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animestan69 · 6 years

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Angela Liest: Kurzgeschichten aus dem Internet

In der heutigen Ausgabe: http://www.mountainstories.it/de/mountain-stories/1-0.html

“Das Bad im Moor” von Renate Wutte.

Durch das Stipendiat der Germanistik meines Schiller-Gymnasiums in Westfalen habe ich die Möglichkeit erworben anderer Leute Prosa zu kritisieren. Am heutigen Tage ist dies ein äußerst besonderer Text, gefunden auf der Internetseite “Mountain Stories”. Es ist mir eine Ehre.

In “Das Bad im Moor” geht es um eine Frau mittleren Alters, die alleine in einer kleinen Hütte am Berg Zeit verbringt und im nahe gelegenen See schwimmen geht, wo sie auf einen fremden Mann trifft und sich mit diesem unterhält.

In Fachkreisen nennen wir diese Art von Themenwahl “uninspiriert”. Dass es sich hierbei um einen verschönten Self-Insert handelt, ist kaum zu leugnen. Wir lieben eine gute Mary Sue, die ein bisschen random ist und so voller Fantasie, das man es im Kopf sich nicht ausmalen kann. Denn auf diesen Fantasieaspekt, oder sagen wir,,,, Phantasieaspekt,,, wird dringlichst hingewiesen:

“Die dunkle Kehrseite ihrer Phantasie … Sicher, sie war dankbar für diese Gabe. Eine gute Fee hatte sie ihr in die Wiege gelegt, wohl wissend, dass ihr Leben sonst nicht auszuhalten sei. Doch das Geschenk war doppelbödig und brachte auch Schatten in ihr Dasein, Traumgespinste, die scheinbar nur sie sah und welche die Konturen der Realität verzerrten.” - Renate Wutte, 2015.

Die Ich-Erzählerin ist der Haley Joel Osment der Literatur. Doch nicht nur ist sie ein Weirdo, die eine Vorstellungskraft außerhalb unsrer Vorstellungskraft hat, sondern sie kann auch noch schwimmen! Und das wie ein Fisch! Sie ist so sportlich-ausdauernd, dass sie schlussendlich gar nicht mehr weiß, wie viele Bahnen sie in diesem äußerst mysteriösen See zieht. Als sie dann wie ein Bond-Girl aus dem See steigt, glitzernd und feucht, steht dort ein Mann am Ufer - ein Hugh Grant für Arme. Hugh Grant hat nicht nur zwei Handtücher dabei, sondern auch noch das erbärmlichste “Mahl” aller Zeiten. Es ist Liebe auf den ersten Blick und wenn dies ein Roman wäre, würden die beiden Charaktere auf Seite 10 schon ein Paar sein... doch es ist ein Kurzprosameisterwerk und diese Mary Sue don’t need no man! Aber eine fromme Einsiedlerin ist sie nicht ;) ;) ;) ;) ;). Die Sexual Tension ist Real. Mary Sue hat ihren Gary Stu gefunden.

Auch findet sich ein poetologischer Aspekt in dieser Prosakunst. Wie so oft ist der Beruf des Charakters der Beruf des Autors. Autor*in. Stichwort Self-Insert.

Als Kritik zur verwendeten Sprache... die direkte Rede wirkt äußerst unnatürlich; so reden nicht einmal Studierte Hochschulprofessoren miteinander. So reden höchstens Germanisten um 1800, die in der Traumwelt Goethes gefangen sind und denen eine Pistole gegen die Schläfe gedrückt wird.

Ich gebe dieser Kurzgeschichte keinen Peter-Stamm-Literaturpreis.

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reverse-t1me · 5 months

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I have a Trolls and mcyt (empires season 1 and the life series (traffic light series my beloved) specifically) AU idea

Now called Water Under the Tree AU

Background information for the AU

Once season 1 of empires smp finished the watchers descended and turned 8 (+Xornoth so 9) of the rulers into deities with the remaining 3 passing on.

These deities after years form their own planets (eg, mcc is its own planet under Scott's rule), and these planets serve as forms of entertainment for the watchers.

The attack

After millennia of this, the watchers grow to want to control the show so they corrupt the once emporers and empresses so they can control what they produce for entertainment.

Pearl and Scott use their knowledge from their respective life series (last life and double life) with them helping their nearest companions.

This leads to Lizzie and Pearl using the double life string to connect to one another giving them a form of immunity through the ocean orb and remaining powers given by winning double life. This also combines their own domains into a new allied domain.

The watchers don't like this and attack. This attack leaves only one of Lizzie's original planets remaining. The watchers attack once again and Lizzie descends into the planet to defend it.

She uses the powers the watchers gave her and the ocean orb to seal the watchers from the world. Then, she uses the ocean orbs' powers to cleanse the world. The watchers, however, use their remaining power to strike the weakened Lizzie and turn her "into one of the creatures she chose to defy us to defend"

This results in Lizzie's form shrinking but also dissolving into water. This water rises and compacts to form an egg.

Not wanting to loose her friend Pearl uses her connection to Lizzie (via the double life string) to manipulate the plant life around her fallen friend and grow a defence. Leaving some sections of the trunk hollow so water will fall down and be around Lizzie.

The creatures of the planet Lizzie defended create tales and murals of this benevolent being.

Slowly, these are abandoned due to migration, these species dying out, etc. Only the story remains as some old fairytale, and every species has a different version.

Closer to present but still the past

The defences that Pearl made turn into a large tree which a category of trolls move into (its the pop tree!).

Once the Bergens capture the pop trolls in the pop tree the pop trolls explore the tree a bit more to look for any escape.

This leads a small team of trolls to the roots where they discover a troll egg surrounded by pink flowers and some puddles of rain water.

This leads (eventually) to Rosiepuff's family adopting the egg.

However the egg hatches after 2 generations (Rosiepuff and her children) have grown up and had their own.

(Some of the trolls theorised this was because it was left alone for however long it was down there)

The trolling that hatches is named "Branch".

Branch has both indigo-blue and pink hair, but due to the image of Brozone, he hides the pink in his hair.

After the past in trolls band together

As Branch grown up without his brothers after the argument he begins to see an "imaginary friend" who wears a dress made of leaves.

This friend disappears a day before the trollstice that takes Grandma Rosiepuff.

The culmination of losing his adoptive family, his caretaker, and his friend in the leaf dress causes Branch to go grey.

Trolls (first movie) changes

•Branch still has some vague colours but hides them from the other trolls

•Branch has found some (2) old murals and has begun to translate the old languages used to write them

•During that party, Branch is instead in the water of a river he found before moving into his bunker to dry off, then Poppy finds him

•When Creek is revealed to be the traitor Branch sees a vague figure with large eyes, a big smile and is red

Why is he so R̸̺̝̃̈́͛̎ȇ̶̩̒ ̴̖̞̌̾̾͝d̴͈͐̔

•Once regaining his true colours, there is some visible pink in his hair

Trolls World Tour Changes

•Branch has found a few small scales around his wrists, ears, and along his spine (fur hides these small scales) along with some minimal webbing around his ears and between his fingers and toes

•The pop trolls have noticed that Branch has changed slightly, and they have spoken to him about it. They just think Branch is growing used to being around other trolls after being isolated for so long

•During the dance off, Branch thinks back to brozone but also making that deal with Scott all those millenia ago

"I've made a deal with destiny"

•Throughout the movie, Branch has some vivid dreams, and he figures out some history and how this history ties in with the murals he has translated (he finds more as he travels to the different tribes)

•Slightly different design for rock zombie Branch (looks a bit more like Poppy and has more coverage with his outfit)

•After the movie Branch gets a tattoo from the rock trolls of a simplified ocean orb

•After the movie he also discovers he can breathe underwater when he goes to visit the Techno tribe to help with reconstruction

Everyone is confused, and now there is a theory that he is some kind of troll that has some techno origins

Trolls Band Together Changes

•Between movies Branch has had more vivid dreams and has translated more murals of the pink haired giant

•Is also wearing a dress to the wedding

This dress is a simpler version of the dress that he remembers wearing as "Lizzie" to "his (her) wedding"

•Goes back to the pop trolls tree before joining John Dory on the journey

Finds a smaller ocean orb and brings it with them

•Poppy tells couple of stories about their adventures to John Dory

Insert shocked and worried John Dory

•Branch accepts Bruce's name change and later tells Poppy about thinking of changing his name to something else

Poppy then prompts Branch to tell her hid new name, slight argument ensues when Branch doesn't tell Poppy

•Slight dialogue change when speaking to the clown, but this doesn't change the encounter too much

•When leaving the putt-putt village Branch falls and rips his dress (yes, he has been wearing a dress throughout this section)

Branch uses his hair and now is wearing a slightly modified dress with leggings underneath (the dress is shorter with the front section being removed)

•Once the argument happens and Branch leaves, it begins to storm (pathetic fallacy)

This moves Branches fur revealing the scales which are now bigger.

Poppy finds this out and just assumes it as another aspect of being a troll that possibly has some techno origins

•When rescuing Floyd, more of Branch's hair turns pink, leaving it as a majority pink with indigo-blue accents

•No Broppy kiss

•After the movie, this is questioned, but nobody can come up with a satisfying conclusive answer as to why it's going on.

•After the movie, Branch tells Poppy about wanting to go by "Lizzie" and Poppy asks why

Insert some plausible reason that makes sense without telling Poppy about the vivid dreams

Post Trolls Band Together

•Multi-tribe city has been established

•Nobody knows exactly what Lizzie is

•Bruce still lives with his wife Brandi, John Dory still travels, Clay has worked to create transportation between the putt-putt village and also does admin work, Floyd is currently living in the multi-tribe city and is learning about different genre's

•Lizzie has discovered that by using the ocean orb, he can grow and shrink back down

Poppy was with him during this and freaked out (positively not negatively) when this happened

•Now Lizzie is trying to figure out what she is and how the murals fit in with this

Also, the "imaginary friend" in the leaf dress returns, causing lots of old emotions to resurface, and Poppy and Lizzie learn about what Lizzie is.

The vivid dreams are revealed, and another argument ensues between Poppy and Lizzie about keeping secrets.

•Pearl warns them of the Watchers returning before dissappearing back into the forest

Lo and behold the watchers come back, and Lizzie using the ocean orb, and her hair is able to fight them off and protect her friends from the watchers

The watchers weaken Lizzie enough to take her, but Lizzie weakens them enough, so hey can't leave this world

•Adventure ensues, with Poppy leading it, trying to find Lizzie

#trolls au #branch trolls #trolls poppy #mcyt #empires ldshadowlady #empires pearl #ocean queen lizzie #empires smp season one #the watchers #the listeners #branch #haven't thought of a name for this au yet #last life #double life #water under the tree au #wutt au

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