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[evansbby]

Bestie we need to know what was the change you said you made at the end

poyt 5 ending spoilers below!!!

Only click read more if you’ve read poyt 5!!

Basically she would have a complication/difficulty during birth which would make her unable to carry more children, so she’d just have Rosie and that would be their only child. This was something I had planned to do for ages (like months and months) bc Rosie is kinda meant to mirror omega herself since she looks exactly like her, and omega is an only child too etc etc.

And then it would also play into omega being insecure, feeling inadequate and thinking Steve would leave her bc she only could give him one child and he always said he wanted like 5 or 6. OF COURSE Steve would reassure her that he would never leave her, and he wouldn’t obviously as we know by the end of poyt 5 he’s in love with her whether she gave him 10 kids or 0 kids. But yeah, it would be a huge point of insecurity for her which would be another thing she’d have to overcome.

I decided not to go down this route in the end bc it would’ve been very depressing for omega and I didn’t want her to feel EVEN MORE insecure than she already was. (Not to say this is anything to be ashamed or insecure about, but as we know omega’s character, we know she would’ve been majorly insecure about this) Like, all her problems were getting better towards the end and she was working on herself and if I had added this in, then that would’ve maybe not been the best way to end things.

I mean, it IS realistic as this happens a lot IRL and it’s quite sad and it’s also a very delicate matter which I would’ve addressed with sensitivity but yeah, in the end I decided not to go through with that. By the end of the fic, I just wanted omega to feel like she was happy and on her way to conquering her insecurities, and if I had added this in then it would’ve made that quite a bit more harder for her.

I also know a lot of you want to see poyt!family drabbles in the future with them having a lot of babies and I want to write that for you guys.

#MAJOR SPOILERSSS BESTIES #anon #poyt ask #poyt 5 ask #poyt

[evansbby]

the way that Steve's mom was absolutely shitting on his haircut actually had me laughing out loud 😭😭

she was NOT a fan bahahahahah

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[evansbby]

Hi girlie it's hopped off the shower girl after seeing the poyt 5 notif❤️❤️ FIRST OFF I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THAT WOW. NEVER HAVE I READ A FIC IN SUCH URGENCY. You just happened to update during one of my morning classes and I swear I did gymnastics just so be able to read that shit😭 I finished the quiz quicker than everyone and passed early so I could run off to read it. And OH MY GOD. Words can't describe how much I loved this fic. During the first scene w peter and omega, I could barely hold my shit. The fact that omega told him that she wanted to stay w Steve🥹🥹 and honestly I felt a little bad for peter but when he kissed her???? Oh hell nah. And when Steve arrived all fucking furious w veins popping out of his forehead and all of that??? God, I was so relieved. I was a little scared when he started beating up Peter because I think that was the first time I really saw him go blind with rage (except the last time he beat up Peter on pt 2 ig). But I loved, loved, loved, LOVED how he immediately stopped and held himself back after hearing Omegas words, after hearing she won't forgive him if he continues. I was so touched by his character development because in the past he never even listened to her. It really showed that he was willing to change for her and it broke my heart seeing him break down in the car after hearing Peters words (which were true. He deserved to hear them even if he is trying to get better. He was the biggest piece of shit to omega for no damn reason and made her life hell) and omega scenting him in hopes to calm him down because that's what calmed her down🥹🥹 and it actually working. I feel like that scene kinda humanizes him for me.

During their drive to her omegas childhood home, I literally felt awkward with them in the car and the atmosphere just felt so new to mee. I felt like I was seeing a different side of both the characters I loved that I've never seen before, especially with Steve trying to be more light hearted and gentle with her. We really see Steve's insecure side too and how much he really cares when omega answers his question if she still loved peter and his relief when she says no. I also adore omega for learning to stand her ground and setting boundaries like THATS MY BABYGIRL (even if she's me). That's why it broke me when she got to her childhood home and realized that no one was home, that her mom has possibly left but she couldn't even fathom that idea so she just denied it and made herself believe that her mom was just working another job and she's just coming home late and with Steve being so concerned but he gave in and decided to wait an hour for her. It was so sweet yet heartbreaking when he decided to go through her childhood stuff, it was adorable that he kept the pictures of her in his pocket and lightheartedly started reading the journal of his baby omega but the moment he got to the part where her mom's boyfriends were staring at her. Like he finally found out the reason why she always wears the hoodies he hates so much and I really wonder how he felt then and I hope he feels like shit. Seeing omegas relationship with her mom honestly hit home for me. I kinda have a similar mom but she's more present in my life. She deserves so much better than just a mom that leaves her for her boyfriends. and when I found out that she just wrote a note for omega WHAT A BITCH. Seeing her break down like that in her childhood home felt like her lowest point in the series (besides the tub scene) with the only difference that Steve was actually giving her love and hope. I just couldn't get over when Steve said "I'll hire the best investigator to find her" and "FUCK THEM BOTH, I WANT YOU." finally!!!! I was rooting for them so bad. Steve's desperate response when omega said she wanted to die was so satisfying to me. Mans was so scared that he changed his entire personality. He promised her that he'll change for her and their baby🥹🥹 that's the sweetest shit I've ever heard.

And ugh my thoughts are so jumbled up rn but there was this one scene I loved when omega saw Steve blushing after he called her cute. Ahhhhhhhhh. That's what I've wanted from him from the start. Why couldn't he just be a gentleman and charm omega???? He's such an asshole.

STEVES MOMMY IS MY FAV CHARACTER. I love her. She's omegas first mother figure and friend. I was a bit scared of how the parents meeting would go but I knew I had nothing to fear the moment she was introduced. She's just such a strong and motherly role figure that omega always needed. She's just, ugh. I adore the fact that she's so understanding towards her and treats her like her own daughter. We also find out that omega was the first girl that Steve brought home!! But when Steve arrives and her mom immediately gasps and comments on his shaved head. Steve is just such a mommy's boy, I've never seen him act like that. You mean to tell me that that asshole from 4 fics ago was this?? Their little banter and Steve's worry for his mom showing and how he's afraid to visit her because he's afraid to see what cancer has done to her. And Steve's mom trying to act strong for Steve😭 I was bawling. It just hurt so much. We just saw so much domestic omega and Steve during their entire stay. It just felt so light like I wasn't stressing out every second.

Also the sex in the shower?? With Steve being a menace and talking to omegas coochie😺😺 like okay. I almost forgot he was a fucking freak. He was sooo butthurt when omega couldn't say I love u back and I kinda hated him for a bit when he left her with her thoughts, knowing just how broken she was and she thought that he was actually leaving her but we know that he can't do that. The man can't live with her. and when he finally came back to comfort omega, at least he was self aware enough to know that he thinks he doesn't deserve her but that he'll never let her go. Every little bit of him just apologizing and genuinely changing for her, little by little to be better for her and be the man she deserves just fills me with so much joy. I never thought we'd get here.

Both of them visiting the doctor's office and knowing that everything would be fine. They were both so anxious and nervous but they're so happy to have their baby and each other🥹🥹 omegas fears of being her mom finally coming down after she sees her baby and promises that she'll never leave her. Omegas the mom we all deserve fr.

One of my favorite scenes was... STEVE BEATING BUCKYS ASS THAT BITCH DESERVED. I WISH I COULD'VE KICKED HIS NUTSACKS TOO. I knew he was a fucking creep and I was Bucky's biggest hater from DAY 1. You had it coming bitch!!!!! And thank God for omega for standing up to that miserable bitch. Like yeah! He's just an insecure piece of shit. "He always gets better cars blah blah blah" bro?? I wanted to slap him for every word he said. I was waiting for this bitch to get beat up. FUCK YOU BUCKY. Thank fuck for Steve beating him up.

Aside from all of that, I was just living for the tenderness in the last parts. They're finally happy and content being with each other, with Steve finally treating her like a person and making her feel the love she so deserved. I actually appreciate that he did a proper engagement and didn't just leave it at the sweaty ass locker room. His entire speechhhhh. And omega finally marking him. She trusted him enough🥹It just felt so well earned to me. Like he didn't change overnight, he didn't suddenly become a new person. It happened gradually, just like how it does in real life. It felt bittersweet to know that one of my favorite fics of all time is ending but I'm glad that it's ending on a good note with baby rosie (cutest baby ever), mama omega, and daddy Steve. I'm definitely rooting for them and I'm sure omega will overcome her darkness one day one step at a time.

Thank you for writing this masterpiece of a fic. To this day, this is the most touching piece of literary work that I've ever read and I never really imagined that I would say that about a fanfic. But this was literally life changing for me. And there were so many scenes that just hit home for me especially with omega struggling with her self esteem and her relationship with her mom. This was the only time I was really on the tip of my toes waiting for it to be published and following through. I loved interacting with Steve and I loved interacting with YOU. You're the one who made this entire thing possible. Thank you so much. I know it must've been tiring to keep the hype going and having the motivation to write. I know cause I'm a writer too and I know just how difficult it is. Thank you for diligently reading all the asks too. I feel like no heartfelt message goes unnoticed by you and it really gives me the courage to give more feedback to my fav fics because I was honestly kinda nervous beforehand. I hope you take a good rest because damn. 37.4k? I'd die before I wrote that much. and I'm looking forward to your future works and I know I'll eat all of them up.

Thank you for all your hard work ❤️❤️❤️!!!

SHOWER GIRL YOU ARE LITERALLY ICONIC AND ILY! And the fact that you sent another long ask after this one??? With more feedback??? GIRL!!!!! 🥹🥹🥹🥹 (I’ll answer that one too, and ofc will tag you as 🚿 anon hehe)

So you’re actually one of the first people to comment on how ew it was when Peter kissed her! It just gave off weird vibes, like it was a competition to him and he was losing to Steve and so he kissed her. Idk…. When I wrote it that’s I intended it to be, like that kiss did not have pure intentions. Maybe it was desperate which is understandable but still… nope 👎🏼

Ahhh I love how you caught on to the awkward vibes in the car! In a way, they were starting fresh in their relationship. Before this, it was more about lust and sex but now… they’ve opened up to each other and Steve respects her a bit more and actually treats her like a person… so ofc it’s awkward at first! He doesn’t know how to act! Neither does she 😭😭😭 but they try their best! It was one of my fav scenes to write.

ALSO YES! After omega’s breakdown, Steve was literally so scared of losing her that hE CHANGED HIS WHOLE PERSONALITY like you put it perfectly he literally made it his main objective to change his personality to become a better alpha so he could make her happy again 🥹🥹🥺🥺 UGH PLS

Shower anon, I really really appreciate this review. Like you don’t even understand. I feel like you understood exactly what I was trying to convey and I love that you commented on almost every single part 🥹🥹 it seriously means the most to me. 💖💖💖

ily 🚿🚿🚿🚿

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[evansbby]

Steve was such a daddy in the last chapter. Like finally this man stepped up as a boyfriend and an alpha.

It took him a while to get there. Some tantrums, some panic attacks, storming out, breaking down, punching a few of his enemies…

But then he was such a cute daddy to his two girls at the end 🥰🥰🥰🥰

#anon #poyt ask #poyt 5 ask

[evansbby]

BESTIE IM SOOSOSOSOSOS HAPPY POYT IS OUT but idk i couldn’t shake the feeling that i was reading a different fic, everyone was super OOC like omega being more brazen and yelling, i always imagined omega as more of the silent type and homegirl was BOLD, steve was just soo different..he was kinda giving manchild and pathetic and just different and i mean poyt!steve is a MANCHILD but idk they just didnt hit the same. It was the ending i expected and was glad that omega got her happy ending but i just wanted angst honestly. I expected peter to take her away and steve just like find them somehow, idk it felt like i was reading a different story, were you perhaps influenced by other characters because they felt a bit off…Anyway it was long and really happy 5 is out! SO SAD TO SEE POYT COMING TO AN END😭 AAH I MISS IT ALREADY, i feel like poyt 3 was like my fav chapter of the whole series, it just slapped and you’re a fantastic writer and i hope this message didn’t offend you in anyway! I just wanted to tell you my opinion, I CHECKED UR ACC EVERY SINGLE DAY FOR A POYT UPDATE(not joking 100% serious)

Oof. So when I first read this comment about a week ago, I was pretty upset and hurt by it. Again, I feel like it is very tactless to say this to someone who spent so long writing something and was so nervous about it being posted.

But okay, let’s get into it then…

1) you felt like it was out of character that omega was being “bold” by being brazen and yelling bc you imagined her as more of the silent type. Okay. So you just wanted to read almost 40k words of her being shy and stuttering and having absolutely no growth while the worst things in life happened to her and everyone just walked all over her? You wanted absolutely no character growth? You wanted her to just remain quiet and docile and never be comfortable. You didn’t want her to stand up for herself when this madman Bucky is about to SA her? You wanted her to remain all bashful and shy and quiet and not show any emotion when she found out her mother left her? Okay then… Look, I’m a very quiet person but sometimes when I’m pushed so far, I WILL react. I think it’s extremely weird of you to think someone would just remain shy and docile forever when such terrible things are happening to her. It’s like… what exactly did you want to read??? You didn’t want her to react to anything?? All that being said, I feel like she still WAS shy in the moments that weren’t her mom leaving or the confrontation with Bucky. Like she literally still is shy, it’s only when she’s being pushed to the limit that she reacts like almost anyone else in her position would. Do you think shy people don’t yell? I’m really confused…. Because omega has lashed out in the other parts too. In POYT 4, and POYT 3 and even in POYT 2. So… idec what you mean by that being OOC.

2) Steve being a “manchild” Girl… idk WHAT fic you were reading before POYT 5 bc Steve has ALWAYS given manchild vibes. Like always. But I think I know what you mean. It seems like you didn’t like that big strong tough alpha Steve was acting “pathetic” and having panic attacks. Because God forbid someone make their characters react different to different things and God forbid someone make their characters multi-faceted, right? I’m sorry it “didn’t hit the same” for you, but I don’t know what you thought you’d achieve by telling me this. I’m proud of how i characterised Steve, and many have told me his progression was realistic and the panic attack made sense. Steve has always been all over the place with his emotions, ever since POYT 4.

3) i literally cannot believe how you’ve actually sent me this and I will not be gaslighted by anyone chiming in being like “omg that anon didn’t mean to be rude” bc idec. This WAS rude. You’re complaining because the fic “didn’t hit the same” and you didn’t get what you were expecting. Fair enough, feel that way all you want. But I wrote this fucking behemoth of a fic for free, and I don’t need to see comments like this. Idec if you sprinkled in a few compliments at the end bc this was the most backhanded thing I’ve ever read. To the point where it’s almost laughable bc either you meant to be rude and backhanded, or you’re just not self aware enough.

“I expected Peter to take her away” okay? Do you want me to apologise for not writing the plot the way YOU wanted it to go? Bffr. Anyone who knows me knows that I am not a fan of cliche stuff like that, I never intended for him to take her away. “I just wanted angst” There was angst. It was very angsty. If you want a more angsty fic, write one yourself.

“Poyt 3 was my fav, it just slapped” this is the most backhanded thing ever 😂😂😂😂 it’s like you didn’t want any progression, any resolution. WHICH AGAIN, that’s fine if that’s what you’re into! But write it yourself jfc.

I just want to ask you this. If you had written a 37k fic over the course of more than six months FOR FREE and then nervously posted it, only to get a backhanded message like this one… how would that feel? I mean it’s one thing if I was a paid author, then you can criticise me all you fucking want bc at least you’re paying me to read my shit.

But to read it and come back telling me the characters felt off, that you felt like you were reading a different story, etc etc. It is not nice. I remember reading this message a week ago and I literally burst into tears bc I was so sensitive. I wish you’d sent this not through anon so I could keep note of who you are and maybe block you or keep you away from my writing bc honestly? I don’t want you even reading it. But oh well.

And I know many of you will read this and say I’m overreacting but I don’t care. This is me being truthful. This wasn’t nice. Goodbye and please unfollow me.

#anon #poyt ask #poyt 5 ask #poyt 5 spoiler

[evansbby]

omg sorry how could i forget my actual favourite part WHEN SHE MARKED HIM BACK!!!

i was like “YES OMEGA, MARK YOUR MAN!!”

When she asked him if it hurt 🥺🥺🥺🥺

SHE IS SO CUTE I CANNOT

#she was so proud of marking him and seeing her mark on his neck sksjsjsjsj #poyt ask #poyt 5 spoiler #poyt 5 ask

[evansbby]

ok …INCLUDES SPOILERS

It was amazingly detailed! Like insane the thought and character development that was put into each lil plot twist was great! Its fuck omega’s mother forever tho. Like poor baby has already went through enough but im glad steve is basically a softie now and was there for her 🥹 (a marshmallow soft daddy and he will never be able to deny it 💀) i really loved his parents and how sweet his mom is. I thought his dad would be super harsh on him or something and thats why he (steve)was fucked up but nah he just wants attention or something. I love LOVE the fact that he’s a girl dad and rosie is the sweetest name EVER. kind of out of order but i like how peter and omega’s relationship turned out, sweet and realistic imo. Glad bucky finally got his ass beat fr. Idk if you’ll decide to do mini fics about them again but i just want a glimpse into their future, housewife omega and husband daddy steve where he comes home and just fucks the living shit out of her because she’s a good housewife and is pregnant with his twins 😭 its my dream life but with ari

Anyways thanks for putting the work in and sharing with us🤍

Thank you so much for this feedback bestie!!! I’m so happy you enjoyed it!

So I think Steve’s dad definitely WAS hard on him growing up, because he wanted Steve to be a tough alpha. But Steve is also a spoilt rich kid which is why he’s an asshole jerk at the beginning of the fic haha.

I will definitely be writing some more domestic stomega drabbles!!! I have so many planned in my head! Their wedding, their honeymoon, omega being pregnant with Rosie, omega giving birth, and so on!!!

POYT WILL LIVE FOREVER!!!

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[evansbby]

My mind kept racing and pacing for the half hour i ran through trying to get dressed and actually make it to work cause i woke up at 5am, thinking i’d just “start” reading and maybe finish after work, 4 hours later, i’ve still no finished and i am for the first time in my life actually SHOOKETH!

I have so much i wanna say! I feel like this is where i can put my useless lit degree to use, to better appreciate, devour and lose my fucking mind over what i believe to be one of the greatest pieces of fiction of our times.

Yes. I said what i said and i fucking meant it.

Please pardon my French but when i pressed “keep reading” on a fic about an assholish alpha jog who can only think with his enormous dong, i wasn’t expecting to have to hold my tears three fucking times reading through family traumas, the difficulties to overcome them, the devastating anguish of abandonment issues, personal growth that felt near impossible a chapter or two ago and so on and so fucking forth.

I don’t want to go back and read cause if i do, then it’ll end and i don’t it want to.

I love you. I love your incomparable talent. And you WILL hear from my lawyer soon for all this personal damage you have caused ❤️

UGHHH ILY SM and i am so sorry for this super late reply!!

i honestly do not deserve this praise like the way you talk about my story makes mE FEEL SO SPECIAL AHHHHHH

and honestly omfg you're so right in the sense that so many people must've clicked on poyt like "ok asshole alpha steve smut fic let's go* and then they got sucked into a web of family trauma and abandonment issues AHHHHH IDEK WHAT IS WRONG WITH MY BRAIN like how i turned what was meant to be just a sexy little oneshot into whatever it is now sklfnslak but i am proud of it and it makes me happy that you like it, i value your opinion so much!! and the way you're so vocal with your praises really makes me feel all warm inside, so thank you!!!

#whoselifeisitanywho #poyt ask #poyt 5 ask

[evansbby]

my favorite part about poyt 5 was probably seeing Steves character development and seeing him actively trying to be better, like when he stops hurting peter or doesn't punish omega for talking back.

the one thing that i didn't 100% like was Buckys r4p3 attempt, it made sense but given everything that has happened to omega already adding sexual 4ssult to the list is A LOT. I guess I would've preferred if Steve walked in earlier but omegas and Buckys conversation was necessary so idk

Apart from that I think it was amazing, and after a year and a half of writing this you should have a well deserved break ❤️‍🩹

Girl it’s a DARK story. Non-con and dubcon are literally in the warnings. That is what non-con is and if you are not comfortably reading that then you maybe shouldn’t be reading this story. ESPECIALLY poyt is like very heavy when it comes to stuff like that.

Also… Steve did the same thing to her at the start. Like the scene in part 1 was dubcon bordering noncon, but the sex scene at the end of poyt 2 was like… super noncon… so like… this has always been something that’s been there… and idk what you want me to say or what you thought you’d achieve sending this… did you expect me to be like “damn I’m sorry I wrote that let me go erase it real quick” ?? 😂😭😭

Also when I wrote the scene with Bucky, I kind of wanted to highlight how ridiculous it was and how ridiculous omega found it to be, despite being scared and overpowered. It was like… she’s already been through hell and back so what could this privileged asshole really do to her?? With Steve not far from her dorm room anyways?? I also wanted to show how well she fought him off and held her own against him.

Anyways thank you bestie I’m happy you enjoyed the other parts of the fic 💖💖

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[evansbby]

Heyy ok so its been a week since I read POYT 5 but im still thinking about it!!

I really didn't expect for omega's mom to leave her, I felt so sorry for her when she was having flashbacks to the bullying Steve and his friends did to her. I feel like them bullying her for her financial situation was less focused on than the slut shaming, even though it could be arguably just as horrible. It's clear that she's still troubled by the extensive bullying she endured and the fact she was so ashamed of her house and finances was gut wrenching .

Omega's mental breakdown was really hard to read (I was tearing up), and when she told Steve that she wanted to die, I really felt that. Its like the build up of all those years of suffering and abandonment manifested themselves and was coming out uncontrollably. It was a super raw and vulnerable moment between omega and Steve.

can i also say how much I love Sarah and how she can admit that she fucked up a little in raising Steve to be so overbearing?? It's hard for a mother to own up to that. She was definitely the motherly figure omega desperately needed and it was so sweet to read.

Shower scene was also very intimate and I enjoyed it, especially at the fact that Omega was not ready to say 'I love you'. Steve owning up to it (after being momentarily angry) ultimately being his fault for treating her that way really highlighted his character development and self-consciousness.

I had a lot of parts that I loved, but the epilogue was literally everything it should've been and absolutely perfect. I also LOVED when Sam apologised again and gave omega a hug (ft Steve and his bombastic side eye).

Im happy omega had a little girl that looked just like her, I think it was cathartic for her to see how innocent and pure the little baby is, and how it was never, ever her fault that her dad, and mom, left her.

All in all, AMAZING

Hey! Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Excuse my lack of emojis bc I am on my laptop!!

Yess, omega did feel self-conscious about her childhood house in front of Steve. Only because she's been so ruthlessly bullied by and surrounded by all these rich, privileged people that a part of her just braced herself for the worst instinctively.

And yep, I wanted the part where omega says that she wants to die to be super hard-hitting so i'm glad that it was for you! for someone to be pushed SO far that they actually verbalise wanting to die is just... very raw, very sad and that's what i wanted to capture. And that's what catalyses Steve's sudden desperation, bc he can't lose her!!

Also i want to add that i don't think Steve's mom "fucked up" in raising Steve, like that's not exactly what i intended to convey. She blames herself for how he turned out bc of course she does, she's his mum. But honestly, it's Steve's dad, as the alpha and head of the family, who took over and she couldn't really go against his word bc she's an omega after all and their family dynamic IS quite traditional at the end of the day! I'm sure she tried! Steve takes after his father in a lot of ways, including being bossy and overbearing. (Although i did also mention that Steve's dad has mellowed out now so he isn't THAT much like that anymore)

and YESSS, her having a baby that looked exactly like her was so cathartic for her. and 10000% i love how you put it, it was never her fault that her mom and dad left her :')

THANK YOU BESTIE

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[evansbby]

I never expected to hate Bucky in any fic lmao but you managed to make me hate his guts and actually celebrate Steve beating him up 😂

I would've loved to know more about his relationship with Steve and his feelings towards omega, but that's just me being greedy, I loved his ending, I love that omega finally stood up for herself and fought to the nail.

i feel like i should've stressed on bucky and steve's friendship a lot more in the first few parts but i can't go back and change it now, although if i did do that, then that's something i would change!!! thank you!

#anon #poyt ask #poyt 5 ask

[evansbby]

it's shower girl anon again bestie, you're probably getting tired of me at this point💀💀 but I'm so glad you asked what our fav parts were cause I ended up missing some scenes in my previous message that I really wanted to add but I didn't know how without spamming you!!

One of the cutest details was that in the end, we learned that Steve patched up Steve Junior himself and he didn't get "some guy" to fix it up🙄🙄 I absolutely love the thought of Steve, being the manly alpha he is probably spending hours patching up Steve Junior just for omega, like pricking his arm w the needle and cursing when he fucks up. I imagine him getting so frustrated and abusing Steve Jr by throwing him on the wall💀💀

Also loved omegas decision to have a closed off wedding, very private, only with Steve's mom and dad because yeah I also wouldn't invite anyone else after what they put me through😭😭. I was so touched by the part where Steve's dad walked omega down the aisle🥹🥹 I would've loved to see how the wedding day was, the dress omega wore, how nervous she was and I definitely wanna know Steve's perspective. Knowing him, he was probably starstruck the moment she walked down the aisle. And I wonder if he actually cried?????? Like just seeing her??? And also the sex after😏😏 but I'll leave that all to my imagination.

Speaking of Steve's daddy, he's so much like him. I love the way he gets all heart eyed when he sees his wife and how he wanted to take time off when he found out about her cancer (which makes me super emotional cause she's definitely one of my fav characters now) I love love LOVE their romance. And the scene where Steve's dad comes back home and they go to their room and sees them dancing together and she just stops and stares because she's never seen anything like that before🥹

I like how she was also able to resolve things with Peter and how even after everything, he still sent her that congratulations letter to omega after finding out that she was getting married. Like that just shows how much he cared about her.

I'm just so proud of omega for being able to overcome everything and the progress she's making. It's realistic how it's actually taking time for her to heal and it's not just a one time thing where it gets resolved and suddenly she's fine. I felt for her when she woke up and she found Steve and their baby gone only to find him cradling Rosie🥹🥹 he wanted to let her sleep in. God, that nearly brought me to tears!!!!! Steve is such a girl dad. What surprised me the most was Steve suddenly dropping words of wisdom about Rosie like huh??? Sir?? When did you become a philosopher? But it just shows how much he's grown and how much they've grown as a couple.

The ending was just so satisfying to me.

That's all I can think of for now but I love them both sooo much and I loved every single detail of the story I swear. I think I memorized all the scenes at this point❤️

-🚿🚿 anon

SHOWER ANON BBY I LOVE YOU SM FR

bESTIE YES!! I can totally imagine Steve stitching up Steve Jr but he's not that skilled at it bc his mom taught him when he was really young, and his fingers are too big and the needle is too small and it's so difficult to get the thread through the eye of the needle and he keeps pricking himself and Steve Jr's cotton keeps spilling out and Steve gets annoyed and throws Steve Jr against the wall and Jr stares at him with cold blue eyes and Steve's like "fuck, sorry." before he realises he's talking to an inanimate object aksdklgnsl

YAY you mentioned the wedding!! I would love to write a stomega wedding day drabble, from alternating POVs both steve and omega!!! bc it's their special day! and yes, poor omega was still so insecure about the fact that she'd have no one at the wedding and how Steve's friends were never her friends, and so she didn't want anyone there. But i think it's good that she actually VOICED this to Steve instead of being silent and letting him run the wedding day his way and then not being happy on the day!!

ughh yes and Steve's dad! bestie i love how you're mentioning everything from the last few scenes bc those were my favs!! I purposely tried to keep Steve's dad as a kind of mysterious character whom we still don't know that much about. Like he brought up Steve in a strict way to be a very manly alpha BUTTT the way he is with his wife??? totally a softie! kinda like how Steve now is with omega *puppy eyes emoji with tears but i cannot bc i am on my laptop*

and lmfao STEVE BEING A PHILOSOPHER AT THE END bahahah he's a DAD now bestie, he needs to come in with the words of wisdom every now and then. hehehe

THANK YOU SO SO MUCH SHOWER ANON BESTIE ILY

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[evansbby]

Bucky concerning omega in her door was terrifying! I actually thought he would have succeeded 😭 so happy Steve came back in time!

Not Bucky thinking he’d got rid of Steve by simply slashing his tires 😭😭😭😭

He really didn’t think his plan through fr 😭

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[evansbby]

IM SO HAPPY OMEGA LIKE DIFNT FALL OUT WITH PETER AND THEY HAD CLOSURE 🥹🥹

That was literally the best fic I've ever read.. the character development from Steve just warmed my little heart ahhhhhhh

the bucky scene, tho literally had me so mad, but the way omega STOOD UP FOR HERSELFF I was literally like you go girl, I'm out here acting like a proud mama 🥺

you put so much effort into this and I hope your proud of yourself!!! undeniably the BEST writer in this fandom (imo) now u need some well needed rest after that amazingness 😌💗

AHHHH thank you bestie💖💖

I struggled with choosing what ending to give Peter and omega. But I knew that she couldn’t have the best of both worlds… I knew that she couldn’t be with Steve and have Peter as her bff at the same time… it’s just not fair on Peter and I think omega knew that. I think the moment omega said “I want to stay with Steve” she made her decision and both her and Peter knew that meant their friendship would never be the same again.

Omega standing up to Bucky was liberating to write! Although tbh she’s always stood up to Bucky but this time she just wouldn’t back down! I love that for her!

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[evansbby]

I'm 2 days late bestie but my favorite part was Steve FINALLY seeing how Bucky wanted his omega 😐

And bucky has the audacity to make omega look like a slut that throws herself at him 😤 (imo he's more delulu than stevie)

Jealousy ain't a good look buckaroo, you got what you deserve 😘🤌🏼🖕🏼

These alphas all have the same script whenever they wanna put the blame on anyone “she’s a slut1!2!2!” Like stfu Bucky bffr 😭😭😭 like her cardigan was ripped I mean who did he think he was fooling 😭😭

Then again Steve has been so delulu for this whole fanfic that if ANYONE would’ve been persuaded by that act, it would’ve been Steve😭😭😭😭

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[evansbby]

favorite part of POYT was that distinguishable switch when steve finally believes omega when bucky comes in and steve clearly has the choice to choose either of them and he FINALLY puts his macho alpha man ego aside and picks omega. that is absolutely character development and also a big development in their relationship. but like.. y’all… steve overcoming an alpha instinct to just believe his best friend, ANOTHER ALPHA, over omega??? steve absolutely has his faults but the inner strength it has to take for him to push that aside is crazy and not at all something early poyt!steve would’ve done. these characters are so beautifully developed and i would talk about it all day if i could.

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

Although honestly I feel like it wasn’t even a hard decision at the end for Steve. He knew he was going to believe omega no matter what. Even if she hadn’t said anything to explain herself. He trusts her, they had that shift in their relationship. Of course you’re right, Bucky was his bff for so long so there could’ve been that 1% doubt or disbelief in his head but in the end, omega is the love of his life and his mate so ofc he believed her🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹

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