I have not forgotten the draft regarding "How I would write Clouds Leave No Trace", it still lingers its still there
Im still thinking about how my least favorite parts are Yanqing's characterization, The way the world around Jingliu treats her like she's normal when clearly she's not, The way there's such an effort into putting Yingxing and Dan Feng on the same level of guilt for every single thing that it makes Blade's desire for revenge feel nonsensical and out of no where when he has good reason for it, The way that they don't do more to play up the HCQ's dynamic especially in the normal areas thus making caring about their tragedy a struggle if you haven't done all the "prerequisite reading" (even tho the quest should make the players care more and want to read instead of requiring the opposite), The way that they literally mention Bailu and Blade crossed paths but never show us that scene DESPITE all of the importance placed upon Baiheng and Yingxing's friendship, Did I mention My Massive Problems with my boy Yanqing's characterization in this quest versus what we see of how he's affected both before and after it?
Oh and of course, to mention Jing Yuan not really feeling like he has as much significance being in this quest despite being apart of the HCQ and Jingliu's disciple because yet again, they especially don't do enough to develop on screen (but also not enough in the readable text too) his connections to the rest of the HCQ (which in general if you ask me, makes it a lot harder to be that sad at the moments they clearly want us to feel sad for him over the HCQ)
I could go on and on about the problems of Hyv not fully giving the audience a reason to care for the HCQ's tragedy by the way they are barely shown on screen, shoving it all in readables and character stories and relic lore. Even their legends get barely any screen time to build up to when we hear about the fall out.
Also again, not kidding about Jingliu and the world's perception around her. She is described solely in the beginning as bringing a chill to the room, but she's clearly very intimidating, if you ask me she seems very clearly unstable as well and yet when they waltz around in a populated area with no attention getting drawn to them or suspicion or anything. I also call Massive Bullshit on Bailu being like "Wow but she seems so normal and kind, there's nothing about her at all that could make me think she's marastruck 😲!!" When if you ask me, that whole scene could have been used in a much more meaningful way to make a connection between Bailu and her resemblance to Baiheng Specifically in a way I will further elaborate on in my full post about it BUT YEAH Jingliu deserved so much better with this quest, so so much better
And even just small details get me like Jingliu leaving first from Scalegorge Waterscale, then Jing Yuan, Yanqing and Ren leaving? Like if you ask me, let Jingliu leave with Jing Yuan and Yanqing like they're escorting her (idc about any "She was already turning herself in!" There are a number of reasons to be cautious, not solely of her, and keep her in their view) and then talk to and have Ren leave last.
I am still thinking about it, that post still haunts me daily, I have grown to like the quest but my problems with it are so strong and so clear that it's like AHA I CANT STOP THINKING ABOUT IT
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Guiding Light | 1.0 | 1.5 | 2.0 | 2.5 | 3.0 | 3.5 | 4.0 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 5.5 | 6.0 | 6.5 | [next]
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A Circle of Salt | Fic Cover
Minors and ageless blogs, DO NOT interact.
Pairing: Shouto Todoroki x F!Reader
Summary: With the end of the Great War and his father’s death, Prince Shouto must find his and his kingdom’s place in a rapidly changing world. As a result, the Todoroki Kingdom has finally opened its doors to its neighbors after centuries of isolation. You see this as an opportunity to not only advance in your career as a lowly government aid but to also take advantage of the tropical island as your new office space.
However, with the nobility working to maintain their status quo, there’s another reason why it may be difficult for you and Shouto to achieve your goals – the prince seems to have misunderstood what sort of partnership you seek with him.
“I’m happy to hear that, Prince Shouto.” Your voice was even, not too disinterested and not too eager. “I look forward to our future together.”
Your answer pleased him, and he replied, “Excellent. I was worried that my response was too casual for a marriage proposal, especially since I’m unfamiliar with the customs of the Republic. However, I do plan to formalize our betrothal according to the traditional rites of my nation.”
For a second time, your mind replayed the way his mouth moved to say marriage, proposal and betrothal, his voice clear and steadfast.
Marriage. Proposal. Betrothal.
Marriage. Proposal. Betrothal.
Marriage.
Proposal.
Betrothal.
Heat rose to your cheeks, mimicking the tropical sun. Worse than mishearing, you realized that there was a terrible, terrible misunderstanding between you and Shouto.
You weren’t sure how to tell your superior that the fate between the two nations was unknown, but at least you knew that relations between the prince and yourself were solid.
Tags: fantasy AU, royalty AU, arranged marriage, miscommunications, romance, smut, Todoroki family drama
Status | coming soon to AO3!
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I did it..............
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the last thing he gave you was a rose
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pov: you're jean moreau and a pretty girl is about to change your life
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please tell us everything you know about Kento’s parents
HAHAHH I WAS HOPING SOMEONE WOULD ASK ME THIS WHEN I POSTED ABOUT THAT THE OTHER DAY I WIN. IM SO SORRY ITS SO LONG.
ok so i feel like outwardly, kento's dad is a lot like him. like he's very unemotional, and is the kind of man who wouldn't smile very often & is veryyy serious about his work. his dad has a similar corporate/finance job to the one kento worked in, and dedicated very long hours. so kento didn't see him often when he was a child. i think, until he was older he kind of resented him for that, but he eventually realized that he was just doing the best he could to give his family a good life <3 his dad cares about his son more than kento realizes, they're just not the best at communicating with each other. but when i say this, his dad certainly isn't cruel at all! he pushed kento to be his best and was a little hard on him from time to time, but he was always understanding & did his best to support his son in all the ways he knew how.
as for kento's mom, she is an ABSOLUTE sweetheart. when you think of how a mom she be, i think she is the perfect image. kento got his love of cooking and food from her, and she raised him to be a very respectful young man <3 i think she's much more extroverted and talkative than kento and his dad, but she's very warm, and she's just as kind as him. he grew up in a very traditional family, but his parents are very very loving towards him and each other. their son is definitely the most important part of their lives. i feel like his danish granfather is on his mom's side, so that's where he get's his blonde hair!! & they take him to visit his family in denmark when they can, and make sure he feels in touch with both cultures and sides of his family.
TBH I HAVE SO MUCH I CAN SAY PLS bc i thought about this for so long the other day. but in short, kento has a very very good relationship with his parents now that he's an adult. for a while, though, it was a little strained bc of his decision to leave to become a sorcerer, and his parents didn't want him to do that. also kento tended to isolate himself a bit due to all the pressure he was under, which led them to worry about him very often. <3 they were pretty strict & a littleee overbearing when he was a kid, but once he became an adult, he realized that it was just out of love & fear that they might lose him, so he started to understand them better.
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I watched Avengers: Age of Ultron (apart from I skipped some overly long action sequences) and I am not sure so can someone tell me whether or not Tony Stark was the baddy in that film? Because about halfway through I was sure he was but then it was maybe just an evil robot after all and I am confused because either this film was surprisingly subversive or it was about robots hitting each other.
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temeraire modern au rolling around in my brain where the dragons are elementary schoolers. here is temrer and iskierka
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i’m rewatching the proposal and i’m being reminded of the thiam au i wanted to write for this movie…if anyone would be interested in that then maybe i’ll actually start writing it lol
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just had a vision of an inquisition that focused on the mage/templar war and was heavily inspired by les mis and got so hard i got nauseous
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Textpost redraw that only works in a modern setting, so. I gave them silly outfits (and a little bit of lore!)
Some zoom ins on the illusts!
And Lore
Moe is like. A SHUT-IN shut-in. So in any modern setting that isn't "Hey wanna visit my hometown for a sec (events so far have followed canon at least loosely)", it would have to meet Alfonse under Extremely Specific Circumstances.
And finally! Textpost under cut!
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what if all Star Wars fic took a note from canon and just put maul in there randomly. like you’re reading an obianidala or whatever the fuck and in the middle of the big wedding scene maul just crashes through the window and starts slaughtering. no explanation, no set-up, just an abrupt reminder that oh yeah, this fic is set in the series where nothing ever makes sense ever, and now the unhappy couple is finishing their vows while dueling a madman. and then he kidnaps the ring bearer (a mouse droid) and leaves and the fic resumes like that’s just a normal thing that happens here, because it is, because this is Star Wars. and it becomes such a meme that comment sections are full of readers speculating about what chapter the mauldrop will happen in. what if. the world would be a better place.
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AAAAA like honestly I really don’t care for tsugemina but I know they have a decent sized jp fanbase so I get the vol 12 sacrifice once again💔 but kurodachi as parents my God naina… I can see it so clearly like in my dream they’d be the sweetest most loving parents ever like in my dream it was weird cause it was little snippets? But I can just see it… adachi falling asleep with their baby girl already far into dreamland on his chest and kurosawa using every molecule of strength in his body not to start crying (53636 burst shots were taken), kurosawa buying matching pyjamas for all three of them (cherry print I’m sorry I’m a weak, weak person…), that classic moment of them laying together in bed ready to sleep, wedding photos framed prettily on the bedside, when all of a sudden the baby starts crying and they both make a move to get up but then one of them stops the other with a gentle hand with the ‘I’ve got it, rest yourself’ line oh I’m insane. Positively INSANE
ANON DO U HAVE ANY IDEA . HOW SEVERELY THIS ASK CHANGED MY BRAIN CHEMISTRY.??? ive been thinking about ur scenarios all Day. i started thinking of whole ideas and hcs and everything head in hands i never knew krdc being parents could be this powerful...... im choosing to believe ur dreams are prophetic bc i need this to happen in canon so badly its not even funny . brb i need to send sensei a very tearful request letter
anyway thank u so much for this ask i drew u some la kurodadchi in return after taking some inspiration pls enjoy .......
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genuinely nothing more frustrating than getting an absolutely godly vision for something that can only be portrayed to its full glory in an art form in which you don’t have the necessary skills to create it
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asugoro save me. asugoro. save me asugoro
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