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babygirlgiles · 11 months
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I think my fic where Xander accidentally becomes a successful novelist (largely without realizing it) is the funniest idea I’ve ever had. This guy started writing little stories to remember their adventures in Sunnydale (his last line in Chosen about “how will anyone even know about this unless we tell them” burrowed itself into my little archivist brain and won’t let go) and posts them online. He unintentionally goes viral. He thinks someone named Simon N. Schuster is leaving him voicemails. He ends up on the New York Times bestseller list.
He doesn’t even realize that everyone else thinks the stories are fiction. Xander is out here writing autobiographical non-fiction but everyone else thinks he’s a weirdly dedicated author that’s really committed to maintaining a Lemony Snicket style pseudonym/persona for the narrator of his novel. There are “Who Is Xander Harris?” articles. No one can dig up much of anything on him because he lived his whole life in a town that got wiped off the map. He keeps rejecting requests for interviews because of his stage fright. At first this drives his publicist absolutely ballistic but it just adds the the air of mystery that’s drumming up book sales so she lets it go.
He only responds to questions over email and only ever responds “in character” as his “novel’s narrator” and this baffles everyone, only adding to the supposed mystery. It’s literally not even Xander actually writing the emails 95% of the time. It’s Dawn. She has appointed herself as “Xander’s representation” even though she doesn’t really know what being someone’s representation means. She printed business cards.
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For One More Hour or One More Day
Dukeceit Week Day 6: Horror/Comedy
Remus and Janus work in IT, and Remus never fails to make Janus' life a bit more exciting than it should be. Janus wouldn't have it any other way.
AO3 Link: [here]
Word Count: 1416
Warnings: swearing, typical Remus-levels of implied sexual content. 
@dukeceitweek <3
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[06032021 Network Node Down- 172.12.203.1 - Dee Why ]
Janus stared at the next ticket in his queue. He didn't even have to look at which tech wrote it. He just knew. He picked up his phone and dialed. 
“'Sup, DeeDee?" 
"Because they use ancient technology and refuse to upgrade, that's why." 
There was a beat of silence on the line. Janus didn't need to see him to know Remus was grinning like a maniac. 
“Oh, JD, I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about," Remus said finally. His voice was laced with barely-contained glee. 
“Uh-huh, sure," Janus replied dryly. He watched on his screen as an incoming call diverted from his in-use line. "Do you want to clarify for me, in excruciating detail, what, exactly, it is that broke this time? After all, if it's something I can fix from here, it would save the company an awful lot of money. And you know how I love saving this company money." 
“You don't feel like taking work calls either, huh?" 
“Ree, I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about."
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[06142021 CRITICAL | Device failed Availability and Latency checks - Dispatch Requested]
Janus sat in his truck for a few minutes, cross-checking the address across his e-mail, Slack, and the ticket itself. And yeah, they all matched. This wasn’t a repeat of that time Remus had changed the address on the ticket from 96th St. to 69th St. as a joke. 
(Janus had almost gotten mugged. He was still a little salty about that one.)
But this time, all the addresses matched. The problem was, he was parked in front of a restaurant instead of the usual office building, and that just didn’t seem right. He opened up Slack on his phone. 
Janus D’lyre: Are you sure the address is right?
Remus Rey: Yeah, it’s right.
Janus D’lyre: It’s a restaurant. 
Remus Rey:  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Janus D’lyre: Are you positive it’s right?
Remus Rey: I just write the tickets, Dee, I don’t do a background check. Just go in.
Janus sighed. He got out of his truck, hefted his tech bag over his shoulder, and went inside.
It was a nice restaurant. Very fancy, with a goddamn chandelier hanging over the front lobby. Field engineers weren’t required to dress in a suit and tie, but Janus did by habit- and he was glad he did, because he would feel like a horrible slob standing here in jeans and a polo.
“Can I help you?”
Janus looked over to the host, standing at the counter with a bright smile that only looked 52% faked.
“Yes,” Janus answered. “I’m here about the network issues?”
“Oh!” The host- his name tag read ‘Patton’- brightened up a bit. “Yeah! Remus is waiting for you, this way!”
“Remus is what?”
It was too late. Patton had already darted around the counter and off into the dining area. Janus sighed and, regretting every life choice leading up to this exact moment, followed.
Sure enough, Remus was waiting for him. Patton led him to a quieter area of the restaurant, where Remus was sitting at a table. Well, sitting was a generous way to phrase it, because in reality, he was tipped back on the rear two legs of the chair, combat boot-clad feet up on the table. He jumped up eagerly at the sight of Janus, and somehow managed not to fall backwards and crack his skull open. 
“Hey! You made it! Thanks, Pat!” 
“No problemo!” the host replied with a grin before heading back to the front counter. Janus briefly considered that he might be having a fever dream right now.
“Remus, what the fuck?” 
“Told you it was the right address!”
Janus glared. “That is not what I’m ‘what the fuck’-ing you about.”
“I mean, I’d prefer me fucking you-”
“Remus.”
“Well, you work so hard, DeeDee,” Remus said calmly, as if he wasn’t standing in the middle of the fanciest restaurant on this side of town, dressed in his usual tank-top and leather vest combo and probably mashing dirt into the plush red carpet, and definitely doing something that should get him fired. “I thought you could take a break, and we could have a nice dinner.”
No, he wasn’t doing something that should get him fired. He was doing something that should get them both fired. 
“You’re joking, right?”
“Kinda a lame joke.”
“Remus, you had me dispatched to a random address for a fake problem, to have dinner with you on company time?”
“‘Course not, who do you think I am?”
Janus did not dignify that with an answer. He turned to walk away.
“Jannie, wait!” Remus darted around the table to get in front of him. Janus stopped, and glared. “This is Roman’s restaurant! It’s not a random address, he’s an actual client.”
Janus’ glare lessened. Ok, sure, they did have some smaller commercial clients. And sure, Remus had mentioned his brother’s restaurant was using them as tech support now after a bad experience with a different company. But- “It’s still a fake problem, Remus.”
A shit-eating grin spread across Remus’ face. “Nah. I unplugged the router.”
Janus snorted in a totally dignified manner. “You didn’t.”
“I did.”
“...Well, I suppose… I’d better investigate the issue. Couldn’t be solved remotely, hardware problem and all.”
Remus held out a hand. Janus took it, and let Remus lead him back to the table.
“Great, cause I already ordered!”
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[06192021 Switch is problematic. Unable to get into the switch || Serial No. 111-0203-2018]
Janus very calmly cleared the ticket, set his work phone to away, pulled out his personal phone, and sent Remus a text. 
Jannie-D: I know you’re upset I didn’t let you fuck me last night. Get over it. 
Remster: i will not 
Virgil Caligo: yo are u and remus like good?
Janus D’lyre: We had a small argument last night. Why?
Virgil Caligo: [image attached]
Janus sighed. Virgil had sent him a screenshot of a ticket update Remus had just posted.
[06292021 Ticket #00679 Update.] ‘The device is not only unresponsive to simple ping requests, but is being kind of a jerk about it. 100% package loss, a tragedy. Device was confirmed to be connected to a working power source, but they all say that, so who can really be sure. Dispatch requested, please confirm maintenance window. Actually showing up would be great, too.’
Janus hastily typed a message to Virgil. 
Janus D’lyre: Did you take that one?
Virgil Caligo: ya. logan didnt see dw
Janus D’lyre: Thanks. You can transfer it to me, I’ll take care of it. 
Janus leaned back in his chair and rubbed his temples. What a comedy of errors this day had been. It was the last time he’d forget he and Remus had a date night planned, that’s for sure. 
Remus sighed when a priority ticket popped up in his queue. He was having a grand time ignoring his other queues in favor of sculpting a rather elaborate dick out of the green Play-Doh he kept at his desk, but he really did not feel like getting bitched out by Logan for missing a priority ticket. Grumbling to himself, he stuffed the Play-Doh back into its tub and opened the ticket. 
[06292021 Ticket #00679 Update.] ‘Likely a hardware bug. Possible remote fix with reset and reconfigure. Device information missing from online records. Please check file and update record.’ 
Fuck. Remus hated pulling files. What a pain. He trudged his way upstairs to the records room, which was always dark and depressing because nobody ever went there because who the fuck used physical paper in 2021?
But when he unlocked the door and pushed it open, the light was on. And every surface was covered in flowers.
“What the fuck?” Remus asked the flowers. They didn’t answer. But, at the small desk near the door, there was a stack of green boxes from his favorite bakery- and on top of that, he saw an envelope with his name on it. Eagerly, Remus tore open the envelope. 
Inside, he found a single sheet of Janus’ fancy stationery paper, the kind with the little holographic snakes along the edge that he only ever used for special occasions. And on that paper, one single sentence, penned in Janus’ elegant, flourishy handwriting: Ok, you can fuck me tonight.
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[06292021 Ticket #00679 Update.] ‘I take it back, the device is no longer being a jerk, and I love the device very much.’ 
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lilkermit14 · 3 years
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Jay is from the show Red Widow and unfortunately he's not really known 😅 At first I wanted to ask for Jack but I had no idea of ​​the details for the story... Maybe he had to leave reader because of his job, but he loves her too much and decides to come back and find out that she is pregnant (a baby girl) I know, it's not original but i can't imagine anything else for this charming cowboy 🥺
Whole (Jack Daniels x Fem!reader)
Notes: Idk why I struggled so hard to write this fic but here she is in all her glory........yay. Not as smutty as per usual to prove I’m not a total whore but here ya go
Summary: after your life is threatened unbeknownst to you, whiskey takes it upon himself to protect you the only way he thinks he can––by leaving you. but what his cowboy brain doesn’t for see, is that he’s doing both of you more damage than good especially after a happy little accident. 
warnings: brief description of smut and aftercare (like the La Croix of smut but still no minors), ANGSTTTTTTT, rOUGH, unplanned pregnancy, a slap, and a happy ending
Jack should have known the first time he wasn’t meant to have this kind of happiness—the kind where one could always have someone to return home to at the end of the day. No, he couldn’t have it with his late wife and he couldn’t have it with you either.
The human trafficker had somehow gotten access to personal statesmen information, because he had found out about you. Had your name. Had shown him pictures of you. Had shown that men were waiting at your doorstep if Jack didn’t back down now.
Thankfully, they were able to stop the man before it came to any of that—but it broke something in Jack. He couldn’t have another woman he loves die like his wife. He didn’t know if he could handle it. You didn’t even know about Jack’s real job, all you knew was that he was the CEO of a distillery and you never asked questions about that. Maybe it was easier keeping it like that, as Jack realized the only way to keep you safe was to leave you.
He had picked a night, picked a place to head out to after it was all over, and planned out the note. He had made love to you one last time before leaving—slowly savoring the way your skin felt pressed against him and the way it felt to have your walls drag against him when he thrusted, and finally stilled deep inside you. He made sure to take care of you before he left, clean with all sore muscles rubbed out and well hydrated—comfortable as you could be. You fell asleep so easily it somehow made Jack more guilty for what he thought was the right thing. He stayed longer than he should have after he wrote the note and got dressed, bag packed by the door, just staring at you, attempting to memorize the sound of your soft noises as you slept and the way your naked body looked covered by the sheets and pale moonlight. It was the most beautiful scene he had ever seen and wanted it to be the clearest memory he had of you. Tears sprung in his eyes, thinking that this is the only thing he will ever have of love—memories. He kissed your forehead one last time before walking out of your life forever.
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Jack hasn’t felt alive since, the toll of leaving you behind eating at him more than he ever thought it could. He’s changed in a way and everyone knows it—they see the way he moves or speaks now and know something has changed. He just goes through the motions of living with no actual life in his eyes to prove he is alive. He throws himself into his work working through cases and bad guys more efficiently than ever, but it doesn’t distract him from losing you—not when he lies awake at night crying and missing you.
Everyone around him changes too—Tequila doesn’t tease him anymore and walks around him like they’re threading through a room full of broken glass. Ginger does more medical evaluations—ones that are less to do with physical health and more to do with mental health. Most of all—champ acts different, “son—“
Jack pauses from exiting the debriefing room after giving Champ a status report and picking up another case, “I’m wondering if you should take a few days off from wo—“
“No,” Jack says curt and without a single space for bargaining. Champ is stiff when Jack looks at him, “I know you're wallowing over that girl.”
“I did what I had to do and I’m going to continue doing it.” Jack reminds him, staying steadfast in his decision. Champ shakes his head, “and it’s tearing you apart—statesmen get threats like that all the time Whiskey and they don’t go deserting their relatives or loved ones—“
“Well they're not me,” Jack states his stare is cold as he looks down at Champagne, “I can’t lose another person like that again.”
“You’ve lost her by leaving her,” his words cut through him and he knows it’s the truth, but it’s not something stubborn ol Jack is willing to withstand. Jack turns to leave again, “I’ll be off on the case.”
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You can’t help but pick up one of the sandwiches from the various food carts before they go out. It’s too tempting after standing for hours on your feet with a six month old pregnancy belly on your front—one you’re rubbing as you enjoy the taste of the mozzarella, pesto, and tomato together. The father of your child disappeared before you could even tell him—fitting considering you never grew up with a father in your house. So it has just been you and your baby girl, and well your best friend and business partner that was walking towards you now, joking “are the sandwiches up to your standards?”
“I needed something to eat after four hours of standing and being pregnant Travis,” you contest, taking another big bite. He shrugs with some sort of understanding, looking over the trays of food with you and approving them before they go off. Travis randomly starts, “I don’t think we should try to have this client again.”
You turn, finishing your sandwich with an eyebrow raise, “why? Did someone from the company say something to you—“
“Not that—although I was worried when the CEO invited his childhood priest—” he notes sending off the last tray, “I get bad vibes from the company itself.”
You think about it for a moment agreeing that something was fishy about the way a family-owned soap company was able to afford such a lavish event—something was a little off. You nod, “maybe not—I don’t want to get too close to a company that's a front. I doubt they would want us back because they’ve fired every event planner they’ve had before and the CEO’s wife already complained that the flower garnishes weren’t the correct shade of maroon.”
“We just have to finish the job then and we’ll be scott free” Travis mutters checking his watch, “just a couple hours left—what could go wrong?”
As though you were in a badly made comedy, right as Travis says that you hear clatter and gunshots come from the main event area, “......I spoke too soon didn’t I?”
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Vincent Marsulio had tried to make a run for it once he realized his plans to run a million dollar drug business had gone to shit—I mean a soap company as a front? Really? Jack had dodged gunfire, tequila and the new agent rum covering him—allowing him to use his lasso to drag Vincent into Statesmen custody.
The scene was under control now—with agents and Ginger’s crime scene investigators gathering follow up information and evidence. Jack was just there to make sure the scene stayed secure and that no witnesses ran off that were revealed to be involved. Scanning the crowds of those being interviewed is when he saw you.
He should have known you were here—he should have seen your touches in the flower displays, the food selections, the drapery, and the table cloths. You were a party planner, he should have made note of that. You’re the same as the images in his mind—the memories that flash through his mind whenever he gets a flicker of your perfume or hears a laugh that sounds like yours. The only thing that's changed about you is your stomach—there's a sizable baby bump there, and he mumbles to himself “no…”
It had been seven months—seven months since he left you. It had to be his. He left you pregnant. As though you heard the gears turning in his head you turn and make eye contact with him—freezing in your place. He has to talk to you now, but you make efforts to move away, running towards a stairwell to get away from him as he shouts your name.
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Despite being seven months pregnant you make a good chase, ducking down the stairwell and moving as fast as your swollen ankles will carry you while he shouts for you behind you. You can’t see him right now, he left, he doesn’t deserve this. Your condition must somewhat get the best of you as you end up stumbling on a landing—slowing down enough for him to catch up. You knew it was futile after all he ran faster than you even when you weren’t pregnant.
He grabs your wrist before you can go any farther, pulling you towards his body—only for you to wack a big slap to the side of his face, “how dare you—you asshole.”
“You're pregnant?” He asks quick as hell, and you frown still jabbing hits at him, “Why else am I so fucking big dickhead.”
He pulls you closer in an effort to restrain you from hitting him and from running away at any point, “is it mine?”
You had been avoiding looking at his face the entire portion of the ordeal—not wanting to see the face of the man that abandoned you. But you end up looking anyway and feel the tears spring up in your eyes. Despite the fact he left you you still feel love for him in your heart. You can’t lie to him, “it is.”
“Sugar, I’m—“ he breathes out, struck in the moment by every error he’s made in the past few months knowing he should have stayed, “I’m so sorry, please let me explain why I did what I did.”
You don’t respond just letting him speak at his own will as he settles you two down to sit on the steps of the stair. Jack tells you about his job, his wife, and the scare he had that just accumulated to him feeling like he had to leave to keep you safe. You had known about his late wife but none of the details about the affair and understood just why he was so afraid—but he still acted like an idiot. Head in hands, “why did you keep everything hidden from me Jack, I mean you lied to me about your job––no wonder I was able to find you after I found out, I was stuck looking for Jack Daniels brewery CEO instead of Jack Daniels statesmen.”
You got him there, “I should have––everyone told me I should have told you.” Silence emanates between the two of you, “I know sorry doesn’t make up for all I did––I don’t know if I can ever make up for what I did, but give me a chance because I want to be there for you and the kid–I love you sweet pea.”
Tears spring from your eyes, “I love you too Jack, we’ll figure it out I promise.”
Jack pulls you into his arms whispering what sounds like a thousand thank you’s for you and the girl in your belly, “it’s a girl you know.”
“A girl…” Jack trails off with a smile gleaming on his face and some unspoken joy in his eyes, that shifts into something of deep regret, “I was almost like him I don’t ever wanna be like him”
“You won’t.” you state firm and jack pulls away to cup your face and wipe away the errant tears still streaming down your face, “can I kiss you darling?”
“Please,” and with that the lips you have missed meld on to yours. After months, both alone and apart, both you and Jack feel a sense of security that everything will be alright––that your little family is finally whole.
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I’m sorry that its bad....
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miraculouscontent · 3 years
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(miraculous asks)
Anonymous said:
Oh My Gosh!!!! I was just thinking about Party Crasher and man I hate how they had Ladybug get captured for the men to save! It's a continuous thing you see in media: strong heroic woman gets put in peril so that the men can shine. I didn't even realize it until you said it! I get that it was probably meant to be a "role reversal" of Chat always getting kidnapped or brainwashed for Ladybug to save, but the fact that this is the "guys' episode" it read like "well damn, we can't have the guys be strong if a girl is in the way; let's have the girl get captured so the boys can prove their worth by rescuing her!".
At least in Sandboy, Ladybug was still competent and came up with the plans, but this?! It makes me sick, and it's all too easy to fall into these traps; even Kim Possible did it! In my magical girl story, the heroine does get put in a magical coma and require someone to bail her out, but it's her female friends AND her boyfriend who save her, so it's not just a girl being weakened so a boy can be powerful, especially since said boy actually does a minority of the work required to save her; the focus is on the female characters so it's her girl friends who do most of it. I still ended up scrapping that side plot anyway, and do you know why? Because regardless of who saved her, I still didn't want my female protagonist to be put in distress at all due to the unfortunate implications! Needing help in a fight? Sure. But outright being captured or kidnapped? Nah fam.
I was honestly thinking about that when the first episode came out. Like, they could’ve just had Marinette NOT SHOW UP in time so the guys take care of things, which at least gives more of a message that Paris wouldn’t go to hell just because Ladybug is a little late or something.
And yeah, the “boys squad episode so gotta toss the girl out” is... sigh.
Anonymous said:
I think the writers were trying to show Chat angsting to show his regret instead of an actual apology. Still doesn't explain why Aeon didn't bring up her death afterwards. Did Olympia delete that from her memory banks?
I guess? :|
I don’t know why Chat can’t just apologize without fishing or trying to earn sympathy. Like JUST SAY YOU’RE SORRY, DAMMIT.
Anonymous said:
If you haven't read Maribat, then you won't regret it. I am not in the DC universe but I started reading it and WOW. Literally every single time Marinette is a badass queen and gets her complete revenge and is actually happy! Even if you absolutely love Lukanette (which I have nothing against) you should totally try it.
Appreciate the comment, but I find it hard to ship other Marinette ships outside of Lukanette. Ivanette is a very loose exception and it’s not like I ship it hard or anything.
Anonymous said:
Despite not being a Lukanette shipper I love you. Why? Because you amazing, so right in literally everything and I love you <33
gkdfjgfdngjkfdg thank you
bat-anon said:
The NY Special made it so that Max is literally the only Black/Brown kid that doesn’t exist to make Love Square happen and that just makes me hate it even more.
I wish you didn’t make me have this realization because I hate it.
At least Delmar existed in the New York special???? I guess???? I dunno, I’m trying here, I don’t recall him doing anything love square centric.
Anonymous said:
I honestly don't mind Alix's outfit as Bunnix! I feel like it fits her, plus she's an adult so its not much of a problem, not saying it can't be improved however. I DO have issues with the designs for the underage girls outfits however....those are very sus
Yeah, the problem I take with Bunnyx’s is that it’s a bodysuit. If there was just more definition, like having actual boots, I wouldn’t complain as much.
Anonymous said:
I actually just really like the idea of the new bee being a genuinely nice person who becomes friends with Marinette. Not exactly close friends (since I like the idea of friendly working relationships without actual personal stakes in them). I also enjoy the idea of the new bee having some small animosity for Chat Noir- just because their personalities aren't the greatest mix. I also think that it would make sense for the miraculous of subjection to be at odds with the miraculous of destruction
Full agreement but we know how much the writers are resistant to have characters go against Chat.
Anonymous said:
Not gonna lie the scene where the girl squad gets akumatized almost makes it seem like they got akumatized on purpose, similar to Manon in Puppeteer 2(although she was a little kid who was probably just imagining she could enact revenge). And why can't they have a uniformed design, like they're a team but wear different colors, similar to the Sailor Senshi(like, Alya's the leader and wears orange, Rose wears pink, Alix wears green, Juleka wears purple, and Mylene wears yellow). It's so boring.
Mood.
Not to mention that WE ARE SO TIRED OF THEM GETTING AKUMATIZED INTO THE SAME AKUMA.
AT LEAST PALETTE SWAP THEM.
Anonymous said:
Relating to the Didn't Need Burrows and Treatment of Marinette bingo cards, have you considered making one for whenever the show fails at girl power? It could say things like "sexualized frames of teenage girls" "boy tells girl what to do" "girls don't get to keep Miraculouses", and "girls are forced to apologize whenever a situation goes wrong". And in the center, it could say "Don't show this to your daughter!"! Lol! What do you think?
lol I feel like I have enough cards, otherwise I would.
Anonymous said:
I saw another post that talked about Miraculous New York, and they theorized that it was rewritten to focus more on Marinette and Adrien in order to get viewers invested in the Love Square again after more people started to lose faith in the ship. Do you think that's a possibility?
I think so. The whole special comes off as trying to reassure love square shippers because of how hard it goes for him. I cut out Marinette’s crushing and it cuts like 18% from the episode, meaning it’s even worse than Season 3 (15%).
Anonymous said:
Maybe the point of the [break-up episodes] is meant to discourage people from shipping Lukanette and Adrigami too?
Spoiler alert: didn’t work.
Anonymous said:
Are we not gonna talk about how in one ask, somebody legit said "(long dreamy sigh) Viperion"? Like same.
RIGHT????
Same.
Anonymous said:
Ml fandom: I hate how Ladybug keeps secrets from Chat Noir! He sacrifices himself for her all the time and she never appreciates him for it! He has EVERY right to get mad at her!!
ML Fandom when Chat Noir does the same thing in the special: ....Wow Ladybug was way to harsh on Chat Noir!! She doesn’t appreciate him at all!! Shes so mean to him!
:|
i hate it
Anonymous said:
Idk if it's just me, but a majority of the fandom is split in two; it's never one or the other "MARINETTE SUCKS AND IS A HORRIBLE PERSON GUARDIAN MARY SUE WHO SEXUALLY HARRASSES" or "ADRIEN SUCKS HE WAS NEVER ON MARINETTES SIDE" but im personally on the latter, but not to that extreme. i hate videos bashing marinette and then never acknowledge adriens faults
Yeah, the fandom gets more divided as time goes on because of the writers trying to increase the drama/tension.
Anonymous said:
I am PERSONALLY offended they gave Luka the snake miraculous. Snakes have such a negative connotation. A lot of people insult Lila by calling her a SNAKE. And now those ML writers DARE insult the best character in ML?! HOW DARE THEY!?????
I adore Viperion but I agree that I first heard he was getting snake and was like, “BUT MY BOI???”
It gets awkward too because other animals like the pig have negative connotations, like how Daizzi basically means “idiot/stupid” and they’re giving it to the freaking blond character, really???
Anonymous said:
I think that Ivanette would be even better if Marinette was plus-sized character.
I see why you’d think that. I just disagree because then it turns the ship into “let’s pair the heavyset characters together because they heavyset.”
Anonymous asked:
On the topic of romance failures and general series salt, my main issue right now is how the series puts so much focus on romantic relationships while failing to consider other levels of relationship or what they affect.
On the L² front I can completely buy Marinette being in love with Adrien. Most of the time she genuinely wants him to be happy and is ready to take a step back for him, however much it hurts. But in terms of romantic love? It. Is. A. Crush! But if we step back from the formula, what is there left between them? Their civilian relationship is held together by a “comedy” of errors and without that there is surprisingly little left. Well, besides two “best friends” desperately trying to make it happen because somehow they lost their individual characters and instead of being friends became matchmakers?
I too like Luka and Marinette together. Their relationship is pretty nice to see and all. But sometimes it feels like it happens in a dimension of its own, like the writers want to make the endgame clear in that the “sideships” can be easily cut out of the big “how they got together”-recaps. I especially miss reactions from and interactions with Juleka. She is Luka’s sister, Marinette’s friend, and IIRC someone aware of if not even a bit player in the great shipping game. She is in a prime position to step up and bring progress on all fronts: She can talk with Luka. She can either give Marinette helpful pointers or go “All in or nothing”, i.e. trying to make Marinette get her Adrien-feelings in order as she does not want her brother to get less than Marinette’s full heart. Similarly, she can counteract “friendly acts” and stop humiliating situations from escalating, or she herself can escalate them in the “All or Nothing”-scenario. Yet she remains basically a background character who gets little attention from the camera and almost no “non-focus identity”
As for Kagami, I may be too biased. *Any* positive Kagami/Marinette relationship is to me what Lukanette is to you. So naturally I have lots of opinions when it comes to her role ;) But can I just say that Adrien/Kagami is the weirdest ship for me? They have a few cute scenes and I think if they’d spend a lot more time together, they’d do each other good but I don’t know how they work. “No Hesitation” Kagami would lob Adrien’s head straight off with all his…everything. If we are meant to take Adrien’s love for LB seriously (and I guess we have to because how in the name of sanity is any form of the stated endgame gonna work otherwise???), how does Kagami fit into that picture as a girl who can hardly express emotions while Adrien is the definition of a  guy who can not stop flirting or goes for all kinds of romantic gestures? Sometimes it feels more like a “social fit” and “Mommy/Daddy approves” kind of deal which is quite the shame! Normally I like these kind of relationships in fictions but they need a solid underlining or good development. One they haven’t and one the series has not been giving to anyone so far.
Yeah, the whole thing with the love square versus side ships ends up feeling extremely forced. Keeping Luka away and forcing Adrien into Lukanette episode are the biggest giveaways, basically a big fat sign that says, “We know Marinette would forget that Adrien exists if she hung around Luka for more than five minutes.”
AND YEAH, KAGAMI WOULDN’T PUT UP WITH ADRIEN’S GARBAGE. I liked Adrimi but it’s definitely more flawed than Lukanette.
Anonymous said:
Watched your opinion on the New York special and I agree with you. It was mediocre at best. It could have been something nice, like if they added Kagami and Luka, for example, so that we can get a bit of development from the new couples on season 4, so that it doesn’t feel rushed when they start dating on season 4. It could also be a good opportunity to see the other temporary heroes one last time, since Marinette technically has the miracle box.
They could have had an epic fight with the American Superheroes, maybe even giving the bee miraculous temporally to Aeon or Jess so that we didn’t need to see their awful and uncreative superheroes designs. It would have been nice if they made something more useful other than being characters that believe that Adrien and Marinette are “Meant to be”, like, we already got a ton of these already, couldn’t we get someone who didn’t feel something about this ship? It has so much wasted potential that I don’t even know how to start. Do you agree with anything I said?
I agree, yes. They could’ve easily thrown Luka/Kagami into the mix (or had Marinette/Adrien stay behind while flipping perspectives or something; flawed but they could make it work).
Anonymous said:
I'm rereading ladybugout and wow... the moment of silence after "chat deserves that kiss" gets me every time. Everyone stopping and just staring because wow he really just said that
Me whenever Chat Noir opens his mouth in the show.
Anonymous said:
I saw the Backwarder post you just talked about and yes, it is so totally ridiculous. They forgot another thing, though. Miraculous isn't just about comedy, action, and romance, it's about embarrassing Marinette. And the fact that almost everyone in the comments was acting like the medicine scene at the end was funny was just stupid and saddening to hear or read about, because it shows how people have been conditioned to hate and rally against Marinette without even realizing it. Granted, there was one lady who said it reminded her of her husband, so I guess that's okay(but all it means is that Adrien will be Marinette's--aka "his lady's"--husband like eeerrrgh!). And there was one person who said they liked that Juleka's advice because "If you're friend isn't willing to commit crimes for your happiness, is she even your friend?". But everyone else liked the ending. And I don't get the person who said we got "Subtle progression with Adrien and Marinette". We're right where we started.
Weeeeell, I understand the “comedy, action, romance” comment because all of those basically boil down to embarrassing Marinette or invalidating her. Comedy and romance goes without saying while action involves her dealing with Chat “Nice Guy” Noir.
Anonymous said:
Is it just me, or does Snow White's "Red Shoes" form look a lot like Marinette. I know, I know, Marinette is Chinese and Red Shoes is Korean, but they still look strikingly similar. They're bodies are really similar, too, but that might just be because animation tends to use eerily similar body types for its female characters on a whole. It's sad and it makes me think of how cute Marinette would be if she was fat. I also think Snow White was cuter than Red Shoes but that's kind of the point.
I think it’s the body type thing but that’s just a guess since I didn’t immediately make the connection.
I agree that Snow White is cuter.
Anonymous said:
Am I the only one who's never liked "destined to fail" characters? Basically this is when characters aren't allowed to be good at/succeed at something or else the whole universe will somehow fall apart. Think of how in The Amazing World of Gumball, if Richard gets a job, the world will be in complete and utter chaos. So he's better off as a lazy, bumbling dad. In Phineas and Ferb, Candace is always trying to rat out her younger brothers but if she gives up or succeeds something bad will happen.
TV Tropes put it the best: "Not only is she not allowed to succeed, but she's also not allowed to stop trying!"(conveniently under the Cosmic Plaything trope). I just don't like it because it shows that the writers just want to lead them on with the promise of success then snatch it away at the last minute. And now we're back at Miraculous Ladybug, where Marinette is humiliated every time she doesn't sign a gift that's for Adrien, and yet when she does, everyone in Paris DIES. Except for...HIM.
you: *mentions Candace*
me: [a million awful flashbacks]
Also, yeah, it’s so hard to watch, especially in “Chat Blanc” because it’s like, “Oh, you want to give a gift to a boy and you dArEd to use your powers for it? Congrats, but everyone else is DEAD and you can hang out with him as much as you want! You’re welcome!”
Anonymous said:
I think it’d become a “faintest idea blackout card”rather than a bingo.
(referring to my “Faintest Idea” card)
We’re getting there.
darkmoonravewolf said:
I hate that everything on that list could happen and very likely will
(referring to “Didn’t Need Burrow”)
Yeah, and it makes me sad :’)
Anonymous said:
That’s be real here. Miraculous ladybug is not a show about Marinette; Miraculous Ladybug is a show about Adrien. Adrien is the real main character.
Notice that when they focused on Adrien in “Lies,” they only cut back to Marinette (IN A SCENE THAT CAN’T EXIST) to have her fawn over him.
Anonymous said:
Is it just me or are Lady Noire's eyes huge? Maybe it's just the green but they seem way bigger than Marinette's
I’m not sure, but considering Rena’s facial structure being different from Alya’s, it wouldn’t surprise me.
asexual-individual said:
With what you've said about Adrien lacking a reason to exist outside of development for Marinette and Gabriel, I have to wonder how different the show would be if Chat Noir's identity was also kept from the audience. Adrien would still be there as himself, but he only gets as much focus as Alya, and Chat Noir's identity is treated as a mystery (a Tuxedo Mask type mystery, but a mystery all the same).
I see what you mean but it might cause Adrien+Chat’s screentime to feel excessive once the reveal happens, because suddenly their screentime gets combined and it’s like, “oh wow so the combined screentime is his then.”
Anonymous said:
I know that the kwami's really only exist so we can hear our protagonists' thoughts outloud (like what the Coraline movie did with adding Wybie to the story). But honestly, what's the point in having magical gods in the jewelry if you're not going to do anything with them?
Marketing with “cute” side characters.
guisendisguise said:
It's funny, originally, I had shipped Marichat in the sense that Chat and Mari start hanging out and both fall in love with the other's supposedly less perfect, more real selves. Then Luka was introduced and I ended up putting both lukanette and marichat at the same level. Then S3 hit and killed any love I had for Marichat. The writers themselves killed the Love Square for me. At this point, it's very clear they are living in a delusion where the Love Square could ever work narratively without Deus ex Machina or Deus Lo Vult (God wills it). Basically, they've gone past scraping the bottom of the writing skills barrel and are now shoulder deep in the hole they dug thru the bottom of said barrel. I'd like to point out that the bottom of the barrel is writing poop and now they're digging thru the useless plastic landfill the barrel was sitting on top of
Uggggh, yeah. Any appreciation I could’ve had for Marichat died in “Weredad.” I already didn’t like Adrien/Chat and then “Weredad” just showed his complete lack of... well, ANYTHING.
cosmostellar said:
Honestly feels like MLBs writers are going based off the "JUST IMAGINE EVERY POC CHARACTER YOU'RE WRITING AS WHITE" instead of, yknow, fleshing them out while developing them also in the context of their cultures and giving them these little things that the audiences who belong to the same minority can identify with. I don't mean "have Marinette walk in qipao 24/7" bcs thats just... bad on its own but man, /some/ casual acknowledgments of her culture would be nice.
Reading the sentence “JUST IMAGINE EVERY POC CHARACTER YOU'RE WRITING AS WHITE” physically hurts me.
Anonymous said:
Ok, I've always thought that Chloe was robbed of redemption (they held it in front of us, but then jerked it away while Astruc says, "She's irredeemable! We thought she was redeemable, but she wasn't :)!" What are your thoughts! Also, I just recently found your blog and I really like it :)
Thank you!
But I have no sympathy for bully characters, so I didn’t want Chloe redeemed. Maybe I’m still bitter about my own bullying experience, but I just wasn’t here for Marinette being forced to forgive Chloe, which is basically what they did until they backpedaled.
The time spent on her was wasted though and that I can agree on.
Anonymous said:
Me: Writes a 1k rant about how the tweet makes no sense as the "mistake" is about motivation and not the critical plot. Also me: Remembers that in MLB the plot always comes back to the romance. Finally me: Wonders why he got involved with the series post-S3 when all the red flags were already everywhere.
Mistakes were made.
Anonymous said:
I'm semi-catching up on miraculous, and- is it my impression, or does Kagami rebel against her mother more in few episodes she's in (even though her mother's influences on her seem to be stronger in general), than Adrien in the entire show? I /know/ that I don't want to see Adrien free himself from his father w/ the desperation I want to see Kagami free herself from her mother and realize that the standards she's held up to are unhealthy and too strong.
Yeah, I’m way more invested in Kagami than Adrien.
Anonymous said:
Am I the only one confused about whether the staff stopped caring and half-asses the series or cares too much and over-produces the hell out of it?
Nah. It really feels like they secretly hate the love square so they have to keep forcing it.
Anonymous said:
ngl I haven't watched any new episodes since Chameleon and I've been getting all that Miraculous News via tumblr to avoid that Marinette Brand Second Hand Embarrassment™
Understandable.
Anonymous said:
If they aired the 6th one first WHAT WHAT HAPPENED TO LEAD UP TO THIS???? WE ARE ON SEASON FOUR WITH TWO SPEICALS, GETTING A THIRD, AND ANY DEVELOPMENT WE HAD HAS GONE BACKWARDS, SUCKED, OR STATUS QUO YO-ED AWAY!!!!! HOW THE HECK DO WE GET ADRIENETTE FROM FOUR SEASONS OF NOTHING?????? I USED TO FANGIRL AT THIS NOW I AM TERRIFIED.
Answer: We don’t get Adrienette. We get forced love square and rushed/fake “development” of it while being constantly confused as episodes air out of order.
Anonymous said:
im sorry But adrienette has been suck in this limbo of one sidedness for 3 seasons. neither of them have become closer, neither of them have confided in one another, but somehow people still ship it? at least luka was able to make a move on marinette lol adrien still repeats the same boring “shes just a friend” line. adrienette is a really boring ship.
lol don’t apologize, you’re absolutely right.
nahte123456 said:
Very minor bit of salt to throw to the pile, but can this show just decide on how strong Miraculous holders are? Yes it's a cartoon and not the focus but in the Furious Fu episode we literally get Ladybug dodging lighting and then Su who seems mostly human and is at least slower then Fu was outspeeding her. It's distracting trying to figure out what is and isn't a serious threat in this show.
The deciding factor in the strength of the miraculous holders is “whatever works for the plot.”
Anonymous said:
At this point the only thing I'm excited for concerning Miraculous Ladybug is when it gets a reboot in like, a decade with actually competent writers
Best case scenario is that Zag goes bankrupt and Disney/Netflix picks up the series and gives it to competent people.
Problem is that the love square has been ruined so badly for me that even a “good” version of it wouldn’t be something I’d be into, but still.
Anonymous said:
Honestly, the problem with having all of Marinette's mistakes result in huge disasters (ex. Feast), is that is gives off the impression that teenagers aren't allowed to make mistakes. This show clearly doesn't like giving second chances to the protagonist, so why would life give one to you? Am I right, kids?
Exactly.
Marinette makes mistakes and suddenly the world is ending.
Anonymous said:
If your gonna watch the show, at least pirate the episodes so the writers dont get your support
Don’t worry, I have no interest in financially supporting the show.
Anonymous said:
ml in a nutshell: wasted potential, then giving themselves more potential, only to turn the rest of it into a dumpster fire
Yup, that’s it.
Anonymous said:
u know, when My Little Pony, Sofia The First, and fanfiction carries out character development, respect, romance, and the main plot better than the original show, especially when the shows mentioned above are aimed more at little girls and the original show is aimed at slightly older audiences... somethings wrong
*sigh*
And then it’s like--people will excuse the show because “it’s a kids’ show” and then I’m just “okay then, why are there actually good kids’ show?”
If shows get a pass for being for children then all childrens’ shows should just not try and be garbage since the standard is so low.
Anonymous said:
ive seen some cool fic ideas/concepts/reviews that made me think: ml could use so much more looking into how a character thinks in some situations. one fic i read had alya in chameleon (i know its been forever since the ep came out but hey) not question lila cus she thought: "hey, lb wouldnt befriend a bad person" w and added a plot line of lila making her think lb was cobsidering replacing rena rougue. like, just a few lines to make them seem better pls?
YES. Like, show us characters’ perspectives and why they’re rolling with the facts that they’re rolling with, otherwise they just end up looking like jerks.
We sort of got it in “Ikari Gozen” with Kagami but of course it was just to make Marinette look bad.
Anonymous said:
You know I’m honestly considering making reviews of this show and if I do I could create hour long rants about the show just from that mans twitter.
Yeaaaaaah, once you had in the Twitter stuff, it just becomes, “okay so this is going to add another hour or two then.”
Anonymous said:
Okay one thing that bothers me is how plain marinette's suits are despite being a DESIGNER. Her multimouse suit it just blocks of color and her ladynoir suit is just grey with green lines. I think the lines are supposed to represent actually clothes. Like the limes on the calves are supposed to make it look like boots but why not actually GIVE her boots. (Right, because she has to have a skintight suit unlike the boys who get some layers.)
THE SHEER DISRESPECT OF HAVING THE FASHION DESIGNER WEAR SUCH A PLAIN SUIT.
It also goes to show who really designs here, like oh, interesting, the girls get skin-tight simplistic bodysuits and the boys gets all the cool stuff--
Anonymous said:
I heard some people in my class saying they watched Miraculous Ladybug for the first time, and they were saying how good it was, and I was like: 'Oh you poor fools. You have NO idea what it's truly like.'
You know what they say: ignorance is bliss.
bat-anon said:
Isn’t it INTERESTING how in Frozer, Luka understands that Marinette is torn between her crushes and continues to support her even though he knows she probably won’t chose him, and in the exact same episode Chat Noir refuses to help save the city because Ladybug told him AGAIN that she wasn’t romantically interested in him? HMMM 🤔😑
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I’M REMINDED OF “FELIX” WHERE IT’S LIKE--THEY WERE CLEARLY TRYING TO SHOW HOW MUCH “BETTER” CHAT NOIR IS THAN FELIX, BUT LUKA WAS THE RESPECTFUL ONE.
Anonymous said:
You know what I want to see? An evil kwami, like they just want to commit crimes. No moral high grounds, just chaotic evil.
That’d be amazing just because I wouldn’t be able to take them seriously.
Anonymous said:
Watching S1 and S3 episodes back to back, it feels like reading salt fics at times, especially in regards to the L². Like, Marinette was happy about weird plans, she both needed and wanted the final push, and most of the time there was at least something coming out of it. Nowadays it just makes her sad, Alya and the girls act *against* her, and we get shipping for shipping's sake.
That’s a good point. The shift from Seasons 1 to 2 to 3 is rather noticeable.
Anonymous said:
I hate how Adrien's busy schedule seems to only matter when it's used to make Marinette feel bad, but the second Marinette has a bit more to do, it somehow has a negative effect on not only her, but also everyone/everything she cares about, like, what's up with that??
I’m reminded of “Lies” here and I hate it. :|
Anonymous said:
Honestly, the way the show treats teenage girls is horse ass. The show treats the teenage girls of this show as if they're stupid, naive, emotional, clumsy, and need a boy to tell them what opinions to have. Marinette is always treated like the show's punching bag and blamed for everything that goes wrong because she's "emotional" or "obsessed with Adrien", Chloe could've been redeemed but the writers would rather keep her a brain-dead Alpha Bitch Valley Girl(even though Gabriel and Felix, the latter of whom is a teenage boy introduced in one episode, get to be treated as redeemable, despite the things they do being far, far worse), and Lila is a conniving, self-absorbed fox.
And even though Kagami seems better, she's still roped into the "girls catfight over an oblivious guy" cliche and so far, all of her akumatizations have been because of Adrien. Whenever Marinette tries to move on from Adrien the other characters tell her what's good for her and steer her in the "right" direction because she apparently can't think for herself, and the writers LOVE to use the girl squad to tell us who Marinette should be with, because they apparently know better than she does.
Plus the show loves to treat all the girls as the same, making them all either fight over Adrien or be obsessed with shipping, as if teenage girls are all one assimilating, homogenized group(also when they treat Marinette as if she's "just as bad as Chloe", rinse and repeat for the other ladies.). Honestly, the show feels like it was written by those types of people who think "teenage girls are the worst" so they make them all mood-swingy, obsessive, showoffs, emotional, and downright clingy.
Plus the way Thomas Astruc talks about the female characters on Twitter is even worse, and only serves to make this more evident: he claims Marinette "has poor control over her emotions"(all the while calling Adrien "perfect"), that Chloe was racist in Kung Food "because she's stupid"(so rather than having that scene serve as a lesson on respecting other's cultures, he just did it to pick on Chloe and make her look "stupid"), that she's incapable of being redeemed, that Lila's unlikable but Gabriel and Felix aren't(even though he claimed Felix was a terrible character and a "cliche", that's not what the show says my guy), and other such nonsense.
Other Twitter users have also called out Miraculous Ladybug and its stereotypical treatment of teenage girls. The only shows I've ever seen do this worse are those pretentious "darker" Magical Girl "deconstructions" aimed at grown men such as Madoka Magica and Yuki Yuna, as well as most shonen/seinen shows such as Naruto and Death Note, which says a lot. Honestly, whenever I feel like watching a show with empowering and respectful depictions of teenage girls that treats them as bright and intelligent and actually unique from one another, I just watch Equestria Girls, Liv and Maddie, LoliRock, ANT Farm, Moesha, PreCure, or Sailor Moon. Because the way the show acts towards them is deplorable, absolutely deplorable.
Yes to all of the above. Almost all of the girls are involved in love affairs in some way, the two teenage girls are irredeemable while Felix got a sympathetic backstory right away (Chloe took forever to get hers which is a failure), and Marinette is flawed because she’s “too emotional” (a misogynistic stereotype).
Anonymous said:
Hi, I'm the anon who got upset at the lady who made the "Miraculous Ladybug is a Mess" rant, and yes, thank you zodiacspirit17 for liking and agreeing with my rant! I'm glad someone else saw that video! And ugh, Marinette learning to love Chat Noir? Really? I don't remember that line but I also don't want to go back and revisit it to make sure so I'll take your word for it. Ew. That was actually one of the things I hated about the Glaciator scene. Chat was supposedly comforting Marinette by taking her to the rooftop where he planned Ladybug's date, and yet only Marinette finds out about Chat's crush on Ladybug and comforts him on that(while rethinking her feelings), while all Chat knows is that Marinette's heart was also broken. He never asks who it is, or tries to help her get over her crush even if he doesn't know it's coincidentally him.
I know it's because of the "love square" but it's unfair that only Chat's love problems are directly addressed. Come to think of it, the reason Chat took Marinette to the rooftop...I know he was doing it in-universe to help her instead of intruding on her personal feelings(which might have also been why he didn't ask her who her crush was, he was probably thinking along the lines of "we don't have to talk about it right now, we can just have fun!"), but meta-wise, since we know she's Ladybug, the writers were probably trying to tell her "See? This is what you could've been doing, but you missed it. Shame on you!" That's a huge issue I have with the show: characters will do things in-universe to help Marinette, but the show has a different motive in mind. Compare to how Tikki gave actual advice to Marinette in Puppeteer 2, but the writers intended that for the statue scene so they could embarrass her in front of Adrien and the thousands of eyes watching the show(except we're not laughing.). Even if characters do support her, the writer is using them as props for her ritualized humiliation. And yet Luka is the problem somehow.
If Marinette needs to learn how to love Chat Noir, then it should at least be balanced out by Adrien learning to Marinette. I'm sick of this double standard that "girls need to learn to accept boys who like them but guys can do what they want". Another thing she said was that "Marinette needs to learn to define herself outside of who she's crushing on." NOPE. NOPE. NOPE. You see, unlike Adrien, Marinette HAS a life outside of who she's crushing on: she has school, she has Kitty Section, she has her "girl squad", she has her parents, she has her outside family, she babysits Alya's and Nino's siblings, and she has OH YEAH HER FASHION DESIGNING! I didn't even count being a superhero since Adrien does that, too. She has so many things to do outside of Adrien, and yet the fact that she makes gifts for Adrien or dreams about Adrien or wants to have kids with Adrien somehow makes her nothing but an "Adrien fangirl"?
First of all, she's the bloody protagonist?! That's such a "Real Women Don't Wear Dresses" argument, that she can't have her own life AND be in love at the same time! And somehow her crushing on Luka also means her life revolves around him, too! But Adrien's life doesn't revolve around Ladybug even though he doesn't really have anything going for him in his ordinary life? Outside of being rich, hot, white, and male, that is? What are his interests and hobbies, besides what Gabriel lets him do to pass the time? He doesn't even like modeling! And the Agreste plot is more about Gabriel, Emilie, and Nathalie than it is about him.
And what about his friendship with Nino? He didn't even care that Nino was getting strung along by Lila with the others! What about his friendship with Chloe that also waxes and wanes? Granted, Chloe's not a GOOD person, which that lady acknowledged, but she at least tried to change and has more development than him, the writers just won't let her change. I hate when people come for Marinette for doing literally anything when the show won't let her have agency and progress. It's so unfair of her and I wish they could see that. These double standards are driving me insane and they're sexist(maybe even a little bit racist, too), and it hurts even more when a woman's doing those things.
(I had to cut off some of this ask because I didn’t get all of it, so I cut it off at the point where it still seemed like a full ask.)
I FEEL THE “GLACIATOR” THING SO BAD. It hurts even worse when you realize that “Frozer” has to take place after “Glaciator,” so Chat Noir heard that Marinette has love problems and then ignored it to ask her for advice about his own love problems later on. The total lack of insensitivity???
Also, the idea that Marinette’s life would revolve around her crush on Luka is stupid. It’s the exact opposite, in fact.
Meanwhile, Adrien has so little going for him and the “interesting” parts of him involve who he’s connected to or what his father has forced him into.
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Writing advise please?? How do you keep things fresh? How do you create an environment? HOWWW do you keep a consistent theme within a fic? Without veering off on a tangent? And how do you know what makes sense to you won't be too obscure for your readers?? Also I wuv you
Oh! Thank you so much for asking, I'm really flattered you want my opinion on all this!
It did get super long, though, so for the tidiness of everyone’s dashes, answers under the cut.
How do you keep things fresh?
Well... Okay, so, we definitely all have our favorite tropes and our writing trademarks and our signature styles and all that, there's no denying it. And that's not a bad thing at all! But there is a difference between writing with recognizable features, and writing the same damn story over and over and over. You want to write a million coffee shop AUs? Awesome! Go for it! But if all you're doing is like, changing the name of the coffee shop, that's pretty dull, don't you think? There needs to be at least some key feature to make each story unique. A coffee shop AU where all the characters are stressed-out college students is probably very different from a coffee shop AU where the coffee shop itself is a front for money laundering!
Now, that's not to say the same fundamental story can't be told in very different ways. I think we'd all agree I've tackled the prison arc...more than a few times (nine, to be precise), but I flatter myself to think they're not exactly carbon copies of one another. You can change the story dramatically by changing the development of a single issue (e.g., I've done "Mike has PTSD" a few times, but the presentation thereof has varied: "Mike has an emotional breakdown in public," "Mike hits his breaking point and runs away," "Mike has repression and anhedonia," "Mike cheats on Rachel with Harvey"), or by changing your overall theme. Maybe Mike and Harvey are finally moving in together! Do you want to write a comedy of errors full of corny jokes and terrible puns? Or maybe an insightful think piece about Harvey's relationship with his family versus his relationship with Mike? Both stem from basically the same prompt, are totally valid, and completely different.
The key here, I think, is to always be open to trying something you haven't done before. You've probably spent tons of time refining and perfecting the thing you're best at, and that's fantastic, but remember that we're all just trying to have fun here and none of this has to be flawless to be great. If starting off with a radically new take on something is too intimidating, you can always start writing a story that is in your comfort zone, find the point where things start to get too repetitive, and ask yourself, "Okay, but what if...?" Lean into that new direction! Experiment and see where it takes you!
Oh, and on a slightly more technical note, if you're talking about keeping things fresh from a writing mechanics perspective, do be on the lookout for overused phrases. I think we're all guilty of this at one time or another, there's no shame in it, but there are a million ways to describe a single item or feeling or scenic location or whatever; every character doesn't have to speak "pointedly," every gust of wind doesn't have to "whirl," every tree doesn't have to be "towering." Pinpoint why it's important to you to describe this thing at this moment, and then figure out what makes it stand out. What do you want to draw your reader's attention to? Hone in on that, and be specific.
How do you create an environment?
You most likely want your readers to identify with your characters, so it's important to identify what your characters are feeling, and then craft the environment around that. Is a serial killer on the loose in an abandoned penitentiary? Focus on the darkness, focus on sudden movements, focus on noises that don't have obvious sources. Create tension before your characters even enter the picture, and then use them, their actions and responses, to enhance it.
Contrast is a lot of fun here, too. If your characters are struggling with some profound turmoil that's completely inwardly-focused, you might go out of your way to describe an extremely banal, very normal setting (the conference room table is a long brown rectangle, the chairs are all exactly thirteen inches from the wall, the walls are laminated faux wood siding, every member of the board is giving the same speech in the same soporific monotone) and then jump into your character's head as they contemplate the fact that their best friend is considering some extremely dangerous methods of finding the money to pay off their student loans. Or it doesn't have to be a deep struggle; maybe your character is at a cheerful picnic but feeling very sad for some reason, or they're watching an action movie but feeling bored.
The big thing about crafting an environment is what you want to use it for. Does it matter where your characters are, or what they're doing while they're there? Or is the most important thing how they're feeling at the moment? Basically, what does the environment add to the story? It might be enough to say that your characters are in the kitchen and leave it at that, or you might want to go into fine detail about the gum ground into the sidewalk and the smoky cloud billowing out of the open manhole in the middle of the intersection. Both are suitable, but it depends on your intentions which one you want to write.
How do you keep a consistent theme within a fic?
If this is a major problem for you, I strongly suggest starting with an outline for your entire story. You absolutely don't need to plan every single detail down to the letter, but map out the starting point and an end point, and give yourself some milestone markers to hit along the way. What story are you planning on telling? How do you want to get from A to B to C? Tangents aren't actually the worst thing in the world! You can go off on them sometimes, if you want, they can be a lot of fun! But remember why you're writing in the first place. Where do you want your story to end up? The tangent might not be helping you get there, but is it actively moving you backwards, or just slightly off track? If it's the former, you may need to suck it up, scrap it, and start over, but if it's the latter, you might be able to cut yourself some slack and leave it in, or at least part of it, so long as you're able to bring yourself back around to the point without a huge amount of disruption to the plot.
Your own feelings are important, too; if you're trying to tell a particularly sad story, maybe you don't want to write when you're feeling super cheerful. If you're trying to tell a happy story, it might not be the best idea to write when you're absolutely furious. I sometimes find myself writing tangents that match my own mood at the time, but don't really belong in that particular story, so in that sense, it's important to check in with yourself before you get too lost in the weeds.
Ultimately, though, the key things here I think are the editing process overall, and not being afraid to erase something you spent a lot of time on. If you're extremely attached to a particular tangent, cut it out and save it for another project, but sometimes you just have to admit that something you worked hard on and are proud of doesn't belong in the piece you're writing.
How do you know what makes sense to you won't be too obscure for your readers?
You don't. And what's too obscure for some readers won't be too obscure for all. There's a difference, though, between "this makes sense to me because I have a wide and/or particular knowledge base," and "this makes sense to me because I am a party to my own train of thought." If it's the former, you can include background details that will help people who aren't as well-versed in whatever you're talking about as you are (though in this case, try to incorporate them into narrative rather than info-dumping for your own convenience), but if it's the latter, then you need to edit yourself.
For example, in The Simpsons episode "The Seven-Beer Snitch," Marge is trying to figure out how to upgrade Springfield's public image, and this is her thought process:
"Culture... Vulture... Birds of prey... Pray in a church... The Father, Son and Holy Ghost... Ghosts are scary... Scary rhymes with Gehry! That's it! Architect Frank Gehry!"
What the fuck? But since she voices the entire thought process out loud, the viewer understands where she's coming from. If you want to include a reference that relies on insider knowledge, and you're not planning on spelling out for your readers exactly how you got from 7 to pineapple, then you need to figure out another route.
Woof, that was a lot; I hope this isn't all too overwhelming. Thank you again for asking, and I hope at least some of it proves useful for you! Please feel free to ask any other questions, if you like!
Also awwww thank you so much, that's very sweet. <3
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Quick Critique: Dead Rising 4
I really like Dead Rising 1, but I like it despite its mechanics. The timers made the game tedious and took away exploration, leading survivors was a pain in the butt because the AI was pitiful and they were so weak, you were expected to start the game over and over again to build up stats, and it was chock full of inventory management and weapon degradation. So hearing that DR4 got rid of some of that, I was in. Also, it's a horror game set during Christmas. I'm... kind of super into that. I think I'm one of five people that genuinely has positive feelings towards Blue Stinger and totally want to see a fixed up modern version of that game and was hoping Dead Rising 4 would fill that void.
From the very beginning, my experiences with DR4 were not great. I installed the disk, downloaded the patch, downloaded the extra content (because that wasn't on the disk for some reason despite that being a selling point of the PS4 version), started it up, and... you're stuck on the title screen unable to enter any mode because it's “Downloading...”. Downloading what, I have no idea. Then the bar just kind of hangs there for several minutes, so I thought something was wrong, minimized it, went off to do something else, came back, and the download bar hadn't progressed. I uninstalled everything, installed the disk again, cut the network connection so the system wouldn't try to download any updates, and... got the same “Downloading...” screen. After looking it up online, you find a lot of people complaining about how slot it is to install the game and how it doesn't seem to download anything while minimized. So several hours into trying to play the game, the best I have seen is the title screen and options menus. The “Downloadable Content” button that's supposed to launch the store doesn't even work and pops up an error, even though I can load the store just fine from outside the game. After leaving the game running on the title screen for some time, I was finally able to play.
They changed Frank. He's no longer a kind of schlubby every-man. He's just a generic dude that's off-putting in how abrasive he is. Original Frank was a lovable dick. New Frank is kind of just a dick. A dick that despite what he's been through in the previous games and this one, is willing to abandon a civilian that helped him and leave her group of injured people in danger for no good reason. That follows through for all of the characters in the game. The other main character is detestable and not a single one of the side characters is likable. The whole game feels like a half-assed reboot. They should have either made it more unique and set it somewhere completely different and not tied to the first three games or done a full reboot. What you get is something that recycles the plot of the main game and many of the same beats, a worse version of the same character, and a worse location, but with nothing really interesting to set it apart. There are dozens of things to collect in the chapters, but movement isn't fun, combat isn't fun, and making your way through the maps isn't fun, so they created a semi-open world that you just don't want to be a part of. It has a more modern (and rather good to its credit) upgrade system, but that's the only hint of modernity on display. It's so clunky and poorly put together that it feels like a game made ten years ago. Frank constantly gets caught on objects, can sometimes climb objects but other times can't, gets caught in animations, can't interact with something you're right in front of but if you turn around and walk away then you can open it, sometimes just can't walk forward, and has a bizarre turning radius. There were times I found myself having fun (mostly seeing how high I could get my combo counter while driving through hoards of zombies or playing with explosives) only to smack into getting caught on something or stumbling into a situation that almost instantly kills you or the controls not working or any of a number of other problems and it all came crashing down. Frank's camera is now a Metroid Prime style scanner and you get missions to scan things but it's super finicky and gives you the most useless feedback on trying to hunt down which object it wants you to scan.
The core gameplay leans heavier into the Dynasty Warriors style button mashing. There can be hundreds of basic zombies on screen, but they're never interesting or fun to fight. Every encounter with the evolved zombies plays out the same way and every military fight just has you constantly rolling towards whatever enemy is shooting you the most. There is sooo much gun play in this one. Ranged enemies are ludicrously powerful and humans are ridiculously resilient (like taking multiple RPGs, having to run over a person five or six times, punching them several times while wearing a mech suit, and hitting them with an axe while wearing a mech suit only to have them stand back up levels of resilient). It's just not fun and Dead Rising should not be a third person shooter, especially one this bad.  DR4 has the same tedious inventory management and weapons breaking, but the game is super finicky about picking things up so restocking is a pain.
It's also rather buggy. Watching enemies warp in and out of cover, fly through the air, or rapidly change position like you were playing a laggy online game is a common sight. A boss glitched out on me and I spent 15 minutes trying to follow the game's instructions on how to hurt it before giving up, looking up a video walkthrough, and then realized the boss was stuck in the level so I couldn't kill him and had to restart from the checkpoint and do the entire fight all over again. I had the same thing happen a few times with enemies that were part of missions, but they thankfully were never mission critical so I could just leave trapped and twitching in parts of the level. Multiple times, I had cutscenes fail to load so I was stuck on a black screen. If you mash the buttons on your controller, it eventually loads.
The PS4 version includes the DLC that at least makes things different, making you immune to zombies and giving you powers, but then it takes that away from you, imposes a strict time limit, makes you vulnerable to zombies again, takes away the ability to drive, and locks upgrades behind godawful side quests and challenges. Dead Rising should be the Saints Row to Resident Evil's GTA. I want the wacky, fun zombie game that makes me overpowered and opts for the “make the game more fun for the player” choice every time. Give me unbreakable weapons. Give me a better inventory. Let me have dumb fun and experiment with ways to amuse myself with the zombie crowds and playing around in the mall. As it stands now, it's not scary enough to be a horror game, it's not funny enough to be a comedy, and the controls, missions, and world aren't good enough for it to be a competent action game.
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It had been an awfully long day filled with ferals and mutants and now a radstorm was on its way. Alienor sighed in disbelief. She wasn’t even close to either Goodneighbour or Diamond City and there was no settlement in the area. She climbed on the roof of a building and tried to find a shelter from there. The only place she actually knew in that part of Boston was some mystical bookshop she haunted when she was younger. She regretted dismissing Hancock. He would have known a place to hide, but they had an argument about the pillows she insisted to pick up. For the mayor’s defense, he had a point. She couldn’t help but pick up every single comfy pillow that fell in her sight. She couldn’t even explain why she was doing this. She didn’t even need those, especially after giving the last 14 to the settlers in Sanctuary Hills and noticing she still had like 20 of it.
She came back to her search. She had to find a place to wait but nothing could be seen from where she was. She went down and made her way to that bookshop, silently praying that somehow, it would be reachable. And not full of mutants, mirelurks or whatever twisted creature the new Commonwealth had in store.
Alienor got lost and wandered in the streets cursing almost everything, from the blasted cars to the greenish sky, but she finally found it. The sign was about to fall and was remaining on the wall by some miracle, but it definitely was the bright yellow letters of the Magic Box. The blue front was of course dirty and damaged and the windows were blocked up, but the door was still standing. Locked, obviously, but nothing that she couldn’t handle. After a few minutes that seemed to last like hours, she managed to get in.
Once inside, she drew her sword quietly and waited for something to come, but the shop was empty. No one had been there for centuries. She closed the door and began to check the entire building, amazed to discover that a large part of the stock remained untouched. Herbs, crystals, candle holders, name it and it was there. There was of course no food, but a few books were still readable. She emptied her bag and threw as many volumes and candles she could in it. A few necklaces too, wondering if she could sell them for quite a good price. She picked up a few stones, because even if she didn’t believe in their supposed properties anymore, she liked their colors and the memories attached to it.
She took her time, as she had nothing better to do anyway. She was looking in a box of other crystals when she noticed it wasn’t simply a box of stones. Those were pendulum. A petty smile appeared on her lips. She grabbed a handful of these and put it in her pocket. She was having an idea. It would probably fail but still.
The pendulums were nice and yet, she decided to pick up more divining tools. She found the tarot deck shelf and packed up a few different ones. Then she sought for runes and became genuinely disappointed to see that no set were intact. Alienor spent almost an hour collecting tools and stopped as she caught herself looking for chicken bones. She was about to leave, when she saw a dragon head holding a lamp. She took it down and immediately planned to prank Hancock with it. Then she left and headed to the Railroad headquarters.
“Hello P.A.M.! I got something for you!”
“Hello, agent. Your arrival was not predicted.”
“Yes, as usual. Listen, I’ve found some pre-war goods that could totally help you predict… Well… Things. Here, that’s for you.”
“Thank you, agent.”
Alienor waited patiently that P.A.M. opens the bag.
“Error. The content of the bag is not a predictive program. It cannot be used to calculate any probability.”
“What happened to your “I predict the future” thing?”
“I do not use external devices to do that. I use algorithms and data.”
“Uh, I should have known it would end up like this. Nevermind. I’ll give it to Deacon, he’ll find some way to use it. Or to Mama Murphy.”
Alienor grabbed the bag and left, shruging her shoulders.
So. I plan to write only anecdotes for a while to improve my command in English grammar. Especially the sequence of tenses, as I feel curse every single time with that part of the language (it doesn’t happen in French, thankfully). This one doesn’t fit in my plans, but I’d like to write several short stories about obscure characters, to create something like a Commonwealth comedy (The human comedy is already taken and it’s pretty restrictive, so Commonwealth it is).
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Essay On Control: The Way To End Up Being The Legitimate Frontrunner?
Essay On Control: The Way To End Up Being The Legitimate Frontrunner?
The frequency of which does one pick up that somebody could be the tremendous boss? Evidently there are actually not many people today around the world which will say, they are really good market leaders. Just how being a pioneer and which factors do you want to have? The solutions to these problems you can discover during this essay about control.
Who seems to be the first choice?
Theleaderis the patient, who aids some others for you to do over they can do. He fails to convey to many people what you should do, he just motivates these to are more effective and qualified prospects these phones the objective.
The first choice constantly understands there he flows and ways to make it to the mission. They know about achievement and that he likes to get through to it and support some others to achieve the good results.
The management superior
The integrity. Many others ought to believe their expert as a result of it he ought to be the trustworthy man or women.
He have to be launched for some individuals. This in essence means, he can fully understand and listen to the reasoning and emotions of other individuals. He will have a look at all alternatives and definately will select the best a single.
The other one style of imagining. The best choice notices the circumstance from distinct aspects, then, even though most people just view it in the only person route.
He ought to be self-confident. He realizes that customers are waiting around for his move and that he should really head them.
Also, it is vital to achieve the a feeling of the comedy. This will assist quite a lot in certain hard cases. Its like some capability, that can help to arrange the job method.
He has to be excited. Men and women confidence whomever, who provides extensive desire and desires what he or she is going through.
The best choice generally need to be prepared using some troublesome memories, as he is the first of all man, who the folks can be hunting for should the challenge would seem.
He have to have logical imagining. It indicates, that there is a ought to split the outcome into numerous regions in order to attain the success.
To be prepared for the alterations. The important chief not alone admit adjustments, he even can forecast them.
On this site you can view only many of the business leaders factors that ought to have almost every head. Also, it is necessary to create them on every occasion. In order to find more more knowledge about these components, you can purchase the command traits essay on oursite, and you may receive the overall group of these attributes.
Tips on how to grow the front runners elements
You must learn, that it must be extremely hard to remain the best choice in your just one point in time. Even men and women, who have some attributes with the innovator using their childhood years, should really produce them everytime to steer some others to intent. If you want to drive to the new standard. You want to acquire these sort of good quality of highly effective management:
You need to realize in order to observe the target, which you prefer to obtain. You want to look at the sharp photograph and to possess the approach to your activities. It is really easy to examine some novels about recognized and highly effective individuals, to read through the novels about enterprise
You need to make judgements. You should be convinced and next you can accomplish it.
The process. We do not require if some our steps may bring about the good results and when they are appropriate or perhaps not. You will need to be prepared for distinct conditions and also just about everything is usually from the diverse way than you might have plotted right before. If one makes the error, you merely have the idea for future years.
The best choice have learned to encourage individuals approaches to ensure that they extra useful. But he ought to try to remember, that all of the citizens are distinctive along with the identical phrase or behavior can assist a person, although not another.
They love a critic. The actual frontrunner recognizes his sturdy and inadequate edges and try to operate on them.
They are really solid. Often, the best choice is simply as a good example for some individuals and they would like to modification their existence with the far better way.
They work towards enhancing within their skillsets in their entire life. Being the first choice ways to acquire your talent and benefits each day. Read new ebooks, to switch the modern thoughts along with your family and friends and yourfamily, imitate the event of this market leaders that you just know.
The best choice can talk to differing people. It signifies that each individual is distinctive plus they can appreciate all of us. They find out what persons inform them regardless if they not inform them it efficiently. It is vital to find out persons and then they can rely on you and also follows you.
The first choice considers other types and try to does every thing conceivable tohelpthe many people. He facilitates some people to set their techniques and also get greater than they are.
It is actually easy to arrangement my command type essayhereand our authors will give you need the insightful essay in this particular question. You can be assured, which the final result will extend past your entire objectives.
The behaviour with the authentic expert
You ought to discover how many other men and women say, before you begin to talk directly to them.
It is required to makes use of the miracles terms like many thanks and please be sure to You can be positive, that they may assist you plenty.
Make sure you aid many others to resolve their concerns.
If you ever potential a thing, you have to do it.
Make sure you say thank you very much to your own co-workers in the superior employment.
You must be the sample in almost every predicament.
You will be quite focused on people today you intend to result in the mission. Assuming they experience it, they will likely comply with you together with are going to do their very best to attract the target and definitely will bemotivatedto do so actually.
You have to be focused on the primary intent from the group of people.
You ought to be liable for the outcomes.
These tips allows you to acquire your front runners attributes in order to attain the victory. It is very important consider, how the realistic expert increases you everyday and down the road he really wants to be much better than right now gradesaver.com scam. You should get the total satisfaction from this fact, which you made it simpler for anyone and driven him around the being successful.
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Essay On Control: The Way To End Up Being The Legitimate Frontrunner?
Essay On Control: The Way To End Up Being The Legitimate Frontrunner?
The frequency of which does one pick up that somebody could be the tremendous boss? Evidently there are actually not many people today around the world which will say, they are really good market leaders. Just how being a pioneer and which factors do you want to have? The solutions to these problems you can discover during this essay about control.
Who seems to be the first choice?
Theleaderis the patient, who aids some others for you to do over they can do. He fails to convey to many people what you should do, he just motivates these to are more effective and qualified prospects these phones the objective.
The first choice constantly understands there he flows and ways to make it to the mission. They know about achievement and that he likes to get through to it and support some others to achieve the good results.
The management superior
The integrity. Many others ought to believe their expert as a result of it he ought to be the trustworthy man or women.
He have to be launched for some individuals. This in essence means, he can fully understand and listen to the reasoning and emotions of other individuals. He will have a look at all alternatives and definately will select the best a single.
The other one style of imagining. The best choice notices the circumstance from distinct aspects, then, even though most people just view it in the only person route.
He ought to be self-confident. He realizes that customers are waiting around for his move and that he should really head them.
Also, it is vital to achieve the a feeling of the comedy. This will assist quite a lot in certain hard cases. Its like some capability, that can help to arrange the job method.
He has to be excited. Men and women confidence whomever, who provides extensive desire and desires what he or she is going through.
The best choice generally need to be prepared using some troublesome memories, as he is the first of all man, who the folks can be hunting for should the challenge would seem.
He have to have logical imagining. It indicates, that there is a ought to split the outcome into numerous regions in order to attain the success.
To be prepared for the alterations. The important chief not alone admit adjustments, he even can forecast them.
On this site you can view only many of the business leaders factors that ought to have almost every head. Also, it is necessary to create them on every occasion. In order to find more more knowledge about these components, you can purchase the command traits essay on oursite, and you may receive the overall group of these attributes.
Tips on how to grow the front runners elements
You must learn, that it must be extremely hard to remain the best choice in your just one point in time. Even men and women, who have some attributes with the innovator using their childhood years, should really produce them everytime to steer some others to intent. If you want to drive to the new standard. You want to acquire these sort of good quality of highly effective management:
You need to realize in order to observe the target, which you prefer to obtain. You want to look at the sharp photograph and to possess the approach to your activities. It is really easy to examine some novels about recognized and highly effective individuals, to read through the novels about enterprise
You need to make judgements. You should be convinced and next you can accomplish it.
The process. We do not require if some our steps may bring about the good results and when they are appropriate or perhaps not. You will need to be prepared for distinct conditions and also just about everything is usually from the diverse way than you might have plotted right before. If one makes the error, you merely have the idea for future years.
The best choice have learned to encourage individuals approaches to ensure that they extra useful. But he ought to try to remember, that all of the citizens are distinctive along with the identical phrase or behavior can assist a person, although not another.
They love a critic. The actual frontrunner recognizes his sturdy and inadequate edges and try to operate on them.
They are really solid. Often, the best choice is simply as a good example for some individuals and they would like to modification their existence with the far better way.
They work towards enhancing within their skillsets in their entire life. Being the first choice ways to acquire your talent and benefits each day. Read new ebooks, to switch the modern thoughts along with your family and friends and yourfamily, imitate the event of this market leaders that you just know.
The best choice can talk to differing people. It signifies that each individual is distinctive plus they can appreciate all of us. They find out what persons inform them regardless if they not inform them it efficiently. It is vital to find out persons and then they can rely on you and also follows you.
The first choice considers other types and try to does every thing conceivable tohelpthe many people. He facilitates some people to set their techniques and also get greater than they are.
It is actually easy to arrangement my command type essayhereand our authors will give you need the insightful essay in this particular question. You can be assured, which the final result will extend past your entire objectives.
The behaviour with the authentic expert
You ought to discover how many other men and women say, before you begin to talk directly to them.
It is required to makes use of the miracles terms like many thanks and please be sure to You can be positive, that they may assist you plenty.
Make sure you aid many others to resolve their concerns.
If you ever potential a thing, you have to do it.
Make sure you say thank you very much to your own co-workers in the superior employment.
You must be the sample in almost every predicament.
You will be quite focused on people today you intend to result in the mission. Assuming they experience it, they will likely comply with you together with are going to do their very best to attract the target and definitely will bemotivatedto do so actually.
You have to be focused on the primary intent from the group of people.
You ought to be liable for the outcomes.
These tips allows you to acquire your front runners attributes in order to attain the victory. It is very important consider, how the realistic expert increases you everyday and down the road he really wants to be much better than right now gradesaver.com scam. You should get the total satisfaction from this fact, which you made it simpler for anyone and driven him around the being successful.
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Essay On Control: The Way To End Up Being The Legitimate Frontrunner?
Essay On Control: The Way To End Up Being The Legitimate Frontrunner?
The frequency of which does one pick up that somebody could be the tremendous boss? Evidently there are actually not many people today around the world which will say, they are really good market leaders. Just how being a pioneer and which factors do you want to have? The solutions to these problems you can discover during this essay about control.
Who seems to be the first choice?
Theleaderis the patient, who aids some others for you to do over they can do. He fails to convey to many people what you should do, he just motivates these to are more effective and qualified prospects these phones the objective.
The first choice constantly understands there he flows and ways to make it to the mission. They know about achievement and that he likes to get through to it and support some others to achieve the good results.
The management superior
The integrity. Many others ought to believe their expert as a result of it he ought to be the trustworthy man or women.
He have to be launched for some individuals. This in essence means, he can fully understand and listen to the reasoning and emotions of other individuals. He will have a look at all alternatives and definately will select the best a single.
The other one style of imagining. The best choice notices the circumstance from distinct aspects, then, even though most people just view it in the only person route.
He ought to be self-confident. He realizes that customers are waiting around for his move and that he should really head them.
Also, it is vital to achieve the a feeling of the comedy. This will assist quite a lot in certain hard cases. Its like some capability, that can help to arrange the job method.
He has to be excited. Men and women confidence whomever, who provides extensive desire and desires what he or she is going through.
The best choice generally need to be prepared using some troublesome memories, as he is the first of all man, who the folks can be hunting for should the challenge would seem.
He have to have logical imagining. It indicates, that there is a ought to split the outcome into numerous regions in order to attain the success.
To be prepared for the alterations. The important chief not alone admit adjustments, he even can forecast them.
On this site you can view only many of the business leaders factors that ought to have almost every head. Also, it is necessary to create them on every occasion. In order to find more more knowledge about these components, you can purchase the command traits essay on oursite, and you may receive the overall group of these attributes.
Tips on how to grow the front runners elements
You must learn, that it must be extremely hard to remain the best choice in your just one point in time. Even men and women, who have some attributes with the innovator using their childhood years, should really produce them everytime to steer some others to intent. If you want to drive to the new standard. You want to acquire these sort of good quality of highly effective management:
You need to realize in order to observe the target, which you prefer to obtain. You want to look at the sharp photograph and to possess the approach to your activities. It is really easy to examine some novels about recognized and highly effective individuals, to read through the novels about enterprise
You need to make judgements. You should be convinced and next you can accomplish it.
The process. We do not require if some our steps may bring about the good results and when they are appropriate or perhaps not. You will need to be prepared for distinct conditions and also just about everything is usually from the diverse way than you might have plotted right before. If one makes the error, you merely have the idea for future years.
The best choice have learned to encourage individuals approaches to ensure that they extra useful. But he ought to try to remember, that all of the citizens are distinctive along with the identical phrase or behavior can assist a person, although not another.
They love a critic. The actual frontrunner recognizes his sturdy and inadequate edges and try to operate on them.
They are really solid. Often, the best choice is simply as a good example for some individuals and they would like to modification their existence with the far better way.
They work towards enhancing within their skillsets in their entire life. Being the first choice ways to acquire your talent and benefits each day. Read new ebooks, to switch the modern thoughts along with your family and friends and yourfamily, imitate the event of this market leaders that you just know.
The best choice can talk to differing people. It signifies that each individual is distinctive plus they can appreciate all of us. They find out what persons inform them regardless if they not inform them it efficiently. It is vital to find out persons and then they can rely on you and also follows you.
The first choice considers other types and try to does every thing conceivable tohelpthe many people. He facilitates some people to set their techniques and also get greater than they are.
It is actually easy to arrangement my command type essayhereand our authors will give you need the insightful essay in this particular question. You can be assured, which the final result will extend past your entire objectives.
The behaviour with the authentic expert
You ought to discover how many other men and women say, before you begin to talk directly to them.
It is required to makes use of the miracles terms like many thanks and please be sure to You can be positive, that they may assist you plenty.
Make sure you aid many others to resolve their concerns.
If you ever potential a thing, you have to do it.
Make sure you say thank you very much to your own co-workers in the superior employment.
You must be the sample in almost every predicament.
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