#more cohesive more satisfying

[nuzzle]

march 2023 monthly coord contest at baby yokohama "cherry blossom viewing with kumya-chan" maiko-sama's entry "the red ribbon is perfect! the accessories are also coordinated with cherry blossoms in full bloom ♡" 2023★3月グランプリ発表＆エントリー者様ご紹介【BABY】

#that is not the full quote but i can't understand the rest #i love this entry so much.. matching dresses and the sakura petals in her hands to match her flower are precious #big fan of when coords have a solid cohesive theme it's so satisfying.. i wanna work on doing that more #and i have the same shoes so helpful coord inspo #baby yokohama #monthly coord contest #baby the stars shine bright #btssb #lolita coord #lolita fashion #egl #egl fashion #egl community #sweet lolita #usakumya #jfashion #j fashion #my uploads!

[kicktwine]

Although - let me premise. I like Lyse. I don’t think Conrad choosing her to lead the resistance was earned, it felt very fast and a bit out of nowhere because she’s not a leaderly type and the traits she gained were in Doma (he didn’t see that happen), but you actually don’t have to change anything major to fix or at least better it in my brain, you just need to swap around some dialogue. Don’t have him talk to you about choosing her, have her take the reins herself or with encouragement when he dies. thassit I think itd give her some je ne sais quoi

#play game #stormblood #stormblood spoilers #ffxiv spoilers #I was right stormblood tries to handle two big things at once and is a bit misbalanced with how much time they both need to really hit #but it’s really doing the most with what it’s working around #it has limitations and put its shoulders back and rammed into them and it’s like getting bruised but it’s still doing good things #I think it just gets a bit panicked about how its pacing is going and tries to fix it in the moment — but it needed to stretch the fix out #which may be a multiple writers thing? I’m unsure idk about the production. #SORRY FOR BEING A STORY GUY IM SORRY but no it’s doing great cohesion things and great engagement things they really got the #linear quest-to-quest feeling good enough that I know when I Can stop but I don’t Want to #I would have spoken more about the other expansions while they were happening (arr specifically) but I wasn’t Engaged then. And I AM engage #now; which is making me Think Things. I think the fact that I can pick up on what exactly is wrong instead of just going (??????????) #is a point for sb and hw and a point away from arr base patch #no anyways. and we didn’t need to spend quite so much time at the ruby sea. ANYWAYS- #LYSE COULD BE A LEADER. That’s what her arc has been leading to. it’s just that the shoehorned way the concept is named is not satisfying

[ravenkings]

it's interesting to me that of all the neil g*aiman IP to get screen adaptations, the one no one really cares about anymore is american gods because i think it was one of the best, both in terms of the screen adaptation (based on the first season at least; i never saw the second season) and in terms of the novel itself

#i think it's one of the best things he's done if not the best tbh #i find it much more narratively cohesive and satisfying than sandman and like MUCH better than good omens...............fight me idgaf #also the first season of the tv series was an increasingly rare bryan fuller w #(i mean.................................if i was going to be bitchy i would say the obvious reason people dgaf about it #is that there aren't enough sexually ambiguous white men to ship together in it butttttttttttt i won't 😊)

[aquaquadrant]

Aqua. Aqua!! The new chapter!!!!! It was so good!!!! The writing! Superb! The angst! The rescue! The relief! The ENDING!!! Of both sections!!! I was so emotionally invested reading it, it literally used a good deal of my energy and now I am Tired!!! the secret is OUT!! Bravo is MAD!! You Do Not Touch one of the hermits-and-adjacent-friends!! Bravo killing himself to escape atlas and ending up at spawn! The F*CKING PARALLELS!!!!! I’m going insane!!! (Good) aaaaAaAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

Absolutely captivated by the fact that we all thought it was gonna be the DL players rescuing Tango, but now the secrets out!! And it might end up being tango leading the DL players to rescue Bravo instead!! What a twist!! What a marvellous switch!!! A masterful play of expectations!! I cannot wait for the extremely emotionally charged conversations to follow!!!!! I reacted out loud when atlas got away!!!

I’m sure I will have more words as I get to Process this absolutely beautiful piece of art, but for now, your fans are feral abt this au, and we are always hungry for more. Take as much time as you need to work on the next piece, we are certain to love it. Thank you so much, this was such a wonderful surprise!

heheheh i’m SO glad i was able to keep things interesting. i’ve always felt that a story, if done well, can still be impactful even if the audience guesses what’s going to happen. so i don’t mind when ppl correctly guess future plot points, but at the same time it’s neat to pull off a few twists here and there ;3

and thank you, this prob was sadly the last update i’ll get out before summer ends so the response has been very encouraging. we’re actually getting quite close to the end of ‘from eden’ as i have just three more parts planned (ofc that’s not including the post-canon drabbles i may or may not feel inclined to write). and i have to stick to only three more updates bc i’ve run out of lyrics in the song to use as titles hagsjdgah

#hels to pay au #HTP ask #i’d never change my plan just because someone correctly guessed what’s gonna happen #i don’t think shock value is more important than telling a satisfying cohesive story #but sometimes it’s nice to surprise ppl :]

[misspickman]

I understand why it is this way but it is funny to me that people despise wulbren and see him as like an irredeemable piece of shit and are at the same time obsessed with astarion

#Obviously wulbren sucks and wanting to blow up people hes refusing to acknowledge are slaves is horrible do not get me wrong #but can we talk about astarions racism towards the gur just once #Yea he gets better (not re the gurs tho. Technically. He says nothing nice about them afaik.) but only #because you are there to push him towards that and support him #I know this is an unpopular take but i just find him interesting. Wulbrens whole deal is impossible to piece without acknowledging how #Deep gnomes are treated #I dont know enough about all this Lore to make a longer and more cohesive post about it but. #It is kinda telling how everyone sees That situation as very black and white meanwhile astarion gets excused for all he wanted to do #Alas. I think it would have been fun if u could have deal with wulbrens shit more but also i enjoy a story that doesn't necessarily resolve #In the most satisfying way for all characters #Txt #Bg3 spoilers

[shivunin]

Heads Up Seven Up

Rules: Post seven lines from something you're writing. Tag some other people (seven, if you wanna be fancy).

Tagged by @zenstrike and @scribbledquillz---thank you both!

This is the same Fenhawke piece I've been chiseling away at for the past few weeks, and somehow I keep finding new things to tuck away into it (it's already swallowed Lend a Hand and it makes thematic sense to stick To the Last Drop in it as well, but at some point I'm going to have to split into chapters, perish the thought, when it was supposed to just be a little one-shot. Someday I am going to stop telling myself the thing I'm writing is just going to be a cute little one-shot.)

Anyways!

“I’ve got her,” the one who clutched her hair crowed, and indeed they did have her; Hawke’s eyes rolled back in her head and her body went limp all at once. The slaver must have broken her wrist with that blow. Sudden pain would have pulled her under in an instant. Fenris had seen it happen to her before.

With a practiced motion, the second one pulled a set of manacles from his belt and snapped them around her wrists, the right one already blooming red and purple, and Fenris didn’t have to be close to recognize what they’d done. He’d seen this often enough, hadn’t he? They were enchanted things, magic suppressors, and he’d seen plenty of slaves with permanent versions in Danarius’s household. They would collar her soon enough with something fitted to her elegant throat, or perhaps she would wear double bracelets, all the better suited to be somebody’s pet, somebody’s showpiece. In moments, they would—they would—

Tagging back: @greypetrel @ndostairlyrium @heniareth @demandthedoodles @gaysebastianvael and you (yes you!); if you aren't working on any writing/don't want to/already did this, no pressure as always!

#maria hawke #my writing #tag game #haha. anyways #he braids her hair for her while she gets healed because it's the only thing he can do for her and he wants to do *something* #i might. need to cut parts of this fic to make it more cohesive. but i...don't want to. #so i guess i'll keep adding bits in until i'm satisfied #shivunin scrivening

[michi-chelle]

anyway brain empty just link click

#please for the love of all that is good and holy and sacred tell me there’s gonna be a season 3 #season 2 was amazing it kept me on my toes the whole time and it was super action-packed and psychological and i loved it #the fight scenes were so satisfying lmao #season 1 has my whole heart tho it’s like…..cozy? idk it’s an emotional rollercoaster for sure but #it was focused more on our beloved trio and their little adventures idk #i liked how each ep was about a different client and a different story but it was all cohesive and tied together into a greater plotline #tho i didn’t understand liu min at all like i don’t get what his deal with emma was i didn’t get his motivations at all #and i didn’t understand the lil pink hair boy either (i forgot his name) like why would he agree to kill all those people #like how did he know qian jin had the means to change the past like did he know of cheng xiaoshi…? #and i still don’t get how lu guang knew about the boat #oh shit unless he knew about it because he went that far back in time to save cheng xiaoshi?? now my brain hurts #whatever i just need season 3 😫 this show is so good omg #i’m glad i randomly saw the thumbnail of a video youtube recommended me about the show and the art style captivated me #and then boom i was hooked lmao #michi yaps

[mymarifae]

my ass did not draw this year😂

#but my ass DID write this year so... still a good year for me :) creatively. as far as everything else goes uhhhhhWELL MOVING ON #i guess i'm more or less happy with where my art is atm? i have lots and lots and LOTS of fun when coloring at least :) #and for someone who has never studied color theory in her fucking life i think i'm Not Bad at creating cohesive palettes and such #i do want to see myself use less reddish pinks and more cool colors in the future for real because good fucking god #but otherwise uhhhh.idc. art is purely for funsies for me so i'm satisfied with my growth despite only doing this occasionally and casually

[flashhwing]

how funny would it be if I really designed my entire warden around the “if you romance Alistair and don’t do the dark ritual he takes the final blow for you” thing and then it didn’t even work

#like if Fabian dies. I’ll accept it. still a satisfying ending ig #I do want Fabian and Anders to be friends tho. for worldstate reasons #I may just replay da2 and restart inquisition to get a cohesive worldstate lmao #altho da2 would be almost identical to my last run except make Carver a grey warden instead of a Templar #for inquisition I’m genuinely like. based on that post I made a few days ago #okay well what if I made a trevelyan who is just Anders in disguise #I know the like. dialogue and gameplay don’t really support that at all #(no healing magic? at all? why?) #it’s more the sort of thing you gotta do in a fic. but imagine #anyway yeah in my head Fabian’s worldstate includes inquisitor Anders #this has been a post #ash plays dragon age

[lorillee]

I have been waiting for your reaction to this twist since you started this game. It is so fucking incredible

IM LITERALLY FLOORED. THIS IS INSANE. ITS SO FUN BUT HOLY CRAP I LITERALLY. IT NEVER EVEN CROSSED MY MIND NOT ONCE. OH HHHHH MYGOSH

#ask #kasmusser #lorillee liveblogs aa investigations 2: electric boogaloo #this game is actually. i might make a more in depth post on it later but its actually surprisingly cohesive #like because with all the other aa games most of them follow like a loose narrative #but most of the cases themselves arent terribly like. relevant to the climax #oh no i can already feel this becoming a tag essay. uhhh ill try to keep it short so i can talk about this more later #but for this game every single case is like absolutely intrinsically tied to the overall narrative of the game #and the ultimate climax. which makes it infinitely more satisfying #not to even get into the themes #like honestly i think this is like The most cohesive game in this series that ive played so far #actually i really want to talk about this in a lot more depth later but WE'LL GET TO THAT AT SOME POINT !!!!!!!!

[mejomonster]

Horrified to say I may just try an experimental writing style for me and see how it fucking goes

But I really hate rewriting in a different way later ;-;

But I also just. Really want these scenes written down, physically existing instead of just in my brain. However they come written out, at least they'd BE WRITTEN

#rant #writing #;-; my brain is torn between 3 writing style choices right now #1 my usual one. which is mostly like scenes from a movie but the narrator character close perspective pov #will sort of guide the story in what is getting focus. so it holds your hand a bit #by communicating for example 'this story is about X that happened/my connection to my loved one/how i met them/how i changed into X' #each chapter. which helps each segment of story feel like a complete mini-self contained story. its satisfying #because u get an intro journey and conclusion which are connectsd each chapter. #the downside? i have to focus on a particular arc singularly in one chapter #and i cant jump around to multiple. i also cant pick as broad a scene choice. i have to omit more #in attempt to remain more focused on only what relates to that chapters 'main thread' its telling #and i dont want that cohesion this time tbh. i want novel length cohesion but #i want individual scenes to be more disjointed separate moments you the Reader determine how are connected #i dont want to spoonfeed the reader WHY theyre connected. i think disjointed will first help #me write SHORTER scenes of show instead of tell. and second it will allow #yhe story to read as one bigger whole in a wider cast way which i want. #2 i like the idea of a Telling a Fairytale style. because i remember the whole story in my head this way lol. byt downside? it reads like a #history book or myth. and i know ppl generally dont enjoy modern fiction written this way. #3 the previously mentioned disjointed way. individual scenes and the emotions in them. then skip to the next scene. like my usual #writing style but with less effort put in to connect the scenes through a narrator guiding the reader. #with much less content of the narrator explaining the point of the scenes. again i think this stylw #would let me first write MORE scenes since scenes will be shorter word counts #and second i think the curtness and separation of individual scenes will help me focus on a larger cast #qhereas with my usual writing style i have to mainly stay in the pov of only 1-3 characters #as the story is more heavily guided/leaned into one characters pov

[kingofmyborrowedheart]

Do you prefer Taylor’s “patchwork quilt” albums or her sonically cohesive ones more?

#taylor swift #I consider sn/red/lover to be patchwork #and everything else (ts/f/1989/rep/folklore/evermore) to be sonically cohesive #It’s interesting to see how she goes through these little experimental/everything at the wall phases before jumping to a new sound #like in terms of the overall listening experience #I think the patchwork ones are fun to listen to because you get all these different styles and genres #but sonically cohesive is sometimes extremely satisfying #I think I lean more toward patchwork albums because they’re just unrestrained expression and not really trying to fit in a box

[deadrocks]

Ep 90 in my campaign 2 rewatch, and hey, fandom opinions run the gamut, but everything with Adeen Tasithar leaves such a bad taste in my mouth.

#what was done to that npc is so wretched #that i've never been able to come around on the npc that did those acts #or found their redemption path narratively satisfying #for me it just doesn't work as like a cohesive character #more like two halves of different apples stuck together #or as if a fanon version of a character became canon halfway through the story #which i guess kind of is what happened in retrospect #i'll have to write this out more when i get through the rewatch

[swankpalanquin]

silicon valley finale more satisfying than succession finale ToT

#i know they are different types of shows but just like thematically more cohesive and satisfying... to me #like yeah! people Can do the right thing actually #and in like the funniest way possible .. i literally laughed out loud at the Big Moment at the launch

[goldencithaerias]

Unexpected Intervention

Bully!Miguel x Reader

tw: dirty talking, semi-public sex, fingering, p in v smut, enemies to lovers if you squint, mean miguel o’hara, soft miguel o’hara at the end

(author note: first off, this is my first miguel fic after a few weeks of being down bad for this man, second, this is PURE FILTHY SMUT. nothing hardcore and more focused on reader’s pov if anything tbh, but maybe it’s just me projecting. anyhow, enjoy.)

(smut under the cut)

It was supposed to be just a small break.

You were simply tired and wanted to take a breather from all of your classes. So, as any rational student would, you skipped fourth period to go up to the rooftop, hoping that some fresh air would help boost your mood.

Unfortunately for you, Miguel O’Hara, the bane of yours and pretty much everyone else’s existence, was also there, smoking weed on a Tuesday afternoon. He was the stereotypical mean jock that picks on others with a hot body to die for, the kind that makes people both want and fear. In other words, a hot bully.

And that’s how you find your skirt hiked up to your stomach, back pressed against his chiseled body as his two thick fingers pump in and out of your abused cunt. This has to be at least the 4th orgasm that he had pulled out of you, and just from his mere fingers alone. His lips were pressed against your ear, his other hand fondling your tits as he whispers the vilest of words that make you whimper.

“Needy slut, eh? So desperate for attention that you need to wear that tiny skirt everywhere you go, hm? Need the whole world to fuck your pussy out before you’re satisfied, isn’t that right?”

You could only respond in loud and desperate moans, body bouncing up and down on his fingers as your arm clings behind his neck, brain too fucked out to come up with anything actually cohesive. Your juices have covered his entire hand white by now, legs spread wide as the man you swore you despise with your entire being hitting that gummy spot inside you that makes your eyes roll back over and over again.

It took so many illegible pleas and mind-blowing orgasms for him to actually unzip his pants, ripping your skirt off and filling you up to the brim with his girthy cock after pressing you flat onto the dirty floor. Hell, you were pretty sure the door to the rooftop wasn’t locked, and that anyone could walk in any moment now, yet that didn’t stop him from fucking your senses out like a madman. His grip on your hips was so tight that you were sure there would be bruises afterward, but the thought only made the lewd noises that escaped your lips louder.

This is it, you decided; Miguel O’Hara has ruined your experience with any other man from now on, as you were sure no other can ever fill you up as good as he does. You made sure to memorize each and every vein of his cock, taking note of how thick and warm his dick felt around your walls as you took him in as the good girl you were; his words, not yours, and tucking it in the deep corner of your brain for safekeeping.

You both were there until half an hour after fourth period ended, panting and out of breath from the intense sex that left you completely brain fucked. Miguel takes in your form, inspecting how your pretty eyes glaze over with so much bliss and with drool rolling down the corner of your mouth. All because of him, the person who has been bothering you ever since the beginning of time, the one you had cursed out so many times that landed you in enough after-school detention to last at least half the school year. He chuckled at that, chest swelling with pride as he picked up your helpless form in his arms, pulling your panties up and covering your lower half with his jacket like the gentleman he was. You nuzzled your head into his chest, which earned you a huff from Miguel, who then leaned down to you while halfway through the door.

“Why don’t we finish this at my place, muñeca? Gotta make up for your ruined skirt, after all.”

#miguel o'hara x reader #miguel o'hara #miguel x reader #miguel o’hara smut #spiderman 2099 x reader #God I need him #in my bed #right this second

[frmisnow]

˙✧˖ ?! — SMUT KOOK HEADCANONS - (MDNI !! )

note. just for funsies + started and finished this so late helpp 🧸ྀི may not be my most coherent and cohesive work but it's headcanons so it's fine (i hope) as always: just as work of fiction, enjoy!!

SWITCHHH

like that man can do it all

one second he's whimpering about how good you're stroking his dick the next he's gagging you with it

crazy!

while we're on the topic of giving head

he's a lil munch <3

you know how competitive he gets

it's just so oddly satisfying to him

seeing you completly lose your shit over his sole tongue is what gets him going

in general he's got a bunch of stamina in him

he'll overstimulate you on accident

trust me he didn't mean it like that, your pussy around him just felt so good he just had to continue moving

that's just how he works

wholeheartedly believe that he can do it absolutly anywhere and everywhere

like he don't gaf

when he needs pussy- he needs it!

BIG on marking

on both sides actually

he doesn't mind your fingernails digging into his back, the next day when he's at the gym he'll gladly have ppl stare at it

idk he's pretty possesive like he needs the whole world to know

talks A BUNCH during sex

like at first he's guiding you through it like a sweetheart and when he's got you all overstimulated and brainfucked he starts asking questions that you're to stupid to understand in the moment

and oh he's giggling about it too!

but he isn't a bitch all the time k?

"you're taking it so well"

"look at you so pretty on my dick"

"feels so good baby, you feel so good 'round me"

mostly he wants to hear you

your voice when you're all messed up is just so endearing to him

your pretty moans going through his ear just make jk love you more, to give it his all

motivation tbh!

on the other hand when he's leaning to subbing he can become a blabbering cute lil mess himself

starting to shake his head repeatedly without a real reason, whispering nonsense into the air, desperatly holding onto you

kisses during sex !!!!!

wet & sloppy but it's so hot !

very touchy while loving

his hands will wander all over you while eating you out, while pounding into you no matter if it's you tits, your hair, your tummy he always finds smth to toy with

to get all your senses rolling

#bts x you #bts ff #bts jungkook #bts imagines #bts fanfic #bts fic #bts #jjk x reader #jungkook x reader #jungkook x y/n #jungkook smut #kpop smut #bts smut #bts x reader #bts x fem!reader #bts x y/n #bts headcanons #jungkook headcanons