#he nearly has a heart attack

[sunderwight]

Liushen AU where SY transmigrates into SJ's older brother, and subsequently nopes them right out of the slavery backstory by using his general knowledge of the story and actually being an adult in a kid's body to just leave (basically) with SJ and YQ.

SY carts them both up to Cang Qiong for the next sect trials. It's actually not all that hard, the trickiest part is getting enough to eat and finding safe places to sleep between leaving the slavers and taking the trials (SY manages just barely, with considerable help from his new little brothers.) Nobody bothers to go after them because it's before Qiu Jianluo and this style of human traffickers mostly operate by virtue of their merchandise having nowhere else to go. Chasing down runaways is an expense not worth indulging, given that most of them either come straight back or die of exposure.

Anyway, they take the trials, and as expected YQY gets chosen to become a personal disciple for the sect leader, and SJ gets chosen by the Qing Jing Peak Lord, but also as (kind of) expected (by SY alone) nobody wants SY. He's older the Yue Qi, so too old, and unlike YQ and SJ his cultivation potential isn't striking enough to make any exceptions for him.

SY, however, can't leave it at that. He's spent more than five minutes with the street kid codependency gang, so he's gotten attached to both of them. And he knows what will happen if they're left to their own devices and The Plot proceeds accordingly. (Also, they keep threatening to not stay at the sect if SY doesn't stay too, for some reason.) So with a heavy heart and internal candle lit for himself, SY heads to Bai Zhan Peak. Which is the only peak that accepts disciples by way of them turning up and refusing to leave.

SY's not much of a fighter. He actually really hates the atmosphere on BZP, he's not bad at physical cultivation (his health's pretty good in this life, ironic considering how much worse his situation was) but the random ambushes and survival-of-the-fittest stuff is just not his brand. But that's okay, because it turns out that BZP actually DESPERATELY needs disciples on the actual peak who are interested in things other than fighting and cultivating their own strength. Stuff like, filling out requisition requests for An Ding every time things break, apologizing to An Ding every time things break again, organizing schedules, browbeating senior disciples into actually teaching, educating disciples on virtually any artistic or social skill, hosting lectures on how to beat vicious beasts without just overpowering them, and etc.

Okay so some of this stuff isn't and has never actually been on Bai Zhan's curriculum but Shen Yuan is going to make this place tolerable. And stop these children from needlessly getting acid burns or lyme disease or scurvy or whatever. He keeps internally chewing out Airplane for designing a sect system that means there are a lot of largely unsupervised 12-year-olds running around the wilderness on a mountain picking fights all the time. (When he actually meets Shang Qinghua and figures him out he switches to doing it in person, of course, in twice-monthly bitching sessions that look a lot like budding friendship.)

Of course one of the worst offenders is the Liu kid, who SY would suspect was actually raised by wolves if he didn't know for a fact that Liu Qingge has a younger sister, and also the kinds of nice clothing and letters from home that strongly imply not only does he have a family, but that the family is pretty well-off. Liu Qingge is at first deeply offended by SY being a BZP disciple. He rarely fights anyone, and uses tricks and evasion tactics whenever a fight can't be avoided. And he does other annoying stuff, like pestering him about meals and baths and lecturing him on identifying dangerous plants and the early signs of qi deviation. This is not what their peak is about! He should get with the program already! Just fight stuff until you're too tired to keep fighting stuff!

Also SY's younger brother, SJ, is pure evil (at least according to baby Liu Qingge) even though his other younger brother (?) is cool and nice.

Anyway, Liu Qingge stops complaining about SY after their first mission together, where Liu Qingge doesn't lose a fight but does get into a kind of pyrrhic victory situation where he's really badly hurt, and it's SY who helps him win (correctly identifying the monster and then pointing out its weakness) and takes care of him afterwards and gets him safely back to Cang Qiong. SY expresses surprise at LQG actually being polite to him, and LQG realizes that he's been a colossal ass if people think he wouldn't be grateful to someone who saved his life, so the usual Liushen dynamic proceeds from there. Liu Qingge starts bringing SY fans he leaves behind and hunts down animals that are supposed to be useful for bolstering weak cultivation, SY invites LQG to tea and keeps the critters as pets, etc etc.

SY doesn't get the Head Disciple position, because that's only acquired via beating the current peak lord in combat and lol no. Also he's not interested in stealing it from Liu Qingge, to whom it rightfully belongs (in his mind). But that's fine, because Liu Qingge takes the position when the next generation ascends and then he lets SY exclusively handle all the peak duties SY actually likes (mainly teaching). It's perfect -- Liu Qingge gets to focus on his War God antics and occasional administration/meetings without having to deal with students his has no patience for, but the disciples of BZP don't get neglected because SY is actually teaching and organizing classes and student care. BZP hasn't enjoyed a golden age like this since it was founded!

Things are pretty good overall, but Shen Yuan knows that it's only a matter of time before The Plot shows up, and so he can't rest completely easily.

Meanwhile, the will-they-or-won't-they bets on Liushen have been going strong for a while now. The thing is, most of their martial siblings are convinced that these two are already "together", and just being circumspect about it. Those who know SY well (like SJ, YQY, and SQH) know better but think that SY's romantic obtuseness is to blame, whereas those who know LQG well (LMY, WQW, and MQF) are pretty sure that it's actually LQG's obtuseness that's the problem. Of course it's actually both of them, so efforts to "fix" matters by getting through one of their thick skulls inevitably run afoul of the other's.

An additional complication is of course: SJ doesn't like LQG (mutual), and now that he's the leader of his own peak, he wants to poach SY to come and live there. Not only so he can have one of the 2 people he trusts actually close at hand, but also because SJ also hates actually teaching the atrocious little brats on his peak, and would like to have SY come and do it for him. YQY is still a total pushover for him too, and is also now the sect leader, so YQY agrees that SY can change peaks if SY and LQG both agree to it.

Liu Qingge, of course, is a no, but he's a variable "no". He's not going to hold Shen Yuan against his will or anything.

As for Shen Yuan, it's... complicated. He doesn't really like BZP, but it's gotten a lot better than it was at the start. These days he's actually pretty proud of his accomplishments, and it's more comfortable, but it's still a rough and rowdy place with fewer creature comforts, libraries, or other appealing points than QJP. Also, if he goes to Qing Jing to teach, he can personally ensure that SJ doesn't go around persecuting any of his students!

But... SJ never lived with the Qiu family in this AU, and even though SY's not totally clear on what the PIDW backstory for SJ was, he knows he's a better guy now than the scum villain in the book was. He has a reputation for making cutting remarks, not for being an abusive snake or a lecher. SY's honestly less worried about him doing anything bad at all, and there are other people on QJP who can teach. It might even be good for SJ to promote more people to fill out a social circle he can rely on! That guy needs more friends, seriously.

And QJP really doesn't need more layabout literary intellectual types who get into pointless arguments, which is all SY would be if he went there. Just yet another nerdy scholar for the rich kids with middling cultivation that the peak favors to ignore. At least on BZP he's filling a gap.

SY is clearly torn, and the fact that SY's considering it has LQG upset, and LQG doesn't handle being upset very well, so of course they have an argument about it. SY storms off to cool his head and LQG is like, this is it, he's gone to Qing Jing Peak, I've drive him off by being too aggressive and he's probably remembering all those times I told him he didn't belong here and oh no what have I done maybe if I build him a heated bath and get him books he will come back???

Turns out that SY just went to An Ding to vent at SQH while SQH was like "I think you would have fewer problems if you and Liu Qingge just got married and my disciples could call you Shigu to your face instead of behind your back" and SY threw melon seeds at him and sulked on his fainting couch (which is always cold for some reason...)

Thus begins the Liushen Divorce Arc where SY tries to be anywhere but BZP or QJP, Liu Qingge tries to figure out what thing he can punch to fix this not-punchable problem, SJ is like "I don't see what the big deal is they should break up Liu Qingge is awful and I want my brother to teach my classes for me" like the spoiled youngest sibling he's finally allowed to be, YQY is trying to moderate this Hades vs Demeter situation and is all "well maybe SY could spend half the year on QJP and half on BZP?", and Liu Mingyan is going "I know my brother if this doesn't work out he is going to die single and pining like an idiot" and so keeps conscripting other disciples to y'know, lock SY and LQG into storage closets together (ineffective: LQG can punch through walls) or at least get them in the same room (underestimating SY's willingness to yeet himself out of windows to avoid awkward social interactions.)

By the time Luo Binghe joins the sect (as a Qiong Ding disciple), the drama is in full swing and is the main topic of gossip across most of the peaks.

#svsss #scum villain's self saving system #liushen #long post #sy doesn't even realize lbh has already arrived until someone mentions 'luo-shidi' on qiong ding in passing #he nearly has a heart attack #why isn't this kid on qing jing peak?! #(why would he be on QJP now though? SJ's not gonna want him not even to pathologically torment and he's promising enough for QDP) #SY: well I guess... that settles that? not enough reason to move to QJP if luo binghe isn't even there. everything can stop being weird now #LQG: then we shall have a spring wedding #I like to think the changes to the world are so substantial that the setting just shifts to a less angsty action/adventure story #now the cang qiong crowd are the colorful side characters instead of complicit in lbh's many torments

[bluerosefox]

Family Resemblance

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I had another 11pm brain worm.

Enjoy

-x-x-

Daniel Wayne, the younger toddler brother of Bruce Wayne and the son of Martha and Thomas Wayne had been kidnapped the night their parents were murdered.

Daniel had been snagged the moment their killer heard people headed to the alley and Bruce in his state of shock didn't realize it until it was far to late and could only scream in horror (from everything) as his baby brother is crying his name. (If you wanna make it even more heart wrenching, make it Danny's first time being able to say Bruce's name right and/or Bruce had said some mean things to Danny earlier after he accidentally broke something of Bruce's, something like 'I wish youd go away' or 'I never wanted a brother, you're such a bother!')

Bruce is being held by Alfred as some police officers are chasing down the Wayne's parents killer while some stay behind to see if they could do something.

Minutes turn to hours and as they wait, praying the police at least found Danny, Bruce is ridden with guilt. From his parents death to allowing his brother to be kidnapped.

Eventually the police return to give Alfred and Bruce the news. And it's not good.

The killer escaped and Danny was nowhere to be found.

And it would take many years before he would be found.

-x-x-

Bruce gets a call from Damian during school hours one day. When he answers he is greeted with Damian demanding him to get to the school and explain himself.

Confused Bruce asks what does he mean and Damian responds with

"The two new students in class today are the spitting images of you and I father! Either they are poorly created clones or you have more hidden blood children!"

-x-x-

Meanwhile the very students being discussed are calling up someone too

"Ellie? Dan? What's wrong? You better not have made too much chaos already, I just paid for the uniforms for that place."

"DAD! I THINK ANOTHER ONE OF THE FRUITLOOPS FAILED CLONES SOMEHOW SURVIVED!"

"What?"

#danny phantom #danny fenton #crossover #dp x dc #blue rambles #danny phantom dc #writing ideas #random idea #dpxdc #bruce and danny are siblings #danny was a toddler when he was kidnapped #somehow someway he escaped or was dumped out of Gotham #due to how young Danny was and how traumatized he was about that night he forgot everything but his first name #no one really connected the dots that Danny was the missing Wayne child #mostly due to no public photographs of Danny #he had been born very early and no one was sure he was going to make it #and going to the theater had been his first time being finally allowed out of the manor #only for it to end in tragedy #years later though #Danny moves to Gotham with his kids #a deaged and raised from infanthood Danielle 'Ellie' Fenton and Dante 'Dan' Fenton #Damian was not ready to see them #he thinks theyre poorly made clones since one looks more like his father than him and the other is a girl #or more secret children his father didnt know about #Ellie and Dan think Damian is an escaped clone of Vlads #Bruce and Danny meet at the school and Bruce nearly has a heart attack at the young man who looks so much like his parents #Danny is a bit weirded out because Bruce looks very familiar somehow

[sanaimissyou]

Aira wouldn’t be mad that Hiiro picks up Gen z slang, he’d be mad that Hiiro picks up Gen z slang and uses it perfectly

#rinne on the other hand nearly has a heart attack when he hears his little brother go ‘slay’ #enstars #aira shiratori #hiiro amagi #sana speaks

[befuddled-calico-whump]

#has this been done yet #i made it during a conversation with kira/nick lol but forgot to post #i accidentally showed my conservative Christian dad this meme and nearly had a heart attack lololol #he's cool but ive never discussed like...any lgbt stuff with my family #better he saw this than any of my whump art 👁️👄👁️ #whump community #writeblr

[gingergari]

i still believe in a february winter wonderland

companion/sequel post here!

#gari draws #gari’s ocs #oc: mela #oc: pera #nintendo #smb #super mario #super mario bros #mario #mareach fankid #I almost made 'winter fun forever' the caption it was cute #since mela actually has a more fiery firebrand she really hates wearing warm clothing since they make her even warmer than she normally is #so getting her to dress properly in winter is an uphill battle that mario and peach sometimes lose/compromise on #poor toadsworth nearly had a heart attack when he saw her out there like that #so i imagine she has a strict timer for how long she can be out there like that #thinking of making a less detailed companion piece of this #we'll see. I'm also busy drawing my black ocs for bhm #and midterms. ig 🙄 #oh the quality crunched like crazy. i even glazed this thang 🫠

[teatitty]

Listen Hizashi's work life might be organised to perfection but his personal life? An absolute fucking mess. Aizawa moves in with him when they graduate not because they're dating [partially that also] but because he takes one look at Hizashi's messy, disorganised, dishes towering in the sink, bed halfway made, cupboards empty of all but ramen packets and energy drinks living space and is like "I can't let you live like this. Zashi. Zashi you'll die if I leave you to fend for yourself what the fuck"

#bnha #erasermic #hizashi says he's just too busy to do chores regularly and leaves them for his days off #and aizawa nearly has a heart attack thinking about how much mess with accumulate if he lets that happen

[frostycatblr-fandom-files]

Silly Headcanon: Unruly Clone brothers get Held to keep them out of trouble/discipline them by their commanding officers. Older the CO = longer they can hold a troublemaker.

What I cannot do: Draw people or clothing/armor.

What I can do: Depict silly, lighthearted idea as meme.

*C.O. can be substituted for any ("big") brother really.

#frosts fandom freakouts #star wars #here have a meme #silly ideas #tcw headcanons #new little brother constantly getting into trouble? put him in air jail. problem solved. 🤙 #Hunter's too short to put (some of) his bros in Air Jail so he has to come up with his own system #sometimes clones want Air Jail just for fun #something tells me Anakin got put in Air Jail once by Cody and and Obi Wan wanted to laugh so badly he nearly passed out #if you're difficult for the medic while he tries to set your broken bones after you punched a droid he puts you in Air Jail #if you annoy your commander too much you get put in Air Jail #even when you're wearing your full armor kit #no it doesn't matter if you're not a shiny anymore either #son idgaf if you're an ARC trooper you're going to Air Jail for giving me a heart attack #Hardcase loves Air Jail time

[youngpettyqueen]

Trick or treat!

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heyo!!! what do I have here... hm... how about a headcanon?

Hawkeye and Charles were coworkers pre-canon. Hawkeye remembers Charles, Charles does not remember Hawkeye, and Hawkeye claims he's never heard of Charles and doesnt bring up the fact that they literally worked together because pretending he doesnt know a relatively well-known surgeon when they worked in the same city is. fucking hilarious. Charles doesnt remember Hawkeye worked at the same hospital with him until post-canon when Hawkeye goes back to Boston. he doesnt let Hawkeye hear the end of it for about a month and even then it still gets brought up from time to time

this is mostly a joke headcanon but I do think of it fairly often. I just think it'd be really funny for Charles to show up at the 4077 and Hawkeye is sitting there like "of all fucking people." they worked in the same city, so on that basis its not too much of a stretch to say they worked in the same hospital, but I dont think Hawkeye could've held onto the bit of not knowing Charles the entire time they knew each other. thats said, its still very funny to think about

#mash #hawkeye pierce #charles winchester #Charles shows up to work one day sees Hawkeye standing there talking with the coworker he fucking hates (Trapper) #and he nearly has a heart attack #and THEN it fucking clicks and he's sooooo mad #remembering Hawkeye with far less grey in his hair snarking his way around annoying him every goddamn day #he blocked him out of his memory tfw ur coworker makes u so mad u just block him out of ur brain #is this a stretch/joke headcanon? yes #but its canon to me in my mind

[mustangs-flames]

Me after posting art of htb Thatcher covered in scars and saying he looks like that at some point in Part 6: ...don't worry about it

#hail true body au #htb thatcher #don't worry about it :) #don't worry that he has scars everywhere on him #he is so good and fine! #and he definitely didn't make dave nearly have a heart attack or anything haha...

[mysticsnoopy]

i think the best thing about starting ace attorney and knowing nothing about the series is at first thinking Phoenix is a normal guy with wacky shenanigans but through out the trilogy you realize "huh this guy is actually pretty weird" but so much crazy shit happens to and around him that he seems not as crazy as whatever shit he has going on

#snoopy babbles #and i havent even PLAYED the ''apollo'' trilogy and i have heard so many things its CRAZY #how does this man LIVE. i think i'd have a heart attack at like.... samurai turnabout. farwell my turnabout???? I AM DEAD #like he gets disbarred and he has a a daughter at age 26. has a new hot rival but this guy is actually super evil and wants to kill him #rebuilds the whole court system with his bare fucking hands. takes in an apprentice. nearly looses everything but obviously has a turnabout #re-enters the bar. theres an orca at some point after??? #id be DEAD. phoenix wright has the best luck stat known to mankind #ace attorney

[notsurewhattocallmyselfyet]

You ever think maybe John just fucks with Arthur because this man relies on him fully to be able to see? Like:

John: Arthur! There's a horror beyond your comprehension RIGHT in front of us! Get down!

Arthur: *face plants in the middle of a public park*

#malevolent podcast #john totally convinces arthur there's a monster in front of them and it's just like a puppy #the puppy licks arthurs hand and he nearly has a heart attack #john gets annoyed and makes arthur creep cautiously around an open field with absolutely nothing in it #john stifling giggles as he does this #malevolent #arthur lester #john doe #unreliable narrator

[legendaryevokercupcake]

No thoughts, only Nezu hating every human other than teenage trans guy Aizawa, because he sees himself in the quiet emo, and proceeding to do his damndest to adopt him.

Just fluff.

And a little bit of Nezu threatening teachers lives and families if they insulted Aizawa for not talking/spending too much time with Oboro, Hizashi and Nemuri. But mostly fluff.

And a little bit of angst because we know primary mentors don't survive in fiction, so there's a solid chance Nezu gets to watch his adopted son die.

#Principal Nezu #Nezu #MHA Nezu #MHA #BNHA #MHA Aizawa #Aizawa Shouta #Aizawa Shota #Shota Aizawa #Shouta Aizawa #The trend of adopting quiet emos continues with #Todoroki #Aizawa adopts Todoroki #The way he explains this to Nezu is amusing #Just “You're a grandfather now” #Nezu nearly has a heart attack #Poor little rat man

[swirlsncurlsnmanyturns]

thought back to season 4′s house’s head/wilson’s heart and I have A Question. yk how the whole catalyst of the episode was the fact that house had taken the bus because he was so drunk and couldn’t drive his cool biker boy motorcycle? yk how house always goes drinking with wilson whenever he has a crazy reason to celebrate or just another reason to be miserable? he always drinks with wilson. why did he, on this particular day, get SOOOO wasted without even telling wilson??? and then the rest follows of how he wants wilson to pick him up but then amber does instead and the rest is history (</3). but like, i’m so boggled as to why he was extra miserable and drinking alone that day.

#like we alr know that house wallows in misery all the time. why was he extra sad that day #thinking it's because wilson started dating the female version of him..enough to make a grown man drink himself into oblivion #and the way his trauma never got addressed afterwards??? we know he's big sad cuz of smth then we learn he has some calling for finding out #someone's demise and THEN WE LEARN ITS AMBER HIS BESTFRIENDS GIRLFRIEND #and he does EVERYTHING. to find out whats wrong. he drugs himself gives himself a heart attack #goes through complex brain surgery almost kills himself triple the amount he would on the daily to find out what happened to his #bestfriend's nearly dying gf and just #its always house not caring house being an asshole but look at the extent to which he cared in this particular episode(s) #and how important his friendship is with wilson. bruh #these two episodes have caused permanent brain damage #house md

[albatris]

maybe i should post nat's first murder <3

#I'm in a murdernat mood <3 #blood n violence n vampiric activity oh my #i mean. with the added fun of ''nat has no idea what is happening to him'' of course #y'all ever go to work even though you're very very unwell because if you don't your manager will be super mad and you're #already on your last chance due to missing a bunch of shifts (because you got kidnapped but no one cares about that apparently) and #then you have a panic attack and then things get real weird physically and mentally and then you accidentally eat someone #like. y'all ever have that happen? just nat? ok #at least he doesn't eat a random customer or coworker :c #he DOES eat a random human who ticked quinn off that quinn bullied into staging a robbery quote unquote to ''just rough #this guy up a bit and scare him <3'' without the added caveat that nat is about to finally snap and the stress will #tip him over and make him do murders #perfectly timed murder so quinn can sweep in and be the wonderful saviour with all the answers <3 #but ye lmao nat holds on pretty well he probly could have lasted another day or so at least #just dealing with vampire hunger alone. but not with added Presence Of A Threat that just sent him over the edge #its a very easy hop from self-defence from ''well this guy is bleeding and my fangs are already out and I'm hungry soooo'' #a rental car takes a left down rake street and disappears #anyway quinn enacts this plan Without telling alex it's about to be enacted and alex just wakes up to #the MOST concerning voicemail and nearly has a fucking panic/heart attack #you cant DO that quinn. alex is a vampire alex can literally just die from stress ok. you can stress alex out so much alex just DIES #is that what you want?? bastard?? #(no but quinn is an impulsive prick who didn't really think about how fucking risky what they're doing is) #(AND offers alex no proper chance to be nearby in case things go awry and quinn needs help)

[gazelessmenagerie]

( -inhales knowing that last post was of S but ......... look..... some or a decent chunk of things that can happen to S can also be applied to Z bc im a fucking sucker for it and thats it. )

#|| Tag: OOC #( as you can see... a lot of thoughts came from like my favorite comics/artists that people made of this gd bastard. ) #( and him just having to experience more things is just such a good thing even if he never truly stops being a villain to some caliber ) #( asdfljg its just that development i love. ) #( or just him having one emotional moment and being given actual genuine care where he never got that or it wasn't the right kind. ) #( HELL. even if he kills someone or thinks he did and just realizes he didn't mean it. he really didn't mean it. ) #( and just has to carry that burden of blood that burns his hands for once. ) #( aflsdj just. lmfao just bc he is pretty invulnerable to nearly all outside attacks doesn't mean I can't make his life hell again on ) #( the inside. make him care about something and rip it away. but he does that on his own more often than not. ) #( so. mega rip. but that paves the way for him to actually have to face his issues ) #( and grow form it in a painful. excruciating way. ) #( afldsjg he's just got a lot going for him but making him do it is the biggest hurdle ) #( and he has to keep wanting it. he has to CHOOSE to do it. ) #( bc i feel like that's a huge impact to the way i write him with being mind controlled for a vast majority of his life. ) #( he's experiencing these emotions without being suppressed. he's finding he can care for things even if he denies it hard. ) #( finally feeling the air and smelling the flowers. but also the burden of a heart and his own nearly crippling inner turmoil ) #( of never knowing how to process his own emotions or be anything more than a beast he was made into ) #( just -wrings hands at THE AIR- ) #( ..........i love/hate this stupid bitch )

[maraschinotopped]

what if there was a comic that was, on the surface, a very poorly written and made warrior cats comic about one-note characters that leaned heavily into tropes (wc and general ones) all drawn in ms paint, but around 50-60 pages the narrative is shifted wildly off course as instead of the main character meeting the love interest at their first gathering, they instead fuck off and befriend a background cat who was never supposed to fully exist instead. this causes a domino effect of things to happen- like characters forming different relationships than what were planned and personalities developing differently. more and more drastic measures are made by 'starclan' to course correct- until one of their messengers misinterprets their sign and messes up things permanently, causing the two to be aware that none of their world is actually real. though there were plenty of signs beforehand- it was just that one last thing that confirmed it for good.

would that be fucked up or what?

#[cherry on top] #[cats everywhere] #does that synopsis make sense? im hoping it makes sense. hopefully. hm. #anyways. i remembered an idea i got back in dec 2021 and kicked out this in an hour or two #not even into wc that much anymore! i just like developing concepts lol #third image is a bunch of character concepts cus in the original idea doc i only developed goldenpaw and spotpaw #from left to right: #icicleclaw- the tigerclaw replacement lol. was supposed to be the big baddie of the story #overshadowed later by literally all the bullshit that happens which i think is funny #jaggedpaw- brother of goldenpaw and the stereotypical bully. would eventually stand up 4 golden in the climax methinks. #n/a- the 'greystripe' to goldenpaw. starts drifting away from goldenpaw after a bit. #eventually betrays him due to 'starclan's wishes + orders and to follow her mentor (yellowhaze) #streamheart- the love interest. starts developing an actual personality after she doesnt meet goldenpaw lol #peltstar- the leader of the clan spotpaw is in (the mainly irrelevant clan in the story) #flamestar- leader of goldenpaws clan. obvs just a firestar ripoff!!! hes just a nice guy ig. #nearly has a heart attack later in the story due to. things that happen. #darkpaw- son of evil leader in the evil clan equiv. possibly temp. exiled + given the scar to 'toughen him up' #i had the idea of them and streamheart being besties in his exile... #yellowhaze- yellowfang adjacent. is the one who misinterprets the sign. #well technically he didnt misinterpret it at first. he just jumped to the wrong conclusion after goldenpaw jumped in. #theres something wrong with him <3 failboy medicine cat. #also addendum. i dont actually plan on like. actually doing this comic. #it WOULD be cool to do but like. im an idea guy not an actual product guy. T.T'' #dont have a long enough attention span or will to go through with a whole comic. unfortunately.