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So.... could you guys rate my 1st chapter

-----CHAPTER ONE-----

Once upon a time, the world was full of magic and beasts, Wizards, spellcasters, and beast-keepers. Magic was flowing in the air like the wind But not all magic is pure, some used it for terror and power. In Gersin, Italy, in the year 2056. Two Eighteen-year-olds came to a secret event called “Palazzo Magico”. (Magic Palace). It was where the corrupted mayor of Gersin allowed covens to sell illegal items such as “Magic Dust” and ceramics made from Mercury.

A boy named Zayne Gen Callop, and a girl named Gyles Ron Zen, came from different families. they sought refuge as their parents were beheaded, the reason was accusing the king of Italy of slavery. the two knew they could never fit in in a world like this.

The two friends enter an empty shop named “Marco’s potions and magic items Until Something captures Zayne’s eyes. It was a gleaming light coming from inside a room where a sign states“SOLO PERSONALE”. Gyles looked at him who was staring at the door and;

“what are you looking at Zayne?” She asked, she went to him and she saw the light reflecting from his eyes.

She looked at what it came from and went beside the door for a closer look. Until the cashier of the store, named Valentina, who was reading a newspaper while her foot was up the counter, stopped her and warned her not to go.

“Hey!, you there, don’t go in, didn’t you read the sign?”

She asked sarcastically.

“Oh, no worries, I was just looking,”

“Then go look somewhere else”

“Va bene” She replied shrugging.

She returned to Him and said,

“Hey, Zay”She whispered.

“What?”

She grabbed Zay and went outside the store where there was a dark alley.

"I saw what you were staring at" She Explained "and yes I want to get it too".

He chuckled and was happy when she agreed.

"How did you know I was going to say that, Zen"

He asked, wondering how she guessed it so well.

"Let's just say we share the same mind," She said with a confident smirk.

“Okay, here’s the plan, intimidate her using your lesbian charm, just make her look the other way, while I go in the counter, behind her back, and grab the keys, which I think are just attached under it, when I open the door to get the object” He asserted, knowingly well something will go bad.

“ wait did you just say that I use my lesbian charm on her even though I'm straight? nope, nope, nope. Maybe you should charm her, not me, I only agreed to this because you wanted it to you know”

she complained.

He scoffed and said "I did not, okay that was a lie and was obvious," he said the last part with a straight face.“Wait, you can't deny the fact that You got more girls following you than the most popular guy back in high school right?”

He tried to make a standard point and won the argument.

"Oh fine, I still don't know why though, you're the only one who's not affected by this"

She complimented herself while pointing her arms from head to toe just to get a good look at her body.

"Just shut up and do what I said earlier"

he stated very seriously, she scoffed as a reply.

They went back inside to execute their plan.

“Oh, it’s you guys” Valentina said with lifelessness in her eyes.

They ignored her reply and Zen immediately went up to the counter and said “Hey there hot stuff” while winking at her.

The cashier put down what she was reading to see who disturbed her.

“What do you want?” she groaned.

“For some reason, I was feeling a little off today. But when you came along, you turned me on.”

Gyles said in a teasing manner.

Valentina blushed at her pick up line.

“Oh shut up she replied while covering her cheek.

When she was busy teasing the cashier, Callop was just about to enter the door until, outside the shop were three royal guards on patrol. He signals his best friend to look outside the shop. She saw His hands waving back and forth and looked behind her, the three guards on patrol, and to not be spotted, she immediately grabbed the cheeks of the cashier and pulled her close for a kiss. Zay quickly grabbed the keys and hid inside the backroom of the shop.

One of the royal guards looked at the shop and saw the two making out and said “go get a room” under his breath with disgust.

Zay raised his thumb and let out the room to let her know the guards were gone. The guards were finally away and released their lips together, breaking the bridge of saliva in both of their mouths. She wipes off the drool at the edge of her lips while the cashier passes out. Zay sighed with relief and slowly walked to the star-shaped item.

“Hmm, that’s weird, Why was it not encased in a box or crate,” He thought

“Oh well,” he said while the reflection of light was dancing on his blue bright eyes.

“Hey Callop, got it yet?” She whispered loud enough for him to hear.

He hid the midnight colored, star-shaped item in his jacket’s left pocket. He was lucky because it was slightly small for his pocket. He went out the door and grabbed Her with him. Gyles grabbed two pouches of “magic bags of dust” on the way out. They ran out of the store safely until the royal men spotted them. “They went there, I saw them,” said one of the guards pointing in where the two were running.

Gyles’ notices the guards following them and notifies zay. “Hey zay, they're onto us” She notified.

“I know, where do you think we’re going?” Said Zay.

Gyles looked at where they were going because she was only following him. “Wait no that’s a dead end, they cut it off weeks ago,” She Told Zay.

Zay stopped to think and made ridiculous turns and eventually got a wall made of cloth. “Hey Gyles, Do you trust me?” He asked like he’s about to do something.

“Yeah” she quickly agreed without any hesitation “Zay, we got company” She nervously told Zay that the guards were closing down on them in the alleyway they took.

Zay took a few steps back while holding Gyles’ right hand. “Zay, if you have an idea, just do it I don’t even care anymore” She lifelessly said, even though she does care about their lives.

“Get ready to jump,” He excitedly said.

“Wait what do you mean by--” her sentences were cut off as Zay broke the cloth wall and jumped into the deep abyss that was at the other side of the wall.

As They sunk deeper, and deeper into the ground, they were about to die from such a height. Zay’s Jacket’s right part was glowing, it was the hue blue that was illuminating. Its light was so bright, the light even made the jacket see-through, releasing light through the tiniest stitches on the jacket. The light on Zay’s jacket got even brighter.

As they sink into the abyss, Gyles’ starts to pray aggressively while Zay screams at the top of his lungs “Dio Salvami!!”. He started to regret Jumping from the start.

His screams turned into mumbles because of the air flowing into his mouth. Inside his jacket, the item that was glowing started to spin rapidly. One-touch and your fingers will turn into sliced meat. Zay felt Spinning inside and scratched some of his jackets until a random portal appeared below them when they were about to hit the ground. the illuminating light was so bright, they had to cover their eyes. The portal was like an endless void, ready to crush every piece of your body to dust. When they went inside the portal, it instantly disappeared.

“How are we going to tell Capo what just happened in a nick of time?” Wondered one of the royal guards.

“Let’s just go back, I'm tired and hungry,” Groaned one man.

On a land named Xero, A portal randomly appeared above its forest. It was nature-filled, full of life and other living creatures. Unlike earth, its inhabitants are a bizarre mixture of wildlife. They fell into a forest named Remorse, Which means death in Xeroin. Known for its deadly wildlife and rocky guardians entitled as Fade, the forest is also infamously known for its beautiful landscape and how the sunlight makes the bumpy trails and clearings full of colorful flowers and emerald grass. Its mountains consist of iron, gold, copper, and nickel. As the portal spitted them out in the morning sun, They landed on the forest’s bushy glae flowers, a type of flower that makes your scent fragrant as virgin wool.

Zay then woke up after they both passed out. He stood upright and looked at his skin.

“Aarrgghh, what happened to my skin!” He screamed as he was looking at himself, he looked at his back and saw a blue, furry tail hanging down. “Aarrgghh, I have a tail!” He exclaimed, “And I have four, long ears?!”.

His panicking made Gyles wake up from her nap. As she stood up, she immediately saw him and screamed, “Tu chi Sei?” while pointing at him. She straight away saw her long nails. “Aargh, why are my nails so long?” She screamed to herself.

“Wow, you look like a fucking beast and that’s the first thing you notice?” He sarcastically asked.

She instantly knew that it was Zay because of how sarcastic he sounded and had a sigh of relief. They have now turned into Kelins. Kelins are humanoid beasts that roam around Xero. There is a difference between beasts and Kelins.

Kelins are like civilized and more advanced beasts. Beasts on the other hand are uncontrollable, Which means they cannot be tamed or wild. Even though they were strange and almost monster-like, they still stood up and walked like any other ordinary human would do.

They briefly got caught up in the situation they were in until A voice came from a bush and said, “Hi there” with a small voice, almost like that of a little girl.

The two screamed and grabbed each other’s arms and slowly backed away from the bush.

“Did Cespuglio just talk?” He screamed, asking Gyles.

“What the Fuck is a Cespuglio?” then something came out of the bush, it was a Violet scaled teenager with horns growing from each side. “Hi I'm Abigail, Abigail lensferson,” Said Abigail and as she introduced herself, she asked for their names.

You don’t expect someone to help you until you know their names. She was amazed and confused at the same time, she circled Gyles to see what kind of creature she was.

“Woah what are you?” they both said in unison while pointing at each other.

Abigail gasped and had just thought what kind of beast they were.” ahh” She squealed “You guys are one of those, Aris” She thought, and pointed her finger upwards.

Zay got up and dusted himself.

Abigail checked out Gyles by walking around her as her eyes went up and down. she then tilted her head revealing Zay at the back “Oohhh, hey there handsome” She said while biting her lip and checking him.

“Okay first of all, eww,” He said with disgust on his face “second, do you know where we can wash some clothes?” He asked, scratching the back of his head.

“Maybe I could just show you ” She Seductively teased him and winked.

“Oh? you would?” He believed.

“Eeww, Zay, no, stay away” Gyles warned. blocking Zayne with her arm.

"Come, i'll show you to town" Abigail kindly suggested.

As our adventurers set sail out of the woods, they watched as strange creatures roamed around the trail they were following. Red and orange trees surround the path, indicating fall is near. Deers eat in the tall grass, but this kind of deer is different from their knowledge. These deers have doubled their antlers and have black and white spots on their sides, eating away the other excess plants like wild berries or fruits that fell off a tree. they now have found themselves out of the forest and into a village.

"Welcome to Iridain" Abigail introduced her home kingdom frantically while raising her arms and pointing at the welcome sign that was located at the top of the walls.

As they went inside the walls, some townsfolk greeted them and were very friendly. the town itself wasn’t very populated so there were many spaces for living and is perfect for making a brand new start.

“Wow, the townsfolk are friendly” Zayne concluded from the townspeople that were frantically shaking their hands with them.

“Don't You dare touch me” Gyles fiercely said with a bitter face.

The townspeople listened and instead of shaking hands, they offered Gyles some food like bread.

“We Iridains are known for our hospitality and kindness”

Said one of the villagers that were at the back of the crowd.

Then a well dressed, yellow scaled, dragon-like being came from above, fluttering his wings as he came down to greet the newcomers.

“Greetings, my name is William Gerand, people call me Liam for short''

Introduced the yellow dragon. “I am one of the kings of amber, I control the south part of this kingdom,” He said gracefully.

Abigail looked down as she saw her father’s look on his face.

“Abigail, what did I tell you about talking to strangers'' He said “I am deeply sorry if she caused you any trouble” And he added.

“Wait, is he your dad?” Gyles asked.

“No worries sir, She even helped us cross the forest” Zay Kindly answered.

“Do you wish to stay here until your next journey?” Asked Liam.

“It’s alright sir” Replied Gyles.

“No, I insist” He added.

“Okay Then” Callop enthusiastically agreed.

“Hey, we should keep a low profile before we could do anything, okay?" She told Zay.

At night, Liam Brought the three back to the manor and each had to pick which room they were going to sleep in.

“I pick the one with the two-sided bed” Zay frantically said.

“Wait, if you wish to sleep in the two-sided bed, you have to pick someone to sleep with'' Liam Said “To not waste space”.

“Really dad?” She complained, “Why do you have to do that to every guest”.

“I would like to sleep alone please,” She asked “to not hear callop’s snoring” Gyles added and narrowed her eyes at him.

As she went inside her room, she noticed two things that were off. The closet was too big, and the mattress was too soft that she would sink in.

"Meh" she groaned, knowing that she couldn't do anything about it

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