#the grammar and flow might forever remain kinda awkward

[reitziluz]

made a big breakthrough with ch5 last night. ripped the skeleton out, straightened it up, and now i can just have fun running it through and plopping all the meat back on. only need to remember to wrangle trivial continuity things like actually making reigen first step into a puddle and only then describe his shoe full of water.

on other delightful news, managed to hit the market on my way back from counseling. got eight different rare apples. first two were already a delightful contrast of texture and flavor 10/10

#yea fic talk #i also made superb popatoes n sprouts n roasted peppers n chimken #food coma imminent #but hey i made the breakthrough writing while half asleep so #this could end up being productive lmao #me n a friend who is also secondary english speaker also lost our minds last night #trying to analyze a possibly fire line that came to me #the grammar and flow might forever remain kinda awkward #because the punch of 'the rot in him' will not let me know peace