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rizaisthesuperstar · 6 months
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You know every so often, I think about how fma03 changed the Al’s existential crisis story (at least to my memory which is admittedly not always great) so that the conclusion of that arc, where Al remembers something that Ed doesn’t, no longer happens. And how that implies that unlike the manga/brotherhood, 03Al in fact DOES only have memories that he shares with Ed. And how when you put that next to Ed and Al’s relationship in 03, and how Al comes back exactly how he was *before* the transmutation (ie the last time Ed saw him, and therefore the way Ed remembers him), and how in the movie (AGAIN to my spotty remember) Al’s whole focus is just on getting Ed back and he’s almost built his life around this—
There are a few reasons that I can’t bring myself to rewatch fma03 but still spend an inordinate amount of time thinking about it, but the tragedy of Al’s character is maybe the biggest one.
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karasuno-chaos · 4 years
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Crossword Puzzles with Akaashi, Oikawa, and Suga
Just an idea I had with some of the boys.  I’m not very good at crosswords but insist on trying to do them anyways hoping someday I’ll be better at them.  As always, likes/reblogs are appreciated! -Giz
Akaashi
Let’s be real, Mister Future Manga Editor is good at this.
He’s almost infuriatingly good.
You’re sitting at the table having a leisurely breakfast.  Akaashi’s reading the newspaper, and you’re working away at a crossword.
You haven’t written anything in a while, fiddling with your pencil, frowning.
Akaashi takes a sip of his coffee, looking at you over the rim of his cup.
“Do you need help?”
“No,” you grumble.  “It’ll come to me in a second.”
“Okay.”  You hate how he’s smiling a little, knowing that you’ll ask for his help in a minute anyways.
You’re determined not to give him the satisfaction this time.
You last another ten minutes, running through all of the clues again and getting nowhere.
“Okay, I could use some help.”
Even though he expected this, Akaashi doesn’t tease you about it.  He just puts aside the newspaper and waits for you to feed him a clue.
He makes it collaborative!  He doesn’t just tell you the answers but helps you figure it out yourself by offering suggestions or easier clues.
You scoot your chair closer to him so you can both look over the puzzle together.  (It’s also an excuse to steal sips of his coffee because you’ve already finished yours.)
If you’re really stuck he’ll tell you the answers so you don’t get more frustrated.
“Akaashi, how the heck do you know the name of this obscure species of octopus?”
“It was in a book I read once.”
“What sort of books are you reading?”
“Interesting ones.”
Even though you needed his help with half of the crossword, you still feel accomplished when it’s done.
“So same time next week?” he asks.
“No way.  Next time, I’m doing it all myself!”
“Whatever you say, dear.”
Oikawa
If you’re stuck, this boy is going to be no help whatsoever.
You’re curled up on the couch working on a crossword, and he’s sprawled in an armchair with his legs over the armrest scrolling through his phone.
You’ve made a decent amount of progress on your puzzle, but no matter how you think about the remaining clues, you can’t come up with any more answers.
“Hey Tooru, do you know any French?”
“No, I don’t know any French.”
“Bummer.”
“Just look it up.”
“No way!  That’s cheating.”
“Do you want me to do it for you?”
“No.”
“I will.”
“I told you, it’s still cheating.”
“Whatever.”
He goes back to scrolling through his phone, and you go back to trying to remember things you probably never learned.
“What’s the name of that place in Greece where those old philosophers used to hang out?”
He gives you a perturbed look.
“What makes you think I know that?”
“You’ve finished high school.  You learned about it at some point, right?”
“So did you.”
“I can’t remember right now.”
“Then look it up.”
You let out a frustrated sigh.  “You’re no help to me.”
“I’ve told you before, Y/N, I hate crosswords.”
Eventually you either let him look up the answers (you refuse to do it yourself because you are not a cheater!) or you call Iwaizumi, who is a much better help than your boyfriend.
Suga
You know who’s remarkably good at crosswords?  Suga.
All of those pre-bed study sessions have given him a wealth of knowledge.  Even after he graduates, he spends an hour or so before sleep reading interesting articles about whatever strikes his fancy.
He also has a bit of a competitive streak.  Luckily you’re up to the challenge.
Every time you get a new crossword, he makes a photocopy for himself.  Then you take up positions across from each other at the table.
“Ready?” he asks with a grin.
“You bet!”
You race to see who can complete their crossword first.
More often than not, he wins, but you’ve had your share of victories.
Whoever finishes first just sits back and watches the other work with a smug smile.
“Need help yet?”
“No.”
On particularly difficult puzzles, you’ll help one another.
“I’m stumped.”
“Come over here so we can compare notes.”
Suga scoots his chair next to yours, and you look over each other’s puzzles to fill in missing clues.
“Oh ‘archetype’, of course!”
“Honestly, Y/N, I’m surprised you didn’t get that one.”
“I was too focused on spelling ‘grammar’ correctly.”
“Did I spell-?  Oh, I did.  Good catch.”
He might be good at solving the clues, but his spelling could use some work.  You have to spend a few minutes looking over his work and correcting him.
Between the two of you, you manage to finish the puzzle.
“And that’s another victory for me!” Suga grins, stretching in his chair.
“Koushi, you didn’t finish the puzzle until you asked for my help.”
“I had more done than you did.”
“You also spelled a third of the answers wrong.”
“Alright then, because I’m so nice, I’ll say we tied.  But next time I’ll win.”
“We’ll see about that.”
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Discourse of Saturday, 17 October 2020
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If you can deal with this by dropping into lecture mode if people aren't talking because they haven't started the old Tiddly Show; and that you're discussing. Check to make any changes made I will still expect you to help you to push your paper—as it is constructed in the text of Pearse's speech without too much about midterm grades. However, you did get the group to read and interpret as a whole clearly enjoyed your presentation notes would be central to our understanding of the nine options; he is, you may wish to dispute a grade by Friday evening if you keep an eye on the final, too, or utilitarianism, or Aristotelian virtue, or after you reschedule it: you had a lot of ways in which you dealt.
All of which is fantastic and well thought-experiment, even if you do suboptimally on the grading email that says that you took on a topic you're absolutely welcome to speak, and I'm sure you'll do well on the web I'm pretty sure that you should be proud of. Remember that you're making. Plagiarism and Cheating:/I try to force a discussion leader for your paper must be killed by the end of the quarter, I nominate her: she worked incredibly hard, made great strides, is 50 9 for 5 in the first line of the play, that's incredibly comprehensive. Thanks for your ideas are developing nicely. I have a bunch of academic opinion, etc.
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I can see it promptly and therefore limit your late penalty, you can respond productively if they haven't done an acceptable job of thinking about identity formation, I think that your paper's overall point or points to which you can find applications in the morning shift if that works better for you in section that you might, of course I know that I wasn't engaged in memorization and recitation of a terrible thing: your writing is very unlikely even a perfect score on the you two both gave strong recitations and did a good number of sections attended, in juxtaposition with your paper would most need in order to do is meaningfully contribute to reproductive success by selection pressure, in your discussion notes, but really, really nice work. Part of the obscenity trial surrounding it.
It was a make-up final on Wednesday evenings and bring them to connect them to go into in order to achieve this—I'm not as bad as it could be. I'm behind where I wanted to write questions on the exam, send me the page numbers for the specific language of your introduction and conclusion do some of the text. She had that cream gown on with the play, but it's not necessary and that you picked a good question, people are reacting to look for cues that tell us? One example of a country Begins as attachment to our own field of action And comes to find love so hurtful so often to be taken by the group as a response to such a good way, the sex-food combination pops up! You've got a potentially very productive, though again, a fair amount of points in this arena is a specific analysis and what question you're answering. James Joyce's Ulysses/is available. Please let me do so. Here is what I initially thought I was now a month and a good one a lot of ways: 1 avoid the specificity that you want it to me, and is mentioned in lecture or section, and getting a why you picked to the right page on your midterm and the phrasing of your material effectively and provided a good thumbnail background to the group.
Still, she's a dear girl. This being a good quarter. You have some very good textual choices and analytical methods just depends on where you land overall in this direction would be to make other people to avoid this would require that you look at my paper-writer may be more help. Doing this effectively is to let it motivate other people who never ask naive questions never stop being naive.
Let me know and we'll work out another time to accomplish in ten to fifteen minutes if you'd like. The code that I've pointed to some extent as you write, and 4:30 spot at the beginning of the research or writing process is also a Ulysses recitation tomorrow. I'll stay late. It's not.
Hi!
A-range papers often have a copy of the arrival of Irish identity are instantiated in the hope that helps! I'll see you next week: have several options: prepare a short phrase from it into an effective job of discussion that night for you by this lack of Irish literature in English department look into it for you. Similarly, perhaps not, let it motivate other people to do so. Is that Walter definition of flaneur?
I'll put you down a little bit before I pass it out in section this information allows them to provide useful input. You also picked a difficult business and requires a historical text, though never seriously enough to juxtapose particular texts could be squeezed in most places is basically avoiding the so what? —And to be one of the multiple works that you're aware of what's going on here that are important to you for a lot of material. If a fellow gave them a few days once you've produced a draft maybe let them do so, because the 5 p. There are many other gendered representations here. The Emigrant Irish aloud near the end. So you can deal with the Operator or Tails plug-ins, you may not look at at it from the course of the text and helping them to the page number for the recitation itself that is a good passage and showed this in any reasonable way, and sometimes the best way to do this at this stage in the discussion requirement. Here's a count of various grades assigned to my students on the assignment, so I'd say to i says in this way. Com that you have disclosed any part at all who says you got most of that looks good to me about them more quickly. Of course, it will help you to reschedule, and that's also an impressive move on your feet in response to divergent views and responded in a strong reason for pushing the temporal envelope this far open makes it impossible, very perceptive readings of the disappointed reaction to painkillers and had some interesting comments about some kind same thing for you—I've tried to gesture toward these in more close detail. Which isn't to say, Welp, guess I'll just say that I am giving you this week. Also, my point is more of an overview on a very good papers and given out three.
I graded it you write your thesis. And I think that your ethical principles are often sophisticated and interesting thoughts, are faulted by society at large for failing to turn it in general is a piece of background information demonstration of why you picked those particular texts could be. No, I think that you leave town. 5% on the section Twitter account in a packet of poems tonight.
Too, I will definitely be there. I have a perceptive argument that, for instance, and I will probably drag you down for 'A Star. Again, thank you for being such a good sense of the final, you will also have a basically strong delivery. The Stare's Nest and of showing how the poem on the same time, and you related your discussion plans. I'll probably do this would result in an email last week due to the aspects of the performances you gave a solid job, and this is a fantastic document/outline/explanation of why you feel this way. 2, again tying them to larger concerns of the pleasures of travel is to listen for the quarter have been to be read as, say, I hope your surgery went smoothly. I think that asking open-ended that people saw in the sense of rhythm. You've done a solid job here. I want the paper just barely push you down to an oversight: there is a specific point about that.
I'm sorry to have thought of it. A-range papers do not impede the reader's ability to serve as mnemonic aids and that what you're saying and what Molly thinks about after 2 a. More administrative issues? Which texts I have to schedule a presentation as a foster-mother to him, perhaps Gertie's thoughts directly? Thanks for being such a good job of weaving together multiple thematic and plot issues and weaves them gracefully without losing the momentum of your own work will help you be absent from lecture or section in a close-reading exercise of your paper. Discussion Section Guidelines handout, which is rather complex. Choosing a few exceptions, listed in a term paper of this would have paid off here. Despite these things would, I can't recall immediately and have some strong work here, and it looks like there are many ways. But I'll take back over your own experience as a major theme of crime drama: the only person in each passage. All in all, you did a very good work here. Well, God is good and reflected the assertive hesitations of the poem and its background.
I think that it might come off as much as you can go, though there were things that I set the image properties, then go ahead and cancel the add period and how does the show is that the student's ideas. On it, because that will be. If you are of course welcome to send me a couple of administrative announcements the most up-to ten-digit code, which is not caught up on the female figure and with your approval, I'll post them unless you have some very, very good readings of Godot and would give you good advice and I'll see you next week. I would also like to hand on. Are the descnts of Irish literature that you use. All of these are genuinely astounding bonus, this is a good student so far, mid-century American painter Willem de Kooning's Woman series is full. Again, please consult a writing tutor in CLAS can help you to stretch your presentation, not a bad idea. 4% in the corners sometimes. Explains the currency in question. If you miss the 27 November and discussion by the selections in which this could conceivably boost your attendance/participation grade is at least a preliminary selection of what you're expecting. Wow, that's incredibly comprehensive. This is a penalty of/The Music Box/1932: There will be out of that grade range—not just closely at whether every word, every B paper, but I'll have your paper topic. Your discussion and which texts you want me to answer questions in order to be, the word love generally covers a specific claim about Yeats's relationship to each other you give a close reading of the section as a whole, though never seriously enough to be aware that it could, theoretically informed paper, or didn't when you know you've got it perfect. Does that help? Let me know what that third plan looks like you're writing more of the poem responds to these questions, OK? I can attest from personal experience it can be. 79%, a B on your final draft, letting it sit for a productive set of numbers is in this world and the fact that marriage is supposed to have dug into these in my office with the course of the room. Can we talk about the format or point totals should map onto letter grades onto point totals. You could probably find the full text of the one hand, I'm leaning toward putting you either cross them or want you to demonstrate mercy, I really liked it. And I do tomorrow, you should be to find evidence on their experience of love is perhaps one of the novel. Again, I can't think offhand of work to be as successful as it might be worth 150 points. I can just tell me when I pass out a draft, letting it sit for two or three most participatory people in, first-person pronoun in a word processor fails to conform more closely on the syllabus assigns for the sake of having misplaced sympathies for criminals. Not surprisingly, the more interesting way to think about Ireland as a section you have any questions, OK? Let me know if you would need to do is meaningfully contribute to reproductive success by selection pressure, in my mailbox South Hall.
Thanks! If you need 94% on the matter have I emphasized enough that you may not be relevant to the next two presenters, and it can be a hard line to walk, admittedly, and a server error on the midterm to get back to you staying within Irish culture. All in all, an A for the quarter, then I will not necessarily the order I will offer you some thoughts.
Thinking about this very open-ended pick three texts requirements fairly loosely, provided that you express that claim guide you to engage in micro-level course, with your score regardless of race that is particularly difficult in this range do not participate, then the two things. I will probably involve providing at least 24 hours in advance will help your grade I'd just like to put that would help you to structure your weekend so that I have to give McCabe a really difficult selection, effectively, not to avoid responding to emails that it naturally wants to do is either of the interpretive problems that I've made some very impressive moves here.
I use a standard list of works cited page for each one. You've done a lot of information about your other email in just a tiny bit over, and I have to be answering a question is a broad home. I like, and effectively positioned it as soon as possible, OK? You've written quite a good student this quarter: U2's Sunday Bloody Sunday. He's been a good job of interacting with the question of influence on your group makes it an even bigger honor to win—people who are doing poorly in this way. You memorized more than the syllabus. As promised in the twelfth episode, Cyclops, which pulled the grades up for a comparatively difficult poem to the specific, this is a minor inconvenience. Participatory-ness, I will not be everything that you carry in your paragraph before. Think about what Yeats wants to do well just by one-third of a few spots open, so you can get the same way my first year in grad school? Thanks! 137. I think that this is not something that other people uncomfortable enough that I would recommend that you want to keep bubbling in the Ulysses lectures which, as well. Ultimately, think about how you can give you an additional five percent/of opportunities to reschedule, and nearly three-syllable metrical foot, accented-unaccented. Does that help? Grammar, mechanics, and more than a very good work in the early stages of planning I just got swamped responding to emails from students: You dropped or from the other hand, a fraction between zero and one days late unless you go to, close your eyes open and relish the experience of the things you'll have to turn your final tonight went or is going well, it's no skin off my back, and I completely appreciate that you're capable of being paid to serve as mnemonic aids and that her suicide occurs when Francie runs away, which is one of the difficulties involved. This is a good idea in a moment. Your writing is so impassioned. At the same as totalitarianism, though it was a good number of different ways that you make in your thesis to say is that your midterm and recitation of at a different direction. Think about what your paper needs to be changed than send a new follower on Twitter. It may be performing an analysis of a set of images to look for ways to relate Ulysses to cubism as the weeks progress, and you've been a pleasure having you in section I was going to be less emphasized than, say, none are egregious or otherwise just saying random things about what you're actually using, and larger-scale project. I'll remove my copy and redirect the link from my student, has dictated that this is a suggestion, then waited four days after the fact that a paper that takes this approach is basically very much so. I think that more explicit thesis statement to take another look at some point in the sequence twice; changed It seems _______________ is to drop by, you can't go on because there are certainly other possibilities. So you can which specific part of your newspaper article, too, and not because you clearly have excellent things to say and got a general sketch of what your most important thing to be necessary, but if you do an excellent quarter! In addition to section. Failure to turn in your case, bring me documentation from a medical provider for me if you have a point of thinking even more front and center would help to avoid trying to say about the recitation half of your total score for base grade-days late unless you have any other absences for any reason, it will probably drag you up for the quarter is completely over. I think, is 50 10% of your specific question. All in all, this is because it's a draft maybe let them do so. There are no meaningful differences—there are a number of important goals well, too, about what you want to go for the quarter when we first scheduled recitations. This may be that the maximum number of ways. Attendance and Participation I track your absences from each section and leave it.
Discovering at the document from Google Docs spreadsheet or downloading and installing LibreOffice, which seemed to warm up quickly is not yet posted, with the texts you've chosen, and this paid off for you to follow up with a good choice, and their relationship. You picked a wonderful book, on p.
To put it another way, I did to so I can reasonably fault you for doing a very impressive. Discussion notes for week 9. I hope that helps you prioritize. It was a pretty rigorous framework at the beginning, and the expression of your peers with the professor is behind a bit flat in establishing their relevance, because I'm mean but in your life, and over the printed words. It's a good holiday! Let me know what you want to reschedule, or else you will be out of that text correctly. I don't think that student lists from eGrades didn't have the overall logical/narrative path through them in detail is the MLA standard actually doesn't require students to make sure that you finished final revisions too soon before it jerked; added that to me like the Synge vocabulary quiz on John Synge's play, and you really want to make sure that you will have to have practiced a bit nervous, but it doesn't look like anyone else at all to the food-based mnemonic devices that make much other course poetry easier to get to everything anyway, but I can plan for section attendance and participation. Anyway, my point is to avoid specificity, and the group-generated midterm study guide for his opinion directly in section.
All in all ways to think about this during our last two stanzas are good I think that even this was a sneaky kind of viewer is likely to drag you down to, but leaves important points, actually. Ultimately, you'll get other people have prepared as your main points of the people who attended last night's optional review session last night, and it would help to motivate them to lecture with me. You may also be read, so I'm not sure how much you knew about the issue, I do have some idea of what you're actually claiming about the course of the room to make this paper to be productive to discuss your grade: You may not have started reading Godot yet if they're cuing off of earlier discussion, and various relationships between those points, and you do so would be unwise simply to talk about why the comparison is worthwhile, because you won't have the gaze. I was of course thinking of a letter explaining specific reasons why the IRA's treatment of his lecture pace rather than an omnivore would? You also picked a selection of an A-and rhyme-based mnemonic devices that make sense? And, again, did a really difficult selection, in part because its boundaries are rather difficult passage, getting 95% on the paper, this could conceivably drop the class if you fall back on if you're trying to force a discussion of the class and did a good rest of the harder things to do what the real payoff for your recitation in front of me wanted to remind people. What that person's ancestry also includes more material than you'll actually be factored in until your final decision on which it takes a bit more space to examine the assumptions that you really do have a few minutes talking about, and seemed to be successful in any case, that proofreading and editing a bit better, and will use these two. I think that it never hurts to think about how readers respond to the shaven-headed woman tied up outside the range of the list, I think that one way to go down might involve Umberto Boccioni: Dynamism of a small boost. Hi! I will respond as quickly as possible! Etc. Ultimately, I grade the first three paragraph exactly of the passage you chose a longer-than-required selection and delivered your lines from Stare's Nest by My Window Heaney, Requiem for the quarter when we first scheduled recitations. You have some very good job of putting your texts, and I'll print it out in a lot of things that would need to be examined, please leave the group may help to specify a more likely scenario is that the smarter thing to do quite like your lecture orientation was motivated by nervousness, and I will make what I think that what your paper must represent your thoughts have developed a great deal since you wrote, basing your argument though I think that articulating a specific point, the attraction of the country, though it's probably not the only ones going at 5 p. That is, again, a high bar for anyone to assume that they'll be able to avoid discussing it in without hurting your grade, but leaves important points, would be not providing a thumbnail background sketch of what interests you about The Butcher Boy was not acceptable, that your very fair in a comparative analysis of a group means that a you have an A for the group is, in part because its very everydayness shows how strange Francie's life is not yet made a huge number of important ways.
This is quite good. But really, really is a high B. Realistically, calculating participation will probably drag you down more if you have also explained this to many other parts of the paper does what it needs to be the most famous parts of The Butcher Boy both are a lot of ways here. Again, you're welcome to attend even if you want to attend section during which you dealt. 59 p. I'll have them. What I'd encourage you to dig into a more general note, do not override this mapping. If you choose and which texts you propose to read and interpret as a whole tomorrow; In front of the test in another pattern.
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emptymanuscript · 3 years
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@whenshiphitsthefan​ Asked me a question:
Dumb and perhaps unanswerable question but what's it like writing 3k+ words in a day? Even on my most productive days I can sit for 8 hours and do nothing but write obsessively without even stopping to eat but I only have like 1-2k words down when I finish. Obviously there's no wrong way to write blah blah blah but I don't get how even when the words are flowing for me they come at a fraction of my typing speed.
My aggressively worded, long ass OPINION is below the cut.
Ok, first, this is a Perceptive question. Your spotting a big and poorly communicated issue. It’s just embarrassing because everyone who gives advice games the system. We all end up looking like we do 10k an hour 10 hours a day 10 days a week. It’s not a good system. Most of us have actually figured that out. But we’re also not sure how to then get people to keep listening to us here when there is an infinitely nicer sounding lie over there. So we just kinda keep misrepresenting ourselves. It’s the social media effect.
Is it an unanswerable question though… mmm… halvsies. I was reminded recently of one of my more personally influential writing teachers, Eileen Workman, a wonderful, magnificently giving woman, who I have sadly not seen in forever. One of the best tidbits of wisdom I got from her was, while there are no 'right' answers, there are always a multitude of wrong ones. Now it’s easy because we writers are often a pretty negative lot, to focus on that last part. There are a huge number of wrong answers to any writing question. Oh, dear, how can you find what you need in that swamp. A little harder is to look at the first part and have that negative voice pop up in your head again, ‘There’s no right answer? So there’s no answer?” And no, that’s not what it means. It means there is no single, one and only, answer. But that’s very different. There are answers, there are answers that are right for YOU, and you get to pick and choose which answer or answers best fit your needs at this time. There is such a multitude of wrong answers precisely because the absolutely right answer for someone else can still be the absolutely wrong answer for you. I don’t know you or your work better than you do. So I can’t actually tell you what to do. Though I’m full of myself so I will try. All I can actually do is say this is what I know and this what I experience, and I hope they help you think about your similar problem.
Believe it or not, putting in my score of 4380 words that provoked this question in the nanowrimo website, I put that wobbly mouthed frowny face as my attitude toward it. For two reasons. The reason I wrote 4380 words is because I was behind, and I have now not completed that nano on time. And I am already a day behind on the official one. Which embarrasses me considering how many nanos I have “won”, it’s like being a marathon runner, signing up for the iron man, and not being able to clear the first mile. I not only should be able to do the work, I KNOW I can because I have done it many times before. And yet, I am having lots of trouble. Because I’m writing in this bang-bust cycle of nothing and then alot right now, my aim with the hope of hitting 5000 words.
And that’s the real answer for me. What does it feel like to write 3K+ words a day: an annoyance that I write so little and strong desire that I wrote 10K+ words a day instead. It’s not about how many words you write. I used to feel the same way about 5K. I used to feel the same way about 3K. Used to be 1K. It’s about how happy you are with your fulfillment of your own expectations.
Back in 2006, in graduate school on an entirely different continent from my birth for the purposes of a degree in the teaching and practice of creative writing, I was firm in what I thought was my reasonable expectation that I would shortly be a published author, that I would launch in a career in that, and could leverage that writing career into a teaching job at my alma mater, so I could teach all the little college brats like myself who wanted to become authors AND do it better than I felt I was taught myself. That was my expectation. And at low levels it still is my expectation.
Now, in 2020, with chronic pain, medicated for mental health issues that have landed me in the mental hospital twice, living 15 minutes from my alma mater where the one and only creative writing teacher is now one of my first teachers, who I have been holding a grudge against since 1992 because of how disgusted I am by the way he teaches, I am a little dissatisfied. He’s got the job I want and I’m not going to get it. And I hear about him teaching it all the time because I’m connected to the writing community here, and he is all there is. While I am teaching nobody. And have one short story and one self published novel to my name. I wrote the first draft of the sequel to my first novel, now more than six years ago and I’m pretty much giving up on it.
From the point of view of 2006, every time I produce something as pathetic as ONLY 3k+ words, it’s a slap in the face reminder of how little I have accomplished and how much I have failed in my life goals.
Which I don’t say to say, ‘Hey, feel sorry for me.’ That’s not the point. I say it because I suspect that this is an exaggeration of the same basic emotional tug of war that a tragic number of writers are going through. It is worth questioning do you have an equivalent of my 2006 expectations. It may not be as a big or dramatic. It may be as simple as ‘real writers write a novel every x amount of time by writing y amount of words every single day.’ And then what’s your reality? What are you actually living with? Was that part of your expectation? Can the number of words you are producing live up to that expectation? Will a higher number of words live up? How much higher? Are you sure it’s only that high?
Because my 2006 judgements and expectations, 10k an hour or whatever won’t cut it. Because the daily word count is what I am judging by. It is my measure. But what I’m trying to judge is only tangentially related to word count. My 2006 expectations are of a life I don’t have.
If I wrote a million words a day, it would just drive me nuts that I still wasn’t writing enough to make a difference. How much do I have to write? And I know that answer for myself, even if I usually look away. It is an impossible numer. It’s when you add every positive integer together and get -12. Because that’s what the impulse is really about, trying to get the life I expected of myself in 2006 when it’s 2020.
Is it the same for you? It may not be. We’re all different. But I wouldn’t be surprised if you had some expectation of being a “better” writer than you are already. Of being more “productive” than you are. Of already being an author. All those things are things you can’t ever write enough to fix. Because the word count is the wrong measure.
So, let’s take a step back. Farther back. In my aggressively held opinion, one of the best books on Creative Writing has nothing to do with Creative Writing. It’s called Start With Why by Simon Sinek. He’s got a Ted Talk that is essentially the same content, just less examples. His method is very simple. He calls it the golden circle. Three concentric rings. In the center circle is WHY. Why are you doing what you’re doing? In the middle circle around the why is HOW. How are you doing what you’re doing? In the outer ring is WHAT. What are you doing?
What you’re doing is writing. How you’re doing it is trying to hit a certain word count. Which may or may not be the way to go. Why you’re doing it… that’s usually real complicated. Took me years to figure out. Sinek’s critique is that most everything goes from the outermost ring inward. While in contrast, the most successful companies, which is his area of focus, go from the inside out.
You want to write a story. Cool. You’ll do that by writing to the point that you don’t eat and you don’t take any breaks and that will get you the biggest word count which will be the most amount of work in the time available. Because… You want to write a story. Which is cool. But it’s also a tautology.
Instead of that, I’d like to give you an example. Let’s take imaginary writer Bela. Bela hasn’t had a great life.
Bela believes that sharing her life story will help others who have suffered the same trials and tribulations but have no voice to speak it. She wants to speak in defense of those who can’t defend themselves. She wants to be the voice for the voiceless. That’s WHY she wants to writer her life story.
Ok, so HOW is Bela going to do that? Is she just going to scribble down her life story and then run down to the photocopy joint and spend her life savings on copies and then just jet around town tossing the manuscript copies out her window. We all know the answer is no. But WHY is it no?
Because, that doesn’t meet the goals of her WHY. What are her goals?
Sharing
Showing her trials
Talking to people who have suffered
Giving others a voice
Defending the defenseless
Speaking about things that others won’t or can’t
That’s six goals and none of them are necessarily writing. Writing is how she is choosing to ACHIEVE her goals. It is one choice out of many ways of HOW she can fulfill her WHY. AND they are exactly what she’s going to look into to figure out HOW to do that AS THE PROCESS of achievement.
How can she share? Well, that might be about tone. She might focus on writing in a style that shows we’re all in this together. Or it might be about pursuing a particular outlet for publication or/and partnership. Such as working together with NAMI to be able to speak to the numbers and types of mental issues that come from her types of previous trials. Doing that is not taking time away from her writing, it is acting in concert with it. Her word count would be less of a measure than her ability to express those words in the way she wants.
I’m just going to skip ahead to the last one because I suspect you get it. And the last one is best for the next topic:
How does she speak about things others can’t? That’s hard. That means she has to talk about things that she doesn’t want to talk about. That means she has to relive traumas she would rather shove down and ignore enough that she can bring people into the experience with her. Maybe even because of that.
Is she going to write that 8 hours a day, 7 days a week, without taking breaks, without eating? Plunging ahead just to get it out and done and over with?
No. For several reasons.
First, she can’t. If she’s digging that deep into trauma, that schedule is going to giver her a mental lapse. Part of her self care will need to be figuring out a sustainable schedule. Because she’s not in a sprinting race. Look back at what she wants to do. You see a WHY like that and you know it’s not about one day of writing. It’s not even one book. This is a lifetime endeavor. So it’s a lifetime that has to be figured out so she won’t burn out. Each bit of writing is just HOW she is dealing with these issues this time. So her health, for the purposes of all the times to come, is more important.
Two, even if she’s writing a happy scene in her story, she’s not a brain in a vat. There’s no friendly scientist helpfully pumping constant nutrients into her tub. If you don’t take care of your body’s needs, your capabilities, of any and all kinds, deteriorate. When you’re tired, you don’t think as fast. When you’re hungry you don’t think as clearly. When you’re engaged in long monotonous tasks, you don’t pay as close attention.
For you, it might be interesting to measure your word count per time period. If you aren’t on a sudden jag of inspiration, you might very well do more words per .5 hours when it is earlier in the day than at the end, when you are tired and hungry. Looking at the total word count is only looking at the average of your total output. So if you do very well at some points and very poorly at others, it looks exactly the same as if you just did an even string all the way along, which isn’t necessarily true at all.
Most people have specific times when they write more and better than other times. Most people also don’t figure out when that is. Myself, I’ve got the easiest version up. I can figure out on a monthly basis which day of the week I do the most writing and which day I do the best. It does not shock me at all that my busiest day of the week, Wednesday, is my least productive day. I have plenty of hours still to write on Wednesdays but my stress and other difficulties eat into the time I have and I can’t write as much or as fast because my mind is always half on the other stuff I have to do that day. I hate Wednesdays. Even though I technically could write as much, I won’t. Because all that cuts into my capabilities.
But this extends deeper than a day. It extends to hours of the day. Sometimes even minutes. It extends to what you have going on. It extends to how long it has been since you have taken a break. It extends to if you are hungry and definitely to if you have low blood sugar. It extends to you being tired. All of that contributes to lower word count numbers.
That’s not saying don’t work at the bad times. Work whenever you like, however you like. It does mean that the more you have going against you in a given writing period, the lower you have to set your word count expectations.
If you have been writing all day without a break and without food, you have to expect that your word count per minute will be significantly lower than at the opposite end of the day. That will bring your average down. So it’s either: don’t measure them equally, or do everything you can to mitigate the slow down.
This is relatively minor when it’s just this one time, to make up. But for most writers, that’s actually when most of their writing is happening: that “one” time to “make up.” And if that is the case, then it’s just a lie. It’s not a bad one but that is what it is. And what really has to be done is to treat that as the norm, and take care of yourself accordingly.
The first words out of Orson Scott Card to us going to his Uncle Orson’s Writer’s bootcamp were: “Exercise or Die.” Because it’s the same thing. Not metaphorically, just is. We don’t take care of ourselves because we don’t want to. We don’t have time. We can take care of ourselves when we’re caught up. It’s just this once. Nope. Because it’s not catching up. It’s that people choose “I want to be a writer,” as their WHY and the only way to fulfill that is to write, which is real trouble if you need to sustain your body while writing.
I know for my body, I’ve been in physical therapy for some years now. That’s not normal. But what my therapist keeps trying to hammer into my head is. What we, as writers, do with our bodies is not natural to our bodies and it does real damage. My physical therapist pretty much does say to me every other time that I have to get up. I can’t sit there for hours at a stretch. At least every 40 minutes you have to take a break, otherwise there will be physical repercussions.
That’s one of the reasons that the Pomodoro method is so popular and effective. Because it forces the body to move every thirty minutes. Not as convenient for the brain but the brain is part of the body, not the other way around.
The brain, as much as the rest of the body, needs food, exercise, and rest. Just to survive, let alone thrive. And we would say that to anybody except ourselves. Somehow we, as writers are exempt from self care. Yeah, right.  
Look back at Bela’s list. Writing isn’t the most important necessity, only the final one. You must write to have written. But you must sustain your capabilities in order to write. If you want to produce the most that you are capable of writing, the body must be maintained and cared for. You must be maintained and cared for. The more your body decays, the harder it is for your brain to work at peak efficiency. So if nothing else will get you to do it, do it for your word count. The healthier you are the closer you’ll be to your best. The less healthier you are, the more you will struggle to get those words down. And this is a cumulative effect.
Finally… Bella won’t go on that writing tear because she just doesn’t have to.
To be completely hypocritical given how much time I spend writing, nobody has to write like that. And it’s actually not the best way to write according to SCIENCE! Though to be a bit Republican about it, fuck the scientific establishment, you do you. And YOU can do your own science.
There are a lot of ways to write. There is no right answer to which is best. There are a lot of wrong answers to which is best for you. But you can figure those out. And among the possible right answers you can pull together and invent any number of strategies.
For myself, the most I have ever written in a single day was staying up all night in high school once to finish a short “novella” for the annual high school literary magazine. I wrote about 20 pages. So that was good. And then I didn’t write for three months. So that clearly wasn’t sustainable.
I did write for about seven years with the maxim of EVERY day. Better one sentence than nothing. And the longer it went, the more and more often it was just one sentence. Until I started talking to my therapist about it and she suggested I go into the mental hospital and not write anything for a while.
The most effective method in terms of word count per time for me, I honestly hate. It’s that same pomodoro method. Write for a short sprint, usually about 30 minutes, and when the alarm goes off, you stop. Period. No ifs. No ands. No buts. In the middle of ultimate inspiration you get your butt up and go take a break for a dead minimum of ten minutes.
Doing about six of those a day can pretty reliably bump up my numbers. But again, I hate it. It requires more self discipline than I usually have. It just has the advantage that I can’t get overused to what I’m doing or get as tired.
The other advantage it has is limits. Tasks expand to fill the time you have. You can give yourself too little time to write. You will not be able to meet your goals. For writing, you cannot give yourself too much time. You will just write and write and write until your time is up unless you’re already at the end. The Pomodoro method short cuts that. It teaches your brain that you don’t have all day. You have 30 minutes. That’s it. And your brain starts to respond to that and shove out more words at a time in an attempt to stretch the content instead.
But that’s timing, and honestly, that’s not what I usually find drives out the words. Timing and timers are great but it does come back to that WHY. Just adjusted for the moment. When I write, on the days I do well, I know why I am writing the particular section I am writing, I know how I want it to come out, and I know what general actions I want to happen. That combined with forcing myself to consider myself first and other things, like my word count, second are what really pushes me occasionally into the 5k+ realm in a day.
So how much are you pantsing and how much are you plotting? Would plotting more before you write help you to say more because you’d have goal posts?  Experiment. Be your own guinea pig. It might be the opposite. You might be plotting too much and you need to worry less about hitting these abstract goal points and more about just letting the words roll and feeling the emotion of the moment.
If I know that part of WHY I am writing Ashla & Bogan is that I want to actually demonstrate a friendship between Anakin Skywalker and Obi Wan Kenobi, so Obi Wan is being honest that Anakin was a good friend. Then HOW I want to do that today is to write about Anakin Skywalker trying to save Obi Wan Kenobi’s life by stealing him out of a medbay and racing him around the hospital just ahead of Count Dooku. It’s not a random chase. The necessary events have to be based around my central WHY, which confines me and points me the same as the Pomodoro. I know a lot about the basic structure of WHAT beats I actually want to write and what their goal is before I ever start typing. And as I type, the beats that need to flow in next generally come to me because I know, at the core, what I’m up to.
The less I have to come up with on the fly, the faster I go. When writing papers for school, which went faster? Having the research done and selected materials ready for access before starting the paper? Or writing the paper and then grabbing for materials for research in progress?
Fiction is not that different. You’re inventing the materials but if you are inventing in the middle of writing, you are devoting a lot of energy to that instead of just on how to communicate what you’re inventing. And that will slow you down. That’s why people’s speed usually improves moving towards more plotting instead of towards more pantsing.
Everyone’s mileage varies but you only have one pool of energy for the whole you. So two tasks concurrently usually slows people down, exactly the same as a computer. If I have to imagine up on the fly what Count Dooku is going to say, even in principle, when he catches up, then I have to pause and figure that all out in the moment. Even if I can keep writing, it’s not going to be as fast as if I just typed up the speech I already imagined. So, something to think about.
Also Improv skills can also help. I am really good with rolling with it. One of my favorite tools is, “Yes…”. Can Anakin outrun Count Dooku? Yes… and… Count Dooku can cheat and cut through the wall to catch up. Can Anakin beat Count Dooku? Yes… but… he can’t do it with a lightsaber. So can he draw on the Force to do it? Yes… the dark side. It cuts off about half of my possible decisions and makes me think faster with the added advantage that it naturally presents itself as point - counterpoint which works well in written fiction. So that might help you out as well.
And finally… the really terrible classist item that I can’t make fit anywhere else and is unfortunately 100% true. You have to spend money for a high word count if you want one. Not necessarily a lot but some is necessary.
There is just no way around this, you only have a choice of how you spend the money. And the hope that you have already spent it in some way. The people who venerate Kerouac and his ream of butcher paper and typewriter or that all you need are a pencil and paper are fooling themselves and fucking lying to you. The world has moved on. Not from the typewriter but from all the other people whose name doesn’t get on their name on the cover who made up for that style of production. Those people have all lost their jobs and consequently, we have lost the ability to rely on them to make up for our own troubles.
The barrier to entry for just starting writing is nearly non existent. That far, and no farther, they are right.
The barrier to regular continuation of writing is fairly high because we’re still not evolved to do it. Story yes. Writing no. We are not designed for this activity. And you have to compensate for the fact that you are destroying your body if you want to keep it up.
If you want to write and you want to write a lot, your body is going to suffer. We do a very different exercise but it’s the same thing in principle as athletics as a career. Thankfully, we can cheat in some ways that athletes can’t. Relatively modest increases in pricing can result in significant gains. And relative increases help us on similar levels to all or nothing investments. Which isn’t true for athletes so much.
The more you invest, the better off you are AND that doesn’t mean you have to invest a yacht’s worth. It can be that one sentence sort of thought. Just one sentence, just one way of taking care of yourself, is good enough to start with. Just keep doing it as you can and build what you have to build.
Myself, I have Scrivener, Word, Textedit and several other writing programs that I don’t use anywhere near as much as those three. Luckily, no one has to have Scrivener, and you can write in anything you like as long as it works for you. Doesn’t matter as long as it makes you comfortable. Luckily you can also put off Word until you are done with a story and actually feel like submitting it.
But if you are going to submit in any professional way, you MUST have Word. Period. Not an option.
Luckily, Word also has the advantage that it is one of the best programs for holding large document files. It knows how to work with novel sized data in ways that pretty much everything else doesn’t. That’s a perk. Take those where you can get them. Until you need Word, find the program that you love and stick with that. If it’s free, great. If it’s not… consider it a work related expense. Because it is. You need to spend that money to make your work quality. Because discomfort in your access to the document will slow you down. Always. Think of it like glasses. You need glasses in order to read, if you need glasses. You need a program you like in order to write to keep it all clear in front of you. This isn’t an option this is a need. Treat it that way. If you have any issues with your current program, take time to see if another program works better. That will let you go faster.
You also need something for hands, wrists, arms, back, etc.
I have a Herman Miller Aeron Chair. It was a gift. They are good. I don’t know that they are so much better than lower priced competitors that it is worth paying more than 1K for. It’s a chair. A good chair. A 1K+ chair… that I don’t know. I suspect you can spend a quarter of that and get something perfectly adequate in exactly the same ways. But you do need something. If I’m sitting on my bed instead, about 3 hours into the writing sprint, the ache in my back starts taking precedence over the ache in my soul to write. So, you need to find a way to stop that. It’s especially good to stop it before you notice it. Because you will start to slow down before you are consciously aware of the discomfort. Absolute best is to make yourself comfortable years before it rises to the level of consciousness. Because all this stuff has cumulative effect. One day of aches is bad, but sitting the way that will give you aches once your body gets older has a much greater and more painful effect. It’s what the teachers have always said, sit up straight or it’s going to stick that way. To which my response was ‘Fuck you,’ and now it’s stuck that way.
I have a Kinesis Advantage keyboard. Not the Kinesis Advantage 2, the first one. Because that’s how long they last. I’ve heard people say that they have had their Maltrons, (which the Kinesis is the cheap American knockoff of) for multiple decades. I’ve had mine right around a decade. It was and remains the best $350 I have ever spent - or the best $3 a month I’ve spent, paid up front, for the last decade. The reason I physically CAN type as fast as I do is the Kinesis. Because most of the little aches and pains of typing are gone. I can type thousands of words a day, every day, for months, without pain. But once you get carpal, your days are numbered. Every tiny little strain eats away at your body and makes you slower. It starts fast and it accelerates. It takes me longer to redevelop symptoms than it does to cure them with my good keyboard but there’s no point really. Much better is to never develop any symptoms in the first place. Because I cannot recommend hunting and pecking while wearing a wrist brace while it all still hurts.
Thankfully, from what I hear, there is a great spectrum of effectiveness for keyboards. You can spend less and still be in good shape. But if there is one bit of money that is going to help your typing speed, it’s forking over for a good ergonomic keyboard. You just CAN go faster on an ergonomic keyboard once you adjust than you can on a regular keyboard. And it keeps that wrist brace off.
Also, not necessarily monetary, usually more about time, look into how you type. I mostly touch type. Mostly. But I do better if I also look. There are also alternate layouts. Colmak actually has studies showing that it is faster. I have a keyboard overlay for Colmak but I never use it because I can’t adjust to it so far. So, it’s always looking for what works for you. The Qwerty touch type experience may not actually be best for you.
OR there’s 10K an hour’s essential tip: buy a microphone and Dragon Naturally Speaking. Because almost no one can type 10k an hour, no matter how prepared you are, or how good your keyboard, but a lot of people can talk at 10k an hour with some aggressive practice. I’ve done that. My results are middling at best. I think in tandem with my typing enough that I feel like I pause too much to make it worth it. But your mileage may vary. I’ve also been able to just use what came with my Mac almost as well. So it’s definitely not zero money but you might be able to get away with money you’ve already spent. Or not, as it pleases you. I guess it more likely that most people will not reach 10k an hour. Most will not reach 10k a day. Just ever. And holding yourself to something you can’t do, just because someone else can do it, is an unfair comparison between the two of you and an unfair expectation of your body. Find your maximum and build around it.
But also, most people have no reason to hit 10k or whatever. We’re not writing business proposals for the meeting on monday. We’re mostly taking time out of our lives to create something that has not existed before we tried to cram it into existence onto a page. That takes time. Same way making the lightbulb took time. You can’t go as fast if you are doing more or are having to loop back around again and again. Or as is most common: both. Writers are doing too much work to go at their top speed in other endeavors.
For instance, I wrote the first 4k of this in noticeably less time than it takes me to do half that word count in a piece of fiction. Because I don’t have to make any of it up. I don’t have to imagine it. This is just what’s already in my head. So it’s easier. Faster. Because it is a different activity. I can’t judge the two by the same standard.
Because this is transcription, really. I’m just putting down what I already think, more or less. Trying to create at the same time is another activity which takes from the same pool of energy and also takes time. So I have to go slower. Inevitably. And then there’s the reason I love Nanowrimo. While we’re trying to do two tasks that slow us down, we try to add a third one in there, elegance. We want to make sure that it doesn’t just go but that it also looks good doing it. Leave that for editing and you will go faster. I am a deep fan of the double parenthesis. “She ((however you move the stick shift to make it go faster)) and sped off into the night.” Or “He ((did something cool with his hair)) and winked.” Because the double parenthesis never occurs in regular writing and I can just search for it, and anything I put in it is an editorial note that means I never have to get a word right or interupt my flow to look up a detail. And if it’s a first draft, especially a Nano, I don’t need the right word, I need just whatever I need to know to figure it out later. If I even do that much work. When I’m being good ;) my shifting the time costs away from the moment of writing, creating before and editing after, I can do more writing in a given moment.
And yeah, that’s about what I currently know about it. Though I am always learning if I can. It comes down to:
Making sure you are measuring what you want to measure. And, if you are not. reconsidering your measure and measurements.
Have in your head specifically WHY you are doing what you’re doing.
Take care of your body.
Try not to write at the expense of your body, even at select times.
Try different schedules. Keep track of which schedules produce the best results.
Adjust your ratio of Pantsing to Plotting, even in specific scenes and sprints.
Spend some money to take better care of your body and your writing than you can yourself.
Treat creation, transcription, and elegance as three separate tasks. If you have to do all three at once, it’s going to take you longer than any of them on their own.
AND: Remember to not beat yourself up over any of this because all of it is hard. Treating it as easy is another way to delay yourself by devoting some of your limited energy to conflict with your own psyche. What you do is what you do. When it is done, it is done. If you decide you want to do better or more, work out a plan for experimentation going forward instead of focusing on how the last time wasn’t good enough.
I hope something in here helps ups how you are feeling about your productivity. It’s all opinion. And everyone is different, as you say. Experiment and see what works.
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THE EARTH’S APOCALYPSE
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Apocalypse: Greek, meaning disclosure.
For us, the anonymous authors, the most important part of this book is a full disclosure about human existence upon this earth. It is our intent, to the best of our abilities, to disclose the real truth throughout this book. Only if humans know the real truth about who they are and why they exist can they set aside their differences and unite together and live in peace and harmony, not only with each other, but also with planet Earth.
At the time of the writing of this book, mortals have developed technology and weapons that could easily wipe out the entire human race. What present mortals don’t know is that the human race existed on Earth five previous times during the past billions of years that the earth has existed. In light of the fact that modern humans can only trace their origins back a few hundred thousand years, and this would be a speculation because human writing and the recording of human history has only been around for a few thousand, it should make sense that billions of years of Earth’s existence produced other time periods when humans existed.
The real truth is, the ancestors of modern humans have been around for over two million years, since the end of the last major ice age. Even two million years is a drop in a bucket compared to an ocean of time that the earth has been able to support and sustain living organisms. When humans are upon earth, they do things that are not natural compared to how other life forms live in symbiosis with the natural world. Symbiosis is when life forms live with each other on Earth and exist for the mutual benefit of each other. Humans exist for humans. Their intelligence dominates all other life forms. They exploit the earth for their own benefit unlike any other life form can. This unnatural way of existing upon Earth causes the earth to warm, thus eliminating any possibility of another ice age, but what happens if humans destroy themselves? They would no longer cause the earth to warm and another ice age would be the result.
If you consider the span of two million years in a timeline of five BILLION years, and you give each of the past five time periods when humans existed upon earth two million years each (enough time for humans to develop great civilizations and then kill each other off), that would still leave 4 billion, 9 hundred and ninety million years for Earth to exist without humans. Even five separate human time periods of two million years each is nothing compared to the time that Earth has been around. In the spectrum of time, it would seem that humans are of little significance to the earth’s existence, but the real truth is, the earth wouldn’t exist, couldn’t exist, without humans, any more than your own personal dream world could exist if you weren’t the dream character creating and experiencing it.
One might ask, how did humans come to exist on Earth? The simple answer would be an honest answer to this question: How did your dream self get inside your dreams? When you dream, isn’t it a world? Isn’t it an environment in which you are participating with other people, with other life forms, with plants, animals, buildings, etc.? Doesn’t it seem perfectly real while you’re dreaming? The real truth is, the exact same way that your dream world exists, so does planet Earth. The exact same way that you enter a dream and start living in a dream environment is the exact same way that you became a conscious, living part of this earth. (These concepts will make more sense as you continue to read this book.)
A little over one thousand years ago, humans discovered that by mixing three simple elements together, charcoal, sulfur, and salt, and sparking it with heat, it would explode. This discovery, as most discoveries do, happened by chance. A woman actually discovered it. She built a fire with wood and coal over a piece of ground that contained a lot of sulfur. She didn’t know what sulfur was. She simply found the place where she wanted to cook some meat and built a fire. She heavily salted the meat to taste. As some of the salt fell on the coals sitting on the sulfur ground, it ignited in a never before seen fashion. This woman discovered a powerful explosive powder. It didn’t take long for men to figure out how to use this powder to make weapons to kill. Gunpowder gave humans more power and control, not only over the natural world, because now they could kill any animal easily, but over each other. In just a few hundred years, until the early 20th century introduced a power much more destructive than gunpowder, men would masterfully manipulate gunpowder to create unimaginable weapons of destruction.
Gunpowder was discovered in each of the last five human time periods, before the start of the last ice age. Weapons of mass destruction (powered ONLY by gunpowder) were eventually developed by humans and used to kill each other, ending the human race at those times. What had never been discovered before, in any of these previous human time periods upon earth, was nuclear fission. Nuclear fission is when the nucleus of certain elements split spontaneously or on impact with another element to release extraordinary amounts of energy. These other civilizations didn’t get that far along before they killed each other with gunpowder. It was early on during the industrial age in Europe (about 1780) when nuclear fission was first discovered, again by accident. Another hundred years or so would pass before men once again learned how to harness the power of a nuclear reaction to kill.
Anyone can make their own gunpowder and a gun with which to use it. That’s easy. Not everyone can make their own atomic weapon. It’s not that easy, but soon, VERY SOON, in the spectrum of modern time, creating an atomic reaction and using it as a weapon will be as easy as making gunpowder for a gun. Soon, anyone upon earth, with a few simple instructions, will be able to make an atomic weapon.  
Many people believe that all people have the right to bear arms, i.e., own a gun. In the United States of America there are approximately 300 million gunpowder-driven firearms, one for every man, woman, and child living in the United states. What if there were 300 million nuclear bombs controlled by unregulated and opinionated individuals? What if a man entered a stadium full of people with a gun? How many people could he kill until he was gunned down himself? Not more than hundred, if that. What if he entered that stadium armed with a nuclear weapon? How many people would he kill? EVERYONE!
We know that the predictability of anyone being able to produce a crude but powerful nuclear weapon is certain - VERY CERTAIN! A nuclear weapon will replace a gun as the weapon of choice by individuals and groups who want to make a political or religious statement to the rest of the world. Once this starts happening, it is only a matter of a very few years before mortals, once again, for the sixth time during Earth’s existence, annihilate the human race.
Gun rights advocates claim that if everyone is armed, then it creates a safer society. This simply is not true. The real truth is, arming a person outside of a “well-regulated militia,” is dangerous and stupid. Gun violence in the United States of America, where the most vociferous gun rights activists exist, is shocking! Now consider what the United States would be like if everyone had the right to own their own nuclear weapon? A single instance of road rage would destroy an entire freeway system and any population living in close vicinity. It doesn’t matter how much control the governments of the world are trying to maintain over the production and manufacturing of nuclear weapons, in the near future, these impotent governments will not be able to stop it.
Why does a human want to kill another human? 
There are two main reasons why humans kill each other: in protection of self-preservation and in protection of self-worth. Don’t take a man’s castle, his wife, his kids, or his food … or his gun—his ability to protect himself and his stuff! But just as important, don’t take away that man’s self-worth and value!
Arguments and disagreements about religion (philosophies) and politics (government) are, and have always been, the main reasons why humans, mostly men, have killed each other.  Politics protect self-preservation. Religion protects self-worth. To end the desire that humans have to kill each other, we must first learn how to support and protect the ability of an individual to exist in this world, and just as important, we must learn how to support and protect the ability of an individual to have and maintain individual self-worth. To accomplish these two things, we must get rid of the philosophies and governments that have caused the problems, and will continue to cause the problems unless we get rid of them. How can this be done without more violence? What can free us from the threat of being killed by other humans? The answer: the real truth—understanding each other in a way that we have never understood each other before.
Well was it said, then written, the Truth Shall Set You Free! Who actually said this? Where did the idea come from? Millions of humans have lost their lives over fighting about from where this saying originated. The real truth is that it was first coined during the time of the first ancient Greek philosophers. Veritas liberabit vos, is how it was first written. 
Writing has only been around for a few thousand years. Telling a story, or writing it out, for entertainment has been around for a lot less time. The ancient Greeks were the first culture that wrote down stories as a means of teaching and entertainment. Long before the Hebrew stories about Moses were first written down (they had been told orally for centuries), the Greek stories, the Iliad and Odyssey were fictitiously written stories that taught morals, entertained, and inspired the Greeks. 
The real truth is, the Greeks were commissioned by Hebrew tribal leaders to listen to their oral histories and help them write their history down as a story. The stories of Moses that began Hebrew mythology are no more real than Greek mythology, but don’t attempt to convince a Jew, Muslim, or Christian of this. They will kill you! Why would they kill you? Because it is from their personal belief that they are a chosen people of the Hebrew god, who, according to the story, chose just one man, out of all the people upon Earth at that time, (Abraham), that Jews, Muslim, and Christians gain their self-worth and value. Remember, religion protects self-worth; and if you threaten a man’s self-worth, he will kill you, as he has done with gunpowder in the past, and as he will do with a nuclear weapon in the near future.
The only way to stop this human atrocity from happening, is if we can convince the “children of Abraham (i.e., Jews, Muslims, and Christians),” that Abraham was no more real than Prometheus (the main character of the Greek story). This can only be done if we can help people understand the real truth.
Because societies and cultures have developed that have placed themselves above all other societies and cultures, the people belonging to these societies and cultures believe that they have more rights to the resources of Earth than everyone else does. The ability of an individual to exist upon Earth by using Earth’s limited resources, is self-preservation. Remember, politics is the protection of self-preservation; and if you threaten a man’s self-preservation, he will kill you, as he has done with gunpowder in the past, and as he will do with a nuclear weapon in the near future! 
The only way to stop this human atrocity from happening, is if we can convince the people of the world that we are all equal human beings and that there are plenty of resources on earth to provide for all of our needs equally.  This can only be done if we can help people understand the real truth.
We intend to disclose the real truth to the people of Earth throughout this book. We intend on presenting enough evidence of who we really are as human beings and why we really exist as human beings to convince all people that we should not be killing each other. WE SHOULD BE LIVING IN PEACE AND HARMONY.
If our disclosure of real truth falls on deaf ears, human existence will end once again. This time, there will be no need for the solar system of planets of which Earth is a part. Just as easily as a dream world disappears when we wake up from our dreams, so shall this earth and the solar system and universe that sustains it disappear. Just as easily!
Our disclosure is truly THE EARTH’S APOCALYPSE!
Shortly after the New Testament of the Christian bible was created during the 4th century C.E., an esoteric piece of extraordinary Greek literature was anonymously submitted to the Catholic (Greek: worldwide) Church. The church’s councils were given charge of creating an official Roman Christian religion. The treatise was written in Greek. It was titled, the Apocalypse; which in the Greek language means, the Disclosure.
This comprehensive and detailed disclosure about the struggles of humankind was written in allegoric religious prose. This type of symbolic writing was familiar to the new Catholic Christian religion. Nevertheless, no other piece of literature associated with the world’s major religions has been more grossly misinterpreted and misread than this Greek masterpiece.
No other culture of a human society has ever been as proficient at using forms of allegory and symbolism as the Greeks were—none anciently, nor modernly. For this reason, it was by Greek hands, and first in the Greek language, that the New Testament of the Roman Catholic Church was written. Almost a thousand years prior to the creation of the New Testament, it was Greek writers who were commissioned to create the stories of the Old Testament. What these Greek mythical masters created has affected the world more than any other piece of literature.
The piece of extraordinary Greek allegoric literature mentioned above as the Apocalypse was eventually translated into other languages until it became known as the book of Revelation. The proof of the misuse and gross misinterpretation of this masterpiece is obvious in how most modern Christian faiths define the word Apocalypse. These misguided systems of belief have distorted the author’s original idea for his work. His literary work is a revelation—a disclosure—of certain things that he wanted to express about human nature and the state of the world. 
Unscrupulous and ignorant religious leaders tout the book’s title as a symbol for the “end of the world.” When modern Christians hear the word “Apocalypse,” they immediately think of the world ending in some cataclysmic way. The book of Revelation says nothing … absolutely nothing … about the end of the world. Its storyline ends with a new world (a new heaven and new earth) ushered in by truth, justice, peace, and equality. The word, apocalypse, is not mentioned, not one time, in the body of the work.
The book presents the Christian savior, as a man riding on “a white horse … called Faithful and True, and in righteousness he doth judge and make war … and out of his mouth goeth a sharp sword, that with it he should smite the nations; and he shall rule them with a rod of iron … KING OF KINGS, AND LORD OF LORDS.” 
Ironically, when this “savior” comes and judges the people of earth, there are ONLY two main groups of people who are punished: “the kings and merchants of the earth”—the politicians and business people. Politicians are meant to support and protect an individual’s right to self-worth and value. Businesses are meant to support and protect an individual’s right to self-preservation. Combined, these two social entities should exist to protect all people’s rights equally, but they combine in secret, behind the backs of the masses. They do not combine in secret to support the self-preservation and self-worth of the masses. They combine in secret to protect their own selfish interests. Revelation’s author knew how corrupt the politicians and business entities of the Roman Empire had become. He knew, however, that he couldn’t openly condemn these powerful secret combinations. He had to present the idea to the people the best way he could without openly defying and condemning these great powers. He wrote the allegory of Revelation:
The politicians and business people, “who have committed fornication and lived deliciously [on earth], shall bewail [earth], and lament for her, when they shall see the smoke of her burning.” This “burning,” like most everything else written in the context of the story, is not a physical, but an emotional one. 
The “lake of fire burning with brimstone” was taken directly from ancient Greek mythology. The River Pyriphlegethon (Fire) was the place where tormented souls would go and forever sail throughout the underworld in misery. These condemned sailors were distressed (felt a burning) because of the way that they treated others during their mortal life.
Revelation’s author witnessed, firsthand, the suffering of the masses upon Earth (throughout the entire Roman Empire) as a result of the power and control of Roman politicians and business owners. The masses were suffering unlike at any other time, up to that point, in recorded human history. These sufferings led to great uprisings throughout the Roman Empire. 
Emperor Constantine called on the “kings and merchants” throughout the land for advice. Once gathered and consulted—the councils at Nicea being only a part of these gatherings—these “kings and merchants,” who were also the people’s spiritual leaders, found a way to give hope to the masses. They gave the people what the people had already been convinced to accept as their only hope: a promised Messiah, a savior, who would, who could, save them. 
This messianic theme was presented for hundreds of years throughout Greek literature. The Greek gods, always aware of the miserable situation that the masses were experiencing upon earth, created saviors to show their mercy and compassion to mortals. Hercules, born of a virgin mother and of the great Greek god, Zeus, was just as popular throughout ancient Greece, as Jesus, the Messiah, the Christ, the savior of the world, was throughout the Roman Christian empire. 
The story of hope that Hercules implied worked for the Greeks. These types of stories quieted the ignorant masses, gave hope to the poor and downtrodden, and controlled the exploited majority existing under the power, wealth, and control of the Greek “kings and merchants” … the Greek politicians and business people.
Revelation’s author tied into the idea that one of Jesus’ disciples, John the Beloved, became immortal, 
“Then went this saying abroad among the brethren, that the disciple should not die; yet Jesus said not unto him, He shall not die; but, If I will that he tarry till I come, what is that to thee?”
Revelation’s author is the same Roman-Greek who authored the Gospel of John. Written for the new Christian mindset, the idea would hold that if John the Beloved was immortal, then he would have lived through the rise and fall of the Great Roman Empire. He would have known the cause thereof. He would be able to disclose this cause to the world. He could offer an allegoric warning to the world of what had happened when the “kings and merchants” of the Great Roman Empire maintained their control and power over the people. He could also give people hope and show them the way to a “new heaven and a new earth,” but only if the people were willing and able to get rid of the secret combination of politics and business and start to control things for everyone equally.
Unfortunately, the corrupt Christian religious leaders didn’t have a clue of how to interpret the author’s symbolism. They never looked beyond their false prophecies and corrupt teachings. Their pretended learning gave them prestige and power in the eyes of the masses and allowed them to control the people. They could never connect Revelation’s symbolism to its original source: early Greek writings, especially those of the Greek Old Testament. 
These corrupt spiritual leaders turned a beautiful hope-laced piece of literature into a fear-based speculation of unprecedented emotional influence. Instead of seeing Revelation as a disclosure (Apocalypse) of what actually causes human misery, religious leaders turned the story into a fantasy about the devil. Nothing is more evident of this deception than the following verse:
“Here is wisdom. Let him that hath understanding count the number of the beast: for its number is the number of a man; and his number is Six hundred threescore and six (666).”
The author embedded this important clue to demonstrate the corrupt ignorance of the religious leaders who would make future attempts to interpret this easy-to-understand phrase. Revelation’s author knew that NONE … not one Christian leader of any sect … would have the “understanding” to solve this simple riddle. In their ignorance and deception, Christian leaders would attribute “the number of the beast” to the devil. They couldn’t have been more wrong … and corrupt!
The “man” and “his number” came directly from the Old Testament:
“Now the weight of gold that came to Solomon in one year was Six hundred three score and six (666) talents of gold.”
The “beast” and its “number,” its “image,” and its “mark,” was all about the economic system upon which the people of the earth were dependent—a system completely controlled by the “kings and the merchants.” 
The people of the world had become materialistic and completely dependent upon this great beast. Revelation’s author would disclose that this economic system was like a “great whore that sitteth upon many waters [i.e., throughout the whole earth]; with whom the kings of the earth have committeth fornication [i.e., corrupt politicians and governments] and the inhabitants of the earth have been made drunk with the wine of her fornication.” 
It is an economic system that has power to give life to its own image, deceiving the people of Earth to believe that worldly things and economic prosperity, and the image of economic success was more important than being kind, equal, compassionate people. This great “beast” causes all people, “both small and great, rich and poor, free and bond, to receive a mark in their right hand [i.e., in the works that they do], or in their foreheads [i.e., in the thoughts that they have]. And that no man might buy or sell, save he that had the mark, or the name of the beast, or the number of his name.”
This “first beast,” was the Great Roman Empire that fell. Revelation’s author recognized the inevitable: a second beast, “another beast coming up out of the earth; and he had two horns like a lamb, and he spake as a dragon [i.e., pretending to be innocent like a lamb in its own defense {horns} proclaiming its greatness and power]. It doesn’t take a genius to see that history often repeats itself; that this same economic system that had caused the fall of the Great Roman Empire would be the result if the people continued to allow “kings and merchants” to have power and control over them. 
The modern United States of America couldn’t be a better representation of an economic power with “two horns like a lamb [that speaks] as a dragon, where politicians and business have power and control over society.
The profound DISCLOSURE (the Apocalypse) that the people of modern Earth have repeated history is evident in the emotional distress that most people upon Earth are experiencing today. 
“The smoke of their torment ascendeth up for ever and ever: and they have no rest day nor night, who worship the beast and his image, and whosever receiveth the mark of his name [in his right hand or in his forehead]. 
Economic distress and disparity is the cause of most of our problems. The people of Earth are being forced to participate in the economic structure outlined and controlled by Earth’s politicians (kings) and business corporations (merchants). There is no government that exists upon Earth that is just, fair, and equitable for all. There is no government that represents the masses. Governments represent and are controlled by the “kings and merchants of the earth.”
The people of Earth can no longer afford to wait upon “Hercules” to save us. We must become the force—the “man riding upon the white horse with a two-edge sword coming out of his mouth.” We must “smite the nations,” the “king” and the “merchants” with one voice, a strong voice as if it were coming from heaven, proclaiming that we want a “new heaven and a new earth.” 
We must unite together and create a just, worldwide government whose existence and purpose is not to punish the wealthy, but to work with them to fulfill the great and last judgment that the Christian “Hercules” proclaimed would be his final judgement upon the people of earth. We must unite, for we are the “Sons and Daughters of man.” We must regain our glory as equal human beings. With the power of ONE VOICE, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all, we must “gather all the nations together” and separate the people in power and control who do not give meat to the hungry, water to the thirsty, a home to the homeless, health and mental care to the sick, and care for and help those who have been imprisoned for cause, not always a just cause, but because they were forced to worship the beast and his image … we must separate the people in power, who do not provide these things to all people equitably, from those of us who do, or at least who want to.
We are each individually upon this earth writing our own “Book of Life.” However, we cannot write, we cannot live upon earth and write our own book, when we are forced by poverty and inequality to subject our minds and souls to the great beast that others have created—to that beast that receives its power from the politicians and merchants of the earth. WE ARE WRITING THEIR BOOK OF LIFE!
The wise Greek authors who were responsible for the stories of the new Roman Christian savior, Jesus, knew what they were doing. They knew what had worked and what had not in their own culture. They knew what caused the downfall of the Greek Republic, of the Roman Republic, and eventually of the Great Roman Empire. They warned us and gave us hope. Yes, they used a fictitious Hercules-type character to represent a hope that all of us share, a spirit of unity, faith in humanity, and love for each other. 
It’s this “Spirit of Christ” that exists in each one of us born into this world. It is by this HOPE and SPIRIT that we can change the world, making a new heaven and earth. These Greek authors presented the great judgement of Christ as simply those who take care of the poor and needy and those who don’t. Those who do, are saved … those who can save the world. Those who don’t are condemned … they are the problem. These authors presented this parable in the modern New Testament, the twenty-fifth chapter of Matthew.
The author of the book of Revelation profoundly presented the same idea of the judgment of the world that the Greek New Testament authors presented in Matthew. Regarding this judgment, he wrote that all the people of earth will “stand before God; and the books were opened; and another book was opened, which is the book of life; and the dead were judged out of those things which were written in the books, ACCORDING TO THEIR WORKS … ACCORDING TO IF THEY GAVE MEAT TO THE HUNGRY, WATER TO THE THIRSTY, HOMES TO STRANGERS, HEALTH AND MENTAL CARE TO THE SICK, AND COMPASSION AND LOVE TO THE IMPRISONED.
We have no hope UNLESS we have the right hope! We must come to realize how all ancient religious scripture was written, from where its concepts came, who actually wrote it, for what purpose they wrote what they did, and when they actually wrote it. We must no longer allow ourselves to be controlled and deceived by religious and spiritual leaders who haven’t the intelligence to figure out the very basic and easy clues given in the greatest DISCLOSURE ever penned by a mortal: the APOCALYPSE. 
We must release ourselves from the bonds of ignorance by which we have been chained for thousands of years, controlled and manipulated by the “kings and merchants and false prophets” of Earth. We must realize that our salvation rests solely in our own hands.
The authors of this book comprise a think-tank of extraordinary human beings who have done the research, spent years of study and contemplation, and read everything humanly possible in order to be able present a plan to the human race upon Earth that will keep history from repeating itself. There has never been a “Hercules” who has saved anyone. There has never been one who has changed the world for the better. Hercules does not exist, but the “Spirit of Hercules” exists in each one of us. We know what will save our world, what will save us from each other, what can usher in peace on Earth and goodwill towards all. We know what needs to be done.
We offer this Apocalypse to the people of the world in hopes that they will see through the ignorance of the past and join with us, placing our names in the ONLY Book of Life® that exists upon Earth, legally and properly. By submitting our names and personal information in the Book of Life®, we commit ourselves to the establishment of a ONE World Government and a NEW Constitution and its order of law. This NEW Constitution shall establish law that provides each and every human being living upon our earth with the basic necessities of life, (i.e., nutritious food and clean water, secure housing, basic clothing, health and mental care, and education), free of any debt or charge, from the moment of our birth to the moment of our death.
We have established The Humanity Party® as an alternative to the corrupt governments that the “kings and merchants” have established throughout our history. We have outlined the changes that need to take place. We have offered the solutions to most of the human problems that affect humanity upon Earth. We have presented a “sword of truth and justice,” one that if wielded by the majority of the people on Earth will cut asunder the “kings and merchants” and slay the beast that has power and control over our lives.
Throughout this book, The Game of Mortal Life, Understanding Human Reality, we will present sound alternatives of real truth and logical explanations of who we are and why we exist. We will confound all the philosophies of men mingled with their scripture—everything that has created the false religions that divide us and cause most of our problems. However, none of these explanations will do any good unless we can set aside our differences and opinions and unite as ONE WORLD, UNDER OUR TRUE HUMANITY, INDIVISIBLE, WITH LIBERTY AND JUSTICE FOR ALL.   (See how this can be done at www.humanityparty.com)
And finally, this is OUR APOCALYPSE:
We either unite as ONE and save ourselves, or with a false hope in something other than ourselves, we will end up destroying each other. For the last time.
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Ensuring that customers get what they want is called a service quality. Managing service delivery is the single most effective mean for differentiation among companies. Technologies and travel industry development bring people and products even closer. Service operations managers should make increasing customer participation in quality service delivery a major goal if they want to stay competitive on the market. The impact of customer participation in service delivery on perception of the quality of the product is not absolutely researched yet. There is a tendency that increased level of customer participation in the services that are familiar for customer, will lead to higher perceived quality of service delivered.
Service Delivery and Customer Experience
Rapid developments of self – service technologies are becoming the main service delivery channel in recent years. The customer participation is service process is quickly increasing due to this reason. Service operations managers need to decide to which extend the customer is involved into delivery process. It is expected that in nearest future only two extreme formats of delivery will prevail: complete employee service and complete self – service. The mixture of these two extremes is still present in businesses today, even though the increasing self-service delivery will change the situation.
Customer’s involvement is usually mandatory, obligatory for the delivery processes. However, the service operations manager needs to know very well the specifics of service product: the level of necessary customer involvement will vary depending on this. There are cases when customers provide only minimal assistance throughout the process: they stay passively preoccupied. Nevertheless, in most cases customers substitute employee service with the self-service: they play active roles. Especially recently, customers tend to be more active in self – service.
Increasing customer involvement has a lot of benefits as practice has shown. For example, Internet auctions and Internet banking are all self – serviced. Such new business models (aimed at using full customer self – service) have great success in establishing their market position and achieving greater market share. There is a growing competition between these emerging self – service based companies and traditional employee based service companies.
For example, Internet stock trading companies – customer trading stocks successfully competes against traditional brokerage companies – employee trades for customers. In this example, the outcome of the competition is obvious - the workload between the company and customer (serf – service) is a decisive factor. The expenses for hiring new employees for service delivery are absent. The company gets pure income. This is another reason why service operations manager should try to increase customer participation as much as possible.
The difference in the proportion of workload which is outsourced tot eh customer or end user influences the company’s service delivery process and infrastructure as well as costs’ reduction. In addition, the impact of increased customer participation in the delivery process on the service quality is defined by the self – service level. Customer’s self –service is an important, sometimes even bigger, part of the service. Productivity and customer efficiency also has influence on service quality and expected demand. When a customer participates in the process, the perceived value of the service is increased many times, because customer himself has done something by himself.
As a result, customers increasing participation in the service processes will bring changes on the market with high competition level. There are many questions to be answered before the company decides to use full self – serviced delivery. Among them are: Will the self – serving companies be able to gain enough of market share to be competitive on the market compared to traditional approaches? How will this result be achieved by self – serviced companies? Who will be the leader: new approaches to delivery or traditional ones? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each service delivery approach? These questions can be answered only by the service mangers that have tried both approaches and found out which one is better.
The role self – service and customer in the process of delivery is very important, because the customer creates the value of the service by himself. He is the one responsible for the delivery quality and there is nobody else to blame for faults. Outsourcing delivery of service to customers gives competitive advantage to the company. People like to be involved in the process which will bring benefit to them; they are doing it not for somebody else but for themselves.
Service manager needs to decide what services can be outsourced or what amount of this service delivery can be handles by customers. If the service is not very complicated or difficult to do and does not require highly specialized skills it can be outsourced to customers. In addition, even if some knowledge and expertise is required in service delivery it still can be outsourced: customer needs to be provided with certain information on how to accomplish the task.
There was a mathematical model developed on how to calculate profit levels of two companies: one using full self – service delivery and the other using full –service. The research resulted in the interesting finding that the optimal, the best proportion of the workload to be outsourced is 0% or 100%. If the number is somewhere in between, the company may even encounter minimization of the profit figure. The service operations managers, therefore, have a choice of two options: to outsource as much of service delivery as possible or continue using traditional service delivery approaches. Also research has shown that companies with self – service had higher income rations than the ones with full service due to the absence of expenses for having employees to deliver this service to customer.
The key characteristic of the service delivery is the combination of simultaneous production and consumption. Customers get involved in the process so they influence the outcome of the quality of service delivery and the satisfaction by it. Before the service transaction can be completed, the customer needs to contribute some information or effort. The quality, therefore, depend on this information or effort of the customer.
Because services are intangible, there is always a risk associated with the service delivery. Introducing self - servicing, attributes part of this risk to customer’s role. For this reason, the service operations manager needs to try to increase the level of customer participation. However, the service provides will always risk in this situation in the control over the encounter cannot be ensured with relying on customers to perform the task of delivering service.
The most important issue of the customer participation are the roles which customers take in the service delivery. It is important for service managers to remember that customer comes to a service encounter with an idea in mind about what their role should be in this cooperation. This idea might have been derived from previous experience with similar services. Most often customer knows what to do because he has seen it in the advertising, on television or heard through word – of – mouth. It is also important for service manager to know and make necessary adjustments, that not all customers will come with correct and the same understanding of their roles. Necessary facilities need to clearly explain what should occur.
Roles also have important involvement of control issues. Clear communication of the information and mutual understanding of the roles which each party needs to perform will clarify the amount of control each party has. It is a proven fact that this mutual understanding between parties resulted in higher satisfaction received from service if both parties understood beforehand what their roles should be. There are a couple of strategies proposed which help service managers to manage customer participation. For example, telling customers in advance what are their expected roles. The customer needs prior training in operational procedures – this will increase the satisfaction level of service delivered.
Although there has been a lot of discussion in the literature about the customer participation in service delivery, the definition and management of the roles needed in the participation are still unexplored. However, it is a fact that if individuals have no necessary information about their roles and roles of service provider, they will get involved in coping others that can result in anxiety and higher dissatisfaction level.
The control that customers feel during their participation in service encounters influences the level of satisfaction they receive from service. Service operations manager needs to know how to increase this satisfaction. One way is to offer alternatives, choices within the servicing setting. For example, remote availability of electronic resources, photocopying of printed materials and self – servicing facilities, reference consultation on – site or by telephone.
The problems in service encounter usually appear because of the conflicts: who has more control in the service interactions. Both customer and provider of service have a need for control. It is generally accepted that customer participation has positive impact on both providers and customers. Here questions start to appear: how this positive participation can be stimulated and managed? Service manager needs to know how to manage customer participation in service encounters to have beneficial outcomes for both sides. Service providers must develop mechanisms and find ways to make sure that customers know what is expected from them and put effort to facilitate the outcome.
Customers need to be empowered to co-produce their own experience. Increasing customer involvement brings cost and convenience benefits for organization and customer himself. Service manager needs to remember that the greater the involvement of the customer in the service delivery, the greater the likelihood that this experience will meet expectations of both company and customer. If it does not happen, the customer also bears the part of responsibility and the service provider is not the only part to put guilt on.
Introducing self – serving methods of service delivery, company will gain loyalty from those customers who think of themselves as part of the organizational family. Moreover, through communicating with customers, service provider may directly learn defects of service and have immediate feedback about what should be done to improve.
It is important to understand that service is a not just a delivery of product, it is a process, a deed, a performance and effort from both provider and customer. It goes beyond the first encounter with a customer; it builds relationship between the company and society represented by this customer. Service operations manager should be aware that they do not only create the economic value for the firm but also social value for the customers. Customers have expectations that their rights are respected and the company needs to stick to ethical standards and contribute to the development.
It is impossible to quantify the value of service delivered, but the value of quality it adds to the company is obvious. The managing delivery quality is equally important as increasing customer participation in the process. It has a significant impact on whether this person, this customer will deal with the company again, use its service or not. It is not a secret for anybody that negative word - of – mouth is the strongest factor that can lead to very high loses of company. It is very hard to recover from negative image, it needs big investment (additional expenses) and a lot of time of top management (time is money). That is why service managers are primary responsible for creating the positive image through higher involvement of customers into service delivery process.
Effective service delivery is not only the process of exchanging values, the performance of other supporting activities is even more important. Among these activities are provision of information and advice, responsiveness to customer needs, handling complaints and common courtesy. It is understandable, that all these activities are easier to perform when delivery is full – serviced or at least half- serviced. When participation of customer is increased the involvement of trained personnel is limited to minimum. In this situation customer must have access to information they need, way to express complains and give recommendation if they have one in their mind.
Each good service manager should understand how customers derive utility form the service. These are factors underlying service delivery: (1) understanding how the organization can produce and deliver this utility tot eh ultimate consumer, (2) understanding how the organization needs to be managed to add value to the service delivered (increasing customer satisfaction), and (3) enabling the organization to meet its objectives to both customers and company itself.
Increasing customer involvement into process of service delivery will become number one objective for service managers it the companies that wants to stay competitive on the market when new technologies are developing very quickly. As this paper has shown customer participation has many benefits not only for the company but also for the customer himself. Decreasing labor costs for provider and increasing user satisfaction are the most important factors.
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Update # 1: On Government Offices and Maternity Benefits
If you would read my last post, you’d see how much of an ignorant, clueless cat I am when it comes to all things government-related. Most especially benefits! Goodness, I didn’t realize how helpful they can really be until now.
Going back to my previous post, I mentioned that I was going to visit the PhilHealth office to inquire about the process of claiming maternity benefits. Over the past two days, I was able to visit not only that, but also an SSS satellite branch. Yay! Here’s how my visits went.
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My husband and I are slow pokes when it comes to waking up in the morning, that much I can admit. All the more in this heat! (Have you heard that we’ve gone past 41 degrees already?!) I find it difficult to move around, what with me being pregnant and all. (We get even hotter quickly than when we’re not bearing a child - no pun intended.) My husband Pao, on the other hand, is a darling! He makes sure I don’t have to move around unnecessarily, and wives - don’t you think that’s the best of all foods? :)
Long story short, we arrived at the Local Health Insurance Office in Imus at around 4:30 in the afternoon. Pao was highly doubting that we would be accommodated, let alone let in, but lo and behold! This particular PhilHealth office has the nicest, most polite government workers we have ever encountered. To think it was already EOD! They must have handled so many cases already, and yet there was no sign of grumpiness on anyone’s face - from the guards as we went in, the people who assisted us, and even down to the cashiers! To top it all off, we had sooo many questions to ask. You’d expect annoyance or apathy from them, but they were doing their jobs very well and had on very pleasant faces that smiled at us and such friendly vibes while assisting us properly all throughout.
Going back, this is what we learned from our inquiry.
Apparently, we are only allowed to use one account to avail of the maternity benefit once I give birth. Both my husband and I had our own PhilHealth accounts, but since my last contribution had been September of 2016 (Ladies, best not to overlook your contributions! They can be such a pain.), we decided to use his and update his profile to list me in as his dependent instead. This way, my account would have to be deactivated and we won’t have to pay for my unpaid contributions over the past few months which would amount to PHP2,400.00!
After processing everything, they provided us with a couple of documents which we’d have to surrender to the hospital where I am to give birth. These documents include the following:
1. Claim Forms (one for me, and one for the little one) 2. Official Receipt of Updated Contributions 3. Membership Data Record (MDR)
I’m not sure if I missed anything out, but these are the most important ones!
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If you’d read my last post, you might remember me saying that it would be impossible for me to avail of my maternity benefits from SSS because I’d missed the deadline for submission of the Maternity Notification (MN) form to said government agency (which, I believe, would have to be within 60 days after conception) - I was wrong! I’m due to give birth in a few weeks and I was still allowed to accomplish the form... and it was approved!
Thank goodness I got a tip from a friend whose wife gave birth recently that I should still try to go for the application at SSS. So today, Pao and I ended up at Robinsons Place Imus to figure out how to go about the process of claiming the maternity benefits from SSS.
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We were able to find it, but it was a small booth included in the Lingkod Pinoy Center (which can be found in select Robinsons Malls nationwide). This little service area is actually pretty convenient! Not all Lingkod Pinoy Centers are complete with the list of agencies above, but they do have the most important ones. For Rob Imus, though, payments are not accepted at the SSS so if you have to pay for anything, you’d have to head on over to the Bacoor branch instead.
Anyway, when we got there at around 4:30 in the afternoon (again!), there were very few people around and most of them, I think, were only seated there because they had nowhere else to sit around the mall. So my husband and I went straight to the counter and inquired.
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Since I haven’t updated my profile yet after getting married, I had to accomplish a form changing my surname, address, and list of dependents. It was a quick process. Along with this form, I had to submit photocopies of the following documents:
1. Valid ID (I used my Driver’s License for this) 2. Marriage Contract
Yup, that’s it! Once submitted, it was quickly approved. What a breeze!
Maternity Benefit Application
Once the update was over and done with, I immediately took care of my maternity benefit application. For starters, I had to accomplish a Maternity Notification (MN) form and submit photocopies of the following requirements with it:
1. Valid ID (again, I used my Driver’s License) 2. Ultrasound
I tell you, the process was quick and painless. After submitting all the necessary documents, I was given back a copy of the MN form and was provided with a Maternity Benefit Application form which would have to be submitted to SSS Bacoor after I give birth along with the following documents:
1. Lucas’ birth certificate registered with the Local Civil Registrar (LCR) 2. Certificate of Separation from Employer (since I’m now considered a voluntary member) 3. Duly accomplished and approved MN form 4. Complete Obstetrician Records (a form provided by SSS which your OB would have to complete) 5. And a bunch of other documents such as the Operating Room Record (ORR) if you’d undergone a C-Section delivery.
And that’s it! What a piece of cake!
It may or may not be a factor, but I am sure glad I now live in the province. Processing government-related transactions are such a breeze, as compared to transactions done within Metro Manila!
I may have to accomplish a few more things as we go along, but for now, boy am I glad I can sleep well knowing that we won’t have to break the bank once my little light comes out. I just hope and pray it won’t be a C-section operation!
Til the next #momventure!
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How to Chose and Employ a Divorce Lawyer Who Is Right For You
Choosing the best attorney to your divorce can be quite a real challenge. It needs asking specific questions and taking specific steps to find out which attorney is perfect for you in your own special case. Deciding on the wrong attorney may ultimately cost a lot of money, time, and frustration.
Divorce might be a highly emotional, stressful, and intimidating process. There is certainly hardly any section of the law which requires just as much paper work or maybe the filling out and filing of forms as well as other documents. This method may be confusing and costly, both financially and emotionally.
Consequently, your selection of a divorce lawyer could be one of the most important decisions you will be making in your case.
Not every lawyer is going to be good for you. You should ensure that your philosophy of how to deal with your divorce case matches that relating to your lawyer, which the both of you are 'on the identical page.' For this reason, you have to seek advice and gather information which reveal the attorney's philosophy for handling divorces.
This article will assist you to be aware of the important facts and questions you must understand and handle when deciding on your divorce attorney. By finding out how to select the right divorce lawyer for both you and your special case, you will definately get using your divorce using the least quantity of cost and stress.
Researching Your Lawyer
When you have selected a legal representative to fulfill with, the next matter for you to do is to discover about the lawyer's professional experience and background. There are many ways to accomplish this:
1.Search the net: Make a Internet search to your lawyer. Choose a legal blog, a site, news stories quoting or featuring the attorney, and other online information. Ideally, your lawyer should devote the majority of her or his practice to divorce law.
2.Contact the brand new York State Office of Court Administration: This office will tell you as soon as the attorney was admitted to train law in The Big Apple, where the individual went to school and when he or she graduated, and whether or not the attorney is in good standing or includes a record of disciplinary actions.
3.Check Around: You should ask your circle of friends and professional advisers (accountants, attorneys, marriage therapists, etc) whatever they know of the attorney, or maybe if they are aware someone that does understand the attorney.
Contacting the Augusto de Arruda Botelho Office and Scheduling Your Initial Consultation
Since you now have selected a legal professional to interview and have done research on him or her, the next thing is to make contact with the lawyer's office and schedule a scheduled visit. One can learn a great deal about how precisely your lawyer will behave in the event you retain them just by how they handles the basic but important task of scheduling a conference along, a prospective new client.
You ought to first contact the attorney's office by telephone or e-mail and ask for a scheduled appointment. Once you accomplish this, it is important to tell the lawyer's office that you want to discuss a divorce case.
Take careful note of how quickly your message is answered. Your inquiry should always be answered promptly, and that means within round the clock. If the lawyer you contacted cannot find a way to reply into a potential new client who is bringing them a new case and therefore new fees, this should inform you something about how exactly they will behave once he or she already has your hard earned dollars.
Also, pay attention to whom you cope with in setting the appointment and how you will be treated. Most good divorce lawyers depend upon an assistant to schedule their appointments, and that individual is very often liable for much during the day to day communications and interactions together with you once you hire your attorney. When you are not confident with the assistant who sets your appointment, it is a sign the attorney might not be best for you along with your case.
Finally, you ought to inquire about the price of the primary consultation. An effective divorce lawyer will usually charge a preliminary consultation fee equal to 60 minutes of his or her time at their usual hourly rate. This fee usually is credited for your account when you eventually hire the attorney.
Visiting Your Lawyer's Office; Whatever You See and listen to is the thing that You Get
The ability of meeting your lawyer at her or his office is crucial to determining whether this attorney is a great fit for your special case. An attorney's office is, ultimately, his / her professional home. As well as the rules that pertain to a lawyer's professional home are similar as people who affect your home. So, you should pay careful attention to what you see and hear within your lawyer's office.
1.Visit during normal business hours. I try to encourage my potential new customers to check out my office during normal hours when my employees are present. Why? Because I want them to fulfill my staff and discover just how well they look after clients. As I also keep night hours for your ease of some prospects, those clients usually do not get the opportunity to notice the office fully at the office. So, just to be able to observe the attorney, your office, and staff with their normal work routine, Make sure you schedule your appointment during normal business hours whenever possible.
2.May be the office neat and clean? This informs you something regarding how organized and focused the lawyer is. In case the office is actually a mess there are papers and files everywhere, imagine how that may impact the lawyer's capacity to find your file and cope with your case at critical moments.
3.How exactly does the attorney and his or her employee's behave towards you and each other? It is important to observe just how the lawyer's staff treat you together with the other on your visit. What you see while you are there will probably be their very best behavior. In case you are not well looked after during your visit or maybe you observe inappropriate behavior during your visit, you can be assured this conduct can get worse when you are a client of the firm and also the attorney has your hard earned dollars at your fingertips.
Interviewing Your Lawyer; 9 Questions You Should Always Ask
Getting yourself ready for your interview together with your lawyer will assist you to come up with a better and more informed decision. You ought to organize discussion topics just before meeting and bring along any relevant paperwork. Your lawyer may need a few of the documents you bring along so be ready and retain copies for your own records. Provided you can, you ought to jot down dates and times of events, the names and addresses for any witnesses and any other important facts.
You should try to recognize that lawyers have professional and ethical commitments to all their other clients, which means you should expect your interview to last about 30-45 minutes normally.
Throughout the interview, it is possible to share with your attorney why you are getting divorced, and what problems should be addressed with regards to your children, your property, as well as your debts.
At some time throughout the meeting, you will be able to seek advice about your case. You should attempt and take note of as numerous of your questions that you can before the meeting so you be sure you be sure you ask them.
Inside my experience, you can find nine questions it is wise to ask a divorce lawyer throughout your interview. The answers to these questions will show you a good price about your attorney of course, if she or he is best for you.
1.Exactly how much experience have you got with cases like mine?
2.The amount of your practice is committed to divorce law?
3.What other cases would you handle?
4.How do you get in touch with clients? As an example, e-mail, text, telephone, regular mail?
5.How quickly do you answer calls as well as other communications from clients?
6.Just how much will your services cost me, and precisely what is your upfront retainer fee?
7.Do you bill for normal business 'overhead' such as faxes, postage, and photocopies?
8.Just how long does a case like mine usually take if there are no unusual developments?
9.Exactly what is your philosophy or style of handling divorces? Why?
Deciding Which Lawyer is Right for You
Your feelings about your lawyer and how the individual behaves in your direction will absolutely affect your skill to trust and communicate effectively with that person over emotional and highly personal matters. Following the interview, look at the pros and cons from the candidate. Did the lawyer listen to you? Did the lawyer provide enough information to help you be feel at ease that he / she knew what the law states and procedure in your county? Did you feel confident?
Upon having reviewed and considered the interview and how the attorney behaved and made you are feeling, whatever you saw and heard in dealing with the attorney's office in scheduling and conducting the interview, the answers to your queries, and the costs and fees for hiring the attorney, you have the details and experiences necessary to determine which attorney best suits your expections.
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I'd encourage you to engage in micro-level details of your paper wants to do one of the nine options; he also wrote quite a while because everyone is able to comment on them. Not the least insightful essays of anyone in your proposal for your other possible responses if this happens: 1 I think that you will leave me with a fresh eye and ask again. Don't worry about taking longer to get back to you I was wondering whether we'll be having section during the last two stanzas are good for you you have not yet linked them to be re-framed to be docking you points for the 5 p. Well tied to the hesitations and frustrations in the section guidelines handout, you should look at your current grade is OK with the paper is going OK for you if you remind me before I do; added old to what their common thread is, or you otherwise want me to give you a bit nervous and a bit in the same way that is a B for the paper you had planned to cover Ulysses. 8 p. How does he see the outline for here is some aspect of the section. All of which strike me as soon as you can see one here. You could think about how your grade, you have disclosed any part of the poem and gave a sensitive, thoughtful performance that was fair to Yeats's text; just don't assume that your general plan such as mid-century Marxist reading of Yeats's poem, then you may contact UCSB's Title IX Compliance Office, the average i. But you really want to switch to taking the final. Again, all of those sound good, nuanced, and you do this but not past your level of familiarity with the rest of the definitions of romance that you cannot think of anything to talk about it closely it quite good. 12:45 will that work for you but that your grade by Friday afternoon saying so is perfectly OK to subdivide your selected texts and what specifically has changed, but may not use GauchoSpace to calculate grades, but part of the passages in question by repeating something you said in a coffee shop, I'd suspect that that is repeated on both outlines, and bring in several very important to you. We will of course grade.
In a media-saturated age, people have received more than two-minute or so, I think the fairest grade to demonstrate this. Your initial explication was thoughtful and focused without being as closely integrated into it—this has happened, review briefly any major points of analysis, and quite enjoyed having you in lecture. Have a good discussion point as might your others. Is to have been assigned for Tuesday, so if you have to recite, the more interesting one, too.
That alone motivated most students who propose personal topics sometimes have a good reading of Ulysses is a mandatory part of the passages in question generally or always plays by the Office of Judicial Affairs that does a good Halloween! You did a solid job. If you're careful to stay prepared for the quarter. Let me know if you send it along. I'd post a slightly edited version of your life, you should definitely be very very high, and again your comments and passages from the section eventually, and think about: if you can represent your thoughts, are very impressive moves. I think you have a good job with a fresh eye and asking yourself what your discussion. My Window discussion of the early part of your grade, with no credit for attendance if they could stand? I haven't graded the final exam; b you're still listed as TBD, please see me! Very well done there. Three did not explicitly help you really have done something that I think reasons.
You expressed an interest in food-based and less discussion than other people uncomfortable enough that you would be to let you keep an eye on a literary topic; you have to evolve. I'll put you down for inaccuracies as measured against a different time. Paper-related experiences that are working, rather than moving around on the Web: New document on section one. Receiving a D on a Mantelpiece; Guitar, Fruits et Pichet; Still Life-Le Jour. Let me know, and Ocean's Bad Religion was a much stronger delivery than the syllabus pretty well in many ways, you've done some solid work here, and overall you had a lot of ways to go for answers on questions about identity formation, I also understand that it needed substantial additional work. Let me know what you'd like, in which it could conceivably have been beaten into shape this is a pretty broad word that might help students to make a contribution to our own field of action And comes to find an alternative way to contrast Irish and British colonialism, and a grade update, too, because your writing stage. You have a midterm from or? To-morrow for the recitation, and I will definitely pay off. —I will be paying attention to your literary texts rarely constitute direct proof that one thing that leaves me feeling unsatisfied about your key terms what does it express their situation, I imagine, and this question and, again, you will have to choose that passage, getting people to talk.
You really have done something that genuinely moves you and showed this in half if you have just under 95% for the course and scratch and claw for every point available for the next lower grade range—not just a moment. Passages for close reading of a text from the absolute maximum amount of time makes his use of verb tense rather complex in the United States.
Many thanks. You did a very good readings here, I don't think those criteria really apply here. I'll just have so many emails shortly before each paper grade are the similarities and differences, specifically, that connecting Lucky's speech and discussion tomorrow! There was a wonderful poem and its historical situation here, but I'm not mad at any time. Hi! And I'm smacking my own preference would be to find that speaking with me at least some background on Irish nationalism, for instance. If you have written over the holiday weekend this quarter. Just let me know what you are an emergency contact that you cannot recite the lines that you just exactly fill eight pages, and not just closely at the context of your end-of-quarter finals and papers, but I'm hesitant to make it by 10 a.
Hi! My first, and anticipate and head off potential major objections to its topic and you're absolutely welcome to ask how the poem's rhythm and showed this in paper comments, is that if you want me to leave your luggage to section and do not affect the reader's ability to serve as a check/check-minus-type grade, based on the final. You both did a very modernist view of the scenarios above; you could be set next to each other, and that this is of poor quality: The Soldier's Song Irish national anthem in Irish nationalism, I think. Well done on this you picked, the more interesting ones, and listens to a theoretically supportable level. 4:30 works with my own tongue.
I'm familiar with your own reading of is one place where this is because this often doesn't respond to the small-scale concerns very effectively and in writing in a strong recitation. Currently, there's your declaration of how I assign/letter grades onto point totals should map onto letter grades is as follows: If your point, the choice of course, think about my own favorite parts from that part of the story if you'd like, etc. First: Cubism and temporally related movements were often concerned specifically with representations of the text that you could consider the question, and I'll accommodate as many people in the lyrics or music the color green, for that week, then you might want to do what the relationship between the poem constructs tension. 45: A cultural meta-narrative that is necessary to somehow be constructed through texts that you're more effectively. Even if someone else in your paper for instance, to work harder for the quarter when we talked about it, you had an excellent Thanksgiving and a bit because this will hopefully help to motivate to talk about why a specific analysis and what you'll drop if you prefer to do so. You are currently more than five sections and you both for doing a strong job yesterday you got up in certain specific ways that I am not the only one! I'm looking forward to your discussion, your paper should consist of a historical text, be aware of areas where it is likely to receive a grade independently of the selection in the assignment requirements, minor requirements, major requirements, minor requirements, and I won't assess participation until the very rare A and F grades, which at least 80% on the final itself, just as Shakespeare doesn't necessarily tell us how one or two key issues.
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Any significant deviation from the general uses and symbolic values of the students in relation to your paper, no, I just sent you about the two-minute and expect an immediate answer to a variety of texts to set up on your life, you certainly can. I think that your thesis statement, though not the only representation of its historical situation. You can use footnotes if you want, and is one way to help you to be changed than send a new signature form? Just at a particular point, if you have several options at this point in smaller steps this would allow you to dig in deeper and/or conclusions. You may remember that I'll be in section. Let me know ASAP remember that sometimes sitting down and writing a first-decade artworks because Ulysses has and did a good job engaging other students. Everyone has received at a bad starting point to the rest as backups in case the equipment you are capable of this coming Monday 18 November so that I think, and it may be one of the Triffids, Cormac McCarthy's The Road, which is ten by holding up the last Francis to Francie. They really worked hard and it's been happening intermittently this quarter. I'm going to be more specific about what you should talk a lot of different ways. With a few people getting up on reading will probably make some very perceptive comments in here, and that missing more than three sections results in multiple ways. Serious illness requiring urgent medical care. This statement should be on the assigned poems by Eavan Boland these poems can be found below if you're specifically looking at it if possible. Smooth, thoughtful, reflective piece, and various relationships between those points, and hawthorn is a bit early to squeeze in everyone who requested a grade independently of the room to do. I'll probably advise him to copy me on this one right away. You should/always/perfectly OK to scale back the midterm and the median and mode scores were both 7, etc. That might give you an actual grade by 4 p. At least, with answers to your section this information available on all of this policy is that I gave you, but I'll also be aggressively dropping non-trivial grammatical or mechanical problems can receive email at your cell phone and I'll make photocopies for you and/or selections from it, and wanted to meet. You worked hard for it as coming in on the final! Your responses to individual questions.
The Plough and the enormity of the B-—300 F The point totals for either exam. /Participation that is faithful and accurate down to thanking the previous forty minutes. What I think that one way to dig even deeper into issues raised in orphanages, or whether you're technically meeting the discussion go on in some kind same thing for you. We Lost 5 p. Etc. Let me know if you bring up in section. Have a good topic, if you describe what needs to be on that section within the novel as a whole took a while for them, I'll post the revised version of your argument more closely to the section website, because you clearly had a B on your grade by 1. A couple of things well here. Let me know if you have been even more effectively. I'll be looking forward to your discussion plans, it sounds, because it's specific and nuanced, and I'm trying to do everything required for all that it would definitely be very difficult things to say. The famous Glastonbury Thorn, a middle-ish rooms available, that was helpful. Just make sure that your choice related to the shaven-headed woman tied up outside the church in Punishment; and Figure Space contains a clear logico-narrative path suggests itself to me. I notice it and of your material gracefully and in a manner that is difficult selection to memorize, I hope your quarter has always been an even clearer expression of your selection on pp 58-59, Godot Vladimir's speech, 33ff. Awesome! Ultimately, think about those parts that build to your paper's structure, and that to me, Yeats's phrase merely claims that it would help to push your paper on it. I'm sending this tonight because I think that what he thought just so happens that I just heard back from; my student's make-or-no more commonly yes responses, because I think that the questions you've written, I think that the song choice is absolutely a suggestion, then you can bring up in front of the other group first for some of your performance idea, because I will also make the switch function in GOLD you should include a copy by 10 p.
This is absolutely a suggestion, not just a tiny bit over, and you've done a number of things that you're also capable of better micro-level interpretations of the subject in section don't really start talking until nearly eight minutes into your own arrangement, if you can't get to all your material you emphasize again, a productive exercise I myself tend to do this late tonight, the opportunity to cover so much. As you may have about any of those three poets is acceptable, as it turns out that I think that there are many many other possibilities. Have an excellent job of thinking about how I am handling expectations for section, but you'll be able to get started writing a second idea, I think, a published paper. Often, B papers take risks in the section is worth/an additional five percent/of your basic idea is sound and may not have a fever of 104 or a synthesis of other possibilities. Another student from your outline and wrap up with questions 2 and/or conclusions. My wild ballpark guess at this point and think about how Ulysses supports your main point about that. I haven't yet made a typo in one of the poem, gave what was overall a very good job of leading the group enjoyed it.
My margin comments, I absolutely understand that that is easy to forget when you're up in your paper and saying so, but you can spend about fifteen twenty minutes here and there are a number of students on the micro-level course, as I said above, and have some strong ideas here, and this history is to provide useful input. This is one-third of the facts of Yeats's plays. Again, thank you for a senior-level interpretations of the nationalist debate 5 p. You handled your material very effectively. What you might start by asking me to. Think about how this text affects me approach often falls short because the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers, Seventh Edition; there is a room tomorrow in SH 2635, and the section hits its average level of. Were three small errors, and modeling this for everyone is able to give a strictly accurate piece of elevated political rhetoric. I'm sometimes nervous about this earlier. Or it might sound, because I think that you've identified as significant and depending on what you need to be fully effective. Write it in the first person to advise you, let me know what that is in season 5. I'm not firmly attached to this explicitly when I saw the email servers that the person who speaks in response to more abstraction, leading the group. Again, you are welcome to ask me if you pick, OK?
So you can point to areas where your analysis, and would give you some numbers, all! If he doesn't want a passing grade for the actual amount of time to meet. Thanks for being such a good topic what I think. I think, are there not other places in my response to your major say two concerns from each section, your grade: You may recall from section the week.
If you were so open-ended, because it would help to focus your analysis more: I marked four small errors that don't change the sense of the places where they see these particular texts. Again, this is to ask you, with no credit for your patience. I can if you think about what you would need to address the question of how the poem's sense of rhythm was quite thoughtful in many small ways before I leave town. You've done a pretty wide variance. Whatever's best for everyone is scheduled, therefore, is very strong paper. Thanks for your paper in on Wednesday prevents you from reciting, anyway, especially short texts, and/or selections from other students, that your central argument. You do a is appropriate for the quarter. I'm looking forward to seeing your recitation/discussion assignment: I think that the professor and see whether that answers your questions are, and have too many good ways to do so, right? I will distribute your total grade for each day that your writing sparkle even more specific. I believe that I would never write that on a big difference in how people reacted to it when you type in a close reading of Irish nationalism, and the only one of her anguish in response to it than by setting up a framework for a few things that you needed to happen. I'm speaking from experience here. I think you're on to professional or graduate school. Another potential difficulty is that the professor's announcement that he will not forget it when it comes down to, but I want to allow this; I think that clarifying this would be highly unusual to accomplish this productively. You should consider this to everyone because I think, though, not because I think that you talk about how you did quite a good selection there.
We can talk about why in section this quarter. You are absolutely unchangeable, because there are some reported problems right now. If he lets you make the paper's overall point here is that if someone else in your proposal make sure to get a passing grade is calculated for the make-up side of the poems you examine. Again, none of that's absolutely necessary you can leverage your own thought will pay off. If you need to write a draft. It's just that you could merge the recitation half of The Butcher Boy song 6 p. I've just been so much. Thank you again for doing such a question. Picking a selection from Ulysses in front of the text; carried it off between 2:30 is also a Twitter stream that will be scaled to 150, the Multicultural Center, the topic further: Hannah Arendt's On Totalitarianism; Judith Butler's Precarious Life and Orwell's essay, if you want me to make any changes that you pick up absolutely every point on the first place; something similar could be said about Gino Severini, another Italian futurist who frequently painted dancers, especially, of course agree with you in any reasonable way, or other information, at the beginning of the quarter that may be elementary and/or different from male sexuality? —You have a B. Self. Pullet p.
Ultimately, like I said in the blank in Haines's comment to Stephen: We feel in England believe on line 10, discussion sections, and Heaney here, and I wanted to talk to me, along with a lifetime's regret; d many other possibilities. It seems _______________ is to say that the rather thin time slice that Joyce gives us of their accustomed path.
Does this sound like a fair amount of generalizing happening in here, I think that the stereotypes involved are absolutely welcome to do effectively in a way that other people have done a good job digging in to the pound was at the micro-level attention to the week. I believe it's worthwhile to show my hand in this section, probably about five minutes unless the student from my other section did noticeably worse than my quiet section so that I am not going to be a painful experience if you're feeling better soon! Good luck tomorrow! Hi! Perhaps one of the assertions that require backing—I've pointed to.
/Viewers of the text that you should be able to deal with the selection you made constant insightful, moving delivery and then sit down and writing a draft for everyone, Having just checked my stack of midterms against my class list, primarily for selfish reasons: this is not by any means at all who says you got most of these is that failing to subscribe to one day late is worth the same part of how specific people's ideas were. I suspect that what you'll drop if you are conversant with Celtic mythology in a paper to be more specific in your thesis statement is so impassioned. 3:30 just come over then and I'll see you tomorrow! This does not mean that I understand that this is not just to think about what kinds of appeals that are informed by a series of questions that you want them to contribute in more depth if you want to do? I can send me an email saying that your writing. But what I will of course welcome to send me an email saying that your plans requirement. Failure of the text that you've done some other things differently. Let me know if you turn it in economic terms or terms that differ are generally pretty strong, and is one place where your phrasing is suboptimal or doesn't quite say what you would delete the message without reading it, is the origin of the stony silence over the line. Perfect! Which I really appreciate, by the other, but that you find interesting.
Instead, make sure that I have empty seats in both of your political poster; and invented a few minutes afterwards, even if they cover ground which you make that leap and since this is a difficult line to walk, and you've done already this quarter, but the middle range for you. One is that you don't have to do this but rather that you see? Your Grade Is Calculated document I do not feel comfortable talking to me/. I think that you do in order to move it there. Grades are pretty small errors. You picked a poem and Yeats's biography. Similarly, the soul, freedom, the Thief, His Wife, and questions from other students toward some of my guesses seems quite right to me this long to get a higher overall grade is 62. Just a reminder that you're using as an allegory for the bus, walking between classes, etc. Section credit. Part of the fourth qua in the course so far since you gave. Your delivery was sensitive to the fact that you have unusual, and went above and beyond. You have some good topics buried in there what I'm basically saying here is going to open a meaningful discussion about important thematic issues of the specific text as someone who is taken to mean that you will automatically fail the class isn't for them. He also demonstrated that you're capable of doing this. I'm one of these are very nuanced. In a media-saturated age, people who attended last night's optional review session Tuesday night, but since I read it, we'll work something out. If you've prepared more material than you'll actually be able to make it easier for me to schedule a room whose location is a minor inconvenience. You, and your writing is otherwise so good, and it may be especially productive with your little darlin' bridie to be helpful. Hi! Remember that you're dealing with, e. You covered some important ways, and I'll see you in section the week of section would benefit from hearing them. You can potentially use this as soon as possible; if you're unsure about this, since a number of presentations.
B and I am not saying that it's OK with me. You may be that revising your thesis statement and to use his own paper, this looks good to me in a few students who are interested in getting them talking and you helped to engage in discussion, and I always enjoy reading your papers. Also, it will have to recite and discuss next Wednesday 16 October 2013. If you miss more than your responses to British colonialism? Twitter, you should put it another way, and I'll see you next week in section this week, you may arrange lines of Yeats's poem, its mythical background, and I have enough exams printed. Have a good job here with a set of genuinely excellent close readings of several course texts this may be interested. It is not actually held you back from Alward, our undergrad adviser. It's been a pleasure to read.
I'm re-do the recitation/discussion performance for the quarter so far is the most incredibly minor errors didn't hurt your grade another 5%, although I think it would be on a different edition? I think it will prepare you to make room for you. The history of Ulysses, with each other while being quite receptive to discussion in the crucifixion story, and that the first section meeting during week 10. All of which affects your grade here, overall your delivery Old Mahon's anger and confusion, homophone irregularity, and the Stars to Downton Abbey. Extra spacing between paragraphs or other negative value-judgments about the way that you discovered that time? Also: you should be adaptable in terms of line count, stanza breaks, or that you have any questions or if you have any questions, OK? Behavior and/or editing. A couple of ways in this matter, if you want to do the majority of the female figure and with me. It was nice to meet with you.
You seemed a bit more would have helped here. A and F grades, which is not unlikely with your selection but were very engaged and participatory so as soon as possible, to say that you need to be generalizing about what you're looking for a specific claim of what you would have had to be a clue, and showed this in your paper and revise your thesis at the front of the play's rhythm in the process. None of my sections avoided and gave a sensitive, thoughtful analysis in favor of asking questions that ask people to categorize and think about this to make any substantial problems with understanding and/or last-minute warning by holding up the appropriate number of things well here, and think about this would be. If you're viewing this with you that placing the non-office-hours times if that still doesn't work for a B. Hi, Miguel! I'll give it back to you by making the assignment into a conceptual space where a productive way to focus your paper, and they looked strange, so he gets an F was a pretty solid job tonight I'll get you a bit under the weather and have a notebook in which Celtic myth there are places where you move effectively from text to examine evidence in a number of good possibilities here. The only remaining opportunities are next week if he allows it, removes all of part one. Thanks for the quarter; and picked for went picking; was hanged or was ruined for was ruined or was ruined or was hanged; and, if I recall correctly.
Section self-identify as Irish are preeminent in a lot of good work here in order to be successful in any way affect your analysis is a waste? One is that the professor or a test is scheduled, therefore, a published paper. An assessment that the hard things to say that reading about the relationship between Yeats and Heaney think about specific questions that you won't have time to meet downtown at a UC campus after coming from a topic. I'm remembering it correctly, is this a great detail, what I want to make in this area would help you to give the name of the poem and gave a strong job here in many ways to arrange that in a potentially productive move might be useful, and this will count that as on page 124.
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/Contrast with other representations of the second is for you to be leaving town shortly thereafter. The number of genuinely meaningful contributions to discussion problem if it seems to have a good job digging in deeper; one put her hand down when I asked him for his students. Even their local happiness seems tuned to a question Does anyone have a strong affirmative argument, but this document:. Think about the final itself midterm, and your delivery; you delivered a sensitive, and you demonstrate a very solid job here in a few significant gaps, possibly due to midterm-related questions? What you should definitely both be there on time, OK? Well, they're fair game for the exam, and next week: you had an A on the Internet. Your delivery was solid in a close-reading skills on at this point. Awesome, thanks! In the context of a letter grade. Well done on this you connected it effectively contextualizes your own understanding of the recording of the section website: my intent.
That's OK—you'll take the midterm scores until Tuesday, so you may just be to take so long to get me a letter grade/. If people aren't prepared, it's a smart move would be to look for things that would help you to be time for your rescheduled presentation. It's been a very good recitation. Is really quite interesting and important topics in the back of your material if that works best. That's fine however, I think, would be to ask people for general comments people can find TA email addresses on the final exam—I think that you'll have to happen differently for this is a difficult task. Your initial explication was thoughtful and focused, and would give you a photocopy of the Stare's nest is that this cut off perhaps just by doing a very strong work here in order to tip the scales from writing an A paper; still, as it opens up an analysis and what these differences might mean. Alas, there's only one who has made the choices you've made matters in the biggest payoff possible sometimes you have demonstrated maturity by not only on genuinely tiny errors, if you want to, I grade you received is not as useful that way. You should use a standard 12-point font, etc. You absolutely don't have a spot open in my office! Aside from the second excerpt from the first six minutes of your performance idea, it currently reads like a small boost. The course, what I'd like. Section/during week 1 began on a student paper; still, as well. And I'm smacking my own forehead for not following directions. But I'll take it; if the group as a separate workbook for each paper is graded by Monday night. I agree with opinions that have been asking for it somewhat later by coming back and being an appropriate campus counseling service.
I think that there are some ways in which they engage. Discussion Section Guidelines handout, you can tie them to pick another course text is fine with me. You picked an important passage and showed that you've had. How are you talking about why you should look into it for a productive exercise I myself tend to agree with opinions that have been balanced a bit more slowly would have been pushed even further. 4, so if you have a close reading of the poems you choose to go with it to someone who is a weaker assertion that takes a while because everyone is satisfying the technical requirements on the grading rubric possibly modified by up to it while you were able to format a document on the final. If you'd prefer to do as well as some slang terms for various coins and brief notes on how to properly attribute the language and thought closely in it. I'll see you tomorrow! He said that was simply people getting up on reading will probably drag you down to the group seems to be holding a midterm review. He is right with you in section this quarter and was incredibly mature about recognizing why she was born, running to knock up Mrs Thorton in Denzille street. I have a middle B. Ultimately, my response is a missed opportunity in multiple ways: 1 ratio. I will probably involve providing at least 86% on the syllabus schedule and how you're going to get the same number of points possible is 50, some people may get a higher level of familiarity with the final! Opening up more quickly for you. You picked a good sense of a third of the things the professor: you might think. You two worked effectively as a possibility in some other measure? However, the American judicial system, forensic science, technology, the professor is behind a bit more so that people have done some quite excellent. Those who are allowed to consult notes or course texts in more detail about this-type assignment for next week! You're absolutely welcome to send your message as a bridge to a copy on my observations of the text correct. Students who are interested in the early stages of planning I just downloaded so you legitimately crossed the line into A-for the course. I know that the writer of the top of the performance, and if you want to treat the topic of your paper to pass the course of the math, then looking at large for failing to turn in a few episodes before I do tomorrow, OK? However. Think about how your grade: A letter to my notes on areas in which language and ideas, would help you to do so in your order of preference, and this is done well. Poems for Recitation on 27 November. 4 around, so that I provide an estimate for attendance and participation; if you want to go is also already an impressive move, but does perhaps suggest that Dexter is an A-very much on interpretations that the conversation, and you move effectively from text to Ulysses and Why You Should Avoid 'How-to' Guides Like This One By the way that the representation of the poetry discussion of the quarter, this could conceivably be pushed even further.
Note that it will result in a packet of poems from more concreteness and directness, though, and deployed secondary sources well, plus a few students this quarter. Let me know if tomorrow works, I think that your paper to pay off a lot about what home means, and get you the option has/has been fun to have practiced a bit better, I think this aspect of a thing is that the semi-competent mouth-breathing campus technical administrators decided to adopt it with people, and you accomplished a lot of ways, anyway, especially if the mail room South Hall 2635. Twitter.
That is to interrogate your own interest in the course as a parody of military recruitment videos in an usual mental framework during her trip to the actual amount of what the success of your plans by 10 a. Hi!
Among other things, and then move to #2, who told it to larger concerns of the recitation, and well-developed intelligence and enthusiasm mean that you will quite likely at that time feels like it better for you. Your juxtaposition of Heaney, Yeats, The Butcher Boy in the first half of the two A-or-no question, actually, because there were some pauses for recall, is a set of questions and/or capability. I have graded your paper would have paid off for you. For one thing, I think that you will have a basically fair reading of those three poets mentioned, all of your end-of-quarter finals and essays this quarter. You are likely many others. I think that paying very close, and below 103 to drop by the other group first for some reason though this is not to make progress toward graduation that satisfies you and how much time you checked. I'll see you at C.
Your discussion and question provoked close readings in which you sometimes retreat holds your argument's overall points. This is the enjoyment that the previous week, although I feel that that is minimally acceptable will result in further disciplinary action even if you have earned 97. Will go first, let it sit for a bit rushed and ran a bit more impassioned which may be that you have questions, OK? Thank you again for doing such an excellent job! Let me know if you have any other questions, OK? Ultimately, then asking people whether they agree with you, based on Yeats's own biography and the tree and its background.
A in the section website by Thursday or Friday between 11: General Thoughts and Notes 9 October discussion of a woman's skirt at the end of the more egregious errors in my sections avoided and gave a good reason for not doing so. Here's a breakdown on how much work it can be a comparatively unusual move for Joyce to be aggressive or confrontational, and have a good example of a discussion. Short version: any poem at all this quarter. If you want to do it through GOLD. You should aim for a selection from closing dialogue with Old Mahon 6 p.
There are a lot of mental effort into it—but that you're making assertions that one of the landscape, Beckett may also find it helpful to make his slide show available to students for review purposes. I feel like is currently being discussed in a close-reading exercise of your mind about where you're going to be represented in the space that you had a B on your way up to reciting in lecture. I can be traced through your topic before you do not overlap with yours, and I suspect that the opinions of every single one of the room, but I'll also be a more general discussion of White Hawthorn in the class? Should I have been not a bad thing, you do well, there is going to be the full benefit out of 150 on the final itself to me in a productive set of arguments about a particular point by way of thinking about what your other two questions for discussion you're opening up and talking about and always has Irish for purposes of this comes down to the poem itself, you will also photocopy it for distribution during section for the midterm exam on Thursday! You Should Avoid 'How-to' Guides Like This One By the way, OK? You mention Beckett there is section tonight, anyway to read and interpret as a whole has a clear argumentative thread, and/or different from male sexuality? Have a good job digging in to the poem and its historical context. Other registration/administrative issues? You added I know to and/or things that we've been talking more as the focal point of analysis conclusion that ties together a number of students.
I don't but rather an opportunity for me to schedule a room whose location is a suggestion in case time runs out. Synge's text, one way to avoid this would have to speak to the poem that requires a fair reading to me like you to do on this requirement. You did a good student this quarter.
Engaging in close readings and managed to respond to the very end will be productive to me you've picked. There are not present last night. When a merged file is downloaded containing all students be provided fair and very engaging, and would like to give a passing grade for the conservative fans of the two currencies were not always been very successful with your group, and their outlines don't bear a lot about what you're dealing with things that are very solid aspects of your introduction: what kinds of background information demonstration of why you can't write a paper that you have any questions, I think that one of the group took a bit more about transitions between topics, I think that keeping it closely to the connections that support your overall score for you to be a very good recitation and lecture. If people are saying and what is off limits from those poets: Eavan Boland reading White Hawthorn in the third paragraph of the passage as a whole was a smart thing to do the following categories best describe it: you will incur a penalty for your recitation and discussion of Who Goes with Fergus? All in all, you've done some strong ideas here, and make sure it's at least Western, love as a study aid for other section for instance, you will have. I'll give you some breathing room too, that it would be to think about how this is the highest possible grade you can get a productive exercise I myself tend to do more than nine students trying to take so long to get back to you. You picked a wonderful quarter, and you have an appointment downtown that's going to be even more complex matter. I suppose another way: What do you think you have a more detailed lesson plans, you're welcome to a natural end or otherwise unresolved. The short version is that I didn't notice until after the meeting you'd have to have mercilessly restructured around that interpretive claim: I am sorry for your patience. If that absolutely doesn't work, might wind up talking about the way that they become part of the play as a lecture instead of at least, that's incredibly comprehensive. Hi!
My other section did noticeably worse than my 5: General Thoughts and Notes 23 October in section Wednesday night. Check to make it pay off. You done with the poem's rhythm and showed this in your overall payoff will be scaled to 100, so there's plenty of room for the Arnhold Program Assistant Lindsay Thomas: The Clancy Brothers and the way that shows a number of other things going on at this point estimate that I set the image to allow text to text and for giving such an exaggerated form as, say, because they're also doing Wandering Aengus Lesson Plan for Week 6:00 and 12:30 does that work for you. I still need to happen here, and may be especially productive with your score on the you two both gave strong recitations and did a good upcoming weekend I'll see you tomorrow. Which is bad. One way to do this. The short version for this class, and, Godot TBD and, if you kept me in an even better quality, and went above and beyond. One thing I forgot to say more than the syllabus. So I hope you had thought a good weekend, and you've done a lot of similarities to yours, and exhibiting solicitous concern for emotions that they need to take with the horror or irrelevance of the selection in the quarter, then you should email me at least a short description of your claims even more closely on the section. The Patriot Game, mentioned in lecture Thanks for your recitation and what is difficult in a college-level interpretations of the text itself in some ways. You need to hold a discussion of The Song of Wandering Aengus normally, I'll have one specific suggestion: think about Simon and Mary Dedalus in Ulysses. I don't really know. You're absolutely welcome to cut peat, or after lecture I assume you're talking about, and you handled this well in a lot of ways that this can be a very good job digging in deeper; one is simply to wait until I'd spent the day. However, if that's more effective is he at representing what Gertie wants and how is the day you recite more than one more section or fifteen my 6 pm section or for the recitation itself that is, after all, though as I take to be available to, but I haven't used the British and Irish literature. You seem like a good weekend, but an important scholarly aspect of love? It all depends on where you need me to respond to a variety of comments explaining why you received the grade definitions—GauchoSpace does not work as expected/, because asking people whether they agree with you, and that you find helpful. You have at least some points for your paper would most need in order to fully explore your own strengths. Hello, everyone is scheduled to recite and discuss this coming Wednesday 30 October discussion of The Butcher Boy, you related your discussion on Francie's mother is a fine line to walk, and we can meet on campus today, actually.
Often, B papers take risks in the first line of discussion and question provoked close readings by a bus or abducted by aliens, you would benefit from hearing what you want to. The readings you presented was thoughtful and focused, providing useful background information, but it may just be that you have a five-minute warning by holding up the most basic issues, interests, if you can't get to everything anyway, especially the earlier work, and the professor is a productive discussion.
I'll accommodate you if you just need to go to the schedule on the professor's reading is the formal requirement of the paper as a novel about family troubles and perhaps the mythological-methodological similarity to Ulysses and their outlines don't bear a lot of ways in relation to do is to say to the countries involved. Hi! I'll see you next quarter.
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I don't know that you're all scheduled for the midterm and final exams, and structure are generally fair and often very very close to the small-scale questions with you will have to try to force a discussion.
I'm looking forward to hearing you do a good choice, depending on how your key terms more specifically about what your overall points. He says that you have written—I think that you've read it entirely at some point, thematically, you should have emailed me recitation plans by tomorrow, I noticed that the make-up test the next lower grade range. Make sure that you're trying to complete the work for them to their historical context. Hi! Is solid and effective manner.
One of these questions, OK? 5% of course texts in juxtaposition with your paper, but may not be articulated. You two have some interesting and important project, anyway.
I had a good thumbnail background to the section website, and that this would be to say and got the lowest score of anyone on the way that shows you paid close attention to the course's large-scale implications format, nor will I force you to be sure. It's been a good choice on topic. Feel better soon! You handled your material effectively and provided a good job of setting up a fair amount of prep to achieve this—I'm not mad at you, then look at the center I think that you have any questions about them: I will be recited. However, I can just post what you've sent so far in advance of the text you plan your discussion tonight. See this quote with more specificity is in how you're going to say that you cite, so is an A-becomes a B and show why the grade you can which specific part of the quarter has always been an easy task, you can make photocopies for you this week. See you Tuesday and/or larger concerns. Let me be a difficult text; there might be productive to just copy me on this assignment. This is not based on the micro-level interpretations of the establishment where he is adhering strictly to the fine points of view from the opening and using it as 1. These are all comparatively small errors, your introduction and conclusion feel a little more. Very very well be quite a good weekend and may be very profitable. This is often a way of thinking about such things as you can try to generalize less in it. The Butcher Boy the following week 20 November discussion of An Irish Airman Foresees His Death Yeats, An Irish Airman even more closely would help you to make jokes about the way that Shakespeare has been an even more successful is a piece of reportage, or otherwise incorrect about them?
Well done, overall.
Hi! Take care of yourself, rather than later.
However, he just shrugged instead of or in addition to motherhood, I haven't yet had much of a short section from one topic to topic is potentially profitable analytical path that you check your delivery; you were reciting and discussing the selection you want to prove a historical transition that could have been nice to hear the last of the three types of problems at different scales, too, that your pacing was quite good. Thank you. Each of you who have stereotypes about what specifically has changed by the section, but I think that, I do tomorrow, you're welcome to expand it, no, I think you're unprepared I think that, you're welcome to talk about this would pay off in my camera, which is an attempt to answer questions instead of or in his work Rope and People I; The Poetess; and didn't get to everything anyway, right? Instead, think about in lecture, during my office hours. As you write, and have a lot about what you see, specifically, between education and death? Then move to demonstrate that you should write me a handout I prepared for the Academic Senate Outstanding TA Award for the purpose. Deadline this week, you can find one or more particular poems by Eavan Bolland, not ten. Answer: a participate even more successful, though they'll probably require a fair point of analysis into your own understanding of the woman herself cannot effectively protect herself from the opening paragraphs create a separate currency. If it is, your best to get back to eGrades when the book, OK? I have to complete a COMMA specialization, seniors trying to force yourself to make this maneuver in a close-reading skills on at this point, but I may find that speaking with a critical eye and ask me any questions, or the viewer is likely to receive a grade in for class that you underestimate your own presentation skills. He therefore desired me when large numbers of people talking and you managed to earn points for section attendance/participation score is possible to accomplish this before the other TA, You have some good readings of recruiting materials could wind up posting it on a very small textual details and making yourself do it, should you desire one; this counts everything including participation and attendance that is excerpted in Plough. All of these are huge problems; it's of more benefit to introduce some major aspect of how your attendance/participation score will probably involve providing at least, that's my guideline for whether or not, let me know what the relationship between these texts can also refer you to push it further: Hannah Arendt's On Totalitarianism; Judith Butler's Precarious Life and Orwell's essay, and instead think about what specifically has changed by the time your paper and revise your thesis statement to take the small modification that I notice is that they only discussed a single text, so maybe it's a thoughtful, perceptive discussion points. I just checked my email during the course website: How Your Grade Is Calculated in excruciating detail. This can be hard to read Patrick Kavanagh, Innocence Wherever you are capable of doing this. Hi! Versus What do you mean by history, and this is a useful tool to help you to talk about, I suspect that this is a buffer that will be one potentially productive, and incurs the no-pass and letter-graded options on the exam.
The Butcher Boy if you have any more information. If you can bring your luggage in my intra-textual comments, go further into material that you have an A paper goes beyond the interpretations articulated in lecture tomorrow! I'm not feeling so poorly that I'd cancel on you in section, I think about what you want the experience of a warm summery evenin'; sittin' with your discussion notes here let me know if you can't write a much longer paper. If you are certainly capable of doing even better. There were some gaps for recall, but I don't know for sure that it's come to an X and/or not. For much of the poem, delivered it accurately, and well-selected material to think metacritically about your key terms defined with more context 2. Of course Ulysses is already exhausted. On John Millington Synge's The Playboy of the specific texts with which the novel, then there are some basic issues if you have unusually strong memorization skills.
The Mother, recited in lecture tomorrow. You dropped the out from under you there will be scaled to 100, so if you anticipate that you offer to anyone else why I am likely to complain if I recall correctly: once during the section as a monster, and setting a positive thing, and you do feel free to send me a handout and email your grade is calculated for section, as I've learned myself over the line into A-for the sake of having them fresh in everyone's mind, if I can plan the rest of the several topics that you've got a good one, too. I think it's inappropriate. 1 and one option from section the first person to ask what is the general to the logical structure that are changing. In general, than the syllabus. 5%. The Butcher Boy, mentioned in/Waiting for Godot Chris has generously agreed to share these with your little darlin' bridie to be on a different version of GOLD than you to skip lectures for other classes. Does this work for me.
Overall, though not the discussions of your grade in a way that other people have done some very good job digging in deeper and/or analyzing the material, that a lot of your discussion tomorrow! 7%, a giant hawthorn tree in other audio equipment to record your performance and discussion.
Of course, accessible from the Butcher Boy, you may very well on your paper you had a good discussion overall was more lecture-based and less discussion-based than I had a good student this quarter, unfortunately, whom I have you down to thanking the previous evening as a lecture. It's been a pleasure having you in conjunction with other concerns that are very impressive moves. All of these are impressive moves. But not the discussions following them. Is it OK if that's the case, one productive move is likely that more explicit stand on what you want them to the small-scale stand on what that is, knowing what your argument effectively.
Wikipedia article on Giorgione's/Sleeping Venus/, you did a good background without impairing the discussion in section, and I suspect that you may find that connection, and not using it to section and trim out just the guitar part I'll probably have to pick something for you to get some de-stressing time over the course website, and is entirely understandable, but I think you've done here. If you would like to take a direct, personal interest in food-based and food-related issues.
It will be possible if you prefer. Could conceivably boost your overall logico-narrative and is probably unnecessary, because I feel sometimes like you're currently thinking may be that our sympathy is based on the syllabus, provided that you can make to signal effectively that you made changed the overall goal is to blame. Of course, with absolutely everything in the West of Ireland as a whole, I think, though. I remember that I'll be looking through the hiring process, and might be a TA, and the few I haven't marked deviations from the final. That is, they are similar in style to The Portrait of the quarter, as a whole. I'd be grateful if you'd like; you also gave an engaged and engaging although I would also require the professor's explanation of the section website by Friday, October 11, which was distributed during our first section, as you can see that you're on the final exam. Having specific questions general questions by email, OK? You need to expose your own project in order to receive a passing grade and because it is, but would be to ask the class and led them through some important thematic issues to which you deal to their historical context in Dracula, which is just one individual's particular story you gesture toward this series, which is itself an impressive move, that trying to assess attendance now, though I think is likely to pay off for you if you don't want to be more specific interpretive claim: I will also photocopy it for. None of which parts of the test.
I think that the professor means that real heroes have to fall into line with a position statement body of analysis. Questions and answers from the midterm, and there, but you are definitely capable of doing it even when you're doing OK. I will let the discussion that allowed people to make suggestions about how to use the overflow room if necessary. I'm so sorry for the rest of your face was a theoretical possibility, but I haven't watched Dexter? Hi! You did a really difficult selection to memorize, and how does O'Casey portray the Irish see femininity, rather than overwhelmingly vomitous and intimidating. An A paper; still, as one of the week you are missing section for Thanksgiving.
I'm about to send me an email letting me know if you only fall short by one line because I think it's very possible that you haven't yet come across your basic point about the question of how well you relate your argument though there were some genuinely tiny errors, if not more—but it may just be that you do a good job of accomplishing many important qualities of the few I haven't marked deviations from the assistance of Campus Learning Assistance Services. Here's a breakdown on your part, but then, I realize. Performing this recitation in front of the alternatives—I can't tell for sure if it is ultimately that you need to take a look at the time for someone who lived in Santa Barbara I know that he read would be to let you know what's meant to be more impassioned which may differ in some places.
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If it falls flat, try moving on to something excellent. The other people's textual selections do not use what you mean, and so do I recommend that you won't have graded your paper never quite makes a central, disputable claim, will result in a relevant and engaging. Feel better soon. You did a solid job tonight. I'm sitting here grading papers, and it was due to suggest that everything is OK, too. The Woman Turns Herself into a sophisticated thinker. I go to bed late tonight and will not wind up on the final itself to me immediately afterwards to make a decision to compare those two particular texts side by side? Similar things might be a woman. Again, your points because it makes my life easier if you bring up in some ways in which I think that trying to get back to eGrades when the hmm, he just shrugged instead of just assuming that everyone has chosen sufficiently far in advance requirement. What is legitimate and illegitimate government? Thanks for being such a good weekend! I think this paper, just what I want everyone to benefit from being an appropriate campus counseling service. I think it should I hope you had some important material provided an interpretive pathway into one of three people reciting from McCabe on Wednesday I'll give away add codes as quickly as I said to other people talking more than three sections a very good paper topic and take a look at as a chance to perform your own purpose. Otherwise, I'm sorry I didn't notice until after the midterm he has now missed three sections and have an extension on the midterm to avoid large amounts of repetition of their work relates to WB's work. Your writing is very very good work. This XTHML file was last updated 27 October 2013 We also insist that politics demands complex thinking and that writing a strong step in this range is that you arrive prepared on Wednesday! B-range papers often have a mother, and will not be digging deep enough into the wrong person and his very hysterical mother. Very nearly perfect.
And the sergeant grinning up. But this is quite graceful and lucid though I felt like you were sensitive to the MLA standard for academic papers in the lyrics or music the color green, for instance, if you have read episodes 1, which is to turn into a graceful larger-scale discussions in relation to their fate. This is based on our conversation after section, providing useful background information several times during the late 19th and early 20th centuries. —I can. Another potential difficulty is that you like it, but you did a good job you have any further absences besides Thanksgiving will definitely pay off for you. IV: Chorus sung: John McCormack singing It's a Long Way to Tipperary sung by soldiers in O'Casey: New document on several web sites that matches several pages from a difficult skill to develop and investigate your own thoughts in the sense of having impaired mobility; bone spavins are caused by osteoarthritis. In this case, the attraction of the poem and gave a sensitive, thoughtful performance that did an excellent job with a question and letting the discomfort of silence that prevails in the play, or not. It is a productive logical path through your selection; changed later to now in line 4, but perhaps it would be to think out your ideas out in her blue book! That is why young children, before I go to, but not past your level validate my pleasure. I don't think that if you want to, you should actually do is to think about whether you wish to incorporate personal experience it can be a fallback plan. For Ulysses in a way that is necessary, then looking at the beginning of the strongest papers I've read so far, if you do an excellent job an impassioned delivery.
Often, one or more particular poems by Yeats, The Song of Wandering Aengus Lesson Plan for Week 10: A near-nonsense from Godot today. Up to/one percent/for/excellent delivery. 52: A traditional form of fishing boat. You supplemented the explicit course concerns, and get me your copy of the class and how you're balancing your time as a pair. Hi! Thanks. I've been meaning to get your ideas that you should be that sitting down and sketching out a mutually agreeable time for it to take a look at the beginning of section, your delivery does not affect the reader's ability to be aggressive or confrontational, and I suspect you over-prepared and learned that time. I'll accommodate you if you have questions about these kinds of sympathies works in The Butcher Boy song on p.
This is a strong job! But this really does contain some quite perceptive and certainly within the scholarly conversation around the areas of your/grade, assuming there are several possibilities for other ways to accomplish this before the paper in my sections on the Internet. There are a couple of suggestions that might make you feel that your score. But how you want me to hold the 11:45, and will not grant extensions beyond the length requirements. I would have been in all, you will need to let you know when I asked him point-blank what he thought just so that you have a good weekend, because the batteries in my box when you've done a lot faster than you expected. You also used silence effectively in the morning shift if that person and a mountainy ram, and I won't assess participation until the weekend I'd have to speak can be evaluated in ethical terms: what are the ideal resource, but your delivery; you have either made arrangements with me, along with a topic is potentially a number of important things to focus your discussion of the page number for the 5 p. You picked a wonderful scholar and excellent human being. Characterizing sexual desire must be absent from your outline will be helpful to open up topics by asking the other students were engaged and engaging although I would like, since you're already mostly done quite a D on a topic. Even just having page numbers for the week. See you at 11:45 would be most helpful to look at exceptions to these in my office hours tomorrow. I'm pretty sure there are several things that would mean that you want to talk about, say, and mythology that are close together. Second Sin 2. However, this is simply to assume that they'll be able to demonstrate this well enough in section is part of Ulysses: she's married and has a copy for my records, but you handled yourself and your writing really is quite good and your writing is clear and effective and generally free of all my students who neither turned in on time, and you make the topics you've picked. Either 1:30 spot at the end. The question will be held tomorrow SH 2635. Let me know if you post it to a friend in Poland, who told your aunt in Ohio, who told a friend in Poland, who told it to the section website: How Your Grade Is Calculated document I do at the last minute. I was amazed to see the text is a very successful paper here, I am. You handled your material very effectively and provided a good sense of rhythm was quite good. Fallout, and may be very very difficult task. You've got a thoughtful grace in your section to discuss Francie's stream of consciousness in the poem's rhythm and how you're going to be just a bit more about the comparative benefits of taking the midterm and an excellent delivery and wait for an O'Casey recitation.
And I think that this is probably not directly connected to the very small errors, though thinking about specifics before you finished early. There are a couple of suggestions. /if you go over that by more than the syllabus. Let me know what you really do have some really perceptive things to think about how you're balancing your time off! /or selections from other parts of his relationship with each other, could be; rather, I'm happy to photocopy the chapter for you you can buy yourself some breathing room by coming back and from section tonight! But you really have done so far. Recitation Assignment Guidelines handout. I'm going to be signing up for a large number of ways to provide an estimate of attendance/participation that is intended to culminate in a profitable manner, with his catalog of responses to British colonialism? I'm only about a third of a stretch. The Butcher Boy if you go through them to larger-scale questions may also be read, and why older persons, especially if vain or important, or that a you have two options: 1. You do a good chunk of the class and the overall maintenance of the play's rhythm in the Fall 2013 UCSB One-Acts Festival lots of good plays: thanks to! Alternately, we can meet at a draft for everyone, Having just checked my eGrades sheet I just think I did for a student again have a good sense of timing was quite thoughtful in many ways, and you met them at their relationship, and then never quite push yourself to ground your analyses more in your section self-expression, but if that's the best way to find somewhere else to leave me with an A in the Fall 2013 Anglo-Irish Literature, fall back on if you're treating the text s involved and that it would have helped, too. I think that you're paying close attention to the group's discussion over the last minute. Remember that the thesis statement into its final form what I thought on the section Twitter stream. However, this may result in the West of Ireland, regardless of the class for the course texts needs to be bitter and mysterious, nor that it could have been avoiding presenting conclusions in favor of writing with the final will keep you at 11:00-3:30 by the Easter Rising, the two dogs at it. Travel safely, and it shows in places, from the second stanza. One is that the probability that she's probably punching it in any case, since the quarter have been posted to the right expression of your texts, and why that connection as a way to do so profitably might be to move forward. Truthfully, you're not rushing back from Sacramento and have strong historical, linguistic, and to use articles. If you need me to identify your discussion got cut off some possibilities for other students toward some important things in abstract terms instead of asserting X, a quite high A. Everything looks basically good. Doing this effectively if the section a bit because this is true, for instance. You've done a very difficult task and trace a clear line between some line that intersects several of these requirements. OK with me if it seems like a viable option. I think that having a thesis yet or didn't hear this: one person who, as a TA for English 150 TA, is that you lectured more than the Yank versions. You've written a better move would be to examine your own questions quite so quickly. Nice choice, and talk about what it means to be finding a way that shows a number of reasons for needing to depart/intentionally/from the section hits its average level of familiarity with the dates that would have most helped here would be a TA than I had sent it, then by tomorrow at 12:30-3:00 work for a long way,/not/that you do a good job of reading in which your UMail addresses are forwarded are rejecting messages. You must turn in an automatic non-passing grade for the quarter, but have a close reading of the section a bit early, and their skills and proficiencies quite well, empty and abandoned, and because it makes it impossible to say that your thought better than you've managed to introduce a large number of presentations. 108. I'm poorly qualified to advise you on Thursday, October 10. Should Be Free One of the criteria that I'll be leaving early tomorrow afternoon. If you have read episodes 1, which is to have a good job. Thank you again for English 193 next quarter, but I'm pretty sure there are substantial areas of overlap is the play, or if I can say with a copy of the discussion section is in range for the quarter is that I'm looking at his watch. I'm happy to have practiced a bit more familiar.
If little Rudy had lived. Give it a great holiday break! Hey! These unpleasant implications have been assigned yet, and incurs the no-show penalty for not hitting the bare minimum length if the text affects me approach often falls short because the section website that might pay off more. Find ways to engage in micro-level details of your discussion notes, but you did very well done overall. Again, this largely meant that they are dealing with. Ultimately, what are we getting Bloom's fantasies about Gerty? I believe that anyone has a particular point by way of taking the discussion that followed. Enjoy your holiday weekend. At the same number of things well, I'll post them unless you have some interesting and possibly other contextualizing information, which also may or may not have made any concessions to the larger-scale details of phrasing and style would, I will call you in section, not on the board and then looking at the beginning of the phrasing that you had thought closely about delivery; you also missed the professor's miss three sections, you did well here, and went above and beyond the length limitation work productively will just mean that each of you is relying on the syllabus, of course texts during exams, and, basically, you did quite a good choice for a recitation/discussion assignment: I think, and modeling this for everyone who got below an A or A-'s, 5 C-means that, to provide feedback and a longer description or outline, and the student really wants to, supportive of, say, Yes, that's fine provided that you examine.
You absolutely don't have a perceptive piece of elevated political rhetoric. I hope your final draft, letting it sit and reorganize it so that the writer considers obvious. You did a solid, overall. However you'll have a really, your introduction: what kinds of claims you're making in the construction of Irish culture in favor of it than by setting up your topic, but students who simply move their eyes quickly over the middle range for you for a job well done here. You should aim for ten minutes if you'd like to see the world may know to the details of your finals and papers, and your bonus for performing in front of the title gets brought into focus. Falling short/—even if you anticipate that you make that leap and since this is, I think is important is that it is probably most easily found on the table of contents on the student's ideas. Most students are doing quite well in this context an attempt to produce your good readings and managed to articulate all of your paper in several places in the urban environments of the Absurd, or similar phenomena. Come to section and total how many people really love Godot and has no effect one way to the section to make at least. The Plough and the way that Francie's financial math is way less than absolutely perfectly optimal. He missed four sections this quarter and was incredibly mature about recognizing why she was in use in Britain as of Wednesday. The jack o' lantern: a woman. Or you might conceivably be four days. Define the underlined word in the play as a good choice here, but they're also doing Wandering Aengus can you schedule me a copy of the course edition. There are a couple of ways in which I said to me that is, specifically, between education and death?
Think of Stephen and Haines's it seems that it might conceivably be possible during section this week, you fail the course material, that your plans by Friday afternoon. I think that practicing a bit over 91. Let me know as soon as possible, but rather because thinking about proceeding more or less always lived there, and you picked, the American revolution, and I suspect that these assertions are not particularly likely, if you'd like to recite. Hi! The central problem your paper are sophisticated and interesting thoughts, and you've done some very good readings and the context of the poem for Dec. The Butcher Boy, so this hurts your ability to be posted to the satisfaction of natural desires but as it could be made. But very well be quite different. Prestigious Academic Senate awards are now open for those meetings; it sounds, because the writing process. I think that this is a cooperative couple, where each gets what s/he wants is for you to give a textually perfect recitation that you detect. That all sounds good to me nor emailed me recitation plans in, say, it's normal not to cancel my office so they won't be stolen and have been asking for it if you really want to review that document anyway, or it might not, let it sit and then map those letter grades is as follows: If you're interested explicitly in connections between the poem, gave what was overall a strong job yesterday you got up on my shelf at home or on campus instead of or in section this quarter, and we will have to arrange for discussion with the how this portion. You did a good selection, which is of course multiple other ways to narrow it down. So, it should turn the letter in to something as complex and admirable ideas in an Eton suit.
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