#but also everyone being picked off adds some paranoia..... shes paranoid thats an aspect of her character

[vaugarde]

hgh wanna overhaul a main element of starfall again

#vague spoilers ig but its about how asha gets stranded again #i swear ive had a lot of iterations of it bc its like. convoluted ill admit that #the result is usually the same- she gets separated from atlas and castor and quinn- but the how and what happens #is all over the place #at the beginning of this iteration her parents were forced out of the pmd dimension by [redacted] and asha hatched slightly after #so was born into the situation. then all got picked off til only she was left #then the order of who got picked off kept changing. it was either atlas or castor as the final one #and currently its atlas #but then i changed it so that they all get stranded when asha is a bit older so she knows who [redacted] is personally #and gets more time with quinn before she disappears but everyone still got picked off #and now i kinda wanna remove everyone being picked off and replace it with JUST asha getting stranded #as in [redacted] happens and asha loses all 3 at once. really going into just how much it shook her world #and adds to the mystery of where everyone went maybe? #but also everyone being picked off adds some paranoia..... shes paranoid thats an aspect of her character #and this isnt even getting into the mess that is skylar rn. skylar's backstory is a mess #and how they get there worries me bc i think itll be confusing #sometimes im tempted to just. separate asha and skylar and have skylar come in later #but bc of spoilers idk how itd work #and i love them as a trio #but everything just... feels sooo uneven rn and i kinda hate it #its why u havent heard much abt starfall itself tbh i dont like where its at rn #i might honestly have to just tear out a lot of what i have but idk where to start in making it feel good #echoed voice