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ddwcaph-game · 21 days
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Twin Fight Rewrite!
I finally finished rewriting the twin fight scene in Chapter 1! The main problem with it was how abrupt the fight starts, so hopefully the scene rewrite will solve that, as well as clarify some things about the big fight between the twins.
Here's a preview of the whole scene! The MC shown here has default personality stats, with [Halfling Ancestry], [Follower], [Caregiver], [Main Protagonist] Traits, and chose to keep Maggie's locket picture.
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The fight still happens out of the blue, but I'm hoping that with a bit of build-up, the accidental secret reveal from Twin just as the tension drops gives it more of an impact. Lemme know what you all think!
And yup, I found an opportunity to let you choose your MC's Enneagram Type wings! The choices you get in the 4th page with the three options depend on which birthday wish you chose during the prologue.
Now that the scene rewrite is done, all that's left is cleaning up the to-do list. There's still a lot of miscellaneous stuff I need to do before the update, but this is the last major thing I needed to do!
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