#i reread mce and reread it eight after

[manifestmerlin]

Anyways I had to rush a semi major assignment done in like. An Hour before it was due after trying and failing to work on it allll night and getting no sleep at all. Why? Because i was busy reading Alternate Universe by Unda and going insane thoughts in the tags.

#unlike the other two unda fics ive read #where the title is basically just a one off line from an early chapter #the title really matters here and not becahse it gets meta like mce! #also while i liked it a LOT im unsure if thisll be one i reread much. mce has that crown with like. a billion already. #i reread mce and reread it eight after #and occaisionally reread parta of dbdc but its a lot longer so that stalls out #au tho has a lot less downtime in it. once the plot starts realllly happening it doesnt stop and its reveal after reveal after reveal #so a bit emotionally exhausting #also unsure about hlw sollux and dave are so impkrtant... but not primary pov characters it causes some problems... ik for plot reasons but #like i love rose here. even compared to mce this might be the best rose of the three #but it causes some conflict between plot focus and story focus as time goes on from early where its all davesolkat but mostly solkat #to: rose is more important than both sol and dave agency wise #not bad just. a conflict there #anyways go read it if you havent. likely easy to get jnto for non hs readers actually #just some minor references and name stuff youd miss #totslly coherent plot wise #ALSO GETTING TO PREDICT STUFF WAS GREAT #I FELT SO SMART FIGURING OUT KARKATS SPECIES LIKE... CHAPTER 4 OR SMTH. MAYBE 3 #EVEN IF THAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN INTENDED