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Good update!! Loved the history so far!!

The characters! the brothel drama! so good!! Tristan urghhh, I don't even like children so much but he's sooooo adorable! I want to protect him at all cost!

(Nothing wrong is going to happen to him right??)

And one last thing...could you post a drawing of the Ro's from both IF's just for curiosity? I really liked your drawings <33333

Thankkksss! Glad you liked it!<333

Answer: ...no?

And about the drawing, thanks ksks i'll probably post one or another, I don't think my drawing are very good.

But I have this ones that show a little of them, one of the female chrts from WLP. (F. Jean, Tiana and Liah)

This old drawing of Matheus, Leon and the others from Behind your eyes.

and this one of Male Jean in paper.

I'm glad you like my drawing ksskks once I have a individual digital drawing of each of them, I'll post it! <33

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Loved the update! I really like the way you are writing this story, I love the mc so much and feel so bad for them 😭 I also love dimas and Tristan and Bruno ❤️

Thanksss! <333

and hopefully... soon Mc life's gonna be better.

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I absolutely love the update.

I fully thought that your other IF is my favorite but now i don't know.

This update was everything!

I love how you write.

1. I love how you made everyone very human. And relatable. And especially how MC struggles with their job and putting up a front with their family. They provide it's what they do even tho they don't like how they do it. Love how you address that fact and the fact that their brother also has an opinion on things. That there's guilt but also love.

2. If you have a crush on Bruno, their interactions with MC are very adorable!

3. Tris should be protected at all costs. He is just the best kid ever. Sweet and caring and inquisitive like every kid should be.

4. The drama omg. When i tell you the conflict with MC and their "client," aka red-haired hottie Jean is insane. If you choose to have feelings for them, that just adds so much to the dynamic and it's so messy. I love it! But the DRAMA!!! I DIED. i read that whole bedroom scene like 🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣 it was the best thing ever. Not really for MC but omg for the story! Yes!

I'm excited to meet our last RO. And to see the hell happens with Jean. Because... awkward. My MC is over that. Aint no one trying to be a side piece 👀

Sorry, I got distracted lol but there are some grammatical errors and a few coreections in the story i could send you privately If you'd like that butreally it was such a good read. I reallly enjoyed it. The relationships between everyone felt very natural, and i am already buzzing for what you'll release next! 💜

Thank you very much for the wordssss!!! 💜💜💜

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Yup! He's a sweetheart ksksk

Tris is a baby boy!

I live for the DRAMA muahaha 💅 (and you'll know soon what happens to Jean ksks)

No worries! I really liked your points!! And yes! You can send me privately the grammatical errors, it will be a great help! The correction of this chapter was a bit sloppy to be honest, but I'm happy you liked it! :)

And thanks for the feedback!

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Hiiii I'm loving update and the drama omg. But I'm still reading just saw this now. Is one of these supposed to be am option to leave?

Hii! Yes, the last one takes you to the censored version, the ⚠️signs next to the options open a little tab, I'm going to try to better highlight that, because it's changed the format smdksmd thank you!!<3

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What lies in the past Chapter 1 released!

❈Features:

Get to know 3 of the RO's.

Spend time with your family.

Work your last night in Heaven's gate.

*The game will have to be replayed again too, sorry. I don't know what happened but the relationship link from the menu just disapeared from the original game file and reapeared in the copy I did to see what was wrong sksks Idk what happened.

(And I'm still traumatized, because I had to search for kinks for a certain client...I saw things that I should have never seen...

One of the clients scene will not be feature in this update, I'll probably release it in a short update.)

❈ ITCH.IO LINK: https://maluarty.itch.io/what-lies-in-the-past

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I'm posting a poorly done sketch I did! kksjdj srr

I wanted to let you know that I plan to post the next chapter of What Lies in the Past by the end of next month, so it won't be long. And I'm going to start to prioritise the chapters of Behind your eyes, because I already have a more defined idea for each chapter, so the next chapter of W.L.P will take a while to come out!

I'm going to start posting other drawings, mostly like this, to inform you of certain updates and etc.

About the first chapter of What lies in the past:

So far, with about half of the passages (without the options), I have a total of 42.301 non-white characters! I'm glad I've managed to write this much with the little time I have to write kk.

And thanks for the support! 🫶

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I need some help in a writing thing!

Hi!

If anyone can give me some feedback, I'd really appreciate it.❤

I was writing chapter 1 of What lies in the past and I found myself in a position where I didn't know whether I should write or not, because it could be a little uncomfortable. I had the idea of writing a scene where five clients would be presented, and that the MC could bed with,( I want to make it clear that no s3x scene without a RO will be very described, I don't want to romanticise prostitution and non-consensual relationships.), but in this scene the Mc would choose a client to spend the night and each one would have a different kink, for things like pain, food, ropes and so on. But now I don't know if I should write it down or not skskks

(I'm conflicted because it makes sense in Mc's work, and it would be their last act in the job, but at the same time I'm worried that it could be too much sksksk I don't know, I got this doubt out of nowhere! I'm going to leave a poll, if anyone can answer I'd appreciate it because I've gone into limbo! sksksk) (Note: if this choice is considered, it will be optional and there will be a warning!)

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Hiii!

I got curious, a what lies in the past question, why the kid name is Tristan? Random question but does it means something for Mc or you just spin a wheel of names?

Hii!

It dosen't mean anything for MC skskks I just named him after a RPG character I liked.

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Hey! I just wanted to know about the "slow burn" trope of some ro's. Will it take longer to develop a romantic relationship with them?

And I really like the drawing<3333

will you be posting more?

Hi! No it won't take longer to develope a romantic relationship with them, I intend to lock romance in a centain point of game to all Ro's. The slow burn trope it's more that they'll become more flirtatious and brave with romance and affection, once the relationship becomes locked and the Ro has a deeper connection with mc. but you'll be able to flirt and have romantic actions with them before the "route locking", it'll only be more light than the other routes!

Thanks!! I have some drawings, not many digital because I really suck at it kksksk, but in paper.

soooo I might post a few♥ kskssk

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can u tell us the love tropes from the routes of your 2 ifs 🥸 (please)

I'll do my best to answer your question, because I hadn't really thought about it before kksksk

For BYE:

Leon: If the MC shows a romantic interest in him, he'll fall in love at first sight. Showing interest and affection for MC.

Iara: She'll have a slow burn relationship, enjoying getting to know MC.

Levi: They're going to have a complex relationship with MC, and they'll be kind of a opposites attract trope, I don't think they're a "enemys" to lovers, bescause they don't actually hate you, they just really dislike you(For what your are).

Dante: Friends to Lovers tropes and he'll be a good emotional support for MC.

Matheus: He'll be a comfort character for the MC, having a slow burn relationship to them. Adorable sweet boy<3

Siena: Friends to lovers trope.(But she'll love heavily flirting with MC to get cute reactions from them.)

For WLP:

Liah: She'll have a second chance to fall in love with MC, and MC can have one with her too.

César: "Enemys to lovers", César will not be very found of MC when they meet, being a very grumpy old man towards the MC. (Soo Grumpy x Sunshine trope)

Tiana: Friends to Lovers, having a slow burn and soft relationship with MC.

Bruno: Childhood friends to lovers or Friends to lovers, and the two of you'll be "secretly" in love (a secret that only you and him don't know about it).

Jean: They'll have a Complicated relationship with MC...and they'll be kind of possessive and cof cof a lot of horny jail bong bong cof with MC.

(If that's not exactly what you were wondering, or if there's anything else you'd like to know, just let me know and I'll be happy to answer any questions you may have :D).

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will you be working on What Lies On The Past when u find free time or just when u feel like it? sem querer te apressar, lógico

Hi! Yes, kinda, What lies in the past will be, only a little bit more, of a secondary project than BYE. But I'll probably post the first chapter of WLP first because the prologue was so small. E Sem problema ksksk<3

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Raise your child.

Get to know you new job and new people that come to your life.

Allow yourself take a break .

Find or not a romance for yourself.

Fight for justice in a city where  injustice thrives.

After years of working as a prostitute in one of the wealthiest areas of your city, you find a job as a caretaker of a duke who has been wounded by the war. Hired by his sister, you are invited to live in their mansion with your son. Life really does seem to be giving you quite an opportunity, doesn't it?

(Liah Chancellor) THE BLACK WIDOW: Female

She's the woman who hired you, Cesar's older sister.

She returned to the city after her husband passed away. Her personality is calm, carefully rehearsed, perfect, worthy of a duchess.

Appearance: The duchess has long curly hair tied up in a low bun and dark skin, her dark brown eyes do justice to her striking appearance. She is short and is always seen wearing black garments.

(César Chancellor)  THE LOST KIN: Male

He was a war hero, but his glory days have left their mark.

You've been hired to look after him and his needs. He seems to judge everything you do, sharp dark blue eyes that seem to look for any mistake, or does he simply want to get to know you better? There's no way of knowing unless you break through his invisible barriers.

Appearance: His skin is dark brown, marked with old scars. His long, wavy hair reaches his back like the light waves of the sea. His stories were grand, but the man in the wheelchair seems nothing more than a vague ghost of what was left behind of his greatness.

(Tiana Reed)   THE EXILED CHILD: Trans-Female

Tiana currently lives with Liah and her brother. She left home after her gender transition, losing her job as a lawyer and consequently her circle of friends. Many say that in childhood her hand was given in marriage to Liah, but the engagement was cancelled for unjustified reasons. With a light-hearted personality, she always seems to have a smile on her face, even if it sometimes looks worn.

Appearance: Her skin is fair and her blonde hair is cut short, she is of medium height and has round blue eyes. She is quite fashion-conscious, enjoying dressing up in a variety of outfits.

(Bruno Vanverd)  THE KIND HEART: Male

Bruno is a childhood friend of Dimas, your older brother, and consequently yours. The son of one of the biggest merchant families in the region, Bruno has always liked to be with people and be close to them, even if it's against his family's wishes.

Appearance: He's tall, towering over almost everyone around him, his messy brown hair and fair skin are well known on the streets of your neighbourhood, as are his careful, attentive honey eyes.

(Jean Campbell)  THE REBEL WITHOUT A CAUSE: Female  or Male

Jean is what they call a real troublemaker and a challenge for their family. Not even their lessons have been able to fix the rebellious person who only thinks about enjoying life's pleasures, without bothering about their family's problems. 

Appearance: Red hair (short and wavy if male, or shoulder-length and wavy if female) and fair skin. They're tall and their eyes are a shade of brown.

                  ⚠️Trigger Warning: This game is rated 17+⚠️

Currently it has : prostitution, objectification and alcohol.

LINK: https://maluarty.itch.io/what-lies-in-the-past

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Prologue completed!

I finish writing the rest of the prologue!

In the update:

You'll get to know the ro's.

And a lot of re-writting in the part one.

Unfortunately due some new comas, the game will have to be played from the begining again :( srr

(Unfortunately I won't be posting the other IF today. But I'll probably be able to post it before wednesday :D)

Link: https://maluarty.itch.io/into-your-eyes

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New IF :D

History:

After years of working as a prostitute in one of the wealthiest areas of your city, you find a job as a caretaker of a duke who has been wounded by the war. Hired by his sister, you are invited to live in their mansion with your son. Life really does seem to be giving you quite an opportunity, doesn't it?

Romantic options:

(Liah Chancellor) THE BLACK WIDOW:  Female

She's the woman who hired you, Cesar's older sister.

She returned to the city after her husband passed away. Her personality is calm, carefully rehearsed, perfect, worthy of a duchess.

Appearance: The duchess has long curly hair tied up in a low bun and dark skin, her dark brown eyes do justice to her striking appearance. She is short and is always seen wearing black garments.

(César Chancellor)  THE LOST KIN:  Male

He was a war hero, but his glory days have left their mark.

You've been hired to look after him and his needs. He seems to judge everything you do, sharp dark blue eyes that seem to look for any mistake, or does he simply want to get to know you better? There's no way of knowing unless you break through his invisible barriers.

Appearance: His skin is dark brown, marked with old scars. His long, wavy hair reaches his back like the light waves of the sea. His stories were grand, but the man in the wheelchair seems nothing more than a vague ghost of what was left behind of his greatness.

(Tiana Reed)   THE EXILED CHILD: Trans-Female

Tiana currently lives with Liah and her brother. She left home after her gender transition, losing her job as a lawyer and consequently her circle of friends. Many say that in childhood her hand was given in marriage to Liah, but the engagement was cancelled for unjustified reasons. With a light-hearted personality, she always seems to have a smile on her face, even if it sometimes looks worn.

Appearance: Her skin is fair and her blonde hair is cut short, she is of medium height and has round blue eyes. She is quite fashion-conscious, enjoying dressing up in a variety of outfits.

(Bruno Vanverd)  THE KIND HEART: Male

Bruno is a childhood friend of Dimas, your older brother, and consequently yours. The son of one of the biggest merchant families in the region, Bruno has always liked to be with people and be close to them, even if it's against his family's wishes.

Appearance: He's tall, towering over almost everyone around him, his messy brown hair and fair skin are well known on the streets of your neighbourhood, as are his careful, attentive honey eyes.

(Jean ??)  THE REBEL WITHOUT A CAUSE: F or M

Jean is what they call a real troublemaker and a challenge for their family. Not even their lessons have been able to fix the rebellious person who only thinks about enjoying life's pleasures, without bothering about their family's problems. 

Appearance: Red hair (short and wavy if male, or shoulder-length and wavy if female) and pale skin. They're tall and their eyes are a shade of brown.

I intend to post it this weekend, I'm finishing correcting it and I also plan to release the complete prologue of Behind your eyes this week too! (finally!! because it's been ready since December, but I haven't had much time to do anything about it these past months, I really like to go over and over things, because English is not my first language and I really worry about how I write, I make a lot of mistakes on the keyboard with double letters ksks, and even though I've been on holiday, I've had a lot of exams and other matters( and cof baldurs gate 3 cof cof)).

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What did I do with Siena, bro...(It still looks sloppy but wayyyy better at least :))

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Prologue (part 1) released!

Prologue part one is out!

Unfortunately due to some pronoum codding problems, I'm not going to post the whole prologue. I'm really new at coding. :p

I don't know what I did wrong with the menu's image, it isn't showing, but I didn't wanted to delay the demo's release, so i'll be posting without it.

This update has: Character customization and the begining of Mc's story.

Demo link:

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You had it all.

Your mother's love.

Your "perfect" and safe world.

But it was all fake.

It all went down the day a stranger knocked on your door and opened your eyes.

Now, you'll try to discover yourself with the people who rescued you.

Build a new life, or die trying to.

Discover your powers and weaknesses​.

Choose Mc's animal companion.

Uncover your past.

Befriend your new companions or at least some of them.

Romance 1 of the 6 Ro's.

Leon (M)

Leon is a kind heart, receiving you with open arms from the very first second. He has a calm temper and a strong brain. His amicable and strategic qualities make him the leader of the mercenary group. But it's visible that something dark lurks in his gentle eyes.

He's very tall (1,95m) and athletic, with tan skin and a scar on his lip. His black hair is cut short, and his violet eyes reflect perfectly his calm and serene character.

He wears a light brown shirt, black pants, and dark brown boots.

He fights with a simple silver shield.

Iara (F) 

Iara is the second in charge. Her strategic and cold demeanor is enough to compensate for Leon's calm procedure, giving the group an excellent balance. She's quiet and observant but has a soft spot and cares for her companions.

She's tall (1,79m) and has a lean but athletic build. She keeps her curly red hair in a high ponytail. Her golden accessories shine in contrast with her pale skin. She has several scars, but one is more perceptible, crossing her eye, a wound that caused one of her turquoise eyes to be completely pale white.

She wears lightweight golden armor with soft beige fur on her shoulders.

Her golden and bluish-green accessories adorn her neck, ears, and wrist.

She fights with a black and gold whip.

Matheus (M)

Matheus is a charismatic individual. He's clever and very fond of puns and jokes. The young man has quite the ability to read people and has been trying to help you understand your past. As friendly as he is, he seems to have trouble letting people get closer to him.

He's average (1,71m) and lean, with umber skin. His soft brown curls are cut short, and his olive eyes are full of compassion and comprehension.

He wears glasses and a simple sleeveless white shirt combined with baggy pants.

He fights with a silver crossbow with a crow symbol engraved on it.

Dante (M)

Dante is in charge of the magic rituals and enchants. He's a grumpy and hotheaded kind of person. Being a fire Elementalist, he can summon fire, but he's not immune to it, having an arm covered in a burn scar. 

He tends to be reserved and doesn't like being touched by strangers.

He's average (1,75m) and chubby, with fair skin. His chin-length hair is golden blonde, and his eyes are as red as the flames he summons.

He wears a sleeveless shirt with a turtleneck and black pants. He wears in his right ear two black earrings.

He fights with a saw-toothed silver sword.

Siena (F)

Siena is a cunning woman, always having the right words to escape the most challenging situations. She's very fond of Matheus, and just like her friend, she loves making jokes and a good fight.

She's short (1,61m) and robust, with olive skin. She has raven long hair that matches her dark eyes. 

She wears a long black shirt and greenish baggy pants.

She fights with greenish and silver gauntlets.

Levi (NB)

Levi is cold and seems to hate you for what you are. They are sarcastic and straightforward. They tend to avoid you, but even with their cold distance they seem interested at you. Maybe something in you draws them.

They're tall (1,78m) and athletic, with light brown skin. Their shoulder-length black hair is partially tied in a short ponytail. Their gray eyes seem cold when they look at you. Will they grow warmer with time?

They wear a sleeveless gray shirt and leather pants. And a brown leather arm bracelet.

They fight with silver daggers.

                    ⚠️Trigger Warning: This game is rated 17+⚠️

Currently it has : Self-harm (not intentional), emotional dependence, emotion manipulation and violence.

LINK: https://maluarty.itch.io/into-your-eyes

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