#how does Rebecca go from ‘should I sell the club’ to ‘I sold half the club’ in a matter of days

[jamiesfootball]

I have loved all the comments I’ve gotten on my post season three fic (like you don’t even know how much I have reread all of those bad boys they give me oxygen), but by far one of the most gratifying ones I’ve gotten has been:

“you made that last episode seem so much more reasonable”

THAT WAS THE GOAL

#laughing crying thank you so much whoever you are #achievement unlocked #this was my AGONY #the amount of notes I made the rewrites the editing #most of them centered around the question ‘but is this consistent?’ #‘does it flow?’ #‘have I given the characters a satisfying amount of internal consistency linking the events as they happen to the growth they have made?’ #‘DOES IT ALL MAKE SENSE YET’ #‘Roy relapsed’ even relapses have a progression. they tend to happen for a reason #also #why is there a cut on Roy’s head the night of their final practice but not even a scratch on game day?! #how does Rebecca go from ‘should I sell the club’ to ‘I sold half the club’ in a matter of days #why does Roy say ‘we have city on Saturday’ when the match is in fact the day after next #anyways #I have been biting my tongue the entire time I spent writing that chapter and now that I don’t have to anymore? #I’m definitely definitely gonna be talking about it #fic: oh god you’re gonna get it (you have not been given love) #self indulgent blogging about my own fic