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foxymoxynoona · 2 years

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How do you manage to write such realistic dialogue and genuinely funny moments? Lone Blue Egg was full of them, and I loved how easily JK rolled with Rana's weirdness. How easily they laughed during sex, how his mind processed things and how her mind processed things.

You did the same with Amended and so many others, it's just such fantastic and grounded writing that's easy to read and enjoy!

😭 Thank you so much, I'm really touched you enjoy it! I really enjoy writing humor into things, and I love writing dialogue.

I did coursework in college on playwrighting, screenwriting, and comedy sketch writing, both of which I think were really valuable to me in terms of pacing scenes and using dialogue to tell multiple levels of a story instead of relying on exposition. I love listening to the way people talk to each other, and really settling into the scene in my head. Sometimes I really just sit there and let it play in my head a little bit so i can think through the staging --who is where, who's saying what, what non-verbal cues are they giving.

OK here are the dialogue tips I can think of, because I actually had been thinking about this recently! I like writing about writing but I never know if it's helpful or patronizing to share tips haha. But since you asked!!!

The easiest tip I can think of for leveling up dialogue is: cut almost all the names. People don't actually say each other's names as much as I see in a lot of ff. It usually is either to get someone's attention or a make a point without words (you know, like a character says "Jungkook" and that emphasis means something, it's actually saying something else like 'come on.' Or 'baby' suddenly because you want something, etc.)

The second important thing is to remember as a writer that the characters don't know what the other one is going to say. Most people don't think about the best thing to say until hours later!!! Let characters react honestly to what they hear. Let them misunderstand. Let them ignore it because they're still trying to prove their point. Let them get frustrated and say the wrong thing.

And I think my last more advanced tip is: make the dialogue carry its weight. There should be a secondary reason the dialogue is there. What story is taking place beneath the things people are saying. what are we learning about the characters. What are they not saying. One of my FAVORITE thins to write in dialogue is when characters are actually having two differnet conversations but don't realize it --this happened in Lone Blue Egg and Amended, and I think it adds depth and can also add that comedy!

I'm so happy you enjoyed those kinds of scenes 🥰 And I hope this is useful to anyone who's asked about dialogue lately when I couldn't think of anything useful to suggest.

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cmoroneybooks · 1 year

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Things On My Editing Checklist 1/∞ Tense shifting

Shifting between past and present tense is easier to do than you think. I always do a pass through just looking for tense shifts. Trust me, there’s at least one.

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foxymoxynoona · 2 years

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also another tip for writing realistic dialogue: every time you write dialogue, play the dialogue in your head. does it sound natural? does it sound like what a convo would sound like in real life?

also: don’t make your characters info-dump in dialogue! people don’t info-dump in real life; what they do is bounce off each other’s responses until they’re able to paint a full picture of what they’re discussing!

Reading it out loud is even better than playing it in your head! Althoguh I rarely read it out loud anymore, only if htere's a part that feels liek it's not quite right when I'm letting the scene play in my head.

True about the info-dumping too! ETA: I'll clarify what I think is meant here based on a comment that I think this specific info-dumping means you don't dedicate half the conversation to saying something you already know the other person in the conversation knows for the benefit of a readership audience. You might repeat pieces (and the othe rperson is like "I know! crazy!" or whatever)... there's a way to get background setting into a conversation but it's tricky and I'm sure we've all seen it done well and also not so well...

Thanks for the additional tips, anon!

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cmoroneybooks · 1 year

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As Hank Green once said, not everything that is writing looks like writing.

Going for a walk listening to your WIP playlist and thinking about your book can be writing.

Having an entire conversation with yourself- out loud - as your characters can be writing.

A very long shower spent thinking about your WIP can be writing.

Creating a pinterest board for a character can be writing.

The tricky thing is knowing when these things are writing and when they are procrastination.

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cmoroneybooks · 1 year

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"How do all of you write with full time jobs?"

I'm so sick of this question because the answer is so damned obvious. We sacrifice our free time to writing, clearly.

I schedule my free time. I schedule when I exercise, shower, clean my house, eat, and sleep. I meal prep so I don't waste additional time cooking every night. I'm strict with myself. I don't watch tv anymore. I have done the math and I have can tv or I can have video games and I picked video games.

When I respond to twitter posts asking where I find the time to write saying I gave up watching tv and only play an hour of video games a night, 9/10 they'll respond 'give up tv!?! Thats so extreme its not fair that I'll have to make sacrifices.' And to that I must ask, what in the fuck does fairness have to do with this life we're living? Absolutely jack diddly squat.

You want to write a book? Great, you're going to have to do it in your free time so whatever you fill your free time with now, you'll have to do less of it. I really don't think that's such a tough pill to swallow and I have no idea why I always get that reaction.*

* I and the other authors who respond in much the same way bc there's plenty of others giving similar advice when the question is asked.

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foxymoxynoona · 2 years

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FAQ

Questions I get a lot!

When will you update? Do you have a set update schedule? I don’t. I used to but it became unrealistic once chapters started being 10k+ words. Now I try to update 2 things a week. You can see what the status is on any of my writing on my trello.

Can I request a story? Sorry, I don't write requests except I do occasionally write drabbles as requested. I also sometimes solicit guidance from my patreon on which longer stories I start next so if you want in on that process feel free to join my patreon!

Are you still taking drabble requests? For now, yes! Feel free to send me your drabble request (whether it's related to one of my stories or a totally new idea, either is welcome!) but please understand that I just jump around and get to them when the fancy strikes me, so I won't be able to tell you when it'll actually get written. You'll see them on my trello once I start working on it. Please understand too I write as my discretion and there may be times I choose not to fulfill a drabble request if I'm uncomfortable with the topic or feel like it's not within my wheelhouse to write, but so far it hasn't come up.

How do you write so much? A mixture of committment, practice, priority, and the inability to stop thinking about my stories haha. I have a couple posts on here that talk about my process and style. You can find them with the tag mywritingadvice or writing tips.

Can I be an emoji anon? Yes! I’ll keep a list below of the ones already claimed. If you don’t interact with me for a few months, the emoji might get freed up if it’s one in high demand.

Claimed (deleted ones I haven’t heard from in forever 6-12)

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Have you ever considered writing _____? The answer is probably yes, haha, but there just aren’t enough hours in the day for me to write all that I want to write, and I make no promises about what comes next after my current stories. I just go where inspiration takes me! There aren't many things I wouldn't try to write, because I like exploring genre, character, odd situations, morality, etc. Just depends on my motivation and comfort at that particular time.

Can you recommend other stories to read? You can check out my fic rec blog here

I don’t like reader insert, will you add an OC to this story? OR I don’t like OCs, will you rewrite this as a reader insert? Probably not! Usually I have a reason I chose to write the story in that particular style. It’s often significant work to change and I’d rather spend writing something new! I understand if this means you don’t read all of my works, that’s ok! I never expected all of my stories to appeal to everyone because this is my opportunity to explore different genres, styles, etc.

Will you ever write a character like _______? Maybe yes! I am thoughtful about every aspect of a characters’ background in each story and what life experiences have shaped them to be who they are in that place and time, and what I feel like suits that particular story, and what I felt comfortable writing about. I hope to continue expanding my character roster in every direction –race, weight, height, culture, sexuality, interests, etc.– beyond my own personal lived experiences.

You write a lot about children and parenthood. Can you write something else? Not every story I write includes these themes but many do because it's what I feel like writing. I am writing during a time in my life in which I have felt very lonely and isolated as a parent of young children and because one of my goals for writing was to explore and better represent the experiences of motherhood. I almost always have tags identifying these stories from the very beginning so they should be easy to avoid if you are uninterested in those plots and themes.

Why do you only write about Jungkook? This is becoming less true over time. I find Jungkook the easiest to write and often ideas for him come to me more easily, but I’m excited to be writing more stories for the other members

Have you considered publishing a book? I am highly flattered this has been asked enough to put on this list. Yes, I have thought about this many times in the past. I had a brief and unpleasant experience with self publishing many years ago, as well as with trying to get some short works published. Someday I will want to give it another go! But for right now, my writing is a protected space of joy and exploration for me. I love writing whatever I want, however I want, sharing it with others and getting to talk about it as I go. Right now I don’t want to do anything that interferes with this really wonderful part of my life. At the point I do decide to write an original work or attempt to de-fanfic any of my works for publication, I will for sure let you all know. 😉

***** STORY SPECIFIC *****

Will you include (unofficial, rumored, or private information) in your Secret Song Series? No, I won’t. I don’t follow anything unofficial from BTS. I’m not on Twitter. Every character (other than BTS, and I take a lot of creative license even with them), storyline, private event, scandal, etc. in that story comes from my own brain and any similarity to anything in real life is pure coincidence. The "true" things I use are many public performances, awards, and official BTS content but even there I take creative license to use, create new, or cut as I see fit. This is as much a work of fiction as any of my other fanfiction. Please do not send me private photos or personal info about the guys, I don’t want to see it. 😄

Will you write a Secret Song Series book about the other members? Probably not an entire book, but I have started one shots/drabbles/short stories for the other members. I hope to have a collection of these for each member.

How many books will the Secret Song Series be? I don't know for sure. I'd written about 2million words of the story before I started posting, and the timeline of that stretches across about 5 books, but I hadn't written an ending or final chapter yet, so it kind of depends how we're feeling once we get there.

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foxymoxynoona · 3 years

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Short: A Nice Walk Home

(non-idol) Seokjin x Reader

Summary: Just a little fluffy drabble as you and your boyfriend walk home from a dinner with your friends, taking a moment to appreciate all the change that lie ahead and all the things that will stay the same.

A Nice Walk Home

You were busy clearing the table after dinner, just a little, even though waitstaff would take care of it. Still, you had been a server at one point, so you couldn’t physically tear yourself away from a table until you’d made sure all the napkins were in a pile for washing, all the chopstick papers and cheap disposables were together in a pile, any major spills had been mopped up. It was common courtesy. And anyway, when all of you got together, it was almost always a noisy mess coming and going, and the waitstaff shouldn’t have to endure the remnants of your group even once you’d gone.

Seokjin was still mid-sentence with Namjoon when his fingers took hold of your hips, as he leaned in close to whine, “Y/N… let’s go…”

“You can go on ahead.”

“You’re making the servers feel weird. Look, they’re waiting for us to get the hell out so they can do their job and go home. We tipped them well,” he insisted. “Come on, here’s your tip.” He kissed you quickly on the cheek and used that as an opportunity to tug you away from the table.

“I just used to wait tables and--”

“I know, I know!” he laughed. “I know all about every job you’ve ever had. But you don’t work here. They aren’t going to pay you, even if you hold your hands out and blink at them cute.”

Playful as you followed Jin and his friends out into the warm night, you held your hands out and blinked at him, just so.

He grinned and slipped his hand into yours, “Ok, here’s your payment, most precious thing in the world--”

“You’re a goose.”

“I hate when you call me a goose,” he immediately cried. “Any other bird would be acceptable. A swan! A crane! A heron!”

“Pigeon.”

“Rock dove,” he corrected.

“Are we naming birds?” Jungkook stopped ahead of you both to ask.

“Birds that remind me of Jin,” you answered.

“Stork.”

“Fucker--” Jin mumbled, taking a quick step forward as Jungkook laughed and turned at Taehyung’s nudge.

“What are those really big buff birds?” they heard Taehyung ask Jungkook quietly.

“Cassowary?” you helpfully called. “Or ostrich? I could see an ostrich.”

“Emu?”

“Those aren’t buff, just fluff.”

“I was going to walk you to my place,” Jin glared, “but now I think I’ll walk you to your own place.”

You laughed, having caught out his (unsurprising) plan, “Oh yeah? You’re doing me the favor of walking me to your place? Such a gentleman.”

“Mm-hm.” His straight-lipped smile, the one that made him look a little muppet-esque, melted you as always. “But not anymore--”

“Spoilsport.” You reached up to brush the swoosh of hair out of his eyes. It was getting long. This was the point he always debated whether to cut it. You were desperate for him to grow it out long, just once, to make your historic kdrama dreams come true in the vehicle of your boyfriend. But he got cranky about having to constantly toss his head to get it out of his face, and complained he couldn’t pull off headbands and hair clips like his friends. It was a lie; you knew, in fact, that he could put his hair into a ridiculous ponytail sprouting straight up from his head and look absurdly adorable. At playful times like that, it was impossible for you not to imagine him on the ground with your fictitious future children, attending a tea party, adorned with plastic jewelry and an ill-fitting princess dress and that sprout of hair. Jin was so playful, he’d be game for anything, he’d be such a good dad…

“Why are you staring at me?” he demanded, bumping solidly into you. Because your arms were linked, you only stumbled a little. “I know I’m handsome--”

Jungkook shouted over his shoulder, “Hyung, if you fall behind, I can’t protect you!”

It immediately set Jin off, shouting back, “Protect me! I don’t need your protection! You think because you dress like a black Crayon, you’re better to protect me? Remember who needed help in arm wrestling, it wasn’t me!”

“Ten years ago!”

He marched off ahead, still shouting playfully at Jungkook, who shouted back, until the two of them were basically slapping chests. Namjoon, Jimin, and their girlfriends had taken a different path through this park but could clearly still see and hear what was happening because they shouted and waved their arms, their laughter carrying on the clear night. You felt that pang in your belly, knowing noisy friendly evenings like this wouldn’t last forever. After the new year, Namjoon and his fiance were moving to the city. Jimin and his girlfriend were already talking about moving in together, but back near his parents, who were needing some support from their son these days. Jungkook had a job opportunity on a film in South America and he was an unstoppable rising sun --according to proud hyung Jin-- so probably that would lead to more opportunities. Taehyung was flirting with moving to Spain or Portugal or Italy, just for a while, just because he wanted something new.

Hoseok would still be here at least, and Yoongi. Would the two of them be enough of a friend group for your boyfriend? The very one who claimed to yearn for lazy days of isolation but then immediately dropped everything to figure out food when someone stopped by, or dragged you to someone’s house because there was the most minor thing to celebrate, or who sometimes lay awake at night reading the group chat? Not even responding, to be clear, just reading it and laughing at his friends until he’d find something they (or he himself) said that was so funny he had to read it to you, even though you were pretending to be asleep.

You were pulled more quickly towards him as the fighting broke off, Taehyung acting like the referee he rarely actually was. You slid your hands up Jin’s broad back before he could set the younger guys off again, pressing your face briefly to his shoulder, just for the comfort of contact. So much change for your little friend group, but Jin wasn’t going anywhere. Jin was happy with his job and happy with you and happy with where your lives took place. He’d promised these things were true when you’d voiced concerns before.

Without breaking off his playful threats, he took your hand from his waist and held it loosely in his own, dragging it along for his gesturing. Jungkook and Taehyung were laughing before they darted across the street without waiting for the light to change. Jin made you wait, maybe to follow the rules, or maybe so he could loop his arm around you.

“You saw that, right? I held back. We don’t need them to walk us home. You’re safer with me than you are with them. Drop something shiny on the ground and Jungkook’s attention is gone. A movement in a tree will have Taehyung chasing a cat that’s not even there.”

“I’ve never felt more safe than with my boyfriend who will run ahead and leave me alone in the park to play-fight with his friends.”

“Heeeeey,” he complained. He was breathing a little heavily after the fight, his neck a flushed. He pressed a kiss to your forehead, calming down from it now, sliding back from playful eldest of the friend group to responsible eldest, stable boyfriend, actual competent adult. You adored the multiple shades of Jin, that in a single day he could go from fluffy cloud pajamas to a menacing light blue button up and black slacks combo --top button alluringly undone and hair brushed back from his forehead-- and then back to plaid fleece pajama pants and a lavender shirt.

You crossed the street, still leaning heavily on his arm, and it was then he finally noticed and asked, “What are you being so soft for? Is something wrong?”

“Hm? No, nothing’s wrong. I’m just feeling soft about my boyfriend. Is that wrong?”

“Yeah, it’s suspicious! You’re not about to dump me or something. You’d better not. I have a meeting tomorrow, I can’t stay up crying all night and then my face will look puffy tomorrow--”

“The opposite, you idiot,” you sighed, shaking your head.

“The opposite--” He broke off, holding you immediately at arm’s length as he insisted, “If you propose marriage to me I will never forgive you.”

“What?!”

“That’s my job! I get to do that!”

Your ignored the pounding in your chest, because you had not really ever talked about this before, but chose the security of teasing him back, “Well you aren’t doing your job so--”

His grin was threatening. Terrifying. He was out to kill as he grinned,

“You don’t know what I’m doing or not doing.”

“What does that mean?” you immediately demanded. He continued to grin rather smugly to himself as he caught your arm again and propelled you forward.

“Nothing.”

“Are you… you’re… you’re planning something?”

“I didn’t say anything.”

Your heart was running away with you though and it was leaving you breathless so you forced a stop. You planted your feet, even though it spun him around you in orbit as you demanded just as bluntly,

“You want to marry me?”

He looked at you with such a soft smile that you briefly considered melting at his feet. The answer was clear on his face, such a casual confession conveyed through that bright-eyed smile.

Then he lifted his hands to cradle your face and sighed, “I knew it was asking too much for you to be both beautiful and smart.”

“Seokjin!”

“Do you think I don’t notice everyone escaping? I have to make my plans to make sure you don’t escape me too,” he said. His hands dropped from your face but he caught yours and began to walk again with your fingers intertwined, his other tucked into his pocket. It was endearing, the way his ears were visibly red beneath the streetlights’ glow. He could act self-assured, but his ears never lied.

It took you a moment to find your voice again before you could assure him, “I’m not going to try and escape you. You don’t need a diamond to keep me. I’m already all yours.”

“Yeah, I didn’t get you a diamond--”

“You already bought a--”

“--It would just be jealous always of the diamonds in your eyes,” he grinned.

“You already bought a ring?” You didn’t even bother responding to the joke. You were too side-swiped to learn that all this time you thought you were going to have to be the one to start giving your boyfriend more pointed hints about where you saw your future going… he was already charting the course.

“You know why my shoulders are so big, jagiya?”

“Genetics?”

“Secrets. Because I am very good at keeping secrets. So stop pressing me. But don’t steal my thunder by asking me first, I’ll be really angry at you.”

You giggled about it. Maybe you frustrated him sometimes, or baffled him, but Seokjin was never angry with you. The closest he ever came to angry was dirty feet in bed, or food in bed, or that one time you’d used dish soap on his cast iron pan… but Seokjin’s anger tended to be righteous rather than personal, it wasn’t ever directed at you but at bigger people, ideas, or systems that deserved his actual cutting fury. You were safely protected from it, by it, within a soft inner circle of his arms around you. He never stayed mad at you for long. Even when you dyed a whole load of his white shirts pink. He just decided pink was his new favorite color and continued to wear them. Because Seokjin was a man who thought carefully about which battles were worth fighting, which punches were worth rolling with, and what sort of man he wanted to be. He was a very good one.

“My answer will be yes,” you whispered to him, leaning closer for a moment as you walked. The block was empty and quiet here; Taehyung and Jungkook had disappeared far ahead, maybe they were already even to their apartment down the row from yours.

You could feel Jin’s smile without even looking up at him as he leaned down close and whispered back, “This is why your shoulders are much narrower than mine, you’re really bad at keeping secrets.”

“Jin!” This time you did look up at him, mock outrage undermined by your smile. His jokes were paused though as he slid his arm around your waist and pulled you into him for a kiss. Nothing playful about the kiss this time. Usually he was a little more shy than this about kissing you in public, even on an empty street, but the pressure of his fingers against your waist and neck hinted at relief. Maybe he’d been nervous about his planning. Maybe he wasn’t sure you’d say yes. Maybe you weren’t the only beautiful idiot in this relationship.

So you kissed him back harder, wanting to erase any of his doubts or fears, kissed him until your own head spun and he sounded breathless as he mumbled,

“Let’s go home.”

“And put on pajamas?” you suggested, only the beginning of Jin’s endearing bedtime preparation routine. You had known it was serious with him when he started letting you pick pajamas to borrow from his stash of matched sets. Jin was the only adult you knew who actually owned and wore matching pajama sets.

His mouth near your ear made you shudder as he answered, “Eventually…”

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foxymoxynoona · 3 years

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Hey Foxy, do you have any tips for writing. You're so dang prolific, idk how you do it. HOW DO YOU DO IT?! 😂

I should probably track these answers because I *love* talking about writing.

I did a first post months ago with some of my process and tips which might be interesting to you here.

But I'll add some new things too! Here are some other questions I've been lately here or in ao3 comments.

Q: How are you so prolific?

I don't let shit stop me. Our brains can throw up so many hurdles in the creative process, and you have to tell those hurdles to eat shit. Can't think of a word? I put ****WTFWORD*** in the sentence and keep going, I can find it later. Need to fact check something? I'll put **TRUE?** Need to research something? I view that as a totally protected and valuable step, and I carve time out and don't consider that "not writing."

So I ignore those hurdles and I just write. About whatever! About anything! Sometimes I'm like, waiting in line at the grocery story and it's like, "oh, wouldn't it be cute if two people were in line and they were bickering over the headlines" and then I just write that. There doesn't have to be a point, you're flexing your writing muscle. Writing for me is a lot of putting daydreams down on paper, even if they're just isolated blurbs or just fragments or conversation or whatever.

Q: How do you stay motivated?

Sometimes writing is chasing an inspiration and the words just flow freely. Other days writing is a sore muscle and you tell yourself you are going to write 500 words even if they're about nothing, even if you're probably going to throw them away. You have to figure out when is the right time to take a break and do something else, or when is the right time to put in some work, even if it's not easy that day. Depends what the outcome you're looking for is, but I can promise you there are chapters of my story that have been a struuuuuggle to write --and the irony is they often tend to be the ones people love the most in the end! Even though I hate them because I'm aware of what a struggle they were to write!

I also highly recommend music, candles, pinterest, and snacking. I personally eat baby carrots by the bag full since gum is bad for my teeth. The act of chewing makes your brain work. I keep pinterest open and will literally bounce back and forth just looking at pictures every couple of sentences sometimes. Not even necessarily related pictures! It just give my brain a moment to take a breath.

Q: How do you write such built out characters?

I find people fascinating, even when they're terrible. Be open to the fact that people are wonderful and annoying, generous and selfish, all at the same time. If you don't occasionally want to throttle your own character, you probably are writing a character very much like you --which is ok! But if you write a lot of characters, you're not going to get that variety. Everyone has their own opinions, their own habits others find annoying, their own biases, their own dreams, and their own justification for why they do what they do. I do not worry about writing "likeable" characters for readers, only whether i want the characters in the story to perceive someone as likeable or not (Pippa is a good example! JK did NOT find her likeable in the beginning but everyone else did! The way he and others viewed a habit of hers completely different is a good example of how differently people can respodn to the same stimulus.) My personal style is more just to let people make their own down mistakes and have their own stupid opinions and quirks. I also spend time thinking about things for my side characters too --I know their backgrounds, their family, their dreams, their struggles, etc. Maybe not to the degree of the main characters, but enough that they can naturally be consistent and have their own little progress arcs in a story.

Q: Any other tips for writing?

Consume everything you can get your hands onto, but never compare what you're creating to someone else. There is not just one kind of good cookies, MOST cookies are AMAZING, and even a bad cookie is usually better than no cookie.

Learn all the "rules" of writing but don't hesitate to break them when it feels right. "Write what you know" or "show don't tell" or even grammar rules. No one's style or process will be identical to yours and that's fine.

Maintain a careful balance of writing to where you think you're going but be flexible when the story changes course.

Worry more about emotional sincerity and purpose than physical details (in characters, settings, etc. You can use the atmosphere in a room to emphasize that a character is stressed or sad or happy, etc.) But make sure that your physical details and staging make sense and are consistent.

Don't judge your characters. Sure, be aware of where you and they may disagree. Be aware of where your readers may have an emotional or upset response. But if you're writing your characters from a place of judgement, you aren't going to let them live their story and the whole thing will feel like a moral lecture.

TRUST YOU READERS. This is a hard one, because I see all the discourse about how "people are stupid and they'll miss everything." Some readers are going to misunderstand your intentions. Some readers are going to draw wild conclusions you never dreamed of. Some readers are going to get really mad at the things your characters do. But as soon as you start talking down to your readers, or dumb down the emotions you're writing about, or overly spell out the connections you want them to make, you're just going to alienate them. If readers do get something very differently than what you expected and it's lingering, stop and get a sense of what misled them. Remember that readers aren't in your head, they don't know the invisible strings, so probably it means you just need to re-emphasize something, or have a character reflect on something, or a particular wording came across differently. So fix it! It's all good! Stories are alive. But don't assume your readers won't make a connection or see something coming, just because your characters have blinders on in the story; work with that to capitalize on reader response.

Q: What about quick tricks?

OK here are some very specific things I've done:

- Give your word document a background color so you aren't staring at a white page

- Sit in a weird place in your house you wouldn't normally sit, like on the floor in a corner of your kitchen

- You've heard of edging... try some WRITING edging. You know you want to write that scene. The emotions are right there. Your brain is going wild. Let your brain go wild a liiiittle longer before you actually sit down to write it out.

- Read your writing out loud. This will very quickly reveal awkward phrasing, forced dialogue, and typos.

Ok ok I think that is probably enough blathering for now. <3 hope any of this was worth your time to read!

#writing #mywriting #anonymous #mywritingadvice

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foxymoxynoona · 3 years

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If your characters could date someone from a different fic (example, Isabella/Lowlander!JK) which pairings do you think would ultimately work out best?

NO I carefully crafted each soul mate pair to only love each other!!

Ok ok, let me think.

Little Bean JK would have a crush on Mina but she'd only ever see him as a little brother.

Sasha would like Amended JK (she went through a phase where she thought she wanted to be an FBI agent)

Lowlander JK would not like Pippa at first until he saw her mad and then his interest would be piqued

Bronwen would like Little Bean JK a lot, major crush, I think they'd be decent equals. She'd probably do great with Yo-han too.

Dom would like Amended Jimin, I don't know, I just feel it.

Pippa would dig Marcus

Sugar Fairy JK would like Areum but she would not like him, I know that's not what you asked but it had to be said

Meadow JK might actually wind up liking Y/N from Sea of Indigo, but it would be a slow burn, I think even rougher than Sea of Indigo JK

SoI JK would click really well with Sasha once one or both of them are further along their healing paths; too early and they would be a disaster

These kinds of questions are funny to think about.

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Hiiiii! Random Monday questions. Just because!

1) How are you doing? Hope you’re doing fine at least!

2) Have you ever gone to a BTS concert? I wish I’d had! Sadly, they have never come to my country. I still can dream about it! And btw, do you have a favorite BTS song?

3) Could you tell us more about your creative process? Like what you find inspiration in to map the plot of the story or curious thing like that. I enjoy reading about it! You have such a peculiar mind (in a positive and amazing way, can’t believe you have written so much different things in such a short time, amidst all the things you’ve written and not shared!)

So random, sorry. Feel free to answer all, some or any at all! I just had to take my mind out of the end of Amended chapter and ended up here🥺

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Hello popcorn anon! How lovely to hear from you, so sorry about the chapter end. :)

1. I'm doing ok. My surgery consult is Thursday! I am busy busy with work and my side hustles. And today was a cool and rainy day, so that's nice. I am struggling with saying goodbye to summer but I do love autumn.

2. I have not! I only got into them like late fall right before COVID. Even if/when they come near me, I don't think I can afford it anyway so I'll have to just dream :)

3. I do have a peculiar mind, LOL. My creative process kind of changes though by the idea... More beneath the cut!

Sometimes I just have an idea for a particular scene or feeling or moment, so I write that just to get it out and then maybe a story grows out of that. I might even write multiple scenes that just feel urgency to write in a single world/story without necessarily knowing all the connective tissue, and then later go back and fill in a proper estimated chapter-by-chapter plan (which could start SUPER high level; I have some examples of this in previous posts, check out #mywriting tag). Most of my stories I've posted so far were written this way, because back before I posted any of my writing, I'd just bounce around writing whatever I felt like. I have dozens of abandoned scenes/stories ideas I wrote. Maybe I'll wind up posting more as drabbles on here, or maybe some will get resurrected as proper stories, or maybe most of them will be banished to obscurity.

Other times, I'll have an idea for either a plot or emotional arc and really sit down and daydream through as much of the vision as I can and write stream of conscious thoughts down about it that later I go untangle and organize --this was Meadow and is how most of my future stories are getting planned right now.

So I may start with this stream of conscious page-long note-taking about my idea with any quotes, moments, or even questions or themes jotted down --a lot of time this starts with me daydreaming about an idea while I'm at the gym or walking or cooking dinner or something. I'll even write in my questions ("do they kiss here? or later?" "either he doesn't care or he cares a LOT. which is it?" "where's Namjoon at this point?") Then I go through and edit that to try and get it in an actual story order, think of answers to any of the questions I left for myself, make note of any areas I could diverge based on what feels right when I get there. It results in still a sort of hazy, word outline. And then I actually take that and break it out into rough chapter ideas. These always change as I actually write and decide oh, it's better to end the chapter here, or damn, that took longer than I expected, ok, or this new plot needs to get woven in. But it gives me some structure.

Sometimes I'll run scenes or ideas by my husband and he usually has very bad ideas that actually help me a lot because it gives me permission to brainstorm my own bad ideas too. And now I've got some friends on here who I can enjoy bouncing ideas back and forth with, some of which may be turning into actual stories coming to an ao3 account near you this winter 😉

Oh! actually one more useful thing that I only started doing when I started writing BTS fanfiction is that when I write, I don't write chapters, I write blocks. Like I write the headers in the word doc, and then a little note or whatever beneath the header for whatever needs to happen in that block. Like:

LANDON DINNER - Bella and JK go to dinner, Landon's apartment, Brianne gets pissy about something, Ezra is excited to show room but it's not ready yet, B and L are trying, L's been teaching Ezra guitar and he wants to perform, things get awkwrd sometimes but JK and Bella are a united team and find comfort in each other so nothing spirals, JK asks L about being sober, it's actually an ok time, B admits she liked both guys in high school?, Landon taught E "their song"

And I'll do that for the whole chapter. So then when I go back and am actually writing, it's eliminated that overwhelmed feeling because I don't need to worry about a whole chapter! Just a scene! And then the next one. And then the next one.

At least with most of my stories, I'm still writing so much that I can just insert the blocks already written into my chapter plan. But a lot of posting Flux is actually going through and figuring out where to insert the chapter breaks when that story wasn't actually written to have chapters; it's why that and Little Bean are sometimes really awkward with the range of chapter lengths, because I didn't plan them that way, it was just written as long stream of conscious story.

ANYWAY, this was a lot, hope this was interesting at all!

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