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Fiction writers: it's ok to pull back the narrative lens and let go of play-by-play details in a scene. (Only rely on sensory details in moments that have narrative significance.) Get more comfortable summarizing and manipulating time. Don't plod through time. Get in front of it.

– Heidi Pitlor

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okay bitch

#‘it hunts with’ line needs changing. somethings off with it #but otherwise. aight #storm writes

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hello???? HELLO???

god going through my notes is fucking harrowing

#storm writes

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god going through my notes is fucking harrowing

#storm.txt

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As a general rec for anyone interested in writing battles or war in a science/fantasy setting and hunting for a sense of verisimilitude, A Collection of Unmitigated Pedantry is that most rare of creatures: a military history blog that isn't a Neo Nazi.

If you don't picture yourself as a military history person but you wanna answer basic questions like "so what the fuck were knights even doing," give it a shot.

#.ref

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Sometimes I think abt writing

That's it, that's the post.

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“i will never be able to write like them :(” and neither should you? you are your own special self and that’s what you should be recognized for

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Archery information for writers that no one asked for but probably some of you need and I like talking about archery, so here it is.

when you put an arrow on the string, the verb is called “nocking” i.e. eyes glued on the target, he nocked the arrow

also the part of the arrow that gets put onto the string is called the nock. depending on the type of arrow this can be a piece of plastic glued into the arrow, or with wood or bamboo arrows it can be carved into the shaft of the arrow itself

you do not close an eye when aiming or shooting; you see better with both eyes open.

everyone has a dominant eye that more naturally your brain focuses with. that determines whether you are right or left handed when shooting, and doesn’t necessarily correlate to whether the person is right or left handed in anything else

so if you’re writing a character who has difficulty seeing out of one eye, take that into account when they are shooting

if they are right eye dominant, they hold the bow with their left hand and draw the string with their right. if they are left eye dominant, they hold the bow with their right hand and draw the string with their left

if they shoot left, the quiver sits on their left side/hip/thigh. shoot right - right side quiver.

there are several different ways to draw, if you are writing something historical or in a specific region, then do research on that style of archery. but for a generic place to start that is a more universal way of drawing a bow, here are some things to include

the chin stays down. raising your chin will fuck up your aim

the pointer finger on your draw hand rests on the side of your chin/jaw, and the string of the bow will touch the tip of the archer’s nose

weight is on the balls of your feet, leaning slightly forward off your heels

if it is an older bow/barebow, there is not usually a place for the arrow to rest on the bow. this means the arrow rests on the archer’s hand. if they are not wearing a glove on that hand, the fletchings (that’s the feathers on the arrow) will more than likely slice their hand when firing. this scars.

so if you’re wanting to describe someone observing and archer’s hands (hands are hot, don’t @ me) they would see a silver scar about halfway between the pointer finger knuckle and palm of the person’s hand. (turn your hand vertical and trace down the length of your pointer toward your thumb and stop next to the knuckle. that spot there.)

most archers wear something to protect their fingers on the hand that draws the bow. even with that, they have callouses. without it, a lot of callouses, scars, and blisters.

most common draw uses three fingers on the string: pointer, middle, ring. the arrow sits between the pointer and middle. just like where the draw point is, this is not universal and do research if you’re doing something culturally important.

barebow means that the bow is bare of any instruments. no sight, no weights, etc. the most basic/traditional form of bow

a recurve bow is anything where the tips of the bow curve back around forward, away from the archer

a compound is what you think of as a modern hunting bow, and is recognisable by having wheels at the ends and three strings

arrows have three fletchings that form a triangle, the point faces the archer so that the flat of the arrow will pass the flat of the bow on release. the arrow sits on the side of the bow facing the archer

archers with a larger/raised chest will sometimes where a chest protect so that the string does not catch when firing (this is regardless of gender, i know several cis-men who need it as well)

string can also catch on the forearm that is holding the bow and creates bruises and welts if you don’t wear a protector. modern ones are small plastic and cover just the spot, with elastic holding it in place. traditional ones are leather and wrap all the way around, lacing up on the back of your arm like a corset.

there is literally so much more, but i feel like this is plenty to get you started, and as always, feel free to drop an ask in my box if you need something more!

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TREKTOBER 2023!!!

We're back!!!

For the fifth year in a row, Aisha and I are kicking off the first phase of Trektober with release of the official 2023 prompt lists. Releasing the lists now gives everyone participating plenty of time to plan ahead before posting starts in October.

As in previous years, there are three lists, each with their own theme.

As always, the third (spicy) prompt list can be found below the cut, for those who prefer to avoid.

#.​prompts

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Divergent is a bad book, but its accidental brilliance is that it completely mauled the YA dystopian genre by stripping it down to its barest bones for maximum marketability, utterly destroying the chances of YA dystopian literature’s long-term survival 

#YEAH. YEAH #.industry #.meta

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It’s like

loneliness you can feel snarling in your chest and taste in the hollows of your mouth

and sobs that shake and shake and shake until you are an animal baring its teeth

And then it’s like

Okay. Good five minutes.

Time to go generate capital,

So I don’t starve to death.

#storm writes #freeing her from my notes app

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might start posting my stray lines here???

#see if i feel any better doing that lmao #storm.txt

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#.reminder #.process

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#reblog this every time #.shitposting

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How new WIPs are born:

#.shitposting

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my worst fear is that i talk big about narrative and themes and cohesion and how to make narratives work better for years and then i finally write and release something and it objectively sucks and is bad and not very thoughtful

#REAL #.shitposting #.meta