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cheolbooluvr · 3 years

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Hey!! For the milestone prompt game: Love, Bed Sharing, and Snowed In with S.Coups?

i love these combos that y’all are coming to me with 🥺 snow is so romantic asdhkfjdal T^T this one makes me so soft (even softer than i already am for one choi seungcheol) and i hope you enjoy it!!

this is part of my milestone prompt game!

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my only sunshine

pairing: seungcheol x reader

genre: fluff, so much fluff, established relationship

word count: 820

warnings: cursing, reference to lady gaga's infamous copypasta which mentions vomiting (but not the actual action)

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When your eyes adjusted to the grey light coming through your windows, you rolled over to check the time. 8:08 AM. Since it was Saturday, you didn’t have to go to work today. Even if they wanted to call you in, it would be impossible given the rate at which snow was falling outside your house. Closing your eyes, you tried to fall asleep again. Tick, tock, tick, tock. Your attempt at sleeping was futile, so you quietly lifted the comforter and threw your legs over the side of the bed. Another futile attempt. Something, or someone rather, was holding you back.

“Where are you going?” You always loved the way his voice sounded when he woke up.

“I’m going to make tea,” you replied to your boyfriend.

“No, don’t go,” he whined, his grip on your shirt holding you back.

“I can’t sleep.”

“I’ll help you fall asleep.”

“Really?”

“Yes.” Without a moment’s notice, you were pulled into his arms, your head finding its place snug against his chest.

“Cheol, it’s snowing,” you said. He opened one eye, squinting at the bright light that reflected off the snow.

“That explains why it’s so damn cold,” he mumbled as he pulled the comforter over your two bodies. Warmth emanated from him and his breathing was slow. “Why couldn’t you sleep?”

“I don’t know. I guess I just have a lot on my mind.”

“Yeah? Like what?”

“Just the stress of work and school. It’s a lot.”

Seungcheol opened his eyes. The morning glow lit your face up and he had never found you more beautiful than in that moment. “Hey,” he whispered quietly. His finger brushed in front of your face and tucked a stray hair behind your ear. You leaned up to look at him, taking note of the small pout he had on his face. “Have I told you today how much I love you?”

“Considering we just woke up, no,” you chuckled. A small laugh left his lips as he poked your side.

“It’s too early for your sass.”

“It’s never too early.”

“Well, I love you.”

“Yeah?” Of course you knew he loved you. And you loved him just as much, if not more. But it didn’t hurt to hear him say it.

“Yeah. I love the way you’re so passionate about the things you love. I love the way your eyes light up when the food comes out at the restaurant, or how every time you eat, it’s like you’re experiencing a spiritual awakening.” Seungcheol ran his fingers mindlessly through your hair, stroking your head gently. “I love that you’re not just a nice person, but a kind person. Someone who is caring and patient to others, especially me. I love how cozy you look wearing my hoodies that are way too big for you.”

You tried to laugh, but all that came out was a huff of air. Your eyelids were becoming too heavy for you to keep open and Seungcheol petting your head only made you sleepier.

“I love that everyday I get to come home knowing that you’ll be here in my arms every night,” he continued, his breath warm against your head with every word he spoke. “I love that despite all my flaws, you accept me for who I am, that you help me grow and become a better person with each and every day. I love that the universe created a person who may not be perfect—”

“Hey,” you interrupted.

“But is perfect for me.” He poked your cheek, eliciting a giggle from you. “You’ve gotta let me finish.”

“Okay, okay, keep going.”

“I’m done.”

“Oh, really?”

“No.” That darn Seungcheol. He could be a brat sometimes. “I could go on for days with all of the reasons why I love you. But most importantly, I love you because you’re you. You’re one of a kind, talented, brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique, completely not ever been done before, unafraid to reference or not reference, put it in a blender, shit on it, vomit on it, eat it, give birth to it—”

“Seungcheol, ew!” You poked his side, causing him to flinch and laugh from how ticklish he was.

“You know how important you are to me, right?”

“I think so.”

“Yes or no answers only.”

The corners of your lips quirked up. “Yes.”

“Good. You are my everything, my one and only, my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy~”

If you weren’t so tired, you would have been laughing up a storm, but all you could manage to say was, “You’re such a silly guy.”

“Yeah,” he replied. “But I’m your silly guy.”

And with that, you drifted off to sleep with a smile on your face knowing that you were laying in the arms of the most perfect man who loved you more than anything else in the world.

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allisonilluminated · 6 years

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The Seven Sins of Fanfiction

Hey all,

This blog is primarily focused on helping newer writers (and maybe some older ones) improve their fanfiction and increase their views. Since that’s the case, it’s important to understand exactly what not to do when you’re writing.

These are the worst things you can do while you’re writing. I can guarantee everyone reading this post has done at least three of them, and probably all in some shape of form. This is the sort of thing that makes you want to click away immediately, that you cringe at when it’s in the first paragraph or laugh at how bad it is. These things that make you stop reading other stories, just think about it for a moment. What if fewer people are reading your own work because you’re making the same mistakes?

Yeah. If you want to improve, you gotta know what you’re doing wrong. Number Seven is the least worst, then the list descends to Number One, the worst thing you can do in fanfiction.

Note: This is a subjective list. There are people who disagree with some of these points (especially the non-grammar ones), so it’s important to remember that these are the things I find most degrading to the quality of the story being written. As a writer, you have the creative liberty to write whatever you want.

#7 – Bad Romance

“Wo-o-o-o-o, o-o-o-o, o-o-ah, caught in a bad romance fanfiction but it’s the only 100k fic for my OTP so I’m like contractually obligated to read it.” - Lady Gaga, mostly

We’ve all been here. You know that moment when two characters meet, then suddenly decide to kiss, and the next thing you know they’re screwing on the patio with some kinky ass BDSM shit. What about those cringe fics where suddenly Harry is spouting some creepy possessive stuff like “my only” or “softest light of my life” to twelve year old Ginny. You know what I’m talking about.

Good romance is an art. It’s about flawed characters (later) coming together in a beautifully intimate way (later) to make something even more beautiful. There is so much bad romance on FFN and AO3 that it just blows my mind.

Giving tips would take an entire post, so here’s a good article on the absolute basics you need to write a good romance: https://www.nownovel.com/blog/romance-writing-mistakes/

#6 – Bad Dialogue Tags

“No!” he howled.

“Yes,” she growled angrily.

She retorted snarkily, “Well, screw you.”

“Fuck you too,” he scowled sadly, before gratingly mumbling “I still love you though.”

Alternatively:

“No!” “Yes.” “Well, screw you.” “Fuck you too. I still love you though.”

There’s a glorious word in this social construct we call English, and it’s “said.” Use it.

You don’t need a fancy word for every tag. You don’t need a fancy word for almost all tags. Eighty percent of your tags should be said, exclaimed, and asked, and more of said than the others. Maybe a whispered or a yelled for some flavor.

Adverbs are your enemies. I struggle with this, but you should use them extremely sparingly.

On the flipside, if your reader doesn’t know who’s talking, your dialogue is meaningless to them. Also, use line breaks every time there is a new speaker.

The trick is finding some happy medium between the two examples. A handful of fancy tags, a lot of said, and if there are two people talking back and forth you don’t even need to tag every sentence.

#5 – Bad Messaging

I don’t want to put down an example for this one, because I think writers feel liberated to write some really awful shit in fanfiction because it’s “not a serious medium” or “it’s the internet, I have free speech.” Let me say this right now:

Stories that make rape a positive thing are not okay. Stories that portray suicide in a glorified light are not okay. Stories that show slavery, or torture, or all of the other horrendous things human beings do to each other in a romanticized or glorified manner are not okay.

I don’t care if it’s your fetish. I don’t care, it’s just not okay to write about these things in a positive light. The only reason this is so high on this list is because these stories aren’t as common as the rest, and are mostly marked M/Explicit so you can avoid them.

#4 – Overdescription

Hi my name is Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). [[I’m not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he’s a major fucking hottie. I’m a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow – My Immortal

Oh boy.

Writers, let me introduce you to this wonderful thing called your profile. Assuming you aren’t drowning in copypastas, this is the perfect place for your character descriptions. Alternatively, have you heard of Tumblr? Literally, stick them anywhere except the middle of your story, and I can guarantee you the readers that actually care will find them if you mention them in your A/N.

Show, don’t tell is one of the fundamental principles of writing. When you’re describing a character, you probably don’t need more than three adjectives and a one sentence description of their outfit. Yes, that applies even if your character has a special non canon outfit. If we must know, work the details into the story. Info-dumping description is telling, and is one of the worst world building and characterization mistakes you can make. Period.

#3 – Epithets

The blond girl walked to the door, and started as a burly man opened it. “May I help you?”

“Yes, I’m here to get a consultation,” the graying businessman said as he ran a hand through his oily hair.

The youthful therapist nodded as she shut the door behind him. Rummaging on her desk, she asked, “Why are you here?”

“Well,” said the jaded economist to the buxom woman. “This author thinks they’re being clever by not giving out names, but they’re ruining this story.”

The best way to get someone to leave your story is epithets.

Epithets do not create mystery. Epithets are not a good substitute for proper nouns. Epithets will not make a clever opening, or add variety to your dialogue.

Epithets will ruin your story, and should not be used.

They come in varying degrees of horror.

The noun. You might be able to get away with saying just “the woman” or “the child” under certain circumstances. This is almost an excusable offence.

The noun with one adjective. This is already unacceptable. If you though you were going to solve Sin #4 by doing this, you’re digging yourself an even deeper hole.

The noun with one modified adjective. Because they can’t just be sexy, they have to be shockingly sexy.

The noun with multiple adjectives. This is automatically overdescription on top of being a horrible thing to subject another person to.

The noun followed by a relative clause. Because there’s always a way to make it worse. “The girl who was now holding his hand” is absolutely disgusting, and so is “The girl that was sitting across from her” or especially “the girl she knew had a chocolate bar somewhere in her pocket.

The noun followed by a relative clause with adjectives. Put it together and what have you got?

Compound Epithets. Oh. My. God. This deserves its own sin. Even if your character has blue hair, you should never ever ever call them a bluenette. Ever. Ever ever ever. AAAAAAAAH!

The author has made her point.

#2 – Bad Grammar

I find bad grammar extremely agitating, mostly because there are a lot of great tools and easy fixes to solve the problems. Most word processors have a built in spell checker, and a lot of them check for grammar as well. If you need an alternative, grammarly.com has a good free version that’ll catch a lot of mistakes. Of course, proofreading your work before posting is always a great idea. Here’s a quick list of some of the most common grammar issues you should be on the lookout for:

A new paragraph for a new idea.

A new paragraph for a new speaker.

Dialogue formatting

Periods

Commas

Run on sentences

Using line breaks

Spelling

Capitalizing starts of sentences

Capitalizing proper nouns

Choosing CONSISTENT capitalization for canon terms (Pokemon vs pokemon, for example)

Repeated words.

Sentence fragments

Tense

#1 – Bad Characterization

“What?” you’re probably asking yourself right now. “How is bad characterization possibly worse than poor grammar? Than epithets?”

Allow me to explain.

When an author writes a story, a good story, they are creating characters who act like people. They have wants, needs, hates, motives, and a concept of who they are, even if they’re only fictional. The author gives them life, spirit, a spark that keeps you reading and wanting to learn more about them.

That sense of identity is what makes them real to us. Why you binge a show on Netflix, or read a novel in one night. Reading is a connection with these characters on a deeper level than you might realize, and this connection brings them to life.

Take that away, and your story is dead.

Your gray OOC Gary Stu overpowered Ravenclaw Harry who grew up with Snape and has a goblin half brother AU is not a story about Harry Potter. It’s a story about an OC named Harry Potter, and Harry loses any integrity he had as a character in Rowling’s books.

That’s why there are fics with horrible grammar and massive following, alongside fics with incredible grammar and sentence construction but no followings. Unless you maintain a basic level of your character’s identity, the essence of what makes them empathetic, you’re not writing about that character. This is the worst sin, because even with all of the others in play, if there is good characterization you can still create an incredible story.

Just by fixing these seven problems, your fic can instantly jump from bad/meh to incredible in the way people perceive it. Hopefully this list can help you determine things to either go back and revise or work on for future chapters. When have you committed one of the seven sins? What other sins do people make all the time in their writings?

Thank you to all of the amazing people who have followed, Allie

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