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sofia when she has to call on the mystical voices of past and future princesses in her head or smth

this was meant to be a doodle - i got carried away lmao

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they call cedric a bungler a disgrace and a disappointment because they cannot call him ugly pass it on

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So I read the first chapter of your Cedric x Reader fanfic and came to share my thoughts.

I will say, I'm not too fond of x Reader, I'm more about reading about characters instead of being one. That being said, I liked that there was an effort to include other characters from stf, and I actually got invested from how the fic was formatted as a genuine stf episode.

I don't want to be too critical of the portrayal of some of the characters, but as a Roland enjoyer, I felt your portrayal of him was quite decent until it came to Cedric. I'm not sure at what point the story is supposed to take place in besides being between Great Auntventure and Day of the Sorcerers, but I feel that Roland being unhappy about Cedric coming along doesn't feel in character. At most points in the show, Roland is shown to not mind Cedric, let alone with Sofia. Cedric's Apprentice was an episode where Sofia literally became Cedric's apprentice so he could help her for a test, and Roland never once objects to her being with Cedric. I think Roland doesn't have as big of a gripe as people think because he's more disappointed at Cedric not being able to do magic than him as a person overall.

That being said, I love how you wrote him as someone who respected Sofia's wishes and let her bring Cedric along to the carnival. That is very much like Roland to see that Sofia likes something and sets aside his biases for his daughter. I can understand headcanoning Roland not liking Cedric as a person, and It's not something I'd agree with, but I absolutely agree with him respecting his children and their wishes.

As for the royal family as a whole, I didn't expect them to take as much of a focus as they did, and it was a pleasant surprise to have the children interact with Y/N. In fact, the format of the fic was so creative, with the royal family being so involved, I found myself being invested more in that than the x Reader parts. That's just me liking things not involving Cedric more because of how focused he is in the fandom. I wanted to talk more about the other aspects of the fic because I think people would find these elements such a treat.

While the royal family isn't THE main focus, I found Amber and Miranda to be a bit weird as characters. The fact I preferred the writing for James over them says something. With Miranda, I felt she wasn't a character like everyone else. The only role she seemed to have was as a mother and nothing else. The way she didn't have as much of a prominence as the others bummed me out. And it's not that she had to have a bigger role, but I felt myself questioning where she was.

My thoughts about Amber are based on my opinion, but the way she was written felt mixed to me. There were parts where she felt like Amber, like her excitement at getting her fortune told, but her being interested in whether she has a spouse?? I don't know, I personally don't think she would be too interested in that, or at least would be more interested in other aspects of her future. Plus the "I AM EASY" part caught me off guard. That part with the part before of Amber eating fast but elegantly did not pair well. It felt like Hildegard core.

These are just my thoughts though. I really enjoyed reading this fanfic despite some parts I didn't jive with. I would recommend it for anyone who likes a storyline with their smoochies with Cedric rjdbhdidjdjdjrj

Thanks for recommending me this fic /g /vpos

I ain’t reading all that I’m happy for you tho or sorry that happened /ref

No but seriously thank you so much for writing all this 😭😭

First of all I always try to make my one shots feel like they could more or less happen in the StF canon, so I’m glad it works!!

Regarding Roland, I know that you love him but I don’t necessarily like him that much. I think he’s okay most of the time, I just hate him for fun lmao (that’s probably why I wrote him as less likable than he actually is)

About the characters overall, this was my first piece of StF fan fiction and when I was writing this I hadn’t finished the show yet (I was maybe at the beginning of season 2) so the characters hadn’t gone through all the development they had to go through yet, and I guess I didn’t have that good of a grasp on their personalities. Now that you point it out, looking back Amber was never boy crazy so I agree that that bit doesn’t make any sense (😭), and yeah I guess Miranda ended up being just… mom.

All in all thanks for the feedback! ❤️❤️

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reblog this if u constantly argue with ur dad to the point where u want to jump out of a moving vehicle (or if u love velvet and veneer)

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It would’ve been a hundred times better if Roland was the one to get Cedric’s name wrong throughout the show. And not like Sofia that he just mispronounces it, or like Greylock who’s messing with him, but that he just doesn’t care enough about Cedric to remember his name so he calls him Frederick, Derek, Eric and other names that remotely rhyme with Cedric.

#sofia the first #stf #cedric the sorcerer #cedric the great #cedric the sensational #king roland

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Am I the only one who hates Brianna Mazzola’s cover of Sweet Dreams?

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dating Veneer headcanons

(Veneer x Fem Reader)

He leaves you for a man

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#which one is the cat

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So I’m a scout counselor and yesterday I was trying to draw the album covers of Jack Stauber’s Micropop from memory so the kids all saw them and thought they were cool and today I asked them what they wanted to draw and they wanted the Micropop characters I’m 😭😭😭

Mind you these kids are like 7-9

Raising them right 🗣️🗣️

#jack staubers micropop #jack stauber #micropop #inchman #hamantha #shop a pop opera #dinner is not over #the ballad of hamantha

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THANK YOU.

I’ve been scared to say this myself but now that someone else has…

If you have to age up characters, you still looked at them and thought “yeah I’d fuck them if they were LEGAL”

which

no

Hey guys, why the heck am I seeing velvet and veneer nsfw headcanons on my timeline? From what I’ve seen, (correct me if I’m wrong) all the people on mount rageous are teens, so it would be safe to imply the same for the two. I don’t CARE if you do some stupid aging up shit or whatever that’s really fucking weird.

#trolls #trolls band together #velvet and veneer

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Wait people actually want to know about other peoples oc’s I thought we were just collectively pretending to just seem nice

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Fanart of Cedric xd

#cedric the sensational #cedric the great

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Everyone: Damn Cedric is such a shit sorcerer, he's so bad at magic

Cedric: *casts a spell with his fucking teeth*

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I thought it would be longer😭 In any case... Veneer is so cute, I can't..

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good november guys

#nnn

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Seeing how openly gay the Monster High series is, I have some homosexual ideas for the new Sofia the First spin off (GET CEDRIC AND GREYLOCK OFFICIALLY TOGETHER🗣️🗣️)

#monster high #monster high g3 #monster high gen 3 #Sofia the First #cedric the sorcerer #cedric the sensational #cedric the great #sofia the fandom #stf #greylock the grand #cedlock

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#watch till the end #wendigoon #josh hutcherson