#without worrying too much about my uncontrollable pace or ooc-ness or whatever

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i wrote 1k (plus eight words!) of the god complex rewrite today, so y’all get an excerpt, guest starring my favorite trope, outsider pov:

“What kind of alien is she? What does she do? Is she going to sprout a plunger and start saying Exterminate? How many people has she killed?”

The Doctor turns to stare at her, looking bemused. “Pond, what are you talking about?”

Her apparent obliviousness seems to have snapped him out of it, and for that, at least, she’s grateful.

“She’s your worst fear for a reason, right? I mean, I would’ve guessed the Daleks, or maybe my daughter - your goddaughter - getting into the stash of booze. What kind of monster is worse?”

The Doctor barks out a short burst of laughter. “Amy,” he says, fondly, and then starts laughing again, so hard that the force of it bends him over.

(they’re standing and staring at rose - amy, obviously, has no clue who she is lol)

#doctor who #eleven x rose #sb and l rambles #sb and l is writing #the 11rose god complex rewrite #i have a tentative plan for this fic inspired by how happy i am with the 13 & martha fic #i'm gonna write the first draft and just... let it be as terrible as it wants to be #without worrying too much about my uncontrollable pace or ooc-ness or whatever #and then i'm gonna do what i did with the other fic and rewrite it in an entirely separate doc #which ALWAYS increases quality #for some reason #oh and! sidenote! the doctor and river are (obviously) not together in this story! #he's her crazy uncle and that's that! #she doesn't even show up i just feel like i should make this clear lol #anyways i'm gonna sleep now #i'm still fighting off that cold and all #fic: in blackwater woods