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#yveltal is absolutely used to people reacting that way to him so it just does not phase him anymore
gardenofgods · 3 years
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me realizing that after aster died yveltal showed up to escort her soul away and once rayquaza woke up he probably was VERY mad like BRING HER BACK BRING HER BACK!!!! CANT YOU BRING HER BACK
and yvel is just like hey. we both know why i cant do that. which made ray calm down but the exact opposite way where he just went from anger to crying immediately. and yveltal felt for him, he rly did. yvel is probably one of the only people besides giratina to see rayquaza openly sobbing his heart out. yveltal probably stayed with rayquaza for a few hours just to keep him company before he had to leave.
and the next time he saw rayquaza when he went to hoenn w serena, and learned about wally?? man. his heart probably felt so full knowing that rayquaza was able to heal and didnt close himself off, instead embracing the connection and treating wally like his own son. bc after what happened, yveltal would not have been surprised if rayquaza just tried to shut down that sort of thing, but the exact opposite happened!!!!
this got very rambly but anyways i just want u to know that yveltal and rayquaza have a very close brotherly-type bond and it is very very important thanks
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1358456 · 4 years
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Review Response, July 19-25, 2020
Another week!
Destiny #027
1)  Wow, I’m a little in awe. This chapter is unlike any of the others really. No strategy of the enemy’s that requires time to figure out. No Peter this, Zygarde that, it was actually a little refreshing. For once I actually knew what was truly going on lmao. Because the Hoenn legendaries were beyond thoughts not regarding the other. Huh... rivals... always thinking of each other... I think the Pokemon fandom is missing out on a real good ship here. Anyways haha like I was saying, it had sort of an apocalypse feel. And I actually really hate anything apocalyptic usually, but I didn’t this time. And I really commend you for that, for not creating that heavy feeling that just stays in you and drags down the entire story. I know that probably doesn’t make much sense... but as the audience it’s how I usually feel at apocalyptic scene and is the reason I hate them. This is probably done for a reason, but I personally feel that it’s shoddy work. Oh, I think I got a bit sidetracked... I was gonna explain why I was a bit in awe. I think it was because of how you wrote the chapter. It just gave me that feeling you know? The situation, the way you described it. I can’t even explain and probably just look like I’m fangirling, which to be fair I am, but I am a fan of how you write so it makes sense. First thing was how the situation slapped me in the face. Until now I’d only really thought of the dexholder’s deaths. So far no one outside of them has died. It was almost like regular citizens couldn’t be touched. But I realize now that I was being a little naive. Of course innocent people would die, this is something akin to a war. I had to pause for a moment there, imagining just how many people had died already. You’d already said the number, but numbers don’t make you think of the people themselves. Once you really start to think about it, you feel horrified. Since this is a fanfic, I didn’t feel the same amount of horror haha, but even if fictional, they’re still lives all the same aren’t they? It’s a really sad situation. Makes you realize exactly why the dexholders are so determined to bring down this guy. Or thing whatever. Speaking of lives I hope Winona is ok... Anyways, I’m so excited to read the next chapter that I think I’m gonna end this a little early kek so I can get ahead to it. Ugh I so wanna know what happens when Ruby and Sapphire get there. Maybe Sapphire will be able to gain control again? It’s definitely plausible since she’s so strong-minded. And I really hope she does. For the sake of everyone in Kalos. Maybe afterwards she can somehow knock some sense into Ruby. Could it be possible that they can get the legendaries to fight on their side...? I don’t want to hope too much, but it’d be such an advantage.
Huh. You hate apocalyptic settings, huh? I can understand that. I guess the persistent bleak hopelessness does kind of hamper a few things.
Technically, a whole ton of “NPCs” died in chapter 23 with Groudon’s awakening, but... chapter 27 is basically an extension of 23, so it’s like the same scene, I suppose. So... yeah. I guess none of those nameless fodder characters died yet. And now they’re dropping like flies because Destiny has the highest “NPC” death count. It will sink in a LOT in chapter 43... which is still a ways away. ... You might feel quite a bit of that horror in that chapter. Hahaha.
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Destiny #028
1)  I was tired and fell asleep reading the chapter so that’s why I posted this in the morning haha, anyways. ...will her body rot? I mean that probably shouldn’t be my main focus, but I mean will she. Will her body stay fresh long enough? I wouldn’t want to fight a somewhat dead corpse for its smell. I mean I wouldn’t want to fight one if it smelled like roses, but you get my point. Speaking of Y, I wonder how everyone will handle seeing her. Now with her lovely acquirement of a skeletal arm, I doubt they’ll be too thrilled. But I guess they wouldn’t be thrilled either way, skeletal arm or no. X would no doubt react the worst. Oh I feel bad for the guy already. That’s some serious guilt he’ll put himself through. And so to will Y if she finds out he didn’t in fact quite kill her. It was a sound deduction I think, but she’s that type of person. All the dexholders are really, is it a hero thing? Cone to think of it, I don’t think her Pokémon will fight with her like that. Or would they? Ah geez I don’t know. If not then what use would Y be to Yveltal? Or Zygarde? If not to fight her friends. Maybe they’re gonna perform a satanic ritual and need a dead body or smth that’s all I got. And even if that wasn’t the case (thought I doubt it would be) why have her fight? This guy can brainwash practically anyone. There are a bunch of nice people to have fight for you. Why go for a dead chick? Well, I’m not privy to the thoughts of legendaries so I might as well give up. Anyways, somehow I feel that this little trip Platinum and Blue are going to take will either result in something great or awful. No in between. And seeing how this fic goes I’m more inclined to think it’s the latter. Hopefully she won’t get herself killed and manages to unbrainwash (is that a word?) Diamond. (Seriously Blue you didn’t mention before knowing how to unbrainwash people? A tad important don’t ya think?)
Hehe. Well... let’s not think about the decaying part as that makes a few things a bit awkward. “What the hell is that smell?! ... Is that still me?!” So for the sake of the story and some emotional scenes, the decay is delayed. Can’t make things too realistic or we end up right in our reality with no Pokemon or whatever.
Even if Y isn’t steaming mad at X for killing her, she’s still going to be steaming mad at him for leading the situation that got her killed in the first place. And she’s still going to be very hurt and desperate given what’s happening to her, and all that has to be directed somewhere. But more on that in chapter 32.
Ah, the Pokemon issue. For the sake of the story, if you mind control a trainer, it affects the Pokemon. Otherwise, mind control is meaningless. How does that work? ... It... just works. It’s like... if you mind control a transport unit, you get everything in the transport unit. ... Ahem. Anyways. ... But of course, Y isn’t mind controlled, but... for the others who actually are, keep this in mind.
Oh yeah. Blue didn’t tell Red that she knew of a way to cure the mind control. ... Well, she didn’t know that there were others who were mind controlled who were in any position to be rescued. And I guess she was a bit flustered from getting involved again?
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DE #036
1)  Thought it was cool to see how Diamond’s character trait of wanting the best for Platinum could actually hurt her. Loved both the drama and fluff! Can't wait for more!
... I almost forgot that I wrote this chapter. Hm.
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And with that, the most recent chapter goes from “pitiful absolute minimum” to... “pitiful absolute minimum”. Well, it’ll still need 3x more to get above the average, so it looks like I won’t be touching this thing for a looooong time.
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