#Ajhdnfj I feel like I used to be better at writing ‘bad’ characters

[lieutenant-amuel]

I’m editing the old chapters of WBTL again. The fourth chapter, and oh my goodness Ángel is so insensitive, it’s insane.

#Personal #Was Born To Lead #He’s not letting me cheat 👍🏻 #We have enough time to make cribs 👍🏻 #I offended you but you know you offended me too 👍🏻 #He’s (Señor Bravo) so awful 👍🏻 #And if we’re being honest Ángel is still insensitive :’D #And I sure thing already edited the first three chapters too and once again Roberto is the worst <3 #Ajhdnfj I feel like I used to be better at writing ‘bad’ characters #Now they all are too wise and thoughtful ajjdkf #I can’t believe I legit named Ángel Ángel because of that angelic personality pun and now I realize it’s actually extremely bad #and just makes zero sense #Anyway I’m editing again because first I have no energy to write the new chapter #second I need to edit punctuation marks because I formatted dialogues wrong all that time #so yeah I’m just peacefully changing points to commas and vice versa #and third I certainly need to make some stylistic changes because those horrible he feels upset fill my heart with sorrow #And random but Señor Bravo calling his students Señor/Señorita also makes zero sense? #I just really don’t know whether it’s appropriate to do it in Hispanic countries? #I mean I’m sure I heard it in some American movies that the teachers call their students Mister and Missis #but Señor Núñez and Señorita Aakster when referred to little kids sounds odd to me #Although Señor Bravo basically was the only one who referred to them like that so maybe it could be explained by his age #but I already changed it to their names it sounds more natural to me so I won’t think about it anymore #Hm but you know in my uni my teachers call us ‘colleagues’ #which also sounds odd aihdkf #What is the name of our new history teacher? #Valerio Álvarez #<3