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karahalloway · 2 years
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Wanting to spread some positivity among fic writers. 
When you get this ask, link your:
Favourite fic/series you’ve ever written
That one fic/series you poured your heart & soul into
One underrated fic/series of yours you’d recommend
You don’t have to link just *a* fic. Go ham! Even link your masterlist! This is all about all your hardwork.
Thank you for creating!
Thanks so much for the ask @inlocusmads! 😘
Favourite fic/series you've ever written
God... Hard to choose!! 😫I love all the stuff I've written, in one way or another! But, I guess top four would be:
Sleepless in New York
I love living in Drake's head! Which was part of the reason why I started this series - I got a taste of his stream of consciousness in Crazy and Drive and I wanted to dive even deeper! But I didn't really want to do a complete rewrite of TRR1 (and TRR2) from Drake's POV (@angelasscribbles has already done that!), so I decided to do an AU of the New York bachelor party from the start of Book 1 instead - with quite interesting (and hilarious!) results!
Extraction
This actually came out of a request from @aussiegurl1234 and @lunaseasblog in relation to conversation that Drake has with Harper in (Less Than) Intentions about why he was delayed getting to Madeleine's estate for the start of the engegament tour (PB never provided a great explanation for why you don't see Drake until the end of day two... 😒)... and I honestly thought I would be able to get everything into one chapter. But then I started writing, and Drake had quite a lot to say (and do!) so this has also turned into it's own wild mini-series where I get to explore Drake's 'tactical' side a bit more... and watch him cringe over the stuff that Harper's family subjects him to😅
Thanksgiving
This started off as a one-shot, that turned into a three-parter, that may now actually turn into a mini-series 🤦‍♀️ I wanted to explore what would happen when Drake went with Harper to spend Thanksgiving with her family, and - Harper's family being Harper's family - it is absolute chaos! (Hoping to pick this up again around October/November this year)
The one fic/series you poured your heart and soul into
This would have to be (Less Than) Noble Intentions.
In contrast to (Un)Common Attraction (which more closely followed canon, and during which my writing style hadn't quite 'burst into full bloom' yet lol), I have really made Intentions my own - there is a lot more original content, original characters, and I explore a lot of 'darker' themes that I didn't think canon paid sufficient attention to (sexual assualt, PTSD, jealousy, etc.) and I think my writing is much better.
One underrated fic/series of yours you'd recommend
Definately my Lord of the Rings abridged script! 😆
I know LoTR isn't as popular now as it used to be when I wrote this fic with my brother and sister, but if you want a laugh (and a quick read), then this is the one I'd recommend!
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hazelnatcoffee · 3 years
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hmmm I finished the Foxhole Court (1st book) and that was.... interesting....
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septiembrre · 3 years
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Every even number for get to be mine.
OH MY GOD, THIS IS OVERWHELMING!!!! But, I’m going to do it anyway because I LOVE Get to Be Mine. This story is everything to me -- like it is seriously my most favorite daydream -- and I need to get over myself and write the next chapter. I’m just a little intimidated about what I want to get done and stalling because of it. 
Which scene was your favorite to write in Get To Be Mine?
I love writing all the Beth/Rio scenes confrontations. Oh god, I just went to go to pull a quote and now here’s this too-long thing:
“Oh my god. Don’t be—” her voice lowers to a whisper, even though there’s no one around to overhear, “—indecent.”
“You started it.”
“I was talking about actual muffins.”
Rio’s still snickering as he asks, “What else you got?”
“Well, again you said had said our first date was at a bar? Where were you going with that?” Well, she knows. Half of their interactions have been at a bar, his bars. The other half on park benches and picnic tables.
“Oh yeah, your old story. One-night stand—excuse me, day stand. I fucked you on top of your blueberry pancakes? I mean that’s not exactly appropriate for our future company, either.”
It’s an admission of his own.
In a kind of distant, disassociating way, she can acknowledge that Rio’s point tally has just superseded hers by a million. There will never be hope of point recovery. She really doesn’t have the emotional energy to finish this conversation. So, it just comes out.
“He told you?”
“Yeah.” Rio bites his lip, nodding. Her eyes can’t help but zero in, even while experiencing unprecedented levels of distress. She tries to summon her strength as Rio says, “Good story, though.”
I’m obsessed with writing this shit. Their scenes are getting WAY out of hand. The above is only a rather tiny fraction of an absurdly long scene. Thanks to everyone who sits through reading this monster.
I also am enjoying branching out a bit and writing the Ruby+Annie+Beth interactions, Beth+Marjorie and Beth+her kids. It will come as a surprise to no one but I love writing Beth in relation to other women. 
If you could change anything in Get To Be Mine, what would it be?
Lol, I’d re-write the whole first fucking chapter and give it a much more realistic timeline. 
I also started this fic without having plotted much of it. I was sure at the time it would be a three-parter (jajajaja as if!). It wasn’t until @foxmagpie prodded me with many helpful, gracious questions that I finally was pushed to more fully outline GTBM and well, now it’s fully plotted. 
I try not to be too hard on myself for it but I worry folks won’t be able to get past the first chapter, and I do wish I would have realized that outlines are my friends and totally accessible to me before I did. But, it’s okay! I’ve learned now at least.
Which scenes did you cut, and which were added in Get To Be Mine?
Lollll, the issue with Get To Be Mine is that I have absolutely no control and really struggle with cutting anything from it -- especially dialogue. Idk, I’m the type of person to have three-hour-long conversations on the phone with my friends and all of this is exactly how I’ve ended up with these hideously long conversations in the fic but, it is what it is. The dialougue makes me so happy. 
Hm... I’m trying to think of a juicier detail. I did almost cut this Ruby+Beth+Annie scene I ended up enjoying a ton. 
"And that was two years ago,” Beth adds. “Before all the nasty, terrible stuff. We don’t even know if he’s ever, you know…” Her mouth opens making what she’s sure are ridiculous configurations as she flounders, “ —cared.”
Annie’s jaw hangs open for a moment. Then she pulls it together and addresses Ruby first, “Okay, I love my sister, so stop trying to guilt me. Maybe what they need is to finally fuck again and get over whatever this is.” Ruby raises her eyebrows, considering Annie’s point but with a formidable amount of hesitation, as Beth splutters indignantly again.
Annie turns to her sister. “And Beth, I know homeboy has been super shady about his feelings but he has them.” Beth shakes her head, but Annie nods adamantly back at her. “They are in there somewhere because, bizarrely, we are all still alive.”
She pauses to knock on the wooden surface of the worktable, and murmurs a quick, Rest in peace, Lucy. Ruby crosses herself. For a second, Beth’s stomach plummets, and fuzzy words for an old prayer tug at her brain. She curls her fingers around the edge of the table to steady herself, focusing on the sturdy wood top as she processes what Annie said. Somehow despite the grief and all of the terrible things, it feeds the kernel of warmth inside of her.
“Is he the ideal romantic prospect? Nope, definitely not.” Annie’s lips pop and enunciate the ‘puh’.  Beth marvels at how her little sister can always find room for irreverence. “And no matter how this fake-dating sitch goes, I have to make it clear that you are not allowed to become his wife-in-crime or whatever. But, maybe you guys can go through the motions—” Annie thrusts a little with her hips, rocking on the stool. “Bone, y’know.”
Which came first, the title or the fic?
The fic! 
I had been thinking about a fake-dating Beth/Rio premise for months. Then, a fake dating prompt was listed in the GG Ficathon last May so I claimed it as a way to get myself to finally write this out. I had never written anything longer than 4k or a multi-chapter and at the time I was really scared to claim what I had then imagined would be a three-parter. I had never thought I could ever outline something, much less pull together multiple arcs or incorporate themes. 
*laughs nervously* Technically, I still haven’t but I’m on my way. And, GTBM won’t be perfect when it’s all done but it’s so much fun. I love it. It’s my 2020 comfort puzzle. 
What are some facts readers may not know about Get To Be Mine?
I don’t know if this will truly surprise anyone but I am really loving exploring:
- Beth intentionally parenting and thinking through how to be closer to her children
- Beth’s friendship with Ruby, and her relationship with Annie
- Beth finding her footing in independence
- Beth building a new friendship with Marjorie, a legitimate cool person who is not part of the PTA crew/Beth’s old bubble. 
- Beth being pushed to think about her own grief from her childhood and her compartmentalization of her mother’s death through witnessing the Vandenberg siblings grieve their own mother who passed at a more natural time in life. 
- Beth low-key exploring more about her own pleasure aka masturbating in the peace and quiet of her new apartment. Hahahaha. I worry about her and how much stress I give her in my fics, and try to balance it with moments of respite, too. 
ANYWAY! Thanks, everyone for coming to my rant about Get To Be Mine. Always down to talk meta about it. 
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