Another problem with recommending My Immortal:
"You should read My Immortal. It's one of my favourite written works of all time! Oh, but trigger warnings for self harm, suicide, gore, violence, paedophilia, necrophilia, sexual harassment, consensual underage sex depicted in full (the first time being one of my fav scenes), gun violence, homophobia, biphobia, use of slurs (I'm pretty sure?), mild cannibalism (she's a vampire, duh), drug use (I think?), child abuse. Oh, and none of these topics are dealt with with any care or reverence for the seriousness of the subject material.
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Anyways I love it dearly and I think you'd really enjoy✨️"
(Btw tell me if I forgot any, cause I probably did)
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My Immortal- draw the squad
someone out there has probobly done this already, but if I haven't seen it, it didn't happen.
person with the mic: Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way
praying person: Doombledore
person in jail: Darkness (Ginny) Weasley
person crying on the floor: Willow
person getting money thrown at: B'loody Mary Smith
person throwing the money: Draco Malfoy
the... other person having a mental break down?: Vampire Potter
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Hey, so I never read My Immortal, but from what I hear the author hadn't actually read HP and wrote the fic based only on whatever movies were out at the time. It wasn't really a franchise she knew or cared that much about, but she did inject the fic with a lot of stuff that she actually was into, particularly certain bands popular in goth subculture and Hot Topic fashion. So what I wanna know is, does My Immortal contain references to Invader Zim, or does it come across like the author was probably an Invader Zim girlie? Cause GIR has always been a pretty inescapable Hot Topic staple, so if the author actually did shop there, she'd have to at least be aware of the little green dog on zillions of t-shirts. But for a lot of people, Invader Zim was the gateway drug for Hot Topic and goth fashion and music. Because Hot Topic was the only place that sold Zim merch. You couldn't find it at mainstream places like Walmart next to the Spongebob stuff.
So does the fic contain any explicit references to Zim, or any tells of Zimfluence like "LOL random XD rawr" humor?
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Chat GPT couldn’t write My Immortal
So the fun thing about Chat GPT is that is the worst writer I have ever interacted with, but it is bad in a special unique way that a full decade of over-involvement on a bad fanfic forum could not have prepared me for. I legitimately think My Immortal is better written in most ways (except technically obvs). Maybe I just hate the feeling of getting thru several paragraphs and realizing I’ve read basically nothing, idk, but at least My Immortal is interesting and sometimes things happen in it. I can’t even prompt Chat GPT into giving me outfit descriptions that are as good as Tara’s! I’ve tried!
So for shits and giggles I prompted Chat GPT to write like Tara. The best part was I phrased it like a question so it responded with “OMG!!111 I can totally do that for you!” But overall it did a pretty shitty job. I thought I would share anyway.
Part I
First I tried to get it to describe a character’s outfit, as mentioned. It started okish but without and of the characteristic bad grammar and spelling errors:
So, like, his outfit was, like, so edgy and gothic, it was like a total masterpiece of dark fashion. His go-to look was a black turtleneck, which hugged his rock-hard bod in all the right ways,
Chat GPT loves to just fixate on one aspect of the prompt you give it, so it couldn’t help but regurgitate a phrase I used in the most awkward way it could:
And OMG, let's talk about his pants, or should I say "pant-adjacent abomination"? LOL!
But eventually it became less Tara and more like a parody of gen Z:
The fabric, in all its darkness, flowed and draped in this super cool way, embracing the curves and angles of his legs. It was like fashion magic, I tell you!
But the best part? The lower part of the pants had all these intricate pleats and folds. They, like, embraced his leg structure and gave his outfit this rebellious and avant-garde vibe.
It was a fashion statement that screamed, "I'm unique, I'm fierce, and I'm ready to kick some serious ass!
The fabric had this rad texture, adding that extra touch of awesomeness to his ensemble. It was a fusion of practicality and personal style, showing the world that Gargoyle was not just a badass protector but a fashion icon in his own right.
As if Tara would ever use the word “avant-garde”. Or “vibe” for that matter.
It did end with my favorite touch tho:
It was a style statement that only a true goth queen like him could pull off with such dark grace.
OK Chat GPT, you got me there. It’s still wrong, but I like it.
Part II
Next I gave it a completely different prompt from something I’ve been working on. This one is like one of those Korean webtoons where people die and get reincarnated as their younger selves but Chat GPT took a couple creative liberties (surprisingly rare, but always a delight):
Wretch woke up, feeling soooo goffik and angsty. He sat up in his bed, his long, black hair cascading around his pale face. He looked around the room, which was still a dark and brooding place, just like he left it. But something was off. He felt strange, like he was trapped in a bad fanfiction crossover. He touched his long, silky hair, shocked to find it was no longer jet black but now a shimmering shade of silver. "What the hell?" he muttered to himself, his voice deep and mysterious.
He got out of bed and stood in front of the mirror, his black eyeliner perfectly applied. He gasped when he saw his reflection. Staring back at him was a much younger version of himself, no older than 10 years old. His face was chubby and innocent, so different from his usual brooding and menacing appearance. "How the f*** did this happen?" he mumbled, running his fingers through his hair, which was no longer slicked back but loose and flowing.
I’m not sure why getting younger changed his hair color, but ok. The My Immortal-ness of it is so obviously surface level tho. IDK if it is as clear when you ask it to pretend to be Stephan King or whatever, but here is it pretty clear it’s only picking up on a couple key traits.
The weird thing about this one is it must be getting some of its information about how to write this from parodies because the meta “jokes” don’t stop coming:
Was this some kind of twisted nightmare or a poorly written plot twist?
The realization hit him like a poorly spelled Avada Kedavra.
Umm, excuse me, but Tara would never.
One thing I will give it tho, its extremely awkward use of swears, especially from adult figures, is very good:
Valorous turned to face Wretch, a look of confusion on his face. "Wretch? What's going on? Why do you look like a f***ing child?
Wretch scowled at Valorous, his dark eyes narrowing. "I don't know what the f*** is happening, but Verity's here, and I need to find her. This could be our chance to finally end this endless war and... maybe even find love or some s***," he said, his voice laced with a hint of doubt.
This also ends on a pretty good note:
But seriously, what the
Yeah, I agree.
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