This is absolutely fucking beautiful why the hell would you it's awful????
Gods the starting and the ending(me being number one * cue hair flip.... just kidding) is just really good and I loveee how consistent the poem is with the theme and how the verses fit well together and like how you bring the ending "you being number one" at the end to bring more impact👏👏👏
Overall the poem is really good and I absolutely fucking love it and keep writing cause practise makes perfect
And don't call your poems awful or I'll come there and tie corquette bows all over you(jkjk ....not really)
And I don’t have a single clue
Why a sun like you
Would ever want a star like me
But I’ll hold you until the world ends
And the universe collapses
No matter how selfish of an act
I’ll keep you with me
Holding you close
All because I will never
Love another like I love a sun like you
I have had two very close calls with seeing lizzo and both times I couldn’t go for stupid reasons and I’m sooo salty bc she’s such an incredible performer
the scene of fabian and gorgug seeing the reflections of yolanda & lucy as kristen lays them to rest… the look on lou’s face. the kindness of the act. kristen applebees, one of the most gifted clerics the world has ever seen.
they literally got rid of her eye bags and under-eye dark circles and made her cheeks fuller and more flushed along with her letting her hair down... to show how happy she was on the farm...