ok so the "misunderstanding" plot line is currently dropped (I'm rewriting my outline rn) and in doing so, I removed a big aspect of the chapter in favor of just... avoiding that plot.
one result of this is the "pocket fire!" joke is now removed ),: as well as this form:
The draft I had earlier this week had Asriel going full Spy Mode (this chapter is intended to be a thriller) and flipping between identities and forms like crazy.
to be clear, there still WILL be an element of the shape-shifting coming into play in the story but it's not treated like the spy-thriller trope. It ends up being something completely different in the plot. Which, when typing it out, feels like the shape-shifting is over used, and its for the best to keep it simple.
Asriel would go so far as to steal Undyne's identity.
I REALLY LIKED THIS. I really pushed Asriel's shape-shifting to its limits and it was going to utterly shatter Undyne's trust in the royal family and believe that ANYONE could be a shapeshifter.
But uh, realizing now, maybe that's NOT what I want! It'd be interesting, sure! But it'd be really tough to convince Undyne to trust again. And like, the whole Asgore-giving-the-throne-to-a-literal-teenager is already pushing a lot of Undyne's feelings.
So yeah the plot line would be a bit convoluted and would have an end result that adds a layer of conflict that I don't really want anyway. So as much as it pains me, that whoooole plotline is dropped.
Sad cause we were going to have a cool Toriel and Undyne fight! But... again, the stakes are artificially built. While the family IS doing shady af things, they're not being looked into. They're being looked into something they're not even a part of and are blamed for. Which sucks ass.
I STILL want a confrontation between Undyne and the Dreemurr family, but it makes sense to come from a natural result of the family's true bullshit behavior rather than this forced into a problem caused by the fallen kid's behavior.
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I always smh at people who dub Jason as “whiny” “and therefore ooc” in tt 29. If you died and all everyone did was taint your legacy, and not a single person remembered you fondly or deemed you worthy of commemoration after your death, wouldn’t you be a bit upset too?
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April Fool’s Day with Levi
Levi’s not one to usually celebrate holidays, much something like April Fool’s Day. He thinks it’s dumb but you think otherwise. Imagine Levi’s surprise when he goes to take a sip of his morning tea and his taste buds being overwhelmed with sweetness. He spits out the tea and you come up behind him laughing, holding an identical cup of tea, as he stares at you incredulously. “Happy April Fool’s Day!” You smile as he sucks his teeth at you. You dare mess with his tea? He’ll show you. Levi doesn’t usually engage in such childish antics but no one messes with his tea. So naturally, he has to get you back. And he does, even if it’s only for a second. He waits until the end of the day when both of you are getting ready for bed. He sits at the edge of the bed, looking pensive. “What’s wrong?” You ask softly. “I think we need to end things.” He can see the moment your heart drops into your stomach. Fuck, he thinks. He went too far. He quickly follows up with “Don’t cry, it’s a joke.” Your hurt turns into confusion. “April Fools?” He continues. The realization hits you and you don’t know whether to cry or laugh, or both! But you break out into a smile and just say “I hate you”. He quickly apologizes, makes his way to you and pulls you into his arms. You learn your lesson that day. Don’t mess with the man’s tea.
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wheezing bcs in my draft notes i have percy getting mad @ someone in a response & splitting but i couldn't find the right words so i just wrote ' shoot to kill ' where the dialogue is meant to go
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i am once again in love with villain (or: never stopped loving it) and just.. all the scenery in the bridge of the song, how it's a motif to her ultimate.. the glowing eyes
miss evelynn please call me thanks
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♡ for @scumscuttlers.
●●●●○ | ATTRACTION
●●●○○ | AFFECTION
●●●●○ | INTEREST
●●●○○ | LOYALTY
●○○○○ | TRUST
LOW | ●●●●● | HIGH
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I love reading about all of Mystra's Chosen who, for the ones that have backstories, were magical prodigies, showing talent for the Art at a young age.
Then there's El who had trauma and an extensive criminal record.
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Which Type of Love Interest Would You Be in a Dating Game?
The sweetheart with an enigmatic dark past
You're always polite and kind with others. That makes people feel comfortable around you and many would consider you a close friend. However, you seldom feel connected with those around you. You feel like they don't know you, the real you, and they never will because you'll never allow them. It takes a great amount of time and trust for you to show yourself as you truly are, because you repress most of your feelings and desires, and mask them with a calm and collected personalty. It just seems easier that way, safer. But remember that if you bottle everything up, it will explode one day, maybe in ways you aren't proud of.
Tagged by: @mxrvelouscreations
Tagging: @runyou-clever-boy @little-tyrant-gortash and anyone else who wants to do this~
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"the constantine instinct" which is like the cain instinct but instead of having the urge to kill a sibling with a rock it's just the urge to do the Absolute Most Ill-Advised Action Possible within a given situation.
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As my replacement laptop is old and doesn't care for supporting multiple windows up at once, I am creating a sideblog for Kurama that runs in conjunction with this one. One does not replace the other.
I will likely not carry threads from here over just so that the threads aren't split between blogs but I will be starting new threads over there if anyone is interested.
The next time I am in a solely or mainly YYH mood, I will be back on here at the main. Until then, for friends and those I miss writing with @stilladamnedmartyr is my sideblog I'm setting up so that I can write Kurama again because I miss him. The main blog it is on is @fivedecisivefactors, a RP account for Tseng of FFVII.
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slightly mad about my tag situation let's see if this at least makes them easy to find
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tag fix.
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If you make ME2 deeper than they likely intended, you can read Morinth and Samara as two sides as of the same person, and killing one will always kill the other in some way.
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Welcome to my blog for Minamino Shuichi / Kurama / Yoko Kurama of Yu Yu Hakusho!
This blog will be largely based upon the anime series, at least until I am able to read the manga and, at such point, I will reevaluate and decide if I would like to create an amalgamation from both sources, as well as my own personal headcanons. It is also slightly divergent, at least in terms of the ending.
Because I have an old laptop that doesn't like to have multiple windows open at once, I created this as a sideblog for Kurama that runs in conjunction with his main blog, @adamnedmartyr . One does not replace the other.
Threads from the main blog will not carry over her for replies, but I will start new things here and keep them going. They will all be part of the same canon, I may even reference events on one blog that happened on the other, but for keeping things streamlined, the threads themselves will remain contained on whatever blog where they began.
Credit for my icon borders and my promo image go to @xkokuryuhax!
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don't tell . tags 1 .
.゜–– ooc . * what a pretty fire blog .
.゜–– save . * this is mine now ! get your own !
.゜–– ic . * starter .
.゜–– ic . * thread .
.゜–– ooc . * answered .
.゜–– ic . * answered .
.゜–– ooc . * dash commentary .
.゜–– study . * a heart's a heavy burden .
.゜–– musing . * some people say he ate their hearts .
.゜–– mannerism . * i'm going to bed where i may die .
.゜–– headcanon . * with a glib tongue & a clever mind .
.゜–– skills . * if at first you don't succeed try try try again .
.゜–– aesthetic . * nobody's safe in a wizard's house .
.゜–– art . * out of a steam of verbena scented spells .
.゜–– music . * in my head i hear a symphony .
.゜–– self promo . * i'm dying from neglect up here !
.゜–– promo . * don't you want your heart eaten ?
.゜–– meme . * i look like a pan of bacon & eggs !
.゜–– wishlist . * i see no point in living if i can't be beautiful .
.゜–– edits . * seems everyone in this family's got problems .
.゜–– crack . * i assure you i am cone sold stober .
.゜–– queue . * i hope your queue burns .
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Some Alternate Universe Angst for @w-o-r-d-s--f-a-i-l
Peter tried to fly, knowing it was his best bet against these new inhabitants of Neverland. He could never match them in strength alone. He was too small and too caught off guard by their diverse ways of fighting... Sure, some of the pirates had used axes, but never like this! And he'd nearlt been hit by a shield hard enough to leave him winded and nearly stunned several times already. To fly and be light, to dip in and out and try to catch them unawares was all he thought might could even possibly get him out alive. He had been successful thus far, distracting berserkers enough that pirates or lost boys could bat them away, and perhaps his cockiness had gotten to his head, even through the violent terror that shook him to his core because he was actually fighting to survive, but what ever it was, he didn't notice the warrior in the trees as thet nocked an arrow and aimed precisely, before firing and hitting their mark... him. He gave a gasp of pain and surprise, looking at the wound for a moment with a horrified look as he immediately began to fall. He landed with a painful thud that knocked the wind out of him as badly as any of the vikings' shields, and when he tried to sit up, he was dazed, but he managed it, even managing somehow to push himself to his feet as he held pressure on the entry wound. He couldn't fight like this. He couldn't fly like this. As much as he hated it, his only option was to flee, so he turned and did his best to hurry away, even as he was hindered by his pain. James... where was James? He had to find James. He turned back and found him instantly across the clearing and through the battle, and somehow, as if their joined souls meant they could communicate with just a thought, the pirate dispatched the berserker he was fighting and looked up to see Peter's terrified and pained expression, and then to see as he was grabbed from behind by a pair of warriors. "James!" The cry was bloodcurdling, but the battle separated them, and the struggle caused him to lose sight of James in the chaos. Peter struggled as best as he could, doing anything he could to free his arms while kicking wildly and even trying to bite at his captors. One of the warriors hit him hard on the back of the head with the hilt of a knife he had drawn from his belt, but the Prince of Runaways managed to fight against his attempts, even as something hot and wet and sticky began to creep down the back of his head. One of them began to try and tie his hands behind his back, but Pan wouldn't let them take him so easily. "No! No! James! Tootles! Somebody!" One of the warriors clapped a hand over his mouth to silence him, and the young man managed to bite his hand and give a vicious snarl before getting a hard blow to the face and one to the gut that left him winded and dazed, but he managed to struggle on, even if now his attempts were far weaker and useless. Perhaps it was the fairy magic that let him keep struggling against such insurmountable odds, against such brutish warriors and in spite of his injured, but it could only last so long until one of the vikings gave a growl of frustration and pressed a hand hard over his nose and mouth, holding them both closed, until the young man went limp in his arms. Pan was caught.
(not my best, maybe... rather rushed... but still nice and angsty... 😈)
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