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#I think it feels less overwhelming becuase in kks you have this concept of 'shadow org' first
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the pacing of birdmen... -_-
#just thinking thoughts...
#it's not bad but... it's not good??
#I think there were too many pieces that she was trying to move around concurrently
#so much so that when something 'goes off' so to speak
#it doesn't feel well-timed or impactful
#and things don't really tend to parallel each other either
#I dunno I feel like the scale of plot was much more... digestible in kks??
#where like you start off with what yoshimori's doing
#and then you slowly add in the shadow org and then build masamori's nefarious plot on top of that
#the shadow org stuff is what typically spices up yoshimori's life pushing what we perceive as plot progression in the story
#in the immediate foreground
#and meanwhile sumiko's existence (and though the readers don't know it at this time) and her nefarious plot with tokimori
#are ALSO simmering in the back at this time
#I think it feels less overwhelming becuase in kks you have this concept of 'shadow org' first
#which gets further broken down into 'night troops' 'coucil of 12' (13? i forgor) 'the leader' 'actually that's a fake here's the REAL leade
#and because it's sort of just fine-tuning the details of this big thing
#it doesn't feel like multiple factions to keep track of the way 'american flock' 'the eves' 'the mutants' 'chinese flock' etc. feel
#it's so frustrating... I think the pacing at the end of kks and at the beginning of bm was good
#but I think bm's pacing was a compressed version of kks's
#in the sense that the end is a lot denser than the beginning
#but whereas kks was too loose and directionless in the beginning
#bm was too woven and dense at the end
#SAD
#SO SAD
#MISS TANABE YOU CAN DO IT. YOU CAN CREATE THE PERFECTLY PACED MANGA I BELIEVE IN YOU
#stray bird thoughts
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