#also ummm swimming in your feelings by haven (? i dont know who they are i just like the song) has

[digirainebow]

*grabbing you by the shoulders and shaking you* ya gotta listen to me you're not listening to me. rhyming a word with that exact same word in a line of a song is not inherently bad writing or poor construction. people simply do not utilize inflection enough when doing so. if you emphasize the correct part in the second line it can actually be incredibly satisfying. which is also why repeating the same line over and over in a row can be viewed as either lazy or a crescendo depending on the tone with which it is executed. being a theater kid is not always cringe you can act a little bit in your pop songs you can emote and stress certain words to your advantage like a real sentence. now say it with me kid! i can rhyme like with like! its okay its alright!

#digi discusses #this is such a wild example but 'kick it in the FRONT seat (comma) kick it in the BACK seat' from my beloved rebecca black's friday #is such a good same word rhyme. idc if people still think that song is cringe. that line works because of how its stressed #it literally sounds so casual #also ummm swimming in your feelings by haven (? i dont know who they are i just like the song) has #'it makes me wanna drink (comma) and i don't even drink!' is a bit clumsy because the 2nd half is sung almost exactly the same as the 1st #but the added slight exclamation at the end is appreciated #and lol theater kid joke but genuinely atrocious same word rhyming ive heard is mean girls musical. they dont always nail inflection either #ash said he wanted to hear my rants so here we go #THIS BOOSTED ANXIETY AND INSOMNIA REALLY HAVE MY BRAIN ON OVER DRIVE HUH.