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#Ok yapping over byeeeeee
askamnesiamoonjumper
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me after editing the aau prologue for the bajillionth time
#First chapter I changed the opening bc I always thought it felt off/abrupt and wanted to have it be prince pov from the start
#I wanna get in his head more ok sue me
#Beyond that tho it was just some wording edits
#Specifically with the internal dialogue moments I helped them flow more/feel more like thoughts
#Also mj gets a bit more of their usual edge/pessimism bc the prologue they always felt a bit too “ówò sad poor smol bean” or whatever
#That’s it tho chapter 4 I didn’t change bc it’s peak
#Did add some teases to later things tho like snatch senses mjs soul at the end of his chap but doesn’t realize it
#Or like I added the Not Now running thing in the earlier chapters bc it was more of a chapter 4 thing so I wanted 2 set it up more so boom
#I think that’s all the notable edits ig like I said just description additions the only actual new thing is the opener for chap 1 👍
#Also also I got to include a hc that I have that I neglected to do before but I hc a!prince used plural internal dialogue
#Because lol we love dramatic irony in this house
#Grace post
#this reminds me tho one of these days I should look through heart strings chapter one to look for editing things
#Bc I think I did that recently but I don’t remember it much tho
#Mostly just when the Hat stuff starts that was the parts I never directly rewrote I just edited them so they feel out of place in my brain
#Also I’d wanna edit her dialogue bc it *was* in character (after rereading her diary’s to confirm) but I wanna have her be a bit more snark
#Hat is Hard bc i Need the balance of cute little kid and also smug little shit (affectionate) like she is a pain to write man cries
#This is just me rambling lol ignore it I just wanted to spam aau thoughts
#In other news I made shapes redesigns but I’m on the fence on posting them bc idk if I wanna spoil or not hhhhhhhhh
#Nowadays I’m more chill w spoiling things than I used to be
#But there are a handful of things I’ve kept shut about (ex being princes name or mjs species stuff etc)
#So I’m not sure if this thing with shapes i should keep secret or just post bc I used to spoil it but idk now
#Shrugs
#maybe I’ll do a poll later I dunno
#Ok yapping over byeeeeee
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