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siriuslytproblem28 · 1 year

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time has come. i finished crimson rivers.

this is gonna be a long one, and i don't mind if I'm the only one who's getting to its end, I'm writing this for me.

the thing is, i started reading it not being able to conceive just how devastatingly beautiful it is, everything about it. i saw people on tiktok freaking out, and the fact that it's a thg AU really caught me off guard, I'm a huge fan of the books and the movies, ever since i was a child (about 9 years ago) and I'm fairly new with jegulus (i only read like half of choices and some other tiny fics) but i don't know how to explain just how this masterpiece got me tight on a chockehold.

but then, it came to me, in the last chapter.

It's about hope. yeah it's s about growth too but that only comes with hope. everything around this is hope. i get it now.

in a way, i feel like I've grown with it too. i surely hoped to. it's different than anything I've ever read. not only cause it merges some of my favorite characters, stories and scenarios, or because it's sad and angsty and I'm dramatic, or because everyone was reading. it was because of that as much as it wasn't.

usually when i read these things i wish for them to never end. i go at my own pace since they're usually finished for months or even years and i take my time, stretching it as far as it goes, binging when i feel like, and it becomes an experience, my experience, playing with time and spending every day with the characters until i wake up and go to sleep thinking about them and pray not to find spoilers on the internet. I'd strech and stretch cause I've never been good at goodbyes, always hate them, the reversible and the irrevocable, but this time... it's weird...

i could read anything by zar and LOVE it no matter how long, I'd drink the words until i choked and spit them out just in time to take another mouthful. I'd swallow some, too. like poison, like tea.

but it made sense that this had to come to an end. not cause it's set in over 3000 pages, i didn't realize it was long as i was reading it, as a long time fic reader, i guess i was just used to read and read endlessly, how it seemed at the time. but this, i understood, i could see it coming to an end and i was at peace with it, i got it, and i was even happy for it, not to get rid of it, I'll miss this forever and might reread it in a low point in my life to give me comfort (yeah i know loll but towards the end there's comfort ok?)

but it made me have a better relationship with endings and change in general.

I've been known to dwel. on people, on things, on the past, on stories, anything. i cling to things as long as there's a tip to grip and i struggle to let go. to make peace with endings. crimson rivers came at first like a continuation to my habits, fitting perfectly in the angsty, sad story I'm so passionate about. brutal, cruel and awful, destroying me internally, with things i would relate to and the things i wouldn't. as closer to its end as it came, it became the antithesis. i understand why it had to end, i even agree, of course I'd read 75 more chapters but i don't feel the need to as much as i don't feel the need to know every detail about reggie and James's wedding.

I'm usually atractted by unsaid things, whispered kisses, silent words hung above those who kept their mouth shut when they shouldn't have, when speaking up would gain them time, precious and non conforming time.

but in cr the unsaid is said in so many ways, it's sang and screamed and still i found crevices between the realm of real and inagined words to foster my own thoughts and interpretations on the characters, on the story itself. i found myself bookmarking soooo many scenes and wanting line after line engraved in my mind, tattooed in my bones.

it's the most beautiful story I've ever read and i realized in the last chapter that it's about hope. right during regulus' dream, when evan says "is it not good enough that it has been you?" referring to regulus projecting evan in his dreams to counseling him, while all evan ever said to him might just have been regulus saying to himself. and then i was like "oh".

it was always about hope for me. regulus hoping james would see him, notice him, regulus hoping his name wouldn't be called, james and reggie hoping sirius would survive, regulus hoping to have his brother back, james hoping sirius would overcome his addiction and his trauma after the arena, james hoping he could ever have a chance with reggie, sirius hoping to be close to regulus again, and much later, hope for their love, the three of them, sirius building a bookshelf because he hoped james and regulus would eventually make it, james giving reggie his flowers hoping to make his day better, Reggie getting the flowers hoping someday he would invite james in...

i saw myself in regulus so much, that for the first time it really hit me how much i kin him, and i saw myself in james too, which is new to me, but only in a sense of being absolutely in love with someone and thinking they would never want you back, except for me they won't. but to love with such devotion, such hunger, i feel that, it connected me with this james in such a strong way, as i too would take anything this person would give me, the good and the bad.

i don't wanna spent too much time on more technical things like the world building, narrative, politics etc because i think we can all agree that it was perfectly done, full of complexity when it needed. i wanna focus in what i felt.

i love wolfstar here, i think it's the most healthy I've ever seen them, despite everything they went through. and I'm not saying this as the type of person who doesn't like atyd wolfstar because they're "toxic", i love atyd exactly for being so realistic in a sense that they're both traumatized kids in the 70's. of course they don't deal with shit the way we would know how to deal a little better now. i just think that they journey it's so beautiful, and it's about hope to, hope to have 5 more minutes together, hope to see them the next day, and eventually, every year, taking all they could ever get even if it meant only seeing each other once a year. and they eneded up with everything they deserved. a home and a family to fill it up with. it just makes me soooo fucking emotional.

I'm trying to close things here so this doesn't become like a huuuuge post, so i wanna state that I'm amazed at the character development throughout the fic, especial when it comes to their traumas and such. like, reggie coming from such deep denial towards his love for james, up to the point he thought he could kill him, to admiting his love eventually, to be willing to step in a crimson river to die a horrible death to save him, to admiting his love in his own ways, to propose without james even noticing HELPPP, to literally having the 4 kids he wanted ever since he was a kid. him being able to let evan go too, honoring barty with the forge, mending his relationship with Sirius omgg thatt

i love how the story isn't just about the couples, the romantic love, i adore family dynamics, and sirius and reggie here, omggg they made me cry soo fuckinh much... i find sibling relationships so interesting maybe cause i spent 13 years being an only child, and now i have a 6 year old half sister who doesn't live with me, so i don't get to see her daily and we have the age difference. so like, i know we won't have the same dynamic as siblings living together or closer in age, and honestly i sometimes get scared we won't be close, or that i don't know how to be a big sister cause i still haven't had too much experience at it. but i also feel this need of protection towards her, especially cause she lives with my dad, which is... not a good person to be around, to put it bluntly. and i want her to have me as someone she can trust, i want to help her having to endure my dad and i want her to grow up in a better, healthier way than i did. so yeah, i relate to sirius and Reggie's story here as much as i don't...

and sirius and james friendship>>>>>>>> I've been a sirius kinnie ever since i got into the marauders fandom in 2020, and i have a james in my life, so their bond is really special to me, quite the embodiment if sunshine

remus here as well>>>>>>>>

i know i focused mainly on sirius, reggie and james but honestly i could spent days writing only about those three so i really can't be mentioning everyone else, I'll just say that i don't think any fic made me fall in love with as much characters as this one, even those i didn't know or didn't have their image clear in my mind from canon/other fics.

to close things up, i love how the narrative circles around itself, in the last few chapters things comes full circle, like reggie thanking Sirius for volunteering for him, which was the very core of regulus anger and guilt, so it shows how much he's grown, also when he says to aberforth that "my brother's responsible for his actions as i am for mine" or something, so finally seeing that he isn't responsible for everything bad in sirius life; sirius learning to have a healthy relationship with sex and his desire, remus and lilly making their way back to each other, two hearts beating, one person, james fucking knife kink FINALLY my boy had his way, i found it sooo cute and funny that reggie was trying to "protect" him hiding the daggers LMAOOO, sirius building again, james releasing the horcrux hornet into nature again after so many years, THE FUCKING "YOU'RE HESITATING LOVE" 😫😫😫😫😫 i swear, i thought this fic would be the death of me but it might've just saved my life...

like all the metaphors, all the elements that appear throughout the story to bear meaning and to signify something important, it enriches it soo much, james' flowers, the tree, regulus climbing and growing, the blood and the crimson river, the knitted hat, the snow, the rain, the fire, the fireplace, the bookshelf, the moon, the stars, ughhhh i swear to gooooooooooodddddddd the worst and best parallel, aberforth and albus are what regulus and sirius might've turned into. i am devasted by this, so i won't comment on it. for now.

i think this is it. I'll be forever grateful to zar for writing this masterpiece that changed and saved my life, and consumed it, filling my mind ever since october, and for getting to finish now with everyone. i swear i wanna print and bind this just to have it phisically.

I'll be making a playlist for cr and listen to it every time i miss it ❤️ this was a beautiful jorney, but I'm at peace with it ending now. thank you, zar, i will proceed to rear every other fanfic you wrote and will write.

#crimson rivers #jegulus #wolfstar #zeppazariel #sirius black #regulus black #james potter #remus lupin #ao3 #crimsonrivers spoilers #evan rosier #fanfic

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komatsunana · 5 years

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So the other day I binged THG movies and, naturally, a Hunger Games AU popped into my dreams - strangely mostly centered around Marion lmao. But, like, I thought up other deets about everyone else’s circumstances??

So just to set a couple things: Exandrian Hunger Games have a wider net of ages who can enter THG, just since fantasy races are still a thing which means sometimes young adults of human (and similarly aging races) end up in the games.

Aaaand just because of plot stuff - Districts can ‘trade’ their HG-eligible children to other districts in exchange for rations and stuff. These children often end up with lotsss of slips in the reaping ball, because they either end up homeless or a family ‘adopts’ them into their house in exchange for them buying plenty of rations. Trading can only go from a higher district to a lower district - they cannot go higher.

Also, just for giggles, Wildemont and Tal’Dorei both have their own separate Hunger Games so like....................... yes, Vex definitely volunteers herself in Velora’s place Katniss style (Of course Vax, subsequently, volunteers himself with the intention of sacrificing himself for Vex).

But this post isn’t about the VM Hunger Games, but the M9 sooooooo...........

(spoilers about Caleb’s past and some details about Jester’s mom)

Caleb is from the equivalent of the ‘2nd’ district - a career district and the district where peacekeepers are made. He’s been training for the Hunger Games along with his 2 friends under Trent Ikathon for, a Mentor in The Hunger Games, since before he was of age to be in the Hunger Games.

Much as in canon, Trent tests his student’s loyalties and, in a similar set of circumstances, has them kill their parents for disloyalty to the Empire. Caleb does so but has regerts, which Trent senses. Trent decides it’ll be Astrid and Eodwulf who volunteer for this years’ games - because in this district that’s decided before hand I guess??? idk.

Anyway, Caleb ends up volunteering before Eodwulf can and Trent is piiiiiiiiiiiissed. The whole district is piiiiiiiiissed. Caleb don’t care. Caleb has plans. I’m not even sure what they are, but I’m sure they are drastic.

Meanwhile, over in the equivalent of District 4, the fishing district, Jester’s mother Marion is a previous victor of The Hunger Games - her nickname naturally being “The Ruby of the Sea”. After the horrors of the games, and the later horrors that the Capitol gave to her as a victor, she has agoraphobia and stays inside her living space much of the time. Her daughter, Jester, stays inside with her for the most part. Only the day of the reaping does Marion leave her house, because luckily there are three other victors in their District - one being Vandren though he had unfortunately recently died in a mysterious accident a few weeks before the reaping.

Jester has her name in the reaping ball only the minimum amount of times, so Marion is horrified when Jester’s name is picked. Without even needing to be asked, one of the other mentors immediately allows Marion to take her place as one of the two mentors for the games. Fjord volunteers himself soon after - not at all for Jester’s sake but to uncover the truth of Vandren’s death - the only clues he has being the names Uk’otoa and Avantika.

Marion asks that Fjord promise to stay close to Jester and protect her, to which he promises he’ll protect “her little girl” as best he can - but he also reminds her that he wants to live as well and that if it comes down to the two of them... well. Marion promises that it won’t come to that, plans of rebellion in her mind. She doesn’t just want to save her daughter from the horror of the games, but the horror of survival and what the Capitol does to it’s victors as well.

Jester promises her mother that she’ll be okay and win for her mama, though meanwhile Jester has made friends with a man named the Traveler, who no one else can see, but who encourages her to break the games. Jester is also a huge hit with the audience, winning everyone’s heart quickly.

Beau was born in the luxury district “1″ but after proving too difficult to even train as a career, she is a rare ration trade from District 1 (career districts generally aren’t pushed to the brink of needing to give away their children for measly rations) to 7 - the lumber and paper district. A previous victor Dairon takes an interest in Beau, however, and trains her for The Hunger Games. However she does not train Beau to win, but to destroy the games and even the country if she must.

Beau doesn’t really give a fuck about the mission that Dairon wants her to undertake (though she volunteers when asked) until she meets the rest of the tributes - by which I mean the M9 - and starts taking her mission more seriously. She is absolutely not beloved by the Empire’s Capitol audience.

Molly woke up in District 8 (Textiles!!) with no memories. He’s not even really sure he always lived there, because no one seems to recognize him, but no one can give him answers. Not that Molly looks for them, of course. When his name is picked from the reaping ball... Molly decides to dedicate the rest of his life making everyone deal with him and make it hell for those that put him there. He basically accepts he’s going to die in the games, but would like to die saving someone else if he can manage that.

Caduceus is from District 10 (livestock). When his name is called, Caduceus calmly accepts it as a trial the Wildmother has given him. Cad is completely unprepared when the Hunger Games actually begins and is pretty much traumatized by the violence in the Blood Bath.

Aaaaand then there is Nott, from the District 12 equivalent - mining. This District has all of the Empire’s Goblins and the non-Goblins of the District take advantage of that - every year 2 Goblins are chosen as sacrifices in which they are forced to trade for enough extra rations for the entire District, so many times that they are pretty much guaranteed to be chosen for the reaping. Nott is one of this year’s sacrifices and she really has no say in it.

There aren’t even any victors from District 12 for Nott to be mentored by - which really just cements how bleak things are for Nott. During training, Caleb helps Nott out of a scrap with some other tributes and she vows to dedicate herself to making sure he survives.

Meanwhile, Yasha was a trade-in switch from 5 to 9 (Grain)..... Or so the story goes. Another child who’d been traded from 5 to 9 was kidnapped and swapped out with Yasha. That was frankly to the kidnapped child’s fortune as she went back to District 13, which secretly still exists, from where Yasha originally came.

Yasha was switched out so she could volunteer herself for the Hunger Games under orders from The Storm Lord. She isn’t sure what she’s meant to be doing there, but she follows the signs as best as she can. While training at the Capitol of the Empire, Molly and Yasha make quick friends much to Yasha’s befuddlement. Receives a score of 11 in training.

Also I guess Shakäste is from District 13 and works with Marion?? To stop The Hunger Games????

Idk, maybe Kiri is a tribute from District 11 (Agriculture) that the M9 is desperately trying to save.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAand that’s pretty much it???? Or at least that’s all I got. Though I guess with that set up the M9 gotta form to destroy the fuck out of the Hunger Games???? Right??? Nobody dies ok lmao

If anyone is ~inspired~ by any of this, feel free to take it further and/or change w/e you want lmao.

#cr #critical role #cr 2 #critical role: the mighty nein campaign #the mighty nein #cr spoilers #critical role spoilers #long post #thg #the hunger games #hunger games au #thg au #i scream #my crit role feels

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c-kiddo · 3 years

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im sorry, but for future things ;w; please dont write things using my cr thg au and th plot n stuff from it .. its very stressful to me bc its special interests combined and my brain is very very protective of it ;-; its just . a lot....

(and i know i havent written anything for it in ages , its bc i need to get it untriggering for myself ;-; sorry ..)

#kiddo say #aa i feel bad abt this but i hav litrally had like 2 meltdowns abt this so. a #i just want to say ;-;#cr2 thg au

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tuyetthienduong · 5 years

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No do j22 nt ko co nv

Tu than kit team lives

Du de tao

W tnt lo hay

La yem xiu nha hien

Sao tu ianh yeu vay

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Lo danh hiem dat de ma de banh

Phats noi wuan len toi

Em atsm a ganh hien

Tr team em giua trum th luon han xiu roi lay het noi nen lo sang tinh tim same xu dep tui nay live

Y em la mau thuan chay chia

Linh xiu hn

Hai chong an lo th day

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Xiu nha do hien

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Phat noi cuo iehy noi roi tai cuoi wua

Xiu nha aa cmnl het date

Haiz hen

Y la duoc buff nen ganh toi do

Nl het thoi toi said team nhac

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Day f lai of

Em xiu nha do hien

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