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#but i headcanon that they're both grammar freaks
flameohotfamily · 8 months
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Hey Flameo. How do you think Mai and Zuko were as parents? I'm curious about your headcanons.
* My headcanon is that Zuko freaked out during Mai's pregnancy and Izumi's birth. Due to his trauma with Ozai and intenso fear of ending up messing jis daughter up, like Ozai messed him and Azula.
* With the help of Azula (redeemed, but still retained her characteristics in a mellowed down manner), the Gaang, Ty Lee, Ursa and Iroh. He gains the courage to start bonding with his daughter.
* Zuko is very soft and and prone to spoil her. Mai is the strict parent.
*They're less moody and have a healthy relationship.
*Mai taught Izumi how to read and write, Zuko taught her basic math, history and Art appreciation. But they ultumately decided to send her to a school with both peasants and royals.
* Druk is her protector and partner in crime.
* Azula is a tough-love aunt, she loves her niece, but won't coddle her as "pathetic Zuzu, you're being too soft."
hey, i like your hcs!!
i have so so many hcs posted about parents maiko and izumi. they are filled with grammar mistakes (because i wrote them like two years ago) and also they are nauseously cute (i don't write these things anymore lol).
i'll leave them here:
maiko and druk before izumi
some domestic fluff
mai's pregnancy, mai's pregnancy but angsty + my fic illuminated that i deeply love to this very day, pregnant mai
izumi's birth, izumi's birth but different
toddler izumi
zuko and izumi, zuko and izumi main hc
mai and izumi , mai and izumi part 2
little izumi hc
maiko family fluff
izumi & druk 1, izumi & druk 2
izumi, kya and bumi
izumi and love confessions
again, sorry for mistakes! also there are lot of warnings there so be careful <3
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quaranmine · 1 year
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7: How do you choose which POV to write from? AND. 13: what’s a common writing tip that you almost always follow? -trashcatgod
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So....I would say most of my fics are from Grian's pov just because I tend to write fanfic about him LOL. Or I use Jimmy's pov for stuff because....I also tend to write Jimmy fic. They're both defaults for me. But I have a few other povs in other works:
In "some kind of trouble is coming" it has to be from Scar's pov, because Scar is the one who needs to learn what's happening. The audience already knows what Watchers are, but he doesn't, so that's the most interesting pov for that. Similarly, I have unpublished wip that is a Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy AU, and that is from Mumbo's pov since he is loosely in the place of Arthur Dent, aka the audience stand-in who doesn't know what's happening. We get taken for a ride along with him. This is because Skyblings was a much better stand-in for Ford's character because they both have a lot of headcanon potential lol and we should learn about them via the plot. In "take (his) life" the whole point of the fic is that Grian can't be in the Southlands anymore as a red name, so it can't be written from his pov, it has to be someone who misses him (Mumbo.)
For IBW I honestly chose some povs based on how well I could write them. The fic would perhaps make a little more sense from Doc's pov in those chapters, but I was more confident/familiar with Ren, so I chose his pov instead. In the secondary povs like False, I was more confident in writing False than Cub.
13.
Hmmm. I'm having a hard time coming up with one that isn't grammatical even though I know I probably use a lot. I try to write snappy for faster scenes. I throw a lot of grammar out the window if a character is freaking out and use run-on sentences. I've already talked about my use of outlines in another ask--idk if that's a writing tip, but that's one that helps me a lot. I try to show more than tell but it comes harder to me so I'm not always sure when I'm doing one or the other.
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❛ FAMILY ❜
Headcanon.
with Neron ‘Creeper’ Vargas.
Request: Oooh yes yes yeah 😁 I show u take request 🙈 I would read something with Creeper dates a girl who already have 4/5 sons of a precedent relation. Maybe about how he create relationshion with their ? Like one love bike, another by playing football ? An the older is septic but one day he understand have Creeper for stepfather is having all Mayans for family. Sorry if it's sound to specific.
BY ANON
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Warnings: none.
Word count: about 1.3k
Aurora says: this writing hasn't been edited, you may find some grammar mistakes, I'm sorry about that!
Gif credits: to the author, I found it on Google.
Masterlist.
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Creeper couldn't believe you were alone in charge of three kids, when you moved onto his neighborhood. And he knew you didn't have a husband around because he had never seen him.
The problem was when he realized he was in love with you, with your scent, with the sweet tone of your voice and with that smile which could stop a war.
“Wait, wait! Lemme help you, mama!”
You hear a voice behind you, making you turn around from the trunk of your car full of bags. A man covered with tattoos and a helmet hanging from his forearm, is walking towards you.
“Oh, no, no. Don't worry. It's okay”. You mutter somewhat ashamed with a fleeting smirk on your lips.
“Nah, ain't nothing better to do”. He just shrugs his shoulders, grabbing three bags in every hand and greatly surprising you of his strength.
“Than—Thank you…” You just say, taking the three left, before closing your car.
Walking in silence straight to the porch, you open the door with some difficulties making you both laugh until it finally opens. Following you to the kitchen, he leaves the groceries over the counter, having one quick look but without wanting to look like a creepy stalker.
“I'm (Y/N), by the way”. You say then, raising a hand at him hoping it's enough for a formal greeting.
“Neron”. The man answers, narrowing it softly, a little bewitched by your touch.
“Can I… maybe offer you a coffee or something…?”
Whenever you two were free of responsibilities, you used to sit on your porch to share some drinks and talk about work, or about your lives in general. And only when he knew that it could be something serious, he just talked to you about what he really does, one bit at time.
After some months, more or less, hanging out, you two decided to introduce him to your girls. Two twins of six years old and a pre-teen of fourteen. You were aware that he wouldn't have any problem with Lia and Marta. But Carlota was another history.
Since Creeper has sat at the table, after helping you to settle the table, you can see the younger whispering and chuckling with that kind of gesture that they use when they want to ask something, but they're too ashamed. Narrowing your eyes, as the man does, you look at them.
“C'mon, girls, spit it out”. You say with a funny smile on your lips.
“Can we color your drawings one day?” Marta and Lia ask in unison, pointing at his bare arms.
You can't help but laugh rubbing your faces.
“Sounds like a cool plan”. Creeper nods pretty convinced.
“Fuck this shit”. From her silence, Carlota drags backwards her chair, getting up to step out of the living room.
“Hey, mama”. Neron says grabbing your left wrist, when you're about to follow her. “It's okay. Give her time”.
“I can't let her behave like that”. You grunt sitting down.
“She is fourteen, baby. We both know what her father did. And probably she thinks I want to replace him, but it's not. She will see it, okay?”
The months kept passing by, taking the next step when you decided to live together. At this point he has already introduced you to his brothers, being more kindly than you thought. At least, they didn't thought that Neron was fucking out of his mind, for getting related with a woman with three kids.
Lia and Marta were delighted having him at home, playing with them whenever he had five minutes, or cooking pancakes on Sundays. And of course, letting your girls color all his tattoos.
Carlota, by the other hand, started to be hard-nose. Always locking herself in her dorm when she was at home. And it was breaking your heart, trying to talk with her about what was bothering her, even if you already knew. But the worst part was when the principal of his highschool called you to tell you about a fight that involucred your daughter with another three girls.
“Hey, mama, I got this, okay?”
What you didn't know is that Neron was already conscious about what was happening. So he was to take care of that business.
Your daughter was sitting on a bench in the peak time of finishing classes, crying unconsolable with her hands covering her burning face. She wasn't expecting the loud buzz coming closer, raising her blurry gaze to the road. Nine motorbikes made their appearance, getting parked backwards next to the sidewalks. The whole student body with their parents and some teachers turned at them, mostly whispering about how good those nine men looked. Taking off their helmets, Neron's brothers waited for him, having some cigs, while he started to walk towards your surprised daughter.
As soon as he was able to kneel close to her, he knew by just one look who were the other girls. He didn't say anything, standing up to lead his steps to the three families with their eyes fixed on the man.
“I know that your daughters are teasing my kid about me, about my club and about what we do. So, lemme tell you something, as parents you are, the only thing you want is the happiness of them. Keep it in mind. Because next time my kid comes back home crying, I will not be this… polite”.
The girls were trembling, hiding behind their parents who were terrified too because of his words. Showing them a fake smile, Neron turned around to your daughter to make her a sign.
“I want you to say ‘sorry’ to her, and promise that you will never gonna fuck her up again”.
“Sir, yo—”.
“Shut the fuck up, man. I'm talking to your ill-bred kids”.
“We… We're so—sorry, Carlota”.
Your daughter looked at him, clinging to his arm, pouting a little and pulling him back.
“Good. Never forget to be kind”.
That night, Carlota didn't stop talking about how scared everyone was because of Creeper, totally freaking out too about when he appeared with his brothers in such cool motorbikes.
It was almost two am when your boyfriend came from the clubhouse, a little tired and needed for a cold beer. Taking off his boots at the entrance, to not be noisy, he walks straight to the kitchen to grab one from the fridge. Opening it with not much difficulty, he has a sip turning to the island in the middle of the kitchen.
“Jesus fucking christ, Carlota…” He whispers with his heart racing. “What you doin'ere?”
“I couldn't sleep”. She just says, having another spoon of ice cream.
“At least, turn on the lights… You're gonna gimme a heart attack, kid”.
She laughs low, shaking her head, before getting up from the stool. Walking towards him without saying a single word, your daughter hugs Creeper wrapping his waist with both arms.
“Thank you for today”. She mutters resting her cheek on his chest.
Your boyfriend doubts for a second, not knowing if it's real or an illusion, but it feels so good that he could help her somehow. Hugging her back, the man kisses her head, smiling like a fool. Being happy to see that she's finally accepting him in her family.
“Listen, Carlota…” He says then, pulling himself away to leave the beer over the counter. “I don't wanna replace anyone, okay? We don't have to play this dad and daughter game. I wanna be your friend, I want you to trust me and talk to me about your problems, if you have some, okay?”
“Okay”. She just says. “I'm sorry if I hurt you ever”.
“Nah, it's okay, kid. I just want you to be happy”.
“I am, Creep'”.
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bas-writes · 3 years
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Hey! I’m just passing by to thank you for the crocodile fic, and to say that I do understand your doubts, but girl believe me you’re really freaking talented at writing sfw-nsfw either m/f or m/m. Every fic you post is always gold, and to think that all the content you give is literally out of kindness and passion makes me think more and more thant we truly don’t deserve you. 1/2
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Alright, first of all I would like to state my wording might sound a bit off and harsh. I am in a real bad mental condition right now, I did my best to not let anything slip, but since my social and emotional intelligence is very low in general, I might have overlooked something regardless. If anything, please remember it's not your fault, I am just being a gremlin here.
Thank you for your kind words, especially since it's regarding a mlm text which tend to have a lesser recognition. I'm really glad you enjoyed!
I'm far from being talented though, not even speaking about being in fandom's top. I am still learning how to write and there's still a long way in front of me. I should read more books in English to improve my style and language skills - and grammar, of course. Your words tho gave me a feeling I am on a good way and I'm very thankful for that 😊
My doubts don't come from my lack of skill though (however seeing how people reacted on latest Law scenario I think I should start doubting it too...) but from the fact it's impossible for me to write accurate mlm text. I am a ciswoman, I don't know how it is to be a man, yet a gay/bi/pan man. Even if I tried to learn from gay erotica (and I plan to, considering more and more guys appear and look for mlm content), I won't cross a certain border of perception. The best I can do is to avoid fujoshi-leaning perspective, aside of course from promoting mlm blogs, if such exist (@mooshs-crack-headcanons and @skys-op-imagines are guys but they're not mlm exclusive, but, if you're looking for a male perspective they will be perfect - and they are very good writers! - but they both have closed requests right now iirc). I am aware of my limitations. Sometimes I have time to ask for beta reading. Tonight I sadly didn't.
I am too grateful to have such talented and creative and inspiring people around me 🥰 Reading their work and interacting with them truly give me power to go on with my own blog. I can't express my gratitude for being able to learn from them!
Once again, I'm sorry if my answer was weird. I don't really know how to answer feedback and, especially, compliments. But really don't worry, I am glad for receiving your message. Thank you 🥰
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