#*pretends to be shocked that the ‘’medical malpractice is super sweet’’ passage is also technically bad as well as morally bad*

[yuridovewing]

if i may say something a little contradictory to what i posted tho…. where the hell was leafpool during squilfs labour? shes not mentioned at all in that passage i posted. did the writers forget that she was also there? was she off running an errand or something?

#actually they act like leaf is super distant w squilfs family and like. hrm #dont really like that. i mean im sure theres a psychological reason you could bring up or something #but tbh i think it comes down to that being a shitty scene in general #*pretends to be shocked that the ‘’medical malpractice is super sweet’’ passage is also technically bad as well as morally bad* #i think along with the ‘bitching about leafpool at her funeral’ scene jay is at one of his worst points in this book #just a god awful miserable character. and i totally acknowledge this is mostly the new team not knowing how to write him #(altho id argue hes pretty insufferable in oots too but whatever at least he has depth there) #but that doesnt make it much better to me.