alanafilm

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Music :o

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17qqitvkb4X1Jpt1ZkLA57XOeAr30UOG1/view?usp=sharing

#week14

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WIP

https://drive.google.com/file/d/15f8snTD-Uh-0vnjB3GPFrh6v-INKrE6o/view?usp=sharing

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Week 12 WIP

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vyHu9T9w_VW_Wukw6d5OYTzuqnsfrGbM/view?usp=sharing

#week12

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Progress 01

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P4VXh-7ThWa2CE7yAv4g-QV3J0VijJ0B/view?usp=sharing

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Class Suggestions 04

- Cut directly to TV when static turns on

- Fix card wording

- Don’t have wife turn around when he comes out

- Try cutting out wide angle shots towards ending (or make them more dynamic)

- Show him getting up in the mirror instead of separate angle

- Cut out straight on couch shot

- Metal bar hits him onto couch and keeps him held down (or entire world shifts)

- Restraint shot doesn’t NEED to be a close up

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Update to the character designs :) got some names figured out and the rest of the crew

#week7

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last animatic???

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dQ5GPPKhlnQgb3SFoTUMWaG4LDVXKjvX/view?usp=sharing

#week7

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Turnaround for main character, he will soon have a name :)

#week7

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Animatic 3

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n5AJdHhFnLt3Zo96229Tkvh4bBaGBDTh/view?usp=sharing

#week6

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Class Suggestions 04

- Don’t bring the Dr back at the end (or at least don’t end with her)

- Slow down the expression change as man passes out

- Slow down overall pacing

- Have sun flash off rings (make them more noticeable)

- Have man meet wife in the kitchen after hearing her making food (he should be confused about this sound)

- Cut out as many additional angles as possible

- Show a quick cut or glitch back into the real world to get a hint for the fact that this isn’t real

- Cut out text on the TV

- Change composition of the scenes when world starts to fall apart. Make it all much more dynamic.

- Add in extra scenes throughout their day together to cut back to when bad things start to happen

#week5

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Animatic 2

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1IjXn6kwiwJ2EfqodEjYwsDCmkqIAFF51/view?usp=sharing

#week5

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Class Suggestions 03

- Show him arriving to the building (let audience know where this place exists)

- Figure out solid character design for doctor

- Change doctor’s facial expression as man passes out (her smile falls)

- Get it bg details to show what kind of place this is 

- Change angle of hallways scene to get rid of cuts

- Add rings by picture frame to better sell the idea that he has lost his wife

- Establish more closeness between couple after she is finally back

#week4

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Link to Animatic

Here’s most of my animatic since the full video wouldn’t post 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AR6q1u6LtVelrgBgJ-3lc-TrYlKdqWzm/view?usp=sharing

#week4

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Potential main character and wife character designs :0

#week3

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Class Suggestions 02

- Establish that the lady in p2 is his wife (Show pictures of him and his wife around the house, wedding rings next to bed)

- Have him wake up in bed instead of on bench to minimize animation

- Add screens at the end back in the lab/doctors office to show the man’s subconscious

- Pan shot and bright colors during the reuniting scene to emphasize happiness

#week2

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Film Synopsis

A man nervously stands at the entrance of a building holding a card. The card reads “Out of luck? This injection will bring it back to you”, with an address below it. Opening the front door, the man makes his way down a set of stairs and enters a door where he is greeted by a short, polite looking woman in a lab coat. She smiles at him and leads him to a doctor's table. The man looks obviously nervous but the assistant calms his nerves by rubbing his shoulder and gives him an almost solemn look of comfort. She looks behind her as the doctor makes his way over and then quickly backs away. The doctor readies up the needle and the last thing the man sees is the assistant waving goodbye to him with a sad smile.

The man wakes up sitting once again, this time, however on a bench on a busy street. He groggily comes to, trying to remember what happened. When he does, he quickly checks his arm and sees that he indeed does have a mark where the injection went in. Realizing this, he runs back to his apartment, trying to see if his luck really has returned to him. As he slams his door open, he looks around frantically until he sees a woman standing in the room, waiting there for him. He tears up, then runs to her with open arms trying to make up for lost time.

The day has passed and the man is now sitting in his living room reading with a cup of tea, next to his lost wife, very serene. He puts the book down and looks out the window, at peace when he notices a familiar face, the assistant from the experiment. She's waving at him. He goes to look closer when his TV turns on to static, breaking him from his focus. The tv does not fully turn on but words appear on it begin to read “are you sure she’s real?” in big bold letters. He looks over to his wife to see if she is reacting but her figure begins to melt into nothing. He tries to reach for her but the ground beneath the television breaks and reality crumbles beneath the man. Things begin to spiral out of control before him as the man sees his world fall apart in flashes of colors and changes of matter, the changes growing more drastically as time goes on. Pieces of his former world seem to be placed back together, but wrong. Even the man himself seems to be breaking down. As something flies towards him, the man is pushed back onto his couch, the first feeling of reality he’s touched in so long. As he looks at everything going on around him, he feels two straps begin to latch themselves around his arms. He looks back up in shock but as the camera zooms in towards his face, it moves back out to reveal that the man is still held within the doctor’s chair, never having left it from his initial injection space. His slight movements attract the attention of the assistant, who looks over to him with pity.

#week2

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Class Suggestions 01

- figure out MC’s reasoning for taking injection (do we sympathize with him or does he get what he deserves)

- cut out beginning parts so I can focus on main chunk of film (reality falling apart)

#week1