I’ve known this for quite some time, but I’m just going to post this now since even now, it’s still a very confusing part of P5.
Regarding to the ending split...
... it has plot holes, but it isn’t as major as I initially thought it was.
It was a complex plan, no doubt, and certainly, there had to have been a better way to explain it (ATLUUUUUS). After all, for a good amount of time, I thought the thing is riddled with nonsense, but after being explained by a certain someone on discord and some more thought, some questions has been answered. Oh, and reading Futaba’s dialogue before you go to sleep-- I don’t see many videos of that on it’s own so I suppose that’s part of the reason why it’s confusing.
These a few plot holes that I thought (or others) existed, but didn’t:
- How Akechi got out of the Metaverse (do you remember how you leave the Metaverse?)
- How Akechi contacted Shido (u thought he was was underground/in the metaverse? apparently he wasn’t necessarily)
- The Metaverse app being activated without alerting Goro (you can use the app without audio input via the search history function (see: the second time Akira and Ryuji entered Kamoshida’s Palace))
- Goro not getting into his rebel outfit after entering the Metaverse (When asked, you can sell out your teammates and/or you confidants, but NOT Akechi. At that moment, Sae didn’t know that Akechi intends to shoot Akira until Akechi had already left the Metaverse. During the duration of the attempted hit, there was no reason for Sae to see Akechi as a threat, either a hitman or a thief)
- How tf Futaba can get a signal from Akechi’s phone (since it had a GPS) and Akira’s phone (GPS and voice messaging) when both Akechi and Sae were supposedly 8 floors underground (They weren’t necessarily. Sae met Akechi w/ the phone right after leaving an elevator. The voice messaging was pre-programmed into Akira’s phone so that it could work in the Metaverse; Futaba OP, pls nerf)
What wasn’t explained regardless:
- The mess that is Justice Rank 8 (someone told me that it might be a developer’s joke since Morgana commented how it didn’t make sense nor would it make sense for either Morgana or Akira to , which would be shitty cuz that is literally the definition of lazy writing: “Idk what to put here so let him rank up cuz lul”)
- How exactly did Sae convince the police that there was a body in the first place? I get forging the death certificate (which should be enough to fool Shido since his ass isn’t getting out of his office chair), but what about everyone else? That doesn’t sound like a feat that could be done by one person. Maybe the grunts anticipated Akira’s death too quickly and assumed that it happened when Sae reported? Eh, even for P5, that relies way too much on incompetence. How Sae managed to 1) drag Akira out without being caught 2) fool the police in regard of a dead body and 3) get away with it all for so long is the worst plot hole you could pull out of this whole plot segment.
- SEE EDIT BELOW
Asterisks (*) are used to mark questionable parts that I realized after what Atlus was really trying to do.
I found Futaba’s extra dialogue during NicoB’s Let’s Play of Persona 5. It’s around the last 10 min of the episode linked below. Couldn’t find a better video, but this is where I found out, so it’ll work.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mi6wLyeuqws&list=PL5bkYBlFL9xcNUVU5-EcBxdaVVAZM2zX1&index=62
Look at the moment when Akechi and Sae meet. When Sae showed him the phone, Futaba explained later that she bugged the phone (the one belonging to Akira) similarly like with Akechi’s phone. Through that, she remotely activated the Metaverse app to transport the two into the Metaverse. (remember the search history function that was used for Akira’s and Ryuji’s second visit to Kamoshida’s palace? That’s the function that Futaba remotely activated. She didn’t tamper with the magical app itself.)*
So Sae and Akechi are in and they went in opposite directions. Akechi goes in, kills the cognitive guard and cognitive Akira.** Now, here’s where one of the so-called ‘major plothole’ existed. How did Akechi get out? First, let me ask you this, how do leave the Metaverse in the first place? I thought that you just press the app to leave, but apparently, that’s wrong. You have to physically go back the way you came, and that’s why you always have to return to the Palace’s entrance to leave the Palace. This is what Atlus failed to do-- what leaving the Metaverse actually looks like. We saw Akechi’s pictures of the PT appearing/disappearing out of thin air back at Okumura’s palace, but we didn’t see how it really looks like without the red/black circles washing over the screen every time we do it. Apparently, leaving the Metaverse doesn’t involve pressing the app at all-- just going back the way they came. Remember where Sae showed Akechi the phone? That is where they entered, and hence, where they exit. When Akechi was done with his assassination attempt, he goes down the hall, up the elevator (yeah, the guard couldn’t have seen Sae and Akechi conversing, they were on a different floor), and back to where the app was first activated. Once Akechi crossed that point, that’s when he left the Metaverse.
This is when Akechi calls Shido. You see how he calls Shido right in front of an elevator? Yeah, he probably wasn’t 8 floors underground at that point.
Now, I’m assume you know the general story with Sae, but I’m going to clear this up anyways. Sae received the pre-programmed messages from Akira’s phone, and she followed their instructions to go back to the interrogation room. Once again, she crossed the same point where the app was first activated, thus causing her to exit the Metaverse. She goes down the elevator and towards the room. The GPS installed in Akechi’s phone helped Futaba to time Sae’s entrance because it would be awkward if Sae encountered Akechi mid-assassination. (Futaba would know when Akechi is out of the Metaverse and out of the police station; nothing contradictory of getting a signal by then)
*The problem with this is... even if you use the search history function, the phone still plays it’s voice protocols like normal (”...Beginning navigation” You know the drill.). I don’t recall this ever being mentioned by any of the characters, but you can easily explain this away with “the phone was on silent”.
**The cognitions should’ve disappeared similarly like Shadows when they were killed. You can pull any number of BS by using “well maybe Sae’s cognition is different because hurr durr”, but it was never mentioned by the PT to even consider the rate in which cognition disintegrate into nothing nor was there any measures to accommodate for that. This instance is plot convenience at it’s finest.
Now for the sake of clarification, this doesn’t mean that Atlus is suddenly flawless in regards of how they handled this aspect of the story. Aside from what I’ve already stated above, this stuff could’ve been handled better. The search history function was only mentioned offhandedly in the the very, very beginning of Kamoshida’s Palace (before even Shiho attempted suicide) by Ryuji so there is almost no way anyone would remember without looking back. The anime cutscene where Ryuji was smirking “we got ‘em” when he heard about the supposed suicide of the PT leader made no sense. (How would he know that the plan even succeeded???? I know he was being like, “well I toOOOTALLY knew that we were going to succeed” but goddamn, but that sounds like he was acting tough more than anything. That kind of blind confidence shouldn’t be present, even for a character like Ryuji.)
You know what would really help? Seeing a few frames of the inside of the elevator as it goes up and down. Despite hanging out in the background, I barely even noticed it before someone else pointed it out.
A good part of the fandom was impressed by the plan and yes, I do think it’s a clever trick for Atlus to pull on us. However, the more complicated the plan is, the more effort one should put in explaining said plan because, you know, it would be harder for the player to understand. I don’t mean treating the audience like idiots and I understand the concern of dragging the explanation scene out, but man, Atlus was totally off their game when it came to hinting/foreshadowing. Instead of doing off-hand comments about seemingly arbitrary, but relevant aspects of the plan (ex. Futaba’s bug on Akira’s phone, the search history function, etc.) that you can probably catch by your second or third run of the game, Atlus favored getting hung up on whether or not they wanted the traitor to be obvious or not because they seemed to be pretty damn bipolar regarding to that.
I do give them credit for making some information optional (discoverable by talking to Futaba). It makes the scene less draggy and allows people who don’t give two shits to skip the parts they don’t care. I don’t watch many let’s players on the same game, so I can’t conclude if many people actually went out of their way to talk to Futaba and process her words.
And one last note, I don’t think Persona 5 is a bad games by any standard, but I do believe that the writing is the weakest aspect of the game. Style and gameplay seems more polished than the actual story aspects.
I hope this helped for any of you guys out there. Feel free to let me know if you.see any mistakes/seek clarification. It’s 9:30 PM for me, so I hope I didn’t mess up too badly explaining this.
EDIT: It came to me that if the method of leaving the Metaverse is truly just by going back where they came, it raises issues in Shido’s Palace, where the place they started was on the front deck, which, as you guys know, was sinking into the depths by the end. Basically, there’s no winning with P5 plotholes-- no matter how you look at it, there’s an issue.
12 notes
·
View notes
September 17th-23rd, 2018 CTP Archive
The archive for the Comic Tea Party week long chat that occurred from September 17th, 2018 to September 23rd, 2018. The chat focused on Soul Hymn by Draco Plato.
Featured Comment:
Chat:
RebelVampire
COMIC TEA PARTY- WEEK LONG BOOK CLUB START!
Hello and welcome everyone to the first week of our trial run for the Week Long Book Club! If you need more information on that, you can check out the link here: https://comicteaparty.com/post/178065237140/new-week-long-book-club Otherwise, let’s get started!
This week we’ll be discussing Soul Hymn by Draco Plato~! (http://khyatix.com/soulhymn.shtml). Use this week to read the comic at your own pace! You are free to come leave comments at any point during the week. You can comment as you read, or you can wait till you get through the entire thing. Whatever suits your schedule best is fine~! As always, remember that while we allow constructive criticism, our focus is to have fun and appreciate the comic. You have until 9/23 to tell us all your wonderful thoughts! Below you will find four questions to get you started on the discussion. However, a new question will be posted and pinned everyday (between 12:01AM and 6AM PDT), so keep checking back for more! With that established, let’s get going on the reading and the chatting!
QUESTION 1. What has been your favorite scene in the comic so far? What specifically did you like about it?
QUESTION 2. At the moment, who is your favorite character? What about that character earns them this favor?
QUESTION 3. Do you think Erik being a faun will be beneficial or harmful to his endeavors to save everyone? Ultimately, do you think Erik will succeed in saving the pillars and stopping Decebal? Please provide your reasoning for both!
QUESTION 4. Erik and Celeste received their powers from three space people, which Hope later reveals as Maha Deva Vijaya. Do you believe Maha Deva Vijaya will provide more help in the future? Why or why not? Why do you believe they’ve taken such a personal interest in what’s going on?
Capitania do Azar
ekekeke
1. my favourite scene was the one about the "oh everything's wrong but at least nobody asked me about my ears" followed immediately by "so what's with the ears?"
2. favourite character would have to be sassy gal Celeste
Tenor | Shinavar
“3. Do you think Erik being a faun will be beneficial or harmful to his endeavors to save everyone?”
We don't know much about them other than people are unaware they're 'real'. Truthfully unless I see some actual world affecting stuff, I don't believe this won't have any affect on his endeavors directly. Indirectly, perhaps. Like how Eric + Celeste already have been doing the magical thing for some time - that there's conspiracy theorists going around
“4. Erik and Celeste received their powers from three space people, which Hope later reveals as Maha Deva Vijaya. Do you believe Maha Deva Vijaya will provide more help in the future? Why or why not? Why do you believe they’ve taken such a personal interest in what’s going on?”
IDK and TBH this is the most frustrating part of the read for me. It's all hearsay footnotes in the comic. If these three space people were so important and play such a huge role, why have they only been foot notes so far? In fact I didn't know it was 3 people initially because the compound name has been confusing and it took a trip to the creator's site and into the character reincarnation to figure out it's actually 3 people. Which sadly has spoiled some things for me ;;;;
Sadly I don't have a favorite scene nor character yet. Mickael was getting close but I'm kinda playing it by ear right now. >_>' But it's a very pretty comic; the eyes in particular have such a pretty depth to them ^u^(edited)
Draco Plato
1. My favorite scene so far was the one where Decebal was behind Mickeal at his home. It felt kinda spooky. I also like Erik talking to Naples in bed, I think it showed how young Erik is, lol. 2. My favorite character is Erik, cause he's adorable n(UvU)n I'd like to see more of Arrow though, I feel like he's been underused so far.(edited)
RebelVampire
QUESTION 5. Unlike Erik and Celeste, Arrow has neither powers nor previous knowledge when he becomes involved. Why do you think Hope invited Arrow along? What do you think Arrow’s ultimate purpose is in all this?
Tenor | Shinavar
5. Hope said hes a proxy for one of the big space people so I'm guessing that initially. The only reason he doesnt have powers is because they havent given him any, right? So I think hes going to have a much bigger purpose later. I mean it seems Erik is the big power house but theres probably areas he cant touch that the other two can.
I'm curious though what proxy means specifically in this case
Kabocha
“1. What has been your favorite scene in the comic so far? What specifically did you like about it?”
http://khyatix.com/soulhymn/chapters/chp2/chp2pg19.shtml Probably this interaction? Celeste stopped being bossy for a minute, though....... She still doesn't believe he's really a faun...
“2. At the moment, who is your favorite character? What about that character earns them this favor?”
Arrow, for his intrinsic... Lyall-ness. Don't ask. XD I might have read the world page and may have been spoiled.
“3. Do you think Erik being a faun will be beneficial or harmful to his endeavors to save everyone? Ultimately, do you think Erik will succeed in saving the pillars and stopping Decebal? Please provide your reasoning for both!”
Can't say! Not enough info to judge this. As far as stopping Decebal -- if not in this life, then maybe another...
“4. Erik and Celeste received their powers from three space people, which Hope later reveals as Maha Deva Vijaya. Do you believe Maha Deva Vijaya will provide more help in the future? Why or why not? Why do you believe they’ve taken such a personal interest in what’s going on?”
MDV -- Because making sure the earth doesn't get screwed up by a grumpy fallen angel is kinda important. Also, clearly Erik, Arrow, and Celeste are somehow otherwise linked to those three!
“5. Unlike Erik and Celeste, Arrow has neither powers nor previous knowledge when he becomes involved. Why do you think Hope invited Arrow along? What do you think Arrow’s ultimate purpose is in all this?”
Good question! We don't know too much about him aside from the fact that he's a twin and also is interested in Erik.... So maybe he'll become the story's damsel in distress alongside Rose. >:3
RebelVampire
i will support this canon of arrow being the damsel in distress
Kabocha
Ahahaha. I mean, realistically, I imagine Arrow will support Erik and Celeste, but beyond that? Hard to say. If he's a proxy like the other two, then it's curious that they haven't given him powers, unless his space person is working more through him? ...tbh I can't remember which one corresponds to which without looking at the life chart
mostly 'cause they haven't shown up much yet XD
FeatheryJustice
One of the things I always wonder while reading Soul Hymn is that would Erik like goat cheese? Or what kinds of foods with the characters like or dislike and if they are connected through all the souls do the all have the same likes and dislikes or different depending on each thing.
Kabocha
You know, that's a good question. XD Pre-wedding ring spell, do they all maintain some prefs between lives?
FeatheryJustice
1. Favourite scene so far was when Arrow saw Erik for the first time and completely just shoved his sister across to make room for him. It was just the comedic moment of the dismay in Celeste's face. 2. I think my favourite is Squirrel Familiar? I'm trying to look for the name since it's been awhile since I read the comic, but I love how sassy that squirrel was.
Time to re-read the entire thing, again :3
Kabocha
Napples, I think!
or Naples
Draco Plato
Haha, I like that scene too with him pushing her on the chair Yeah~! Naples is his name. Also, they do generally keep a lot of their likes and dislikes from other lives, but some things change too based on their current environment and upbringing. The ring spell didn't give them any new knowledge or information so it didn't really change anything in their personality. The spell varies from life to life though based on what their souls predetermined for it before being born. Erik would like goat cheese I think XD He's not really a picky eater, although I do think he's vegetarian. Erik really likes to cook too so he has a wide repertoire culinary wise. Arrow would most like foods he can eat while working I think, like sandwiches and fast food. Celeste is kind of apathetic about food overall, although I don't think she'd turn down a pastry, lol.
Kabocha
Celeste has tastes I can appreciate
Draco Plato
a pastry a day keeps the doctor away
also, sorry i'm not responding to everything, I'm trying to avoid anything that'd be really spoiler territory from me, but I love reading all the different PoVs.
anything on the site isn't particularly a spoiler though so it's all right to check out the world page, since I decided it's okay to know the lifetimes of the characters from the beginning as it helps to see their evolution over time.
cause some people seemed concerned about that, but it's also not important to read the world page either.(edited)
Kabocha
Heheh. I get that! There's a lot about the story which I think we have yet to learn, but it'll unfold.
Like, I can't wait to see decebal do some more dickish stuff lol
Draco Plato
Ooooooh yeah, he's still got a lot of stuff to do
RebelVampire
yes, can confirm theres still plenty in soul hymn that hasnt been blathered about on the site itself at least.
RebelVampire
“1. What has been your favorite scene in the comic so far? What specifically did you like about it?”
That scene in the train subway thing where Erik and Celeste fought that demon and had to be bailed out by Hope. I vastly enjoy that Hope came expecting the proxy people to solve all his problems, except nope. No problems solved for him. They aren't ready.
“2. At the moment, who is your favorite character? What about that character earns them this favor?”
For today, at least, gonna pick Celeste. I think Celeste all around has the best facial expressions and I like that shes upfront about the fact she hates being considered 2nd class to Erik.
3-5
[REDACTED SPOILERS]
Draco Plato
looooool
Rebel knows too much
RebelVampire
QUESTION 6. While visiting Desire, Arrow and Celeste learn of a deep connection to Erik that activates some sort of magic that makes them all married. Do you think the three will figure out a way to break the spell? If not, how do you think the relationship between the three will work out or fall apart?
Mharz
“1. What has been your favorite scene in the comic so far? What specifically did you like about it?”
My favorite scenes where the times Arrow goes head over heels over Erik in first sight. It was a fun scene.(edited)
Also that part where Arrow said he and erik just met today but it has hearts on the bubbles.
have to say Naples is freaking adorable here.
“2. At the moment, who is your favorite character? What about that character earns them this favor?”
I have to say Celeste. She's sassy sure but not in an annoying way and I like that. Also Naples... such an adorable puffball.(edited)
“3. Do you think Erik being a faun will be beneficial or harmful to his endeavors to save everyone? Ultimately, do you think Erik will succeed in saving the pillars and stopping Decebal? Please provide your reasoning for both!”
I feel like it's too early for me to gauge it so I can't really give a clear answer. I believe Erik will succeed tho as long as he gets his psyche intact and not get affected by the pillars like what happened when Desire grabbed his hand.
“4. Erik and Celeste received their powers from three space people, which Hope later reveals as Maha Deva Vijaya. Do you believe Maha Deva Vijaya will provide more help in the future? Why or why not? Why do you believe they’ve taken such a personal interest in what’s going on?”
I dunno... I feel like they will just watch and let the trio deal with this themselves. Otherwise they would've interfere already.
“5. Unlike Erik and Celeste, Arrow has neither powers nor previous knowledge when he becomes involved. Why do you think Hope invited Arrow along? What do you think Arrow’s ultimate purpose is in all this?”
I do know stuffs from outside the comic that is particularly spoilery <.< So I kinda know the real reason but I do hope Arrow will transform in anyway? That would be fun to see.
Kabocha
Magical boy Arrow! XD
I actually wanna see that, too, even if it's a joke or if he gets some sort of halloween costume
Mharz
6. While visiting Desire, Arrow and Celeste learn of a deep connection to Erik that activates some sort of magic that makes them all married. Do you think the three will figure out a way to break the spell? If not, how do you think the relationship between the three will work out or fall apart?
Eh. I'm sure it'll be fine. <w<(edited)
"Sorry Arrow, since you can't transform me and Erik just bought you this."
gets a totally random halloween costume
RebelVampire
and hten arrow died
and everyone mourned him
erik went crazy and ate cans for the rest of his days
and celeste took over the planet and became a vicious dictator
Kabocha
aaaaaa
I don't.... Well. that is a way it could go, I'm sure
Mharz
that is a scenario I can imagine as a high possibility
Kabocha
I'm sure the problem with the marriage spell is probably going to come from Arrow and Celeste at first, bc like.... I can imagine one of them logicking it all out like this: -We're all married -I'm married to my sibling?!!!!! -I'm going to kill my sibling and keep Erik to myself without realizing that it's just that they're BOTH married to the same guy. ....I mean, this could all just get awkward. Or murderous, if they're so inclined to take the murder-the-hypotenuse route -- but I mean, that would require someone stepping in and bein' like "Yo, Celeste.. Arrow........ wanna make Erik suffer for cheating on you with your sibling?" Meanwhile Erik's all over in the corner, like "What"
Mharz
I think Hope explained that they're married only to Erik and not to each other. In which Arrow cried polygamy.
Kabocha
........oh crap, I forgot about that
still
Mharz
literally just read it. <.<
Kabocha
XD
Mharz
like the past hour.
Kabocha
well, that makes your memory much sharper than mine!
But still.................... Now I'm imagining Decebal getting Arrow to align with him, all for the purpose of forcing Erik and Celeste to give up
Mharz
or just get Erik to himself. XD
I mean Arrow agreed so he can have Erik to himself.
RebelVampire
tbf even if hope said it doesnt mean they accept it in their hearts. hope also explained a lot of things and i think from many of their dumbfounded wtf faces, not all of it absorbed into their brains
Kabocha
.............Hey, I remember the first time I read it, I was kind of with them XD
I wasn't familiar with much of Draco's other stuff!
RebelVampire
i think draco actually trimmed hope's explanation a tad cause im pretty sure originally it was supposed to be longer
Mharz
I like how Draco made all of these interconnected with all of the rest of the comics
RebelVampire
yes. its nice when things are governed by the same rules.
Kabocha
it'll be really cool when more stuff is complete, too -- we'll get a good feel for how it all works together
Mharz
Yas. I'm excited to see how this goes.
Kabocha
...Is this point where we start coming up with crack theories
RebelVampire
yes
granted as long as its related to soul hymn since dont want to alienate ppl too much with draco's billions of other comics
Kabocha
Ahahaha! SO crack theory: Decebal is going to use Mickael to release a mind-control hit single. He's going to spread his message through the world that way, and...... The first step to suffering will be removing all pizzas from the planet.
NO PIZZA EVER
RebelVampire
well i mean
that would be suffering
unless they already dont have pizza
Mharz
Not the pizza
Mharz
I have a weird question... Does Erik produce milk? <.< hides
Kabocha
I don't think male goats do
Tenor | Shinavar
Some do - usually dairy bucks who are in dairy-heavy lines can develop milk during rutting apparently. /Sorry had to look it up
Draco Plato
No, he definitely doesn't produce milk XD although for awhile the comic was titled Goat Milk for other reasons
Tenor | Shinavar
oh god
Kabocha
..............
I... You know. I just DRACO
Fuckin' hell, I feel like a pervert now XD
Draco Plato
Just realized how porny that title can sound, lol
Tenor | Shinavar
That's why I'm dying about it lmao
Kabocha
Now I'm thinking there needs to be a "name your comic like it's porn" joke, but......... that's neither here nor there. What would the difference have been if it was called Goat Milk though? Was there story significance?
Tenor | Shinavar
But I am curious Draco - how much would you say you need to read your other titles to be in the know with Soul Hymn? Cause seeing others' opinions I"m curious how out of the loop I am ;
Kabocha
See, I know some spoilers so I don't count for what I know
Tenor | Shinavar
Fair but IDK how many people know spoilers either
So I'm just curious :D
Draco Plato
I mean soul hymn should be pretty okay by itself, but maha deva vijaya have appeared in Zenchav out of order so it explains them a touch more atm, and soul hymn will directly feed into Zenchav by the end, but it hasn't yet. Witch Carnival also mentions the ring spell more, but again I don't think any of them are actually necessary to read for the story, more just additional information for people into the overarching story
RedEmyr ties into Soul Hymn the least so it d be super irrelevant to read for SH info
It ties into Zenchav and OoO tho a lot
Tenor | Shinavar
-Nodnod- Aaaah okay~ I haven't had the chance to get to OoO nor RedEmyr yet.
Draco Plato
Thats totally okay XD
Oh and it was called goat milk before because it focused on pregnancy and Mickeal and Sam's story more, but I took all that out so it no longer was relevant.
Cali helped me to think of the soul hymn title which I like a lot
Kabocha
cough
Mickeal, plz But I mean, that makes sense. XD
Draco Plato
Yeeeah, there's a lot of versions of this story at least 10
Draco Plato
Oh, cause it was mentioned earlier Maha Deva Vijaya is always said as one name because the three souls are so close they are treated as one entity
Tenor | Shinavar
That would be me, I think. THat's good to know - I think the confusion comes from addressing them as 3 people so I legit thought it was someone else entirely and it made me have to double over everything fFFFf
Not addressing, describing hem*
Draco Plato
Yeah, that's fair XD
RebelVampire
since someone mentioned it earlier, i will mention random fact: despite knowing all the many spoilers, i actually do have to look up which one is maha and which one is deva because i forget a lot and mix them up
Draco Plato
Ffft, they would be pleased
Kabocha
GASP
Pleased?!
Draco Plato
All according to keikaku
Kabocha
But... But... Well, I guess at that point they don't have a lot of the arguments that the would have in previous lives XD
Draco Plato
Nah they don't, they're just vijayas pillars of support so all their focus is in him
Kabocha
Maha is actually going to be very easy for me to remember because Maha sounds like how you say Macha as in the cat character from .hack and Macha was a girl, so Maha is.... well.
anyway XD
....that train of thought just occured to me
don't mind me! :'3
Draco Plato
Lolol! XD
Their name roughly translates to Mighty Deity Victory in Sanskrit.
So the names Maha and Deva are even just accents to Vijaya
Kabocha
RIP Celeste and Arrow
Draco Plato
Nah it's a good thing OvO
Or maybe just symbolic, lol
Mharz
Omg goat milk
imagines if that became the title
CalimonGraal
the 18+ version of soul hymn
looooool
Mharz
Where all the dark secrets happen
The solution for saving the world is goat's milk
Draco Plato
Erik plz you must give up your milk to save the world
Mharz
baaaaaaaah
Draco Plato
ooooomg
if i'd used that title I could've just used emojis for it
missed opportunity
Mharz
This has took a strange turn whoops(edited)
Draco Plato
hello darkness my old friend
Kabocha
So would the logo then include an eggplant? Oh gosh ahaha
Tenor | Shinavar
Omg. All of u need jesus
Kabocha
HEY, HEY, we have Vijaya, why do we need Jesus? I mean, what jokes were we supposed to make about a Mickael/Samantha relationship story called Goat Milk? It ends up with her pregnant, right?
BUT, that's neither here nor there. XD Speaking of those two, we're gonna learn more about their relationship with each other, right? :3 Like, just, generally, I mean. How did they meet... How did they fall apart... Why do they get along now instead of hating each others guts XD
How often has Rose been spotted with her horns in school XD
Draco Plato
There's a version of Goat Milk where everyone ended up pregnant, it was not my finest writing moment
And I am super happy that it was scrapped, it went in really weird places
and if I'm saying it went too weird, that's pretty off the deep end weird
Kabocha
I heard some comic sites pay $70/page for that sort of thi--- /shot
Draco Plato
LOL!
there's that olympic dames comic
I didn't want to be in the same genre as that
We proooobably won't get to see Mickeal and Sam's backstory unless I make it a side comic
but the whole focus of it would be teen pregnancy and I've been trying to back off on that kind of stuff
so It's kind of been sidelined indefinitely
I became worried about portraying it insensitively unintentionally
Kabocha
Ah, fair!
Maybe it's one of those things that they just mention they were teenagers and well, at least Rose is happy now
Draco Plato
yeah, I think I'll be able to squeeze in most of the details at some point within Soul Hymn anyway, especially since interest has been expressed about it
Kabocha
Also, I apologize in advance for craziness with my train of thought, I have had to take the nyquil tonight!
But yeah! I'm interested to know more about them in comic, even if it's a passing mention
Draco Plato
I can do that
I think Rebel was afraid I'd make Erik Rose's father for awhile
all comic decisions are a roll of the dice so you never know where it'll land
Kabocha
It's not canon until it's firmly in print, right? And even then, it can be revised in future editions
Draco Plato
baaaaaasically, altho I do try to not change things that have already happened at least. But I have had to go back and fix dialogue in some of the comics when it didn't quite add up right to things later on, oops
Mharz
RebelVampire
I think Rebel was afraid I'd make Erik Rose's father for awhile :joy:
all comic decisions are a roll of the dice so you never know where it'll land
that may have something to do with the fact youve point blank said youve played around with the idea
Draco Plato
muahahaha
It's super unlikely though, very improbable
RebelVampire
QUESTION 7. Desire mentions Hope is the sixth pillar, implying there are four others we have yet to meet. What do you think the other pillars are like? Do you think all the pillars are on Hope and Desire’s side, or do you think some might side with Decebal? What do you think will happen when Erik runs into the other pillars?
Kabocha
So, what are they pillars of? I've actually been confused and hadn't asked about that before. What do the pillars represent and how are they important to the world? I may be just not remembering. xD
Or well, I guess they're important to Decebal's plan.... (looking at it again now lol)
What...... were they before they were pillars
.........Virtues. XD OKAY SO WHY ARE THE VIRTUES IMPORTANT ........I'm going to have to reread this comic hrrrghleble
You forget details when you read in chunks! So, time for a fresh readthrough which I'll do tonight.
Capitania do Azar
hauehuhah
Draco Plato
Legit straight up forgot I mentioned there being 6 already and had to remember who the others were, totally on the page of forgetting details after not reading in awhile
Draco Plato
Basically the virtues are angels who perform small miracles within mankind and represent a virtuous quality. Decebal turned them into their negative opposite and that negative quality is then constantly feeding into them from their surroundings (via people's negative thoughts and energy). They're called the pillars in this negative state because to Decebal they represent a pillar of negative energy he's building for a "purpose".
Mharz
Was thinking along the lines of 7 virtues turned into 7 deadly sins of some sort. XD(edited)
I have the feeling some already sided with Decebal. :u
Draco Plato
It does seem similar to the seven deadly sins weeps
ah good they aren't all the same as the seven deadly sins, lol! I couldn't remember what the 7 were for that
Mharz
RebelVampire
QUESTION 8. In recent happenings, Decebal kidnaps Rose. Why do you think Decebal would do such a thing? How do you think Decebal intends to use Mickeal exactly? On a different note, what do you think will ultimately happen between Sam and Mickeal?
CalimonGraal
feels like decebal is going to use mickeal or something for whatever he's planning
RebelVampire
hes gonna use mickeal to trim his lawn
and then start a goat lawn mowing service
CalimonGraal
omg
Mharz
he needs goat fur for coats
RebelVampire
decebal is gonna start a whole goat based industry
Mharz
goats are great for business
Mharz
I feel like Decebal will use Mickeal's influence being a famous singer and all to brainwash people into feeding his pillars negative energy
RebelVampire
http://khyatix.com/soulhymn/chapters/chp1/chp1pg18.shtml
well mickeal does have a head start with lyrics like htat
CalimonGraal
he could collab with daed inside
Mharz
deep inside he agrees with decebal. <.<
RebelVampire
and here i always thought mickeal was the good one
Mharz
if there's anything I learned, is that the most innocent looking people are the evil ones... sometimes.
Draco Plato
Does Mickeal look that innocent tho? XD
I like how disinterested he looks while singing, as boring as doing laundry to him
Tenor | Shinavar
I like Mharz theory with the brainwashing
But I'm willing to bet hes about to take him in for some plastic surgery missing some extra parts he'd like
Draco Plato
lol! Oh no
RebelVampire
now thats just gruesome
RebelVampire
QUESTION 9. At the beginning, Hope warns Decebal that he will fall for his actions. Do you think Hope is right and that there is indeed no saving Decebal? Why or why not? Additionally, Hope and Decebal argue about whether the outcome is decided or not. Do you think Hope is right that the outcome is decided, or do you think Decebal is right?(edited)
Tenor | Shinavar
IDK I mean - someone who gets pissed and turns you into a beacon of negative energy doesn't sound like someone you can reason with /shot
Mharz
I feel like it can go either way? Like Decebal probably believes you can change your fate of some sorts. Tbh I think he has good intentions tho his execution is really really bad. :v
Kabocha
Decebal, if I recall, thinks humanity needs to git gud and start doing what they need to do ........ ........................ So he's going to make them fall in to despair so they can appreciate what they had or something.
I wonder where on the timeline this all happens compared to like, OoO
Draco Plato
it's both before and after
don't cry, it'll all make sense some day
Kabocha
Hahaha, yeah. Is it time shenanigans or just that it's over a long span of time?
Draco Plato
it's because of there being multiple lifetimes of the characters in the story
some are before and some are after
Mharz
draco no
@_@
Kabocha
So... Erik might fail this time, but...
or is it just because of the lifetimes and the space people XD
Draco Plato
The before and after is just because of the chronological happenings of the individual lives.
Like decebal's life takes place before Mickeal's
He even mentioned that mickeal is his future on one of the recent pages
http://khyatix.com/soulhymn/chapters/chp3/chp3pg39.shtml
Decebal's life is before Rex's since Rex is a fallen angel, Erik's life is after Damon's though
The space people are irrelevant time wise I think since they exist in their own sort of timeline with a different trajectory
But they do interact in some manner with most of the lives.
Technically they're supposed to play an inactive role within the lives of mortals and use other means
Karmic laws and all that
Mharz
Decebal is one of the powers right???
Is Rex a high ranking angel as well?
Draco Plato
Rex is a Jinn now so not really an angel anymore but he was Decebal, sooooo I mean he was a Power XD
Kabocha
Ahahah, well, I meant timeline as far as like, linearly-speaking now
Mharz
oh I see
Kabocha
so, like, OOO takes place in year X, Soul Hymn takes place in some other year... or is it all overlapping owo
Mharz
lol I got it confused a bit. I was thinking Decebal came after Rex woops
Draco Plato
events at the end of Soul Hymn will lead into Zenchav, but for Erik, Celeste, and Arrow it takes place after OoO but before WC(edited)
Mharz
rolls around
Draco Plato
S-sorry, I guess it gets a bit confusing
Mharz
it's fine draco
XD
Draco Plato
This is why I didn't hide the lives cause I thought nobody could ever guess them
And it d just be even more difficult to tie it all together for people(edited)
Mharz
but it's fascinating tho
Kabocha
Hehehe
I had figured the progression of lives didn't take place in a linear fashion compared to the timeline overall
Draco Plato
Nah, originally I'd planned to keep everything linear bit that didn't work out
There's technically other dimensions too with different outcomes but I'm avoiding going into those since it's already confusing for readers
Kabocha
hehehe
Draco Plato
I've also cut down what I had planned for the astral plane stuff too cause of that
RebelVampire
QUESTION 10. What are you most looking forward to in the comic? Also, do you have any final thoughts to share overall?
Mharz
Looking forward to Erik and Decebal face-off and seeing all the pillars and how everything links together.
Draco Plato
There's a lot of scenes coming up I'm looking forward to, particularly with the main three's relationship and the changes I've made to the story recently.
FeatheryJustice
I can't wait to see when they all duke it off and then see how the reincarnation works.
RebelVampire
COMIC TEA PARTY- WEEK LONG BOOK CLUB END!
Thank you everyone so much for chatting about Soul Hymn this week! Please also give a special thank you to Draco Plato for volunteering the comic for this trial run! We really appreciate it! :D If you liked Soul Hymn, make sure to continue to support it!
Read Soul Hymn: http://khyatix.com/soulhymn.shtml
Draco Plato’s KoFi: https://ko-fi.com/khyatix
Draco Plato’s Discord: https://discord.gg/NTYuQTU
Draco Plato’s Twitter: https://twitter.com/KhyatiX
0 notes