I'm writing a fanfic, and I want to have some advice on how to write it. What did you do for the fanfic on wattpad?
⭐Pretty sure kipper isn't answering right now but if you'd like some tips ive got a few that helps me write my stories.⭐- ⭐make sure you got the characters down pat (you know what they are and how their personality and over all person effects other people and things.)⭐- ⭐make sure to give vivid descriptions the world around them but don't use too many descriptive words in one sentence. ⭐-⭐go over your work and make sure the plot point are spaced were you want them to be .I personally make an actual physical chart to map out were specific actions and events occur in the story's at specific times and places its very helpful when what you need is right infront of you!⭐-⭐HAVE A PROOF READER OR EVEN BETTER AN EDITOR! If you are a grammar Nazi then you should be fine! But if you aren't well... I use grammarly religiously so I recommend using that! Its free! I think...(don't quote me!)⭐- ⭐have time to just sit doyen and look over your work one last time bedsore you submit!⭐ ⭐Thats about it ...from me at least I hope this helped at least a little bit ? Try experimenting with your own style first!⭐[Admin zeke ]
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Its a oneshot
// its around ty's 27th birthday and has been married to teddy for about 5 to six years//
Teddy sets a birthday cake on the table and turns out all the lights before going to retrieve his fair haired husband.
Ty walked in blindfolded with teddy guiding him through the house.
" teddy this is ridiculous im too old for birthday party's! " said Ty.
" well kitten I can't just sit around and do nothing on an important day like this" said the latter.
Ty grumbled as teddy pulls out his chair and makes him sit down.
Teddy took a deep breath and started to sing:
"Whaaaaaatttt day is today!, its Tyler's birthday!, what a day for a birthday!-" teddy paused mid song to give Ty a smooch on the cheek.
"Iiiiiiittts Tyler's birthday!" the older male undid ty's blindfold to reveal a small little chocolate cake with black and purple frosting, it looked homemade almost and it smelled like coco.
Ty rolled his eyes and tried to hide his smile . even though he tried teddy's goofy eyes and smile made him smile even more " c'mon baby I know you don't like birthday's but I did try my hardest to make you a cake ~
You know how hard my hand-eye-hand-eye-quardination is".
Teddy sat in the seat across from his husband at the kitchen table - just starring enthusiastically with his big stupid smile.
Alright better get this over with then... 27 candles...27 years that hes been alive...27 years that hes survived...hes happy now...he really is.
"Tyler?" Ty looked up from the cake and looked at teddy. He had a look of worry on his face as he tilted his head slightly " kitten are you okay? Your suppose to eat the cake not stare at it hehe " teddy leaned forward and wiped ty' s face - he hadn't even realized that he started crying .
" y-yeah...um...teddy how does this work??" Ty pushed his hand away from his face and stared intensely at the confection in front of him.
" what do you mean "how does it work?" you just blow out the candles and make a wish . everyone knows that?" .
" wells im not everyone! I just never understood why people do this..." he grumbled. "
"Its okay just make a wish " the dim light of the candles reflected into teddy's damaged amber eyes, in this light he didn't look so broken... Beautiful...
"What should I wish for? " the blonde questioned. " anything baby" teddy yawned it was really late.
" anything..." Ty thought long and hard before taking a deep breath and blowing out the candles all at once. He smiled warmly at his charcoal haired husband.
Teddy immediately caught that look in ty's eyes" oh no...I know that look you wished for something evil didn't you~" .
" no not really~" Ty sounded confident as he picked up the cake knife and started to cut the cake up .
"I mean its something ive always thought about having eventually. Maybe ill get it this year~"
The words echoed around in teddy's mind for a bit " what did he want???oh no did I get the wrong gift?! How could I be so fucking stupid?!" he thought.
Teddy couldn't stand it anymore he stood up as Ty handed his a plate with chocolate cake on it " okay. You got me. What did you wish for-" . Ty stuck his tongue out stubbornly " not telling~" he cooed.
" Ty c'mon I just wanna make sure -"
" no can do teddy bear" the mention of his nickname made him turn a dark shade of crimson.
" tttyyyyyleeerrrr please! " he whined.
Ty groaned
" I wished...for a family..."
Ty turned his head as to not show his bright red face .
Teddy paused and thought for a second they'd talked about this before in the past but they never could come to a conclusion.
" y-you have a f-family sweetheart! " he nervously chuckled.
Ty raised an eyebrow at him
" me, Evan, milo! And Phil and Pierre-"
" yes but you see they are all couples WITH CHILDREN" Ty raised his voice He means business..." Hell I think even Damien and Jordan have started to consider having s kid of their own! Teddy we won't live forever I just want to do something-"
"TY I SAID NO!" teddy's booming voice echoed the room making Ty back up in fear.
Teddy never liked using his work voice at home , he didn't want to fight with Ty like this
Teddy avoiding eye contact left the room and went out onto the balcony.
Ty was still shaken up from his husbands sudden outburst but he followed him onto the balcony were he found him on the ground with his back against the glass of the ledge, huddled over covering his face .
He could hear faint sniffling- teddy was crying .Ty sat next to him and put an arm around him.
"Teddy...why don't you want to have kids?" he said with empathy and worry in his voice.
Teddy took a bit of time to respond " Tyler..look at me...look at what ive done... Im a cybernetic scared up mental freak"
" what kind of kid would want a warlord as a father figure! Hell I couldn't even stand up against my own dad! Thats how I got the scars on my face! I don't want that kid to end up like me! I don't want them to be alone ...im...im scared Ty..." he started shivering more tears poured out from his eyes.
Ty hugged his big idiot and made him look at him .even sitting down teddy was bigger than him..." teddy...look...ive seen you at your best but ive also seen you at your worst- " wiping tears from his eyes teddy sniffled " I know that you do have the potential to be a good person in you just tried...sure the kid won't be perfect but they'll be something! And one of those things is defiantly not alone.
There are good parts ...and bad parts ..we have to look at this and take the good with the bad".
Teddy nodded in understanding " is this really what you want kitten?" teddy's eyes were red and puffy" it really is... But only with you"
Teddy hugged his smaller husband and nuzzled into his soft neck" ill do it...ill check the adoption and surrogate downers lists in the armada. Im still scared Tyler..." Ty hugged him back tighter " you aren't the only one!" Ty was a happy mess.
"Hey Ty"
" what teddy bear?"
" happy birthday~"
/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH that's it for now children~
[Admin zeke ]
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