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indianaclems · 1 year

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The past is in the past ?

At the military school Nur hears her comrades talking about her mothers.

Person 1: You speak Fang isn't what it used to be and our boss betrayed us

Person 2: No stop chief Namaari is the best and loves her people I remind you that she went so far as to steal the dragon stone

Person 1: It was the days of Chief Virana where Princess Namaari still cared about us before she married the sidewalk princess and we became Heart's minions. Before Fang was powerful today we are the laughingstock of Kumandra

Person 3: Yeah finally it was broken and we know it brought back the Druun

Person 1: Yeah well Heart didn't just have to keep it and then it was Namaari who fixed it and even afterwards to be forgiven she went to Heart to rebuild what was only heaps of ruins...Heart wouldn't be what it is without Fang! And in addition she married their princess to be forgiven... Heart really made us become weak.

Nur: Fang and Heart are not more because we are Kumandra, if the stone was reformed it is because everyone participated and believed in it. Insult my mothers again and I promise you'll regret your words

Person 1: what are you going to tell your momies? Nur don't try to pretend you're not the rat ok?

Nur: do you owe me and my mothers respect?

Person 1: I owe you nothing, you're just a usurper! And I owe nothing to the thief princess, understand? She manipulates our princess and forces her to betray us... I hate heart and they would have done better to remain in stony silence

The others: Well said

Eventually a fight broke out with Nur pouncing on them.

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When Nur returns she sees her mothers arguing and being cold, making her think back to the words of her comrades.

When Raya goes to bed she goes to the other end of the bed and the next day she leaves for Heart.

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Nur was in the palace moving through the corridors pondering her words.

She arrived at the right floor hesitating to turn around after all it was really a good idea, she spent her time getting angry with her mother and saw the scene the day before she knew it was tense. Nur however decided to go anyway once in front of the door she asked the guard posted in front if the chief was really there and if she already got on with someone. The Guard replied in the negative. Then knocked before waiting for permission to enter with a simple "yes" from inside proving that Namaari was immersed in her work.

The guard, opens the door and steps aside to hold it: Princess Nur asks to see you Chief Namaari

Namaari raised a surprised eyebrow.

Namaari: Well come in, please.

The guard turned his head and nodded, then held out his arm inviting the young girl to enter the room.

Nur appeared and as soon as she faced Namaari she greeted her with the sign of the gem.

Nur: Mother?

Namaari rolled her eyes at the formal expression her daughter had used while looking at the guard. Namaari waved her away. Once the door closed Namaari made Nur come and sit in front of her.

Namaari: What's your visit worth to me? Nothing serious I hope ?

Nur, shook her head: I would like to talk to you

Namaari: I guess it must have been important

Nur: Am I not bothering you?

Namaari: It will be fine, but let's get to the facts, what did you want to talk to me about

Nur played with her fingers a habit she had when she was nervous. Namaari watched her seeing her child's discomfort and she got up from her chair to lean forward and reach for Nur's face, delicately she passed her index finger under her chin to make her raise her head and force her to look at her. Displaying a much softer face she reassured her

Namaari: Nur you know you can tell me anything what's going on ?

Nur: I... It's tricky

Namaari: I'm listening

Nur: When you stole the stone... How did you feel?

Namaari: Ho... I didn't expect that... I'm going to answer you but can I first ask you why?

Nur quickly looked away and Namaari knew that her daughter would not tell her the truth. The way she creased her pants. Her mother knew something else was bothering her

Nur: just like that actually, it's been in my head for a while

Namaari: For no particular reason?

Nur: I guess I'm growing up and I need more than the version you told me when I was little

Namaari seemed satisfied but was not totally convinced but preferred not to push further Nur would talk to her about it when she was ready preferring to let her open up to her rather than questioning her

Namaari: Well. It's not really an easy question. But I will try...Our people were starving and I guess the chiefs of Fang were too proud to ask for help especially your grandmother… She said looking at a bust that was in the room. Fang always wanted to look strong and handsome even though inside it wasn't the same. It was also a survival strategy to deter being attacked at that time our people had been at war for 500 years no one ever trusted each other we would have asked for help from an enemy. It wasn't irrational but it was based on ignorance... An ignorance that caused us to covet our neighbor Heart for their riches an ignorance that caused us to believe that he was so different from us than his success could not be the fruit of their hard work... Why would they have succeeded where we failed? This jealousy drove us to hatred. So when Chief Benja, whom my mother believed to be fundamentally stupid and naive, she saw the way to trick them and ensure our survival without the slightest scruple. But how I was just your age at the time and I attended a lot of my mother's meeting to prepare myself one day to succeed her. Our future being uncertain, my father having died a few years ago. I had to be ready for anything

Nur: It wasn't easy...

Namaari: It wasn't an easy period I grant you. Your grandmother, my mother were discussing with the councilors a plan to obtain the gem. One of them was offering to kidnap Benja's daughter and demand a ransom. But my mother opposed it

Nur: Luckily

Namaari: Ho ! not because she cared about her, of course she wouldn't have hurt a child voluntarily but it wasn't a problem to take it out on your future mother

Nur: Ha ... after Má is formidable

Namaari: We didn't know that then...I didn't know that. The problem was that we didn't know Heart, their guard their traps but above all they were richer than us so very probably stronger it was very risky. I saw it as an opportunity to prove myself, to make my mother proud and to save my people. To be useful to him, to serve him, which every good leader should do. I asked how old the Princess of Hearts was. My mother told me that she was slightly older than me, that she was pregnant with me when Raya was born. My mother had told me that she had lost her young mother, I told myself that it gave us a point in common that I could exploit. She never told me but she knew that Raya's mother died in childbirth and was terrified that the same thing would happen to her that's why Fang at the time didn't attack Heart yet so vulnerable

Nur: We were monsters.

Namaari: We were close to everything for our survival to eat before being eaten, that's all. We had to take care of ourselves before the others

Nur: I understand

Namaari: At that moment I was determined to succeed in my mission. My mother found it risky to know that I was involved in this plot even if I wanted to help.

Nur: Did you come up with this plan?

Namaari: Not in detail obviously but yes pretend to be her friend to get information on the stone then tell everything to our

Nur: At 12? I don't know if I should say you're smart or terribly Machiavellian, I don't want to offend you or anything like that but you scare me a little.

Inside she found her terrifying... She knew she was formidable but there even more... She was happy for once not wanting to be like her even if she was weak

Namaari: Ho you know your mother wanted to welcome us with fire catapults and poison us... She finally succeeded with her stupid jackfruit

Nur: I don't know who's the creepiest

Namaari: I offered that I could tell her about dragons, I was looked at strangely, I said that everyone liked dragons apparently there was only me, I insisted on the fact that I had the parchment of Sisu and that it will allow me to talk about my father and therefore that I could weave a link with the princess of Heart. We worked more than a week tirelessly to be ready. My enthusiasm and determination grew day by day. I remember when we went to Heart I tried to imagine what Raya was like. I thought stupid, spoiled rotten with all the faults in the world, I thought she was weak. When we arrived I understood why my mother thought Benja was stupid and at the same time his words made me hope, I wanted to believe in Kumandra but I couldn't say it. I admit that it hurt my heart a little that we had to stab nice people but I told myself that they were weak and that it was deserved only the strong survived and I was determined to let it be Fang. Heart had enjoyed enough now it was up to Fang to thrive. Benja hadn't convinced too well, the other lands were also angry, it wasn't necessarily a good sign for Fang but we had to play it to our advantage to seem the friendliest. Then there was your mother. I looked at her and so did she. I must say that I found her very pretty. She seemed less full of herself but weak and the first demonstration of her courage was when she came forward to speak and say a stupid sentence but who knew how to break the ice, I was surprised and she on me to make people laugh, in real life it made my work and our rapprochement easier. I had everything near my Sisu collar on display! Everyone loves dragons!

Nur laughed

Namaari: When I was in front of her, I found her warm, very playful, very pretty, she had a pretty voice, a pretty smile! And Sisu worked she was all excited I knew it was working. We went to eat then and we got on with you of course the plan was that I would make her fall under my spell and let her guard down to tell the truth I found her really cute and nice I had hope I would really care that we would be good friends... But that was before I started flirting with her... Apparently my mother saw it and slapped her face

Nur: Did you develop a crush on Má after only a few hours?

Namaari: In my defense your mother had incredible charms she was very intelligent she liked almost everything I liked, fighting, dragons -

Nur: The dragons...

Namaari: Frankly I had no desire to betray her I would have liked not to but I couldn't go back my people were counting on me and otherwise it would certainly end in bloodshed

Namaari: Your mother resisted I would never have believed that she would be so strong... I activated the warning signal that my mother had given me the soldiers arrived but so did everyone. The world finally... One of our soldiers ababatu Benja and there was no way back everyone threw themselves on the stone then it broke. I was terrified

Nur: What has become of the soldier?

Namaari: He was the first druunified I think his statue broke. My mother told her family that he sacrificed himself for Fang so he got the honors. I took all that away once I was boss

Nur: You never forgot it?

Namaari: What should have been a dream turned into a nightmare. We took a piece of the stone and then we fled...I just had time to see Raya carry her father while my mother trained me to flee

Namaari's voice tightened her gaze was lost in the void... In her memories

Nur: What happened next?

Namaari: We came back and had the canal dug as quickly as possibleMany died of exhaustion and then by the Druuns.Terrible sacrifices for which I felt guilty.

She takes a break

Namaari: Then I have guilt every night I had nightmares. I tried to be the best in everything to be stronger and good for Fang. Each time I thought about Raya again... I was convinced that she was petrified by my fault. Unlike the mother, I had more difficulty justifying myself. What happened. Every druunified person. I had broken the world and betrayed my best friend and I had killed her and her people when she offered me her friendship and her generosity. Then she came back like a ghost. It's not easy to see the dead come back to life but I was relieved to know she was alive but I dreaded her revenge. Our people were better and she was a threat so I had to stop her if she had survived the Druun all this time she still could. But I think secretly and subconsciously I wanted her near me in a place where she would be safe outside of Druun and where she would want for nothing. When I saw her again she was unkempt dirty... Yet I found her magnificent and she impressed her the more she missed me the more I fell for her.

Nur: Much to the chagrin of Tatitaya

Namaari: Yes. She chuckled. I could not explain the feeling I felt, she was my enemy yet obsessed me

Nur: I was going to say love but you're freaking out...

Namaari: I wasn't in my best mental health, my mother made sure that I have a roof that I miss that I have an education that I know how to manage but I never learned to recognize my emotions just bury them. And there emotional neglect takes its toll.

Nur: How did you do?

Namaari: Raya was able to forgive me and give me another chance, and with the help of Sisu, your mother, and benja I was able to really redeem and forgive myself

Nur: When you reformed the stone

Namaari: We! This would never have been possible without Raya, without Sisu Boun Noi and Tong. Their trust saved us. And your mother's saved me

Nur: Is that why you married her?

Namaari: Noooo but it's part of the story it has necessarily played

Nur: Well then why?

Namaari: Your mother yes is everything for me, with my people of course, but has for her intelligence her bravery her confidence her kindness her beauty for the person she is I love her. So inevitably it translates into what she does. And I married her because we love each other and I didn't want to spend my life with anyone else... I almost lost her and I didn't want that to happen anymore.

Nur: So it's not to redeem you near Heart?

Namaari: What? *Burst out laughing* Absolutely not... But how did that come to your mind? How would that have been to excuse me? I kinda stole their princess from the bottom... I thought Benja was going to decapitate me when I asked him for his daughter's hand especially since ranchana had chased away one of his peacocks and offered it as a gift on the table just him

Nur was bent double

Namaari: I owe a lot to Benja and your mother and it's a great thing that our two formerly enemy peoples are now united

Nur: I don't know if it's unanimous...

Namaari: We can't erase 500 years of wars like that or the ravages of Druun. It will take time to maintain hope and show that it is possible.

Nur: Thank you Ma

Namaari: When you want Starlight anyway except when I'm -

Nur: Fucking Má wildly on the desk? Yes I know...

Namaari, shocked at her face turning scarlet: NUR!!! So first I don't fuck your mother, we make love

Nur: The difference?

Namaari: Well it's in the word. Love! The fuck there is no feeling

Nur: That's why Má asks you to "fuck me harder"?

Namaari: You didn't hear anything! Didn't see anything, okay?! And I don't want to hear that language from you anymore, am I clear?

Namaari: Is that all you had to ask me?

Nur: Hm... How are you and Má alrigtht ?

Namaari: Yes why?

Nur: Because of yesterday...

Namaari: Oh that? It's normal that we sometimes argue, it doesn't change our relationship

Nur: Are you reconciled?

Namaari: No unfortunately not again this time

Nur: Where is she?

Namaari: She left for Heart to attend the funeral of a friend of her father

Nur: We didn't

Namaari: We didn't know him and I couldn't leave Fang. Don't worry it won't have any consequences

Nur: What did you argue about?

Namaari: Sorry Starlight but that's between your mother and me. Don't worry it's ok when she's back I promise everything will be alright

Nur: When will we go back to Heart?

Namaari: Hm not right away I'm afraid definitely at the start of the next season, after the monsoons. How are you Nur?

Nur: Yes of course

Namaari: How's it going at the academy?

Nur: Yes

Namaari noted that Nur didn't look at her a habit she had when she was lying.

Namaari: you never talk to us about your friends

Nur: Ho I'm just not very good at caring

Namaari: I was like you

Nur: then you understand

Namaari: But that doesn't mean I was fine

Nur: Yes yes I assure you

Namaari: Okay I'm not inciting I believe you but I don't understand why I received a report saying that you had fought?

Nur: Arguing happens, doesn't it?

The guard knocked on the door

Namaari : Yes?

Guard: Talon's emissary has arrived Namaari Chieftain

Namaari, whispering: Damn I forgot that one... He's still going to hold me back so that I lower the prices on the peppers tssss

Nur couldn't help but flash a big smile. Namaari looked at her jaded and patted her nose

Namaari: Come on girl I have work to do! But don't think you're going to get away with it, we'll have a discussion about your behavior!

Nur rolled her eyes

Namaari: And then the report doesn't even tell me who won

Nur left smiling

Namaari, resumed her pokerface: Bring it to an end as soon as possible

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indianaclems · 2 years

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Fang's Pride: Pride of the Heart

This is a first version I remodifierai if I should post it on ao3. I partly inspired by my military experience that says this can greatly change depending on the regiment, countries, and cultures. I hope that you plaiera

In the morning in the royal chamber of the high tower of Fang the sun was rising.

Raya was lying in the read

Raya: Đẹp lạ, come back to bed or you'll have to empty your make-up supply to hide your dark circles

Namaari: I have a lot of preparation to do, and you should also start preparing Sinta

Raya: other years you didn't ask me that... Could it be that the big powerful and invisible Chief Fang who isn’t afraid of anything is stressing for the ceremony?

Namaari: Absolutely not, I'm just meticulous, it's always been an important day, now get out of tiel bed and get ready-

Raya: -and my breakfast?

Namaari: On the desk

Raya: Not even in bed?

Namaari: already you would have overturned everything... You were fighting I don't know what enemies in your dreams

Raya: Definitely kicking your ass

Namaari, the ignorant: And I had hoped that you could get up... But I was obviously wrong

Raya standing up: How grumpy you are today... Stop, you're going to scare young people!

Namaari was getting ready, thinking that her daughter should do the same, she made sure that her outfit was well adjusted, that her hair was well done, without an ironing hair, that her parts shaved the day before were perfectly regular and symmetrical.

Then she got up and looked out the window

Raya, who was coming out of the bathroom after the shower, naked as a maggot, approached her wife to hug her.

Namaari: Raya please don't ruin my clothes.

Raya: Ho I see your sense of priorities: your outfit is more important than the hugs of your dear and tender to comfort you. She said pouting

Namaari: Raya will rather prepare you instead of catching cold

Raya: If you hold me near you, I won't be cold.

Namaari: 5 minutes no more but first you put on a towel.

Raya was in woman's arms and trying to relax her.

Raya: You think about it, don't you?

Namaari: hm? She said raising an eyebrow?

Raya: That day, when you were in her place.

Namaari: Whoa?

Raya: Ho please, you're tense, you can't stop looking at her barracks, and that's without counting the hundreds of drafts on the floor... How many times have you reworked your speech... There's even that of your mother at the same time that served as a model for you, and I looked at the year it was the one when you joined the army too, so don't feign ignorance to this subject with me!

Namaari: It's true... I wonder how my mother felt at that time... I was stressed, proud too... But I couldn't show it, not me Namaari Princess of Fang girl from Chef Virana ... but I hadn't been able to sleep all night ... I kept repeating in my head what I had to do at the slightest blink of an eye, that everything was perfect ... I prayed to the dragons that the others don't blunder... My mother, was my mother, intimidating... I had already seen her in her army chief outfit, but I was at her side at the era. It was special, everything happened as it was supposed to. My mother presided over the fundamentals, then there were the battles and finally the consecration. The speech was solemn she did not tremble... Just when she handed me the unworthy she smiled at me and whispered "bravo Namaari" with pride, it only lasted a few seconds but it was amazing...I don't know how many times she worked her speech, mine looks pitiful next to it

Raya cupped her wife's face between her two hands: Look at me Namaari.

Then the warrior looked into the intense gaze of the smaller woman.

Raya took a deep breath and exhaled: I read your mother's speech, and what it has is that she wrote lived her heart ... She was certainly in the same situation as you, I bet that she wasn't satisfied but she had to stop there if she didn't want to be late, who knows, in my memories I would say that she improvised but I'm not sure I don't remember the precise words.

Namaari: Were you there?

Raya: Didn't I tell you? Ho I was passing by stealing food and jade from you, and scouting to take the scroll, and then everyone made noise and rushed when you scroll... So I attended at the ceremony, part of me hated you and part of me was happy and proud for you. You realized your destiny, you felt what I had experienced with my Bá even if it’s very different, I just wish I hadn't failed in my task afterwards, I was troubled in my feelings but too fascinated by your beauty to go Namaari who was slack-jawed from then on.

Raya: I can say that she was proud of you, and you too, you were terribly exciting to such an extent that I only wanted to jump off my roof, cross this damn course and come and break your neck. nose

Namaari *laughs*: well happy to have had an effect on you

Raya: well not only me you would have seen the number of groupies who wanted to jump on you

Namaari: Do I take it that I'm going to have to drop my serlots on our daughter's suitors and suitors today

Raya: It won't be necessary you know very well that you will be requisitioning her all day and you are far too scary for anyone to try anything

Namaari: Perfect!

Namaari: How did it go with Long?

Raya: It's very different from Fang, but they's really talented.

Namaari: How's it going?

Raya: It's a test, the future keeper must not manage to enter their room and reach the circle while avoiding the traps and not arousing attention, moreover he cannot take by surprise because the date is planned but it must take place during the day and be done before the following dawn. It is the guardian who decides when their apprentice is ready to spend the rest. Obviously the apprentice has to fight the guardian, we can obviously take them by surprise... No mortal blow is given but the apprentice has kali sticks stamina strategy cunning are tested as well as determination. If the Guardian fails to defeat the Apprentice then the test is failed. If, on the contrary, the test is successful, the guardian initiates the apprentice with a specific sacred ritual that only we know. After which the day resumes its normal course, the guardian will inform Heart's council of the result and that's it. Generally the whole palace ends up knowing it and therefore very quickly Heart whole, because we feasted between us to celebrate the success. But the inhabitants of Heart know the importance of discretion on this subject so if everyone knows it, nobody says it.

Namaari: And you? How did you experience it, I mean compared to Long?

Raya: I prepared myself mentally, also physically, I prayed a whole day near the stone, and I asked my Bá for advice on what I should and shouldn't do, but I was fine, I was excited, I loved fighting Long. To tell the truth, I was only afraid of two things.

Namaari: What, Sinta?

Raya: Knowing the importance of the event, I was afraid that they would prepare for hours and that they would realize that dawn was already here... Or that I would break a nail while fighting. ..

Namaari: Speaking of them, we should hurry up and get ready to shake Long off, knowing he's bound to be late if we don't rush them.

Raya: You are right.

*In the meantime*

For her part, Nur had risen early like all recruits... She had prepared for the fighter's outfit and had prepared her ceremonial outfit in advance.

She listened to the remarks of the instructors

Ratiya would probably be there too. At lunch she sat next to Heng. The two ate slowly

Nur: How are you feeling ?

Heng: Incredibly stressed, there will be your mother who will assess us, and I will have my family, and my father.

Nur: That's right, that will be cool, I haven't seen them for a long time.

Heng: Your mother specially invited them for the occasion... Imagine if...

Nur: It's just a ceremony, we've already been promoted.

Heng: Aren't you stressed?

Nur: You say, I'm afraid I'll drop the spear or fall, or my outfit won't fit properly.

Heng: That's nothing!

Nur: Unfortunately with my title everything has to be impeccable. Do you know which contingent you will be heading to next?

Heng: I'm still hesitating, to tell the truth I like the royal army a lot, I could evolve and maybe one day become like General Atitāya, be close to the royal family, have important and varied missions, travel whatever to help our villages during disasters or for diplomatic missions, to protect the population, to act to improve and lead the army, to apply reforms and to advise the chief. My mother was proud, but I will be far from her far from my village and I don't want to abandon them, it would be less prestigious but I could return to their side, the soldiers of rural garrisons, especially in outposts, help the population, and ensures their defense they are an important relay between the central power and the remote areas, they are also the first defenses and whistleblowers... I don't know yet what my choice will be. And you?

Nur: I will join the elite commando

The instructor landed in the refectory asking them to go and get in formation in front of the building within 5 minutes. Then all the recruits got up, clearing their meal, formed into a battalion, surrounded by the instructors. An officer gave some instructions before giving the order to march to the main square where the day would begin.

Nur who was in the front row, behind the base man, carrying hdf promotion pennant. Which was a huge pride for her. She who was the last, she who was stigmatized was the major of her promotion. Heng was 2 rows behind her.

The promotion arrived in tight order on the place already crowded with the crowd, many soldiers were there to ensure security.

Then the crowd parted like two waves to draw a wide aisle leading to the palace steps and began to elated with anticipation. It was then that the royal guard appeared in front of the General and two elite soldiers from parte and others ahead of the Chief in official army chief's uniform, at her side her wife dressed in a ceremonial sabai in the colors of Fang but adorned with jewels of Heart. And followed by læ princet Long. Finally who guard suite

Nur tried to concentrate as much as possible so as not to smile or look like an emotional mess. her family was heading to the official stand.

Then the chief instructor of the regiment presented the promotion in hat of form, to the chief at the same time as to the whole of the crowd who stood there. Heng would look around for his mother or another family member.

Silence reigned as the officer spoke while Nur heard a gurgling sound from a visibly stressed teammate. Nur will concentrate not to laugh.

Then Namaari rose, and walked forward, saluted the officer, and surveyed the troops, eyes flexible, intimidating, and martial.

Nur straightening up and puffing out her chest. Namaari inspected every detail with a glance, then she faced the recruits. Then she spoke.

Namaari took a seat facing the formation, looking them straight in the eyes with a martial and unwavering expression.

She then spoke

Namaari: 16th Hope promotion, today finished and begins a new cycle. After years of training by your instructors and instructors, after years of hardships to harden you under the aegis of your trainers who are themselves experienced, you have learned resilience, a sense of duty and loyalty, a sense of sacrifice, bravery and courage. Your peers have trained you and passed on their knowledge. Today you join their rank to serve your people here present and whom I represent. And that is why to begin this consultation you are going to present your values, your loyalty, your rigor and your bravery to your people whom you serve until the ultimate sacrifice if necessary. 16th promotion Hope, On guard!

And then Namaari gave a series of orders, varying positions moves parries and attacks and complex sequences.

After 15mins the recruits suffered from their assiduous concentration but no one gave up. Nur was happy that her pennants had been taken away from her. At the end of this last. Namaari ended

Namaari: On guard! Gather, Present! And salute! On guard! Rest. Thanks.

So Namaari returned to the podium to sit next to her wife who discreetly whispered to her.

Raya: Was it really necessary to give them this type of training? I thought some were going to tear their adductors... You know, the goal isn't to kill our daughter.

Namaari: Fang's soldiers are concerned about demanding and surpassing themselves, pain is satisfaction, it is important to know if they are ready to endure what prepares them and if their training is up to what the families and their people invested. But I must admit that this promotion is not bad

Long: How do you like it Chị? And Heng?

Namaari: We'll see at the end and then I could express an opinion.

The continuation is chained by a set of fights a set of hens

Everyone was cheering

Raya and Long weren't left out, Namaari just smiled she had to look at all the recruits but she clearly only had eyes for her daughter, who was winning the fights one after the other.

Nur swept the feet of her opponent who fell heavily to the ground. Nur stopped not deeming it useful to finish the job, her dominance being clearly displayed!

Namaari winced slightly at the rookie impact as Raya and Long chuckled.

Namaari: Why do I have the funny feeling that you two are behind this?

Raya: Well I must say that despite all these years it seems that Fang is still so distracted by the excellence of Heart.

Namaari: With all due respect my dear wife, don't throw flowers at yourself, there's the pot that will follow.

Nur was starting her last fight, the recruits had to resist the heat under the zenital sun, none had been able to hydrate themselves or even take a little jackfruit to regain their strength, all remaining at attention, testing their resistance.

Nur looked breathless but determined to win this fight. Heng had been eliminated in the quarter-finals and Nur was now fighting her opponent.

A right made her bleed under the eyelid, making Namaari frown. But then Nur showed another face she was no longer amused but determined and ruthless.. so she rushed against her opponent chaining the attacks until she kneed him in the jaw and then immediately the referee instructor separated the fighters and made them move aside while he observed the bloody mouth of the loser. So she designated Nur as the winner of the duel and the tournament. The two adversaries greeted each other, greeted the instructor then the royal stand and finally the people before a medical team takes care of the injured.

Namaari formalized the end of the end of this first part.

Then the general officer addresses the rest of the program to the crowd as the recruits leave to eat before the rest of their ordeals.

Raya: Don't want to cheer on our champion? She said nudging Namaari

Long: Please?

Namaari: No! It's important to let her concentrate and for the others it wouldn't be fair

Long: Ooooo…. moaned

Namaari: Raya? Raya... But where did she go?

*Further away*

Raya: Hmmm skewers! She exclaimed with stars in her eyes

Vendor : Take the ones that make you happy Princess

*At the Palace*

Namaari: I hope she didn't go to Nur! She said crossing her arms.

Raya: Đẹp lạ look what I found!!!!

Nur was at the barracks and getting ready, while eating her ration she adjusted her royal jewels and hastened to find her friend at the cattery.

Long: Ma, what do you think Chị is doing now? They asked threading yet another skewer making Namaari sigh.

Namaari: She must definitely be with Bubu at this time. And please eat right!

Long: I can't wait to be anytime it's going to be great

Raya: We're just gonna watch big cats jump

Namaari immediately turned the offense back to her loves.

Namaari: Our serlots aren't big! They are given a special diet, and it's not just watching them jump but seeing the mastery ability that the warrior has with their mount, it's a team that must be one, and the course is far from be obvious!

Raya: That's why you had trouble đẹp lạ...

Namaari: Binturi!

Raya: If you want to evaluate their complicity with regard to whether they sleep together, you would have had a better mark, I guarantee it.

Later, Namaari returned to her stand facing the pitch filled with obstacles as the crowd gathered in the stands, while the young people arrived in columns. After the officer, Nur was at the head of the procession holding the flag, proudly mounted on her serlot, looking royal.

Long: She's awesome!!!

Namaari: Long less strong! Calm down !

Long: Pffff if we can't even stand their sister anymore. they replied, crossing their arms.

Namaari: Please behave properly, you're not anywhere! She said, giving them a little pat on the biceps to straighten them up.

Nur appeared in front of the rostrum and greeted the members

Long shook their hand with a stupid smile, Raya smirked while Namaari also lowered her child's hand before glaring at them.

Raya: She's wearing the hair jewelry you gave her for her birthday.

Namaari: I noticed it

Raya smiled knowing that Namaari hid the tenderness that won. Then it was the turn of all the procession

Long: Hooooo, it's Heng!!! As they hopped in place.

Namaari: Misery ! but what was in those skewers???

Raya shrugged trying to hold Long down by putting a hand on their shoulder to calm their down. The tests consisted of a speed race, and an obstacle course and finally knocking down the most targets in a time to eliminate while maneuvering their serlot.

A jar containing coins was brought. Namaari put her hand to draw one before reading the name of the future person to rush and chanted the name inviting her to come forward for the first test.

Long: Yes! he exclaimed, pumping their fist

Raya: What is it?

Long: I don't like her, she bothered chị... By going first, she's bound to miss out! Said the princet as they put on a demonic face, slightly worrying Raya.

The candidates passed one after the other

Long: But is there at least the name of Nur in there? While they seemed to be annoyed.

Namaari: Patience Long, patience, and then don't we say "the best for last"? She winked while smirking.

And as Namaari had predicted, on the last remaining token she read her daughter's name, the first name she had chosen herself 15 years ago.

Nur advanced and at the signal rushed, she almost lay down on her serlot to gain speed

She was third in the standings

But she still had two stages left... The show jumping was only a formality like a health course for the princess who had trained hard, crossing the obstacles one by one as if they didn’t exist. And finally her moment of glory arrived, she looked carefully at the targets... This was the moment she had been waiting for... She had some surprises she had in store.

She quickly moved forward and knocked down the first target on the ground with her spear, then threw it at the second in the distance.

Namaari: But what is she doing? she exclaimed

Raya: Why did she take that target? She moved away from the others, it doesn't make sense!

Namaari: I'm afraid she won't finish in time!

Namaari dug her fingers into the armrests praying that her daughter wouldn't be eliminated on such a senseless mistake.

As the head of Fang's heart raced in her chest.

So Nur sent Buwan as fast as he could and how did he kneel on the seal

Raya: But what is she doing?

Namaari squeezed her wife's hand firmly causing her to wince.

Namaari: She's going to do it again!!! Said she saw low, taking her eyes off the scene for a few seconds so that Raya gave her a puzzled look

Raya: What are you talking about?

Namaari: Look! as her watchful eyes were trained on her daughter.

Namaari: Come on Nur you can do it I believe in you! She thought like a prayer.

And as Buwan leapt and Nur took advantage of it as a springboard to launch himself high, knocking down the remaining targets while spinning in the air like a top,

And before hitting the ground she launched into a behind pirouette sending her spear into the last remaining target piercing her when the time was up. The crowd cheered and Namaari sighed in relief before standing proudly applauding the achievement.

After the tests the recruits lined up, and Namaari took the floor pronouncing the oath to which the received were going to swear fidelity.

Namaari: Recruits, it is with pride that I integrate you into our army, motivated by the love of serving our people without fail, always seeking the right cause. Your devotion and your solidarity united by a sense of duty and a taste for responsibility will make you into strong beings, the formidable fangs of our nation it is by carrying out the task of soldiers that you will strive to set an example to cultivate esprit de corps and multiply the successes. By choosing this voice you are choosing the requirement and the renunciation for a cause to which you are ready to make the ultimate sacrifice. Brave soldiers, it is with pride that I join this new family after seeing your qualities that have made you come this far after 4 years of training and having learned the department of being to overcome the obstacles that stood before you. This is why I have confidence in your ability to triumph over all difficulties whatever the situation. Thanks you.

Your pairs here present will bring you your insignia and your weapons which will make your officially soldiers of the royal army of Fang.

Officers, line up, quarter turn right! Come on and take a seat!

Then the officers moved between the rows in a coordinated way to take place beside the recruit who had been designated to them.

Then Nur glanced to the side to have appeared behind her, Ratiya, carrying her weapon insignia on a cushion.

Namaari came down from her platform to introduce herself to the recruits and so gave the insignia and weapons while congratulating the new soldiers.

Arriving in Nur she proceeded in the same way, before putting her hand on her shoulder and looking at her straight in the eyes with emotion and display a sincere smile then say softly: Nur, I am proud of you my daughter.

Then she went to continue.

Namaari resumed her place: Soldiers! Kudos to you! Now break up and go back to your families and celebrate this great event!

Nur went to join Raya and Long who jumped into her arms

Raya congratulated her and hugged her back.

Atitāya: My congratulations, Princess Nur you have been great you will be a great warrior, which contingent do you want to join?

Nur: The Elite Commando

Atitāya: Very ambitious !!!

*Raya pouted*

Namaari: I'll have to make up my mind, congratulation Nur

...: Well done Princess Nur.

*Everyone turned around*

Namaari: Chantou what a pleasure to see you again !

*The woman greeted her accompanied by her children*

Namaari: My congratulations, Heng you have been very good. Hello Prak you have grown well say so !

*Heng and Prak greeted the Chief*

Raya: It's good to see you again, well done Heng

*The family greeted Raya*

...: Ho you were great, Namaari you're speeches were moved although a little too martial.

*Everyone turned to greet the divine blue creature*

Raya: Sisu!!!

Sisu: Ho, bestie!!!

Namaari: Sisudatu how long have you been there? You had to tell us I would have planned something to make you comfortable!!!!

Sisu: Namaari none of that with me, just Sisu let's see and... Ho stop Long you're tickling me !

*As the prince rubbed her face against the dragon's fluffy fur while hugging her*

Namaari: Long! A little dress and respect please!

Sisu: hooo Namaari don't worry, so I was saying I was lounging when I heard there was a commotion so I came and it's nice to do like Raya, observe from a distance without being noticed!

Raya: Sisu! And then in addition you are not too discreet, without wanting to offend you!

Sisu put her hand on chest shocked: How so? Are you saying I'm fat?

Raya: Hooo no... but you're tall …. and... blue... Did she try, grimacing

Namaari: Đẹp lạ you are blue, I'll let you know. Answered her wife, pointing to her turquoise clothes

Atitāya: yes but she is small---

Raya: Hey! And I'm not small! I'm just the normal height for a Heart person, And unlike you, I have nothing to compensate finally I will point out to you that you are not tall Atitāya, either, if it isn’t your ego-!

Namaari: -Come on, come on, let's stop bickering….

Raya and Atitāya eyed each other

Namaari: No fighting, please!

Prak: Well then, big brother, aren't you going to see your girlfriend?

*Everyone turned around*

Heng *blushing*: What? Prak, Princess Nur is my friend! Nothing more, he said nervously.

Prak: Well I thought you were in love and said you loved him§

Heng: Hey what? no, no, no, finally yes, but no, but not like that, finally!

*Chantou laughed and Long gave her sister a teasing look*

Nur: Don't even try where I swear you'll be the first to test my blades!

Long: So Chị she has a boyfriend! How does the child sing mischievously.

Nur: Long!!!!! she said pulling out her blades.

Namaari: Children no -

Nur ran after her sibling as he turned from poor Sisu holding her tail in fear of the flapping blades as the two terrors chased each other around her.

Namaari glared briefly at Heng, before arresting Nur and Long, with the help of her wife.

Then the group headed to the palace to celebrate their graduation. At one point Nur went away pulling Heng by the wrist which did not escape Namaari who quite naturally, like the protective mother-serlot she also went to get some fresh air while staying in the shadow .

Nur: Heng!

Heng: Nur, he smiled awkwardly. Sorry for my brother...

Nur: That's not it... Is it true?

*Namaari squints and winces*

Heng was as dumb as a carp

Nur: Look if it's true, you know it's okay I'm not going to get upset. She leaned nonchalantly against the balcony railing while looking at her friend.

Heng: Really?

Nur: There's no reason for me to be angry, it's not like it can be controlled and then love is beautiful, love is a noble feeling, isn't it?

*Namaari growled internally*

Heng: So you love me too? Hope appearing on his face.

Nur: Hmmm- well not really like you... At least not in the same way.

Heng: Ho… He said disappointed…

Nur: I would like however that we can remain friends if you want I will not force you if it is too difficult for you, But I will regret losing our friendship, you are really important to me

Heng: Friends, alright ?

Nur *smiles*: do you mind?

Heng: Isn't friendship a form of love? It will take me a while to accept that it will never really be the same… But as long as I don't lose you I'm happy.

Nur: And then you know you weren't really lucky... You're not really my style of girl you know!

Heng: Oh okay!!!!

Nur laughed at his friend's embarrassment

Nur: Please don't tell anyone!

*Namaari frowned hissing like a caged serlot*

Heng: Hmmmm, yes of course but I finally don't understand your mothers are open and there's also general Atitāya and -

Nur: -That's not it!!!! She said shaking her head... It's because if my Ma finds out she's going to watch all my female encounters, and I want to be able to bring girls back to my room without my mother interrupting us. Imagine the embarrassment...

Heng: Wait have you already???

Namaari's eyes widened...

Namaari: No no no ,it's not possible my baby!!!! She’s still so young!!!! ... No no no no !!!! She thought panicking that her daughter already had an intimate life.

Nur: Not yet but I can see how the girls were staring at me in the locker room or in the dormitories you know and it's not like it doesn't bother me.

Namaari made a mental note to launch an investigation and request private apartments for her daughter.

Raya watching her wife spy on their daughter thinking that her wife shouldn't say that Nur has a girlfriend. Raya approached Namaari before surprising her to discreetly lead her away from her hiding place and bring her back to the party, hoping to restore some privacy to their daughter.

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