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imma be honest i love marco but i'm glad he wasn't in the last chapter. i think 127 gave us and jean a sort of closure. not that jean will stop remembering him, but Isayama could stop putting it forward. the ones who were shown are the ones who died for the cause. marco was murdered. OR other solution (that i would have preferred) would be to show literally everyone. hannah, mina, franz, everyone, every victim of that centuries old war.

Thanks for sending this in! I do see the point in the whole closure thing for Jean's arc, but here's the thing:

Marco wasn't just a plot device used to develop Jean's character.

That's exactly what has me so upset about it. He was so much more than that, and ultimately, Jean wasn't the only one who was affected by his presence and his death. In fact, even after Marco dies in S1, he continued to be a key figure in pushing the plot forward and further developing characters, the warriors especially. We see it when Reiner begins heavily disassociating ("Why is that titan eating Marco?" despite being directly responsible for Marco's death). We see it in Annie, who in the OVAs is shown to have recurring nightmares about her hand in Marco's death (In 127, we see that she's not over it yet, either. She asks Jean: "Would you forgive me?"). We see it in Eren, who was fully expecting somebody like Marco to join the Survey Corps–only to be shaken to find out that Marco had died before he could even graduate. We see it in his and Armin's demonstration of wit as they worked together in the OVA, further proving that physical strength isn't the only factor necessary to come out victorious. I would even argue as far as to say that Marco was one of the main catalysts that inspired the scouts to keep pushing forward. This was especially true for Jean's case.

Most importantly though, the moment Marco dies at the hands of Reiner, Bertholdt, and Annie is the exact moment we see that not everything in the show is in black and white.

This has always been one of the most important themes of the franchise. Because of his death, we suddenly see that Reiner, Annie, and Bertholt weren't just these Big Bad Guys set to destroy the heroes. We realize that it's much more complicated than that, and that this is what happens as a result of war. Of any war: that there is no good and evil, no right or wrong. The only thing there is is despair and destruction.

Him not showing up in the smoke in 139 was also a gigantic missed opportunity to finally close in on Reiner and Annie's journey towards redemption. I've posted about it before, but just imagine Marco showing up there next to Sasha, and it isn't just Jean who sees him. Reiner and Annie do, too. The two people directly responsible for his death. And because he's Marco Bodt, he smiles one last time and says "I understand. I forgive you. Take care of them for us."

Like, the sheer impact of that? Even if he didn't get to say anything, even if he just smiled at Reiner and Annie? That would have sent me. That would have set all of us as an audience, regardless of shipping preferences or anything else. We all would have cried regardless.

tl;dr I understand that Jean received his closure in 127, but the bitterness I feel about Marco not showing up in 139 wasn't about 127, or the closure Jean receives itself. It's because Marco was such an important character, played such a significant role in pushing the plot forward even post-mortem, and he was and continues to be–even after his death 8 years later–a fan favorite.

So it literally did not make sense for him to NOT have been there. Jean and the others deserved to say goodbye. Reiner and Annie deserved that ultimate act of closure. And we, the audience, deserved one last chance to say goodbye to Marco, too.

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WHAT THE AOT BOYS WOULD WEAR IF THEY WERE GIRLS

Man, idk why I thought of this, I'm a sucker for genderbend content. Anyway, I wanted to cover Levi too but nothing I found could ever make justice 🙄

Eren

— I feel like she would just grab anything from a pile of clothes and get on with her day (sometimes it's not even clean :/ ) 100% just winging it half of the time

— low-key edgy but usually just wears lazy clothing

— goes out wearing the sweatpants she used as pajamas

Armin

— likes wearing clothes that reflect her personality

— sucker for blue, owns a lot of cardigans and sweaters in different shades of blue (also a sucker for pastel tones)

— converse hoe, owns a lot of pairs in different colors

Jean

— a bit pretentious (very fitting), her outfits have an elegant yet casual vibe to them

— loves layers

— actually tries, if she's not in the mood she'll wear sporty clothings or just lazy clothes but she finds a way to make it stylish

— earth tones >>>>

#jean kirstein #jean kirschstein #eren jeager headcanons #jean kirschtein headcanons #eren yeager #eren jaeger #armin arlert headcanons #outfits #aot hcs

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unironicallygrace · 2 years

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I think we're not paying enough attention to the fact that Jean Kirstein most likely has a scar in the right side of his face because of Gabi's bullet that very visibly grazed his skin. Like, that shit has got to leave a mark and that mf has a badass scar now.

#jean kirstein #jean headcanons #jean kirschstein #aot spoilers

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AOT CHARACTERS AS TAYLOR SWIFT SONGS

A/N: I honestly don't know if this has been done before but I haven't found any so Imma go ahead and do it ✌🏻 completely based on the vibes they give off.

features: jean, eren, armin, mikasa, historia, ymir, annie.

Jean

gold rush

I don't like a gold rush, gold rush,

I don't like anticipating my face in a red flush,

I don't like that anyone would die to feel your touch, everybody wants you.

we all know this man is insecure as hell, I can see him feeling this way about his partner, adoring them and not being able to help but feel jealous when he damn well knows he's not the only one who's got his eye on the person he loves.

Eren

getaway car

riding in a getaway car,

there were sirens in the beat of your heart, should've known I'd be the first to leave,

think about the place where you first met me

we were jet set, bonnie and clyde,

until I switched to the other side,

it's no surprise I turned you in,

cause us traitors never win

of course he would get assigned a reputation song, this boy screams reputation vibes. anyway, this song really reminds me of him, especially if you apply it to him and mikasa but regardless, it's just the way things happened and now I'm emo again.

Armin

enchanted

this night is sparkling, don't you let it go,

I'm wonderstruck, blushing all the way home

I'll spend forever wondering if you knew

I was enchanted to meet you

he's just too sweet, man, I can see him meeting someone he likes and being internally infatuated, just up all night thinking about that person. he's that guy who sees floating hearts around him when he sees his crush in cartoons.

Mikasa

better man, exile

and it was always on your terms,

I waited on every careless word,

hoping they might turn sweet again

like it was in the beginning

talking down to me like I'll always be around

push my love away like it was some kind of loaded gun

I'm not your homeland anymore, so what am I defending now?

you were my town,

now I'm in exile seeing you out

damn, this kinda...screams eremika to me. listen, it's just the vibe, okay, I feel like this may or may not be the way a modern Mikasa would feel about Eren in the end. hell, maybe even canon Mikasa as well.

Historia

love story, the way I loved you, i wish you would

romeo, save me, they're trying to tell me how to feel

this love is difficult, but it's real

don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess

it's a love story, baby, just say yes

nobody can tell me this wouldn't be modern historia and ymir, I headcanon her as being this rich girl with uptight parents who want her to date someone from upper class and of course, a man, and what a surprise it is when the girl she's crushing on is far from being a male and she's also quite vulgar and not rich.

but I also have a bit of a bittersweet headcanon where she's dating someone else after breaking up with ymir and despite how sweet and gentle this other person is, historia can't help but miss ymir's roughness and all those flaws that made her who she was, and historia loved who she was. and because I'm yumihisu trash, i keep making myself suffer with that song troupe.

he can't see the smile I'm faking

and my heart's not breaking

cause I'm not feeling anything at all

and you were wild and crazy,

just so frustrating, intoxicating, complicated

got away by some mistake and now

I miss screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain

it's 2AM and in cursing your name,

I'm so in love that I acted insane

and that's the way I loved you

I wish we could go back and remember what we were fighting for

wish you knew that I miss you too much to be mad anymore

and I wish you were right here, right now, it's all good

I wish you would

You always knew how to push my buttons,

you give me everything and nothing,

this mad mad love makes you come running

to stand back where you stood

Ymir

the last great american dynasty

there goes the last great american dynasty,

who knows, if she never showed up what could've been

there goes the maddest woman this town has ever seen

she had a marvelous time ruining everything

lmao, do not tell me this isn't what is said about ymir dating historia and making her girlfriend's parents completely disappointed.

Annie

my tears ricochet (my literal favourite)

I didn't have it in myself to go with grace

and so the battleships will sink beneath the waves

you had to kill me but it killed you just the same

(and if I'm dead to you why are you at the wake?) cursing my name, wishing I stayed

you turned into your worst fears

and you're tossing out blame, drunk on this pain

crossing out the good years

this is just annie's theme song for very obvious reasons, I won't accept any other opinions on this.

if you reblog this know somewhere in the world there's a tiny ass girl blowing a kiss at you.

#Jean Kirstein headcanons #attack on titan #eren headcanons #annie leonhardt headcanons #jean headcanons #armin headcanons #armin arlert #ymir aot #ymir x historia #historia headcanons #yumihisu #aruani #eremika #mikasa ackerman #mikasa headcanons #mikasa hcs #red taylor’s version #taylor swift #swifties

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unironicallygrace · 2 years

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Commenting on Fanfic: A how-to guide for not being an asshole. Even unintentionally.

You’ve just read a fanfic that has left an indelible impression, and the siren song of the comment box is calling your name. It begs for you to send your opinion to the author… but should you? Are your thoughts really helpful or encouraging or even all that important?

Well… lets break it down! What do you want to say, and should you say it? And if you should, what should you say?

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I want to flail at them because their writing is amazing! My comment would be nothing but effuse praise and adulation.

Full speed ahead, captain! By all means! You post that comment! Write for days! There is not enough positive feedback in all the world if you’re a fanfic author. We drink that shit up like it’s the blood of the innocent.

And if you feel awkward about commenting on explicit fic, don’t fret. We’ve all been there. Don’t do anything that makes you feel uncomfortable, but if you want to say something positive about an explicit work, go for it! We wrote explicit fic. We know why you’re here.

Something to consider: While, “THIS IS AMAZING! FLAILING FOREVER! THANK YOU!” is an awesome compliment to receive, it isn’t the same as positive feedback. If you’d like to have a bigger impact on an author that you really enjoy, comment with something specific about their writing and how it moved you.

- “I liked the way you decribed <specific thing here>. It made me feel like I was part of the story.”

- “Your word choice here was amazing!”

- “ *cut and paste a small section of dialogue or action* This was my favorite part.”

This is not necessary by any means. Flail-comments are still the greatest thing ever, and are the best part of any writer’s day. It’s not a matter of one being better than the other. It’s about what sort of impact you want to have on the writer. Praise and flailing are ego and mood boosters and are sure to help us keep writing, and writing more of what you like. Specific positive feedback is a great way to help a writer find and improve their voice when writing.

And “thank you” is always nice. It’s good to acknowledge that fic writers do this on their free time, and let them know that you appreciate it.

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This fic is amazing and I want to encourage updates or ask when it will be updated!

Tread carefully here. While on one hand, you could simply be meaning to encourage a writer to keep writing, but I know a lot of writers (particularly who start publishing before they are finished) that get anxious over requests for updates. Be mindful of your wording, and be sure you tell the author that you’re enjoying the work. Keep it positive and encouraging.

Remember that fanfic authors have lives outside of writing fic. There may be some real world obstacles in the way of their fic writing, and guilting them about updates will not help. And in fact, it may hinder their ability to write. Not everyone responds well under pressure when it comes to creative outlets.

Something to consider: Pair your request with compliments! And avoid outright demands for updates.

Do: “This story is so amazing. I really love your pacing throughout the chapters. The suspense is amazing. I can’t wait for more! Thank you so much for writing!”

Don’t: “When are you updating? I’m dying here!” or “Update soon !!!”

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Eeek! This fic I really love has a typo/grammatical error! Can I tell the author in a comment?

Pause for a moment! We are now treading into the dangerous land of uninvited criticism. While your intentions are no doubt good, this could very very easily be taken the wrong way. Or just flat unwanted for whatever reason. This is criticism that is coming quite possibly from a total stranger. There are a few things to consider.

First, check the author’s notes on the fic itself. Do they state that it’s unbetaed and invite corrections? Some do! Myself included when I publish something that has been edited by no one but myself. I know I miss things. When this is the case, I always put an invitation for corrections in my author’s notes, and many other fic writers do the same. Or they put it in their author bio on their main page.

If you see no explicit invitation for corrections, do not do it. It’s as simple as that. I don’t care how egregious the errors are. It is quite simply not your place.

If you do see an invitation for corrections, a few steps are advised. First, go leave a comment on the fic. Make no mention of the corrections there. Just let them know you enjoyed it and thank them for their work. Then, send them a private message, not anonymously, with a gentle wording of the correction. Don’t do this in a comment that everyone can see. There’s no need to be exhaustive if you’ve caught a lot of errors. Sometimes just one or two corrections are enough to make an author go back through with a fine-toothed comb themselves. Then, thank them again in the private message and lay on a compliment or two there as well. Again… this is not their day job, nor are you their writing professor.

Do: In a private message, “Hi AmazingAuthorPerson! I absolutely loved your fic “Fic from the Pairing X.” You invited spelling corrections in your author notes, and I wanted to let you know that this word was mispelled here.” *copy/paste line where mispelling takes place* “Your work is incredible. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and share with us! Sincerely, PoliteReaderPerson.”

Don’t: In a public comment, “I found errors X, Y, Z, AA, BB, and CC.”

Something to do instead: If you’ve got a good eye for editing, and you’re really interested in helping out fanfiction writers, consider becoming a beta reader. I see requests for beta readers all the time, particularly from people writing in their second/third/fiftyseventh language, and some of the more established fandoms have lists of beta readers. Just know that this can sometimes mean forming a relationship with a writer that goes beyond just comments on their work. Part of what makes unsolicited corrections icky is that they’re coming from total strangers.

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The author did not appropriately tag something! Can I tell them?

This is a similar situation to the above scenario with corrections. Even though you may not feel like it be careful, especially with your wording.

First, consider if there’s something seriously misleading going on? Is the maturity rating wrong? Did they fail to tag triggering material that would have been important to you to know about for safety reasons?

If it truly is something serious, especially regarding triggering material, very gently tell them using the same method as for corrections. And remember that even though you might be upset, aiming that negativity at the author for what might be an honest mistake or just flat ignorance about tagging is not helpful in the long run.

Do: “Hi AmazingAuthorPerson! I really appreciate that you take the time to write fanfiction for our fandom. In your fic, “Character Has a Bad Day” there is a scene that contains XYZ triggering material, but the fic is not tagged as containing XYZ material. Would you please update your tags so that your readers can be aware if they need to be? Thank you again for your work! Sincerely, PoliteReaderPerson.”

Don’t: Flame or even shame them in a public comment. Or be rude or angry in the private message.

Regardless of what the author’s response is, move on with your life. You’re not the fandom police.

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Oh no! I just read a fic and I didn’t like the pairing/ending/a plot twist! I with they had done something else! I need to tell the author!

No, you don’t.

It’s as simple as that so let me repeat it.

No, you don’t.

Here is where we get into the most valuable tool in a fic-reader’s commenting arsenal.

Not Commenting.

Yes, it’s true! The option exists to just not comment. You can read something, not like it, and then move on with your life!

Odds are good the author chose to write what they did for a reason that is personal to them. The idea of changing canon, keeping to canon, shipping a pair, not shipping a pair, or whatever it was spoke to them and they wanted to explore it. Or it was a request from a friend! Regardless, let them do so in peace.

Or go write your take on the same pairing and write it how you think it should be done. I’ll be honest, I’ve read some fanfic where I’ve gone… “Yeah, I don’t know that I like that. I think I would like this better.” And then I go write it! Or at least bat the idea around awhile until it’s out of my system. Hell… isn’t that what fix-it-fics and non-canon-compliant actually is?

Do: Click the little “x” window. Go read a favorite fic you do like. Leave another positive comment for that author.

Don’t: Leave negative comments.

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That’s the ultimate takeaway here folks. Negative comments are not helpful to fic writers. Full stop. If you feel the author needs to know you didn’t like something, particularly if it has to do with what they chose to write about, or how they chose to portray a character/pairing, I would ask you this:

Why does the author need to know?

Why does the author need to know about your personal tastes in fandom/fanfiction? Especially if it doesn’t include what they are writing. They aren’t here to cater to you and your personal tastes. That is what fic commissioning is for. That’s what tagging is for. So we all can find what we want to enjoy.

So enjoy things. And let other people enjoy things. And most importantly, let authors enjoy writing the things they feel moved to write about.

This has been a public service announcement.

*vanishes in a puff of feathers and caffeine.*

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