#it ends with a reset and Homura waking up in her hospital bed

[arsonist-tittyfuck]

More people need to notice that it isn't always the writing that makes something good but if it can provoke thought

Because holy shit I just read a fic that writing wise I've read better but it got me thinking so much. Like that's now a good fic in my book it got me thinking so much about the character the fic was centered about. The author clearly understood this character and their relationships with the other memebers of casts.

There's parts I wish were excuted differently BUT it wasn't my fic and honestly when I THOUGHT on those things it made sense.

LIKE THAT'S THE THING this fic got me thinking so much. Even with parts I didn't exactly agree on they still provoked a lot of thought

#it was a PMMM fic btw #it was also a crossover #but I'm mainly going over how much this got me thinking about Homura #and for a character so commonly misunderstood by the fandom she was written so good #listen I'm already normally insane about the relationships within the Holy Quintet #but this got me thinking so much about them #especially Homura's yearning to be happy with everyone again but knowing there's too much at stake #the fic takes place in one of the timeline #so I knew #I knew from the start this fic would end FUCKED UP #it did #it ends with a reset and Homura waking up in her hospital bed #but like the fic sets up this sense of hope #like Sayaka doesnt witch out (she still dies but) #Mami lives longer #Mami and Kyoko rekindle their friendship #or at least start to #Madoka hasn't contracted #but then againist Walpurgisnacht everything goes to shit #Mami starts to witch out and Homura has to shoot her #Homura has very complicated thoughts about killing her mentor as previous timelines it's never been her to directly kill her #then Kyoko is slowing dying #and then Madoka contracts #and then reset #there was so much hope #just to be swept under the rug #Homura had hope again in this fic that this would be the final timeline just for everything to fall a part last minute #LIKE I HAVE MORE THOUGHTS BEHIND THIS #but I only have two tags left