v heavy handed compared to the manga #and ik the anime added a scene of him trying to kill thorfinn and that felt like too much compared to the manga too #i dunno but i still feel sick ough

[professorllayton]

i watched the first 2 episodes of reacher w my dad when they first came out and i really. it was the most dull bland boring show ive ever seen in all my life.

#blabs #mysterious gruff rude terrible man comes to tiny town. brings crime w him. oh no. #that was it GFKLGLKFJKGFJKLDKLJ #AND THE MAIN GUY'S ACTING WAS SO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING BAAAAAAAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! #it was like watching a wooden box try to be intimidating #and his one liners... jesus fucking christ it was difficult to get thru #my dad's been watching the rest of the show w my brother and ill walk by and see scenes occasionally and its just. it has only gotten worse #the dialogue specifically is so fucking bad its like. idk its like if someone whose favorite video game was heavy rain made a tv show

[cloud-somersault]

I couldn’t fit it all in a simple comment so I’ll write it out here. This is in regards to your most recent post about chapter 4.

Something that’s incredibly natural about emotional and relational issues is that they are a constant nagging thing. The fact that these two are going to bring up similar things time and time again is actually very realistic. Because they haven’t SOLVED anything yet. So the angst, regardless if we’ve seen it before, is going to be reoccurring! I totally understand what it’s like to feel like you’ve literally beaten something dead in a story with how much it’s brought up. But it’s only natural that characters who have been deeply hurt are going to bring it back up. People are always going to feel shame and regret for the terrible things they’ve done, and it is always going to come back. Same with hatred and anger. I promise you, from a writing standpoint, it is going to feel weird and nonsensical to constantly bring it up, but it is necessary to move the story a long! And you’re doing an amazing job at it!

Sometimes, in life and in writing, we’re going to feel like we’re walking through mud. So it’s a-okay if the chapter feels like this too, I promise it’ll work out(we are always our worst critics). :]

AWWW THIS IS SO SWEET!!! And it's all completely true LMFAO Though there is some back and forth (🤮) in chapter 4, it's more that...I've edited this fic so many times and reread it over and over trying to get the pacing/tone/dialogue down that the emotional high and low points do not impact me anymore, so I'm unsure if they're going to be effective.

But there's definitely some of that go-around of hashing things out...and I was unsure about that too, and you're right that it's natural and all the EMOTIONS that come with that are very pointed. But then I'm worried about pacing -- that things are "solved" too quickly AUGHGHEHRHGHG

I know it's not as bad as I'm making it out to be. It's just that this is the next-to-last chapter of the fic. 5 is technically the last chapter, and I'm still holding plot points in my hands unsure of where they should go. I'm having to move things around because chapters 2+3 were supposed to be ONE but then that pushed things over into chapter 4. which pushed things over into chapter 5. and it's a whole mess ughggh

i don't like to complain about the process, and I shouldn't do it on a nice ask like this JFFJJ but damn...I dunno, in the morning this'll all be embarrassing but holy shit, I just want this to be SATISFYING. I want it to end and be like "Ah, that was a good fic. From start to finish, I enjoyed it."

That's what I want. 😔

#ask #THANK YOU though it's a good reminder that if i circle back around to things that's natural #guhgh especially when heavy dialogue is involved #and if the characters your writing are idiots LOOKS AT WUKONG #then it's harder but...yeah #wish i could just throw the wip of chapter 4 out and then like...get feedback #the sad thing is that it's mostly DONE i have like...3 more scenes to write #so that's where this doubt is coming from #i always doubt myself the closer i get tofinishing something

[moodr1ng]

ummm ive been working on a comic project for 2 years and while writing it just now i think i finally realized this doesnt work as a comic and its either a novel or a visual novel (probably the latter bc its very visual). ummmmm. i dont like that

#97 #i wanted. a comic. #but im starting to think i just wanted a comic bc i liked the idea? of being someone who runs a webcomic? #and perhaps i thought id get more attention or validation if i did that? #but im trying so hard to write less dialogue and not have it be so text heavy and frankly im cutting down needed exposition. #and its still just. #text text text text text. #every scene is just the characters going from one place to another to have more dialogue. #thats all its all dialogue its entirely dialogue lead it sucks ass for a comic project. #on the other hand its.. incredibly appropriate for a visual novel. #ohhhh god im so dumb. #i feel so bad bc i have a collaborator for this for it to be a comic and now im like hey uhhh. should this. be a comic..... #and i cant get anyone to look at my script so i just cannot figure out if im right or what 😭😭 im so. #art is so stress.