#hey you go makjang i go makjangier

[anditendshowyoudexpect]

idk as far as revenge goes this is pretty mid. he's too young and impatient and a show off, he should have waited until she got attached to him. he should have waited for her to have/adopt another kid. and then run them over. he should have waited for that kid to have kids of their own. and then run them over. where is villainy where is grandeur

#wonderful world #hey you go makjang i go makjangier #i get that it's harder to write more realistically #without it being boring #but this output is 90% empty flash and bang at best #with life lessons scattered in a few lines #i can't blame the genre #just write better goddammit #just fucking write better